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Commentary on Class IV Social Studies Page Paragraph (p), Errors/Observations Remarks/ comments Suggested Corrections Nos. Sentence(s), Tables (t), Questions (q) Block 1 1 2nd row of t 1. Blow - The leaves move Remove the double space between the words when the wind blows. 'wind' and 'blow.' 4 3rd p, 3rd s I must wear my gum b_ _ _ s. Gumboots' is one word. In the text, there is a I must wear my gumb_ _ _ s. space between 'gum' and 'b _ _ _ s’ suggesting that they are two words. Close the gap between these words. 4 4th p, 3rd s It is very w _ _ _ today. Need for an extra dash ( _ ) to accommodate 'y' It is very w _ _ _ _ today. for the word w i n d y. As it is in the text, students would write w i n d. They can’t write ‘y.’ 4 4th p, 4th s The farmers want more r The letter ‘r’ and the three dashes should not be The farmers want more _ _ _. separated. Place ‘r’ before the three dashes in r _ _ _. the next line. 5 1st p, 4th s On some days the c _ Comma after ‘days.’ Place the letter ‘c’ followed On some days, the _ _ _ s are not dark. by the dash in the second line so that the parts of c _ _ _ _ s are not dark. words are not scattered in different lines. 5 3rd p, 2nd s There is _ _ _ Put all the dashes together in the first line. There is _ _ _ _ on the ground and it looks very _ on the ground and it looks white. very white. !1 of 21! Page Paragraph (p), Errors/Observations Remarks/ comments Suggested Corrections Nos. Sentence(s), Tables (t), Questions (q) 6 2nd s of t Outside the class There is one extra space before this phrase compared to other phrases in this table. 7 Last p 2. What is average Use of articles. What is the average temperature of a human temperature of human body? body? 3. Does the water always boil Use of first question tag. Does the water always boil at 100ºC? Why? at 100ºC, why? 10 1st p, 2nd s A clean plastic bottle (straight The use of capital A is incorrect because it is after a clean plastic bottle (with straight sides are best), sides are best), a ruler, a a colon and hence, continuation of the first a ruler, a pencil, cellotape... pencil, cello-tape... sentence. The word 'with' is necessary. There is need for uniformity in the spelling of cellotape either as 'cello tape,' 'cellotape' or 'cello-tape.' 10 4th p Make a 100 millimetre scale. Hyphenate the 100 and millimetre and make Make a 100-millimetre scale. (Remember, every (Remember, every centimeter 'millimetre' in the second instance,a plural. centimetre is 10 millimetres) is 10 millitmetre). 11 1st p There are four main directions Space between the dash and 'E.' Use 'in' instead There are four main directions - East, West, North, -East, West, North, and South. of 'from' in the 2nd sentence. Use a colon instead and South. For example, sun rises in the east and For example, sun rises from of a dash after the word 'directions.' Write sets in the west. We have also four cardinal the east and sets in the west. 'Northeast' instead of 'North-East' as on page 27. directions: Northeast, Southeast, Southwest and We have also four Cardinal Northwest. direction - North-East, South East, South-West and North- West. 11 Box story No-one really understood why Remove the hyphen between 'No' and 'one.' No one really understood why compasses pointed compasses pointed north. north. 11 Last para 1. Which direction is your Make the question clearer. 1. In which direction is your house located from house from the school? the school? 12 Last sentence Now the compass is ready Use of the definitive article 'the.' Now the compass is ready and you can read all the and you can read all eight eight directions. directions. !2 of 21! Page Paragraph (p), Errors/Observations Remarks/ comments Suggested Corrections Nos. Sentence(s), Tables (t), Questions (q) 14 3rd p 6. Make a small hole in the Sequence of the sentence is 5 and not 6. Change 5. Make a small hole in the middle of the compass. middle of the compass others accordingly. No fullstop at the end of the sentence. 16 2nd p, 2nd s Ifleaves and prayer flags are Space between 'If' and 'leaves.' Comma after If leaves and prayer flags are moving, we say there moving we say there is a 'moving.' is a gentle breeze. gentle breeze. 16 3rd p If the twigs and branches of Space between the two sentences. If the twigs and branches of the trees move and the trees move and break off, break off, we say there is a strong wind. It is also we say there is a strong called a gale. wind.It is also called a gale. 16 4th p When big trees fall down, Please note the habit of making fullstops bold When big trees fall down, roofs are blown away roofs are blown away and after every bold words in this page. This need not and there is great damage everywhere; we say there is great damage be done. The emphasis is on the words that are there is a storm. everywhere we call it a storm. printed in bold, not on the fullstop. A fullstop is not a part of the word! 17 1st p, 3rd s You may want to use symbols Remove comma after the word 'words.' You may want to use symbols instead of words to instead of words, to tell what tell what the weather is like. the weather is like. 17 4th p Frost- ice like white power Spaces between i) the word Frost and the dash, Frost: ice-like white power that covers the ground that covers the ground when and ii) between the words 'very' and 'cold'. when the weather is very cold. the weather is verycold. Hyphenate the words 'ice' and ‘like.' Colons maybe better instead of dashes for words listed Flood: overflowing of a river due to heavy rainfall. on this page. 'Overflowing' is one word as is 'overflow' used on Flood - over flowing of a river page 31. 'Rainfall' is a more apt usage here than due to heavy rains. 'rains.' 17 2nd last p, 2nd s The sun rays pass through the Space between the word 'forms' and the article The sun’s rays pass through the drizzle and form a drizzle and formsa rainbow. 'a.' rainbow. !3 of 21! Page Paragraph (p), Errors/Observations Remarks/ comments Suggested Corrections Nos. Sentence(s), Tables (t), Questions (q) 18 Table headings Date and time Follow the same syntax. In the heading 'Wind Date and Time Direction,' both the letters W and D are in capital Weather symbol letters. Weather Symbol 18 1st column 8am Space between the figure and letters in all the 8 am first three rows. 18 3rd column 30mm Space between the figures and letters. 30 mm 19 No numbering or listing of the Number the questions or use bullets against each questions under all four of the questions. headings. 20 Last p, last s Birds stop singing . Remove space between the fullstop and the word Birds stop singing. 'singing.' 21 1st, 2nd, 3rd and During the summer,... Remove the article 'the' in these phrases since During summer,... 4th p During the winter,... they are not in reference to any particular During winter,... In the summer,... summer or winter. In summer,... In the winter,... In winter,... 21 1st p, 3rd s They also sow potatoes, Some vegetables are spelt in singular and some They also sow potatoes, cauliflowers, chillies, cauliflowers, chilli, cabbage in plural. cabbages and many others. and many others. Block 2 24 2nd p, 2nd s Bhutan lies in the mountain Add the new sentence highlighted in bold in the Bhutan lies in the mountain range called the range called the Himalaya. next column. It makes a logical transition to the Himalaya. There are many other mountain The Black Mountain Range is next sentence. In its absence, the introduction of ranges within the Himalaya. One such range, in Trongsa Dzongkhag. Black Mountain Range is too abrupt. the Black Mountain Range, is in Trongsa Dzongkhag. 24 3rd p, 2nd s Gangkarpuensum Spacing of names with four syllables. Same as Gangkar Puensum Pema Gatshel for Pemagatshel (p. 25) and Samdrup Jongkhar for Samdrupjongkhar. !4 of 21! Page Paragraph (p), Errors/Observations Remarks/ comments Suggested Corrections Nos. Sentence(s), Tables (t), Questions (q) 25 3rd p, 1st s Land between mountains is Usage of singular and plural words. Lands between mountains are called valleys. called valleys. 26 Page header 2.3 The Land around US US is Us as in other pages of the same. 2.3 The Land around Us 26 7th p After you have finish writings, Tense. Make 'finish' into 'finished.' Remove 's' After you have finished writing, show your work to show to your teachers and from 'writings.' your teachers and parents for more help. parents about your work for more help. 28 3rd p 2. Make mountains, valleys Make 'river' into a plural like the words 2. Make mountains, valleys and rivers... and river... 'mountains' and 'valleys' in the same sentence. 29 1st p, 3rd s At sea level the height of a Use of comma.