Hannah & Peter

STAR TREK FRACTURED LOGLINE

A no-nonsense temporal operative is forced to team up with a disgraced member of Section 31 to stop a rogue agent from destroying the timeline. STORY SYNOPSIS

Following the attack on the Enterprise by With the odds against them, the surviving Admiral Marcus (Star Trek: Into Darkness), temporal operative HANNAH TENNET (31) the clandestine agency ‘Section 31’ is must now [reluctantly!] team up with officially disbanded with all remaining agents another ex-Section 31 agent, PETER MARS lost to the wind. One of these agents, VINCE (34) to hunt him down. Peter is personally MACRON (45) - suffering PTSD from the driven to find Vince - not only was he a good sudden loss of his sister on board the USS friend, but Peter was also engaged to marry Vengeance - attempts to assassinate Kirk but his sister, SARAH MACROM (33). However, is interrupted by two operatives from the as Vince’s motivations become clearer, Peter Dept. of Temporal Investigations. A trained is faced with a moral dilemma - do his duty fighter, he kills one of the operatives and and save the timeline, or risk it all for a steals her mobile temporal transporter to chance to be with his fiancée again. evade capture. Disillusioned and on the run, he uses the device to travel back in time to Or, to put it in a different way, Peter needs to save his sister and create a new future where ask himself if the needs of the many really he is in control. This presents a serious threat outweigh the needs of the few – or the one? to the timeline; the future of Starfleet, the Federation - basically all life – now hangs in the balance. SHOW POTENTIAL

Although at its core the TV series will be a buddy-cop Cochrane never cracked warp drive, drama featuring a slow burn love interest between the Klingons/Romulans/Borg/Ferengi take over, and so on. two odd couple characters, the show is much more This could all fit within the new Kelvin direction – than that. There is tremendous potential here to there are no barriers here to what can be achieved. explore periods of history that have only been hinted at so far within the Star Trek universe, but which have Above all though, this will not be Star Trek as we know never been tackled in any substantive way, e.g., the it. There are no captains here to save the day, no origins of the Augments (1950’s Cold War era), the photon torpedoes to be launched, no Scotty to beam Eugenic Wars, the rise & fall of Khan, World War 3, them out at the last second…this is a battle of wits, a etc,. There is an opportunity here to explore what story of two unsung heroes whose accomplishments humanity was like during this period, and how we will never be known. And although they are both turned it around – against the odds - to create the flawed in their own way, and the chances of success future utopia that is the Federation. are low - they carry the torch of hope with them because in its essence, that is what Star Trek is about. Given the time travel element, there is also the It is a story of hope…and this is something we all need potential to showcase what the alternative of this now more than ever. perfect future could look like… not just the ‘mirror universe’, but other futures in which, for instance, Khan stayed in power, WW3 never ended, Zefram HANNAH & PETER

HANNAH TENNET (31), Betazoid/El-Aurian. DTI agent. Beautiful, quirky, colourful…but don’t let her looks fool you! She is a tough-as-nails, by the book agent that never backs down from a challenge. Underestimated most of her life, she has had to fight hard to get where she is. This dedication to duty has made her an outsider but she doesn’t care – the mission always comes first!

PETER MARS (34), Human. Former Section 31 operative. Peter is a charismatic, hard-hitting rogue with a heart of gold (but hidden under many layers!). Once a dedicated and loyal follower to the cause, he lost his way after the death of his fiancé and the closure of Section 31. Normally found these days passed out under a bar, Peter is in desperate need for something - or someone - to bring purpose back into his life VINCE & SARAH

VINCE MACRON (45), Human. Former high ranking Section 31 operative. Although it’s probably fair to say that Vince was never quite balanced to begin with, it was the sudden death of his sister that really pushed him over the edge. Now, he is on a personal mission to bring her back and redo the wrongs against him…or watch it all burn in the process.

SARAH MACRON (33), Human. Former Section 31 operative. The best way to describe Sarah? Would “mad, bad, and dangerous to know” be too much? Probably not! Driven, secretive, stunning, Sarah is the type of woman that can seduce you with a smile - and cut you down with a look. She had her world turned upside down once…now she is determined to never let that happen again. PILOT

The stage is set. The rifle is aimed. Vince has This is bad - real bad, and Hannah knows it. Kirk in his sights. A simple squeeze and then Swallowing her humiliation at letting Vince it’s over… a moment of hesitation. Is this the get away, she teams up with Peter to bring right move? He reminds himself of what they him in. But this will not be an easy did. The Federation betrayed him, took away relationship. While not as far gone as Vince, everything he held dear. They killed Sarah. Peter is unpredictable and certainly no Time to focus. He looks down the scope. This friend of the Federation - but he’s all she’s is the right move – they must pay for their got - and she’ll have to make it work sins…. somehow. But it could already be too late. In the blink of an eye, the world changes This is how we kickoff season one. A lone around them. The year is correct but man, broken with grief, attempting to right everything else is different – the Federation the wrongs against him. Except that Vince is gone, replaced by a military dictatorship. doesn’t get a chance to pull that trigger. Two Apparently, Vince has been a busy guy. And Temporal agents appear to arrest him, but he that’s not the only surprise waiting for them. is too fast for them, too well trained. Before Sarah is also back…and she’s not happy. they can react he is on them. One dies, her mobile temporal transporter and harness ring stolen…and then he is gone, lost in time. EPISODES

EPISODE 2: Hannah and Peter are on the run. Soldiers track EPISODE 4: Peter is close to a panic attack. His dead them down and they come face-to-face with Vince and fiancé is back, he is stuck in the past, and Hannah is dying… Sarah. Peter finds it difficult to adjust to the fact that his he really needs to punch something. Fortunately he gets his dead fiancé is still alive. Vince tells him he killed Khan in the chance when he sees enhanced soldiers pushing/kicking past and took power to create the perfect future. Hannah around the little boy. But things go wrong when the boy makes a daring escape with Peter but Sarah shoots, hitting uses Peter’s phaser to shoot and kill one of the soldiers. Hannah in the back. Terrified, the boy runs off and disappears into the crowd. This is bad. EPISODE 3: It’s 1992 – but don’t get any ideas. This is a world in real crisis. Poverty and suffering is everywhere. EPISODE 5: This episode will focus on Vince’s journey. We Hannah is severely wounded. A mute boy brings them to a start off with Vince standing over Hannah and the dead makeshift hospital for the “genetically inferior”. Hannah operative. Next he is onboard the Vengeance. Explosions tells Peter to keep an eye out for Vince and not to interfere everywhere, people in panic. He slips Sarah a note and with the events around him. She passes out. beams her off. Then he goes further back in time and arrives just as the boy shoots the soldier. Vince waits for Peter to give chase and steals the dead soldier’s ID. EPISODES

EPISODE 6: Peter arrives back at the hospital to look for the EPISODE 8: They help the resistance clear the hospital boy and gets a terrible shock – Hannah is no longer there! through escape hatches underground. Everyone is But that’s not the least of his problems. The local resistance accounted for, all except for one - the little boy. Peter, have found him - and they think he is one of Khan’s spies Hannah, and the resistance go back for him. Peter is able to sent to infiltrate them. One false move and it could all be rescue him by causing a cave-in but a lot of the resistance over for the mission – and for Peter. are captured, and the fall damages Hannah’s temporal transporter. Now there is only power for one more jump. EPISODE 7: The resistance become nervous when they No more second chances. can’t find Peter’s DNA on the system. They decide to kill him, but the mute boy with the phaser comes to his rescue. EPISODE 9: Back at base, the resistance are in disarray – A tense situation is broken by commotion outside. The their leader was one of those captured and is due to be streets are teaming with soldiers - and they are not in the executed the next day during a military parade. Hannah mood to talk! Hannah reappears too. She now knows when tells Peter that not only is this the moment that Vince will & where Vince will attack - but first they have to escape… . assassinate Khan, but without the resistance, Khan will never be overthrown! There’s only one thing to do – Peter will lead the resistance to free the prisoners and somehow also stop Vince in the process. What could go wrong? EPISODES

EPISODE 10: Infiltrating the parade, the resistance start setting EPISODE 12: Back in the original timeline, Hannah hands up homemade flash grenades at key points to cause confusion. Vince over to the temporal authorities. Hannah and Peter Security is tight, the streets are crowded, and they are now in a have gotten closer to each other; strong emotions are race against time – at 12 noon, Vince will kill Khan. They need to forming. In the background, a woman is watching – it’s find him and fast! Hannah opens her mind to try to locate him Sarah. She drops Peter’s note on the ground – she is not but it’s looking hopeless… happy! She follows her brother and breaks him out. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned! EPISODE 11: Using his intuition, Peter moves in to where Vince might be. At this range Hannah is able to sense him but ------before they can reach him, the grenades go off. The prisoners FUTURE SEASONS: There are so many directions that this are now free - but the mass panic slows them down. Vince aims show could take. For instance, Season Two could focus on to fire but Peter is finally on him. The phaser misses and Khan the cold war period on Earth, a period of history which saw gets away. Vince pleads with Peter to let him finish the job so the beginning of the Augments. Vince and Sarah travel they can create a better future - together with Sarah. But Peter back to 1950’s America to prevent the creation of the has already seen that future and is not interested. Augments - but instead, trigger their development…and the creation of Khan! This could lead to new and more fractured futures where anything is possible. TONE & WORLD BUILDING

Fractured should be a mix of Into Darkness and Discovery – dark when needed, compelling, edgy – but always hopeful. Pacing should be fast; visual style energetic and creative. Contact

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