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Pg. 1- CUT Peleus: “To your love” It now reads: “Anyway promise you’ll be kind. Let her practice her instrument…”

Pg. 1- ADD/CHANGE Peleus:

“Here’s what I want to say: if you decide to fight, lay siege to Troy, you will die. For hard on the heels of Hector’s death your death must come. But gloriously.”

Pg. 2- CHANGE “Tell Patroclus I said hi.”

Pg. 7-CHANGE Achilles: “It’s okay Antilochus. I know.”

Pg. 10 CHANGE Ant: “I have a wife and two grandchildren.”

Pg. 13 ADD Ant: “But you have five thousand of your men straining…”

Pg. 15 CHANGE/CUT Antilochus: “winging wild words at your love: “Patroclus. You fool. May vultures eat you raw.” (cut You obeyed”)

Pg. 17 ADD Bresies: add a question mark… “Yes. May I approach?”

Pg. 23 CUT/CHANGE Thetis/Achilles:

“ACHILLES: Hector must die. He must.

THETIS: Then you’re as good as dead.

Beat.

THETIS: So be it.

She grabs her purse.

THETIS: You have no armor.”

Pg. 24 ADD Thetis: add: “I’ll take care of it. (correcting) You.”

Pg. 26 ADD Chorus: “They put the ax through the heart of a young man.”

Pg. 26 ADD Chorus: “Sister… This was my sister… This was my”

Pg. 29 CUT Heph: “If I could hide Achilles from death, I would but. We know the deal.” Reads: “If I could hide Achilles from death, I would.”

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Pg. 32 REFORMATING Agamemnon: “Can’t tell you when WWI ended or the name of that tree but that I I’m off topic.”

Pg. 36 CHANGE Top of page should read: “Tros, Alastor’s son: speared in back. Died screaming, clutching entrails.”

The later on page: “(the actress playing Hecuba; this is her son) Polydorus, Priam’s son. Crawled to Achilles’ knees.” Etc.

Pg. 36 CHANGE/ADD Lycaon: “I could blow the whistle and alter fate! End the war! Tell me, Achilles. Tell me and then LET ME GO!”

Pg. 37 ADD Lycaon: “You

You’re

My mother

And she’s

And ( )”

Pg. 38 CHANGE Achilles: “My Patroclus is dead My father clings to life I could have gone pro and you sit here bitching at me??

Pg. 38 ADD Stage direction: “And even I won’t survive this war.

Lycaon takes in Achilles’ revelation.

So I’m sorry but-“

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Pg. 39 CHANGE Lycaon: “(dying) That’s Helen, that’s what… Oh my god…”

Pg. 44 ADD CHARACTER All TROJAN WOMEN in scene becomes TROJAN WOMEN/ A FEW TROJAN MEN

Pg. 47 CUT TROJAN WOMEN/A FEW TROJAN MEN: “Face facts: He’s not stopping until Your soul Has been…” (CUT: When you consider the” though “out the window.”)

Pg. 49 CHANGE Should now read… Priam: “Your brother Polydorus, your cousin Lycaon”

Pg. 54 ADD Hector: “What do you say. Considering who I am. Who you are. Your curse. That we call it even. Good ole fashioned spit shake. Okay?”

Pg. 56- NEW PAGE

Pg. 59 CHANGE Agamemnon:

“So you refuse to fight and Drag Hector’s corpse with your Harley Which obviously makes you feel”

Pg. 60 CHANGE Agamemnon: “UM YOU KNOW MY GIRLFRIEND SHE’S VERY CLEAN”

Pg. 62 CHANGE Patroclus: “Achilles: it’s me. Your Patroclus.”

Pg. 66 CUTS Should now read:

PATROCLUS: You’re stalling. Because you’re afraid.

ACHILLES: Afraid?

PATROCLUS: To die. Page 4 of 4 As of April 8, 2010 Achilles, Scourge of Man Compiled by K. Artigue

ACHILLES: Who says I’m going to die?

PATROCLUS: Give me that bottle. Give it to me!

Pg. 66 ADD Patroclus: “You need to bury me and accept your fate and stop dicking around!”

Pg. 67 CUT Patroclus (cut the “it”) Should read: “I guess that’s- no there’s something else I need.”

Page 69 CUT Patroclus: (cut: “In a single urn, let’s co-mingle. Okay?”) Should read: PAT: As children in your father’s home. Lying together, just because. ACHILLES: Okay.

Pg. 70 ADD Thetis: “This is not still about Patroclus, I hope.”

Pg. 74 NEW PAGE

Pg. 77 CHANGE Bresies:

Should read… They embrace. BRESIES Is it true what they say? That hard on the heels of Hec-

ACHILLES Yes.