Masaryk University Faculty of Arts

Department of English and American Studies EnglishLanguageandLiterature MiladaPíchová Comparison of Thomas Keneally’s novel The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith and its Film Version Bachelor ’sDiplomaThesis Supervisor:PhDr.JitkaVlčková,Ph. D.

2007

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IdeclarethatIhaveworkedonthisthesisindependently, usingonlytheprimaryandsecondarysourceslistedinthebibliography. ...... MiladaPíchová

3 IwouldliketoexpressmanythankstomysupervisorPhDr.JitkaVlčková,Ph.D.forherkindhelp, supportandvaluableadvice.

4 Table of Contents:

INTRODUCTION ...... 6

1. TRANSPOSING OF NOVEL INTO FILM ...... 8

1.1.TRANSFERANDADAPTATIONPROPER...... 10

1.2.NARRATIVEFUNCTIONS...... 13

2. THE CHANT OF JIMMIE BLACKSMITH: THE NOVEL...... 14

2.1.STORYANDNARRATIVESTRUCTURE...... 15

2.2.JIMMIEBLACKSMITHINSEARCHFORIDENTITY...... 18

2.3.CRIMEASPUNISHMENT...... 21

3. THE CHANT OF JIMMIE BLACKSMITH: THE FILM ...... 23

3.1.STRUCTURALPATTERNS...... 23

3.2.THESYMBOLICASPECTOFNATURE...... 24

4. NOVEL AND FILM: THE MEDIA COMPARED ...... 28

4.1.TRANSFERANDADAPTATIONPROPERIN THE CHANT OF JIMMIE

BLACKSMITH ...... 29

4.2.NARRATIVEFUNCTIONSIN THE CHANT OF JIMMIE BLACKSMITH ...... 31

4.3.LIMITATIONSOFTHEFILMASAVISUALMEDIUM...... 35

CONCLUSION ...... 38

WORKS CITED ...... 40

5 Introduction

Filmadaptationsofcelebratednovelshavealwaysattractedattentionfromthepublic, aswellasfromthecritics,reviewers,andscholars.Nevertheless,thepositionofafilmbased onawellknownbooktendstobecomplicatedbythefactthattheaudiencescometoseeit withcertain–biasedornot–expectations.Infact,thespectator(whohasalsoreadthebook) cannothelpbuttoconstantlycomparetheimagesthatthenovelinspiredinthemwiththose appearingonthescreen.Thusitbecomesmuchhardertoarriveatanyobjectiveevaluation becausealotofmisleadingfactorscomeintoplay.

Firstly,thereisthegeneralassumptionthatafilmcanneverreachthequalityofa book.Perhapsitisseenasamoresuperficialmediumthatcannotequalthedepthsand complexityofanovel.Thereareexceptionstothisbutnotenoughofthemtouprootthisfixed scepticism.Thesecondproblemariseswhenthespectatorstartstothinkaboutthe adaptation’sfidelitytotheoriginal.Sometimesitalmostseemsasiftheywerewaitingforthe momentwheretheycancatchoutthefilmmakeralteringthestoryline,omittingparticular scenes,orintroducingnewcharactersnonexistentinthenovel.Intheeyesofthespectator, thefilmmakerhasthusfailedtoreproducetheoriginalfaithfully,andsucha“fault”often resultsinanoveralldisappointmentofthespectator.Inotherwords,ifthedirectorhadchosen toworkwithafilmscriptyetunknowntotheaudience,itwouldhavebeenmuchmore probablethattheyweretolerantandreadytoappraisehiscreativityatvariouslevels.The issueoffidelityisatreacherousone,andoneshouldalwayskeepitinmindbefore elaboratingtheirrevieworacritiqueofafilmadaptation.

Theaimofmythesisistofindobjectivemethodsofevaluatingafilmadaptation.

Besideslistingthemandprovidingatheoreticalbackgroundtothestudy,Iwillattempttoput theminpractice.AsthetopicofmythesisIhavechosenacontrastiveapproachtoanovel writtenbytheAustralianwriterThomasKeneally, The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith ,andits

6 filmversion.Thefilmadaptationisregardedasfaithfultotheoriginaltext,yettheinitial responseoftheaudiences,mostlyin,wasnotentirelypositive.Ihavechosento examinethisparticularworkpartlyforthisreason:becauseitdemonstratesthattheissueof fidelityisnotdefinitive.

Thefirstchapterisdevotedtoatheoreticalbackgroundwhichprovesfundamentalin ordertoachieveanobjectivenoveltofilmcomparison.Ihavedrawnmostlyonthestudy guideofBrianMcFarlane 1whoproposesamodernfilmtheorymethodologyandoffersa systematicaccountoftransposinganovelintofilm.

InthesecondchapterIwillintroducethebook, The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith ,and myintentionwillbetostudyindetailJimmie’sidentitycrisiswhichIconsiderthecentral– andmostcomplex–themeofthenovel.

InthethirdchapterIwillconcentrateonthefilmversionof The Chant ,firstanalysing itsstructuralpatternsandthenpointingoutthefilm’schiefinnovation,thesymbolicaspectof

NatureandtheAustralianland.Thefilmwascriticizedbysomereviewersforitsplain episodiccharacter(“Teaching”),butIbelievethatbyintroducingthemotifofNatureand landscapewithinthestoryline,thedirectorfoundawayforhisownartisticexpressionas well.

Thefinalchapterisdevotedtothecomparisonof The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith ina novelandafilm.Iwillapplythemethodologyandterminologyintroducedatthebeginning, andthusattemptabalancedcomparisonofthetwomedia.Mymainconcernwillbe particularlywithtransfer,enunciation,andnarrativefunctions.

Theintentionistoofferapossiblyobjectivecasestudywithoutlosingsightofthe specificityofthetwomedia.Theywillfirstlybeexaminedseparately,andthensubjectedtoa moredetailedcomparisonwiththeaimtohighlighttheirweaknessesandstrengths. 1McFarlane,Brian. Novel to Film: An Introduction to the Theory of Adaptation. Oxford:ClarendonPress,2004.

7 1. Transposing of Novel into Film

Itishighlyimprobablethatanyvisualadaptationofaliteraryworkinthelastseventy yearshasbeenleftwithoutimmediateresponsefromawidecriticalpublicandmedia.Novels andthewrittenwordtriggerourimaginationwhiletheirfilmrepresentationprovokesour curiositytoknowwhathappenswhenthecharactersappearaliveinfrontofoureyes.Every spectatorwhogoestoseeafilmbasedonabooktheyhavereadhascertainexpectations basedontheirownunderstandingoftheoriginaltextortheemotionalresponsetoit.

Besidesthat,manycritics,publicists,writers,andscholarsdedicatethemselvestoa moresystematicstudyofthetwomediaandtheircomparison.Avaluablereviewisnotso muchaquestionofpersonallikesanddislikes,butratherrequiresanacademicapproach.

Nonetheless,asMcFarlaneforewarnsinhisbook,asystematicstudyhasnotalwaysbeen preferreddespitetherelativelylonghistoryoffilmadaptationcriticism.Theproblemthat seemsdifficulttogetaroundisthefactthatthemajorityofcriticsareoverlypreoccupiedwith theissueoffidelity,i.e.howmuchoftheoriginalworkhasbeentransferredintheadaptation andwhetheranyalternationshavebeenintroduced(194197).Themostfrequentaspects examinedbytheproponentsofrigidtransformationsaretheomissionofscenesorcharacters, reformulatingofdialogues,andthecredibilityoftheculturalandhistoricalcontext

(McFarlane8).

However,consideringthecommonlengthofafilm,itisobviousthatthescopeofa noveldoesnotalwaysallowitscompletetranscriptintoavisualmedium.Suchataskrequires

“akindofselectiveinterpretation,alongwiththeabilitytorecreateandsustainanestablished mood[ofthenovel]”(DeWittBodeenqtd.inMcFarlane7).Thereisalwaysalinkbetween thesourcetextanditsadaptationnomatterwhetherthedirectorchoosestoadherecloselyto theoriginaltextorusesitonlyasaninspiration.Unfortunately,theaudiencesaswellasthe criticsoftenlimitthemselvestojudgetheissueoffidelity,andthedirector’sorscriptwriter’s

8 creativecontributionsorchangesinthefilmarethereforeundervaluedinsteadofappreciated.

McFarlanepointsoutthat“adaptationisanexampleofconvergenceamongthearts,perhapsa desirable–eveninevitable–processinarichculture”(10).Hisideaistoproposethatthe directorshouldbegivenachancetousethebookasaresourceandatthesametimemake anotherworkofartfromit–withoutnecessarilylosingtheappreciationoftheaudience.

Moreover,everyfilmadaptationisprimarilybasedonthesoleinterpretationofthe fewpeoplewhoworkonthescript.Hence,thereisalwaystheriskofnotmeetingthe spectator’sexpectationsorfailingtoreproducethenovelinthewaythatothershave understoodit(McFarlane9).Sometimes,adifferentpointofviewmaybeinspiring,other timesdisappointing.

Ontheotherhand,beingfaithfultothesourcetextcanbynomeansguaranteeabetter adaptationthanonethatonlydrawsonthe‘essence’oftheworkwhileallowingvarious alternations.Thetwomediahavedifferentpossibilitiesandlimits,andwhatworkswellinone maybecomeanobstacleintheother.IwillclarifywhatthisrepresentswhileIexaminea particularcasestudy, The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith inanovelandafilmlateroninthis thesis.

Meanwhile,inordertounderstandtheprocessoftransferringanovelintoafilm,it maybeusefultotakeacloserlookattheparticularissuesthatcomeintoplay.Bothofthe mediahaveonecommonbase,andthatisthenarrative.“Ifthefilmmakerisawriter,thefilm, byimplication,isatext”(Stam20).Imaysupplementthedefinitionbysayingthatnovels tell andfilms show ,butthebasisis,infact,thesame.Oneproducesimagesinthereader’smind, thusmakingthemactivelyimaginewhatisgoingon,theotherletstheviewerpassively receivetheresultsofthefilmmaker’simagination(whethertheylikeitornot).Stam observes:“Bothmediashareacommonnatureasdiscourse, écriture ;botharetextualand intertextual;bothcanforegroundtheirconstructednature;andbothcansolicittheactive

9 collaborationoftheirreader/spectator”(xii).Thenovelmaybemorechallengingintermsof thedemandsitplacesonthereader,nonetheless,thefilmas“areadymadematerial”attracts theaudiencesevenmorebecausepeoplewanttocomparetheirownimageswiththoseofthe filmmaker.

Therearetwobasicissuesthatneedtobeconsideredintheprocessoftransposinga novelintofilm:thedistinctionbetweentransferandadaptationproperandtheanalysisofthe narrativefunctions,bothofwhichwillbediscussedinthefollowingsections.

1.1 Transfer and Adaptation Proper

Thedistinctionbetweentransferandadaptationproperisacrucialstartingpointwhen approachingafilmadaptationofanovel.Inordertoworkwiththesetermsthroughoutthe thesis,Iwillnowexplaintheirfunctionsintheliteraryfilmtheory.Forthemostpart,Iwill drawonthemethodologypresentedbyMcFarlaneinhis Novel to Film.

Transfer

Thequestionofwhatcanbetransferredfromanoveltoafilmfirstinvolvesdrawinga linebetweennarrativeandenunciation. Narrative coversallthetransferableelementsofthe novel.However,evenwithinsuchspecification,thefilmmakercandecideforthemselves untilwhatpointwilltheywillclingtotheoriginalandwheretheywillmoveaway.

Enunciation ,ontheotherhand,meansallthatcannotbetransferredduetothedifferent creativepotentialsofthetwomediainquestion(20).

HenceifIlookatanarrative,adistinctionmadebyShklovskymaycomeinuseful.He distinguishesbetweenastoryandaplot.Theformerrepresentsatemporalsuccessionof events,thelatteracreativelydeformedwayinwhichthestoryisbeingtold(qtd.inHawkes

65).Inotherwords,everystoryhasabeginningandanend,butneitherthewriternorthe

10 directorisobligedtoobservethetimesequenceoftheevents.Theyadapttheplottofittheir creativevisionbyintroducingflashbacks,skippinginsignificantperiods(oreventhe significantones,butalwayswithapurpose),ormovingbackandforthintimeastheywish.

Suchstrategiesresultincreatingsuspenseandtension,orinrestrictingtheunderstandingof thestorywhichis,however,intentional.

Anotheraspectworthexploringwithinthecategoryoftransferisthefunctionof charactersinthestoryaswellasthequalitiesofthecharactersindividually(McFarlane24).

Therolethatthecharactersplayisessentialintermsofcorrectreadingandinterpretingofa novelandafilm.Onewayofdepictingthecharactersismakingthemrepresentativeofa certainqualityorvice.Proppdistributestheirfunctionsamongseven“spheresofaction” correspondingtotheir“respectiveperformers”asfollows:

1.thevillain

2.thedonor(theprovider)

3.thehelper

4.theprincess(asoughtforperson)

5.thedispatcher

6.thehero

7.thefalsehero.(qtd.inHawkes69)

Proppsuggeststhefollowingformula:“Functionsofcharactersserveasstable, constantelementsinatale,independentofhowandbywhomtheyarefulfilled.They constitutethefundamentalcomponentsofatale”(Propp21).However,thecharacterrolesare not always evidentandthewriterorthefilmmakermayoptforamorecomplexpersonality

(asinthecaseofJimmieBlacksmith).Besides,thefilmmakermayaswellredefinethe characters’functionssinceitalwaysdependsonhimorhertowhatextenttheychooseto retainthecharacterrolesdesignatedbythewriter.

11 Adaptation Proper

Thetermadaptationproperrefers,inageneralsense,toenunciationwhichhasalready beenmentionedabove.Itcontainsthoseelementsthatwillalwaysmakethefilmversionofa noveldistinctfromitssource.Inthiscase,however,itisnotbecausesuchwastheintentionof thefilmmakerbutbecausesomeexpressionalfunctionsofabookandafilmareincompatible

(McFarlane26).

Anexampleofadaptationproperistheconstructionofamiseenscène 2inafilm.A novelissetupinawaythatalltheinformationwearetoknowaboutasceneisbeing revealedtousgradually,aswereadwordbyword.Afilm,ontheotherhand,usesframesthat arevisuallycomplexandgivemanypiecesofinformationatonce.Thereare,ofcourse, methodsthatrestricttheviewer’sknowledge,likeframecompositionsorcloseups,butin general,thereismuchmoretoobserveinaframethanthereistoreadinoneparagraph(26

27).Atthesametime,whilethewritermaydedicateawholechaptertoadialogueora psychologicalstudyofhischaracters,thefilmmakerhastopresentthesamesceneina broadercontext.Hehastoelaboratethescenewithinarealsetting,keepinginmindthe respectivecostumes,habits,background,soundtracketc.Alltheseelementsmaynotalways beclearlystatedinthenovel,whileinthefilmtheyarefundamentalformakingupthemise enscène.

However,McFarlanenamesevenmoreextracinematicparameters,including languageandnonlinguisticsoundcodesand,asmentionedabove,culturalcodes.By languagecodeshemeansdifferentregionalaccentsthatrepresenttheclasssystem,revealthe originofthecharacterorthetimeperiod,orsimplybecomeahumorousaspectforthe audiences.Nonlinguisticsoundcodesinvolvemusicandauralcodesotherthanwords,e.g.

2Miseenscèneiseverythingthatappearsbeforethecamera,namely:thesetting,thecostumeandmakeup,the useoffigure,expressionandmovementbyactors,andthelighting(fromWikipedia).

12 animalsounds,creekgurgling,doorsmashingetc.Culturalcodesrefertohowpeoplelived andwhotheywere(29).

1.2 Narrative Functions

AccordingtoBarthes,everynarrativeismadeupoffunctionswhichhecategorizesin twomaingroups:cardinalfunctions(ornuclei)andcatalysers. Cardinal functions playa fundamentalroleinthedevelopmentofthestorybecausetheycreatelinksbetweenevents.

“Theactionstheyrefertoopenupalternativesofconsequencetothedevelopmentofthe story;theycreate‘risky’momentsinthenarrativeanditiscrucialtonarrativity[...]thatthe readerrecognizesthepossibilityofsuchalternativeconsequences(qtd.inMcFarlane13).”

Everytimethereisaturninthestoryorasituationappearsthathasanimpactonits continuation,wetalkaboutacardinalfunction.Infact,cardinalfunctionsformthebasicplot andifthefilmmakerschoosetoomitorchangesomeofthem,theyruntheriskofannoying theaudiencebybeingunfaithfultotheoriginalframeworkofthestory.Ontheotherhand, eveniftheyrespectthecardinalfunctionsstrictly,itdoesnotnecessarilyimplythatthey cannotembedtheircreativepotentialinthefilm.Directorscanassurethattheirworkbe originalbyintroducingthesocalledcatalysers,thoseseeminglyunimportantactionsthat complementbutdonotchallengethestoryline.Theirfunctionistofillouttheareasthatlack constructiveplot,orinotherwords,“thecatalyserslayoutareasofsafety,rests,luxuries”

(McFarlane14).Theirtaskistomaketheactionrealandtruebyprovidingitwithexistent settingandcharacteristicbackground.

IthasbeenindispensabletoexplainthissetoftermsbecauseIwillusetheminthe followingchaptersdealingwiththecasestudyof The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith and leadingtoacomparisonofthenovelandthefilm.

13 2. The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith : The Novel

ThebookthatIhavechosentoanalyseis The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith ,writtenby theAustralianwriterThomasKeneallyandpublishedin1972.Thestorydealswiththe delicatetopicofAboriginalitythatAustraliahasbeenresolving(ornot)sincethefirst settlementwasestablishedin1788.Thepurposeofthisthesisisnothistoricalbutitshouldbe knownthatabasicunderstandingofthehistoricalbackgroundisessentialforcorrect interpretationofKeneally’sworkasmuchastheroleofhismaincharacter,Jimmie

Blacksmith.Thenovelisbasedonatruestory,asetofeventsthatoccurredattheturnofthe twentiethcentury,andthereasonKeneallyrediscovereditafewdecadeslaterwastheboom ofinterestintheAboriginalproblemthatcameforthinAustraliainthesixties(Healy245).

Besides,whatmakesthestoryinterestingforsomeandoffensiveforothersisthefact thatKeneallywroteitfromtheperspectiveoftheAborigines,inspiteofhimselfbeinga whiteAustralian.ScholarslikeAdamShoemakerorJ.J.Healyhaveemphasizedthe complexityoftheissueandcastdoubtuponthelimitationsthatwhiteAustralianauthors surelyencounterwhentryingtogaininsightintoaculturethatisnottheirsinthefirstplace.

Shoemakerstatesthat“aboriginalityisaverydifficultthemeforaWhiteAustraliandramatist toexpressinapersuasiveway,especiallywhentheauthorfallsshortofhisorher ambitiousness”(250).Healygoesevenfurtherbysuggestingreconsideringthevalueof

Keneally’sworkwhichhereproachesfor“theviolenceofshallownessandmisconceptionon asubjectofgreatmoralsignificanceinitselfandofgreatpoliticalsignificanceforAustralian culture”(248).However,toKeneally’scredit,hehimselfadmittedthedifficultieshehas encountered:“IfeelIshouldhavedonemoreontheaboriginalside;Jimmyseemsfairly remotefromthereaders”(qtd.inHealy248).InaninterviewwithRobinHugheshedeclares:

“IfIwaswriting The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith nowIwouldnotpresumetoputmyselfin

14 themindofatribalisedhalfAboriginalhalfEuropean.[…]Iwouldnowtell[sic]thestory fromthepointofviewofanobserver”(tape10).

Ontheotherhand,eventhoughKeneallyhasbeencriticisedforhisinabilityto penetratetheAboriginalworldview,hisbookwashighlyacclaimedandwonhimtheRoyal

SocietyofLiteratureAward 3.Readersandlateralsofilmgoersweretouchedbythisstoryof

JimmieBlacksmithbornahalfcastewhoembodiestheconstantstruggleofamancaught betweentworacesandtwoverydifferentcultures.

Regardlessofthereactionsthatthebookarousedinreaders,scholarsandcritics,Iwill nowexamineitsnarrativestructureandthemaincharacterinmoredetail,andthusprepare groundforthecomparisonofthenovelanditsfilmcounterpartthatwillconcludethisthesis.

2.1 Story and Narrative Structure

AsIhavementionedabove,thestoryiscentredonJimmieBlacksmith,amanbornto anAboriginalmotherandawhiteEuropeanfather,butinfactbroughtupbyaMethodist missionary,MrNeville,whoattendedintheBrentwoodblacks’camp.Heandhiswife inculcatedJimmiewithChristianvalues,orinfact,whitevalues.Theydidsowithagood intentioninordertoensureJimmie’shappiness,becausetheyrecognizedathisearlyagethat hemightbedifferentfromhiskinsmenandstrivehigherthanthem,whoseaspirationswhere slowlybeingreducedtoalcoholismandfornication.However,itwasnotaneasytask– besidesbeingquiteirresponsible–toindoctrinatesomeoneelsewiththeprinciplesofanother one’scultureandwayofthinking.Jimmiesufferedbeyonddoubtforsuppressinghis

Aboriginalbackgroundandpursuinginsteadthesymbolsof‘whitesuccess’representedby honestwork,owningapropertyandmarryingawhitewoman.“He[Jimmie]hadalways

3“TheChantofJimmieBlacksmith.” Wikipedia: the Free Encyclopedia .6Oct.2007.WikimediaFoundation. 1Nov.2007 . 15 presumedthattomarryawhiteraisedapersoninthecommunity.[…]Tohaveawhitewife andagoodreputationforwork–thesemustcombineforaman’sgood”(Keneally53).

Nevertheless,andregardlessofwhatithadcosthimtocomeatleastclosetohis

“whiteaspirations”,oncehereachedthem,intheeyesofthewhiteshestillremaineda despisedanduntrustworthyblack.Deepdown,hewishedfortheiracknowledgementofhis achievementsand,ifpossible,forequality,buthenevermanagedtoshakeoffthenegative stereotypesappliedtotheAboriginalsocietyandrootedwrongfullyinthethinkingofwhites.

Theblackswereregardedwithcontemptandtreatedwithscornwhichwasverypainfulfor

Jimmietounderstandinthecontrastofhishardwork,effortandselfrepression.

Eventually(asithadhappenedinAustraliainthefactualcaseofJimmyGovernorat thebreakofthetwentiethcentury),allthemockery,illtreatmentandexploitationthatJimmie experiencedturnedbackatitsinciters(Healy247).Inafitofviolentrage,Jimmie, accompaniedfirstbyhismaternaluncleJackSmoldersTabidgiandlaterbyhishalfbrother

Mort,performedaseriesofbrutalkillings,allofthemhavingwhitewomenastargets.One wouldwonderwhythesewomenandnottheirhusbandswhoweremuchmoreresponsiblefor abusingJimmie’srights.Theanswerissimple.Jimmiewasirritatedbythefarmers’wives, first,becausethey“represent[ed]accesstorespectability,acceptanceandpropertyand[were] thesymbolsofwhiteownership”(Keane),andsecond,becausethewhitewomanhemarried had–contrarytohishopesandaspirations–failedtobecomesuchsymbol.

Inthetimebetweentheviolentkillings,theBlacksmithbrotherswereoutintheopen, fleeingfromjustice,andonlythevoiceofconsciencewascatchingupwiththem.

Nevertheless,theeventstooktheirinevitablecourseandthestoryendswiththedeathofall thethreeAboriginalmen,includingJimmie’suncleTabidgi.Inaway,andmaybetoa surprise,theirdeathsarenotpresenteddramaticallybutwithadetachedapproach.Thismay havebeenKeneally’sintentionbecauseitreflectsthesubsidinginterestoftheAustralian

16 publicinthepreviouslywidelydiscussedcaseofthehorrificcrime.However,wemustnot forgetthatAustraliaatthattimewasmostlypreoccupiedwithpolitics,sincethecourseof historicaleventstookanewdirection,andearlyin1901,Federationwasproclaimed.

Tabidgi’sandJimmie’shangingswereinthemarginofthecelebratingpublic’sinterestthat hadnothoughtsfortheAboriginesatall(“Teaching”).

WhenIexamineKeneally’snarratingtechniquesitbecomesclearthatheoptedforthe perspectiveofanomnipotentnarratorwhoknowsandseesall,andwhosevoiceisguidingthe readerthroughthefifteenchaptersofhisnovel.Ontheotherside,itremainsquestionable whetherthisthirdpersonnarratorstayscompletelyobjectiveornot.Iampointingitout becauseasonereadsonandon,theybecomeconvincedthatJimmie’smurdersarejustifiable, inthesensethatthetargetsofhisslaughterdeserveditfortheirmaltreatingandpersistent abuseofJimmie’srights.Inordertoprovokesuchconvictioninthereader,thewriterhasto employcertainnarrativemethodsthatwillachievethedesiredresult.Keneallyasanarrator createssomesortofironicdistancethataffectstheinterpretationofevents,dialoguesand characters’thoughts.Moreover,itensuresacommonemotionalresponseinthereaders

(Stitson).Alreadyinthefirstchapter,thenarratorcommentswithanironicundertone:“The

EuropeanwhohadimpregnatedgiddyDulcieBlacksmithmusthavebeenofapensivenature; amanwhoperhapshatedtheviceofsleepingwithblackwomenyetcouldnotmasterit”

(Keneally3).Fromthebeginningofthenovel,thenarratorpresentsthewhitesocietyas dominantandexploitative,anditsindividualrepresentativesasarrogantandignorant hypocrites.

Interestinglyenough,Keneallyalsointroducesvariouslettersin The Chant of Jimmie

Blacksmith thathaveanimplicitroleinthestory.However,therearealsootherletters,which seemredundant,andwhosecontentshavenoeffectuponJimmie’slifeorthestoryitself.For exampleinthepenultimatechapter,afterJimmiehadlefthisbrotherMortandwentonalone,

17 hefoundanumberoflovelettersinaschoolteacher’sresidencewherehespentanight.They had,however,littletodowiththestory’sgeneraltheme,andtheconcerningepisodewas– probablyforthesamereason–omittedinthefilm.Onthecontrary,theletterofMrNevilleat theendofthebook,whereheconfessedthathehadcarriedresponsibilityforJimmie

Blacksmith’sbrutalacts,isofacrucialimportance.Inthenovelitsaysthathisletterwas neverpublishedinnewspapers–itdidnotsuittheprevailingChristianpointofview.Still,

Keneallyincludesitinthenovel.Thefactthatthewriterpresentsthishonestadmission throughthevoiceofoneofhischaractersisbynomeansaccidental.Heisnotcommenting, appraisingorjudgingMrNeville’swords,butheusesthiskindheartedcharactertoconvince thereaders(iftheyarenotalready)thatJimmie’soriginalvalueswereinfactdisruptedbyhis whiteChristianeducation.ToreadsuchconfessiondirectlyfromMrNeville’spenprovides thereaderwithasenseofanevenmorereliablesourcethattheomnipresentnarratoris capabletosecure.

ThereisyetanotherexamplethatrevealsKeneally’ssubjectiveattitudetowardsthe halfcasteandthat–Iwouldsay–manipulatesourunderstandingofthetext.However,ithas moretodowithJimmie’sinternalstruggleshenceIshallreturntothismatterwhendiscussing

Jimmie’ssearchforidentity.

2.2 Jimmie Blacksmith in Search for Identity

Fromearlychildhood,Jimmiewastornbetweentwoworldsthatranparalleltohim– thetruthofMrNevilleandthetruthofEmuWren(Keneally6).Knudsenclaimsthat

“belongingtothespiritofonecamp,butknowingthewaysofbothcamps,isastrengththat shouldbeturnedtoadvantage–buttheimplicationsarecomplex”(305).Jimmiewasborna halfcaste.Nevertheless,justashisskinwasneitherblacknorwhite,sowashisculture.

Jimmiewasdifferent,anditwasthisparticularreasonthatmadehisaspirationssurpassthe

18 boundariesanddreamsofotherblacks.Notsotheirpossibilities,however,whichreflectsthe tragicrealityofaworldcorruptedbyracismandasemblanceofwhitesuperiority.

JimmiewaseducatedbyMrNeville,aMethodistmissionarylivingforatimeinthe blacks’camp,whotogetherwithhiswifeservedasrolemodelsofrespectabilityforJimmie.

TheyeducatedhimandwishedthatheescapedthestereotypeofaresignedAborigine drinkingandhangingaroundthecamp.Thecouplesoonconvincedthehalfcastethatthe secretofsuccesslaidinhonestworkandmarryingawhitegirlbecausethenhisgrandchildren wouldonlybe“oneeightcaste,scarcelyblackatall”(Keneally7).Jimmiewasindoctrinated withtraditionalChristianvaluesthatwerelargelyignored–ifnotalien–totherestofthe community.Whilehavingsexwithablackwomanwasacommonpracticeofthewhites, marryingawhitewomanwasratherunthinkable–andnotevendesiredso–bytheblacks.

ThatexplainswhyJimmie’suncleTabidgiJackSmolderswastakenbysurprisewhenhe heardthatJimmiehadmarriedawhitegirloffafarm.JackimmediatelysetouttofindJimmie and“layatribalclaimonhim[because]tohismindpeopleshouldcontinuetowedaccording tothetribalpattern”(1).

Jimmie,however,hadlongbeforebegun“byhisowninsightandundertheNevilles’ influencetoquestion[tribalmanhood’s]value”(7).TheReverend’sinstructionsmighthave beenwellintentioned,butcertainlynaïve.ItdidnottakelongandJimmieadoptedwhite valuesandambitionsthatwereslowlykillingtheAborigineinhim.Still,nosuchinner transformationcouldmakehimwhitefortheoutsideworld.AndthatwassomethingMr

NevilledidnotforeseeandthatledJimmietorevoltagainstwhiteinjustice.Itshouldbe mentionedthough,totheReverend’scredit,thatheeventuallybecamefullyawareofhis responsibilityforJimmie’scrimesandconfessedthebackgroundstoryinalettersenttothe

Editorofthe Methodist Church Times .Headmitted:“Therewasalmostcertainlysomewhite provocationoftheyounghalfcaste,especiallyinthematterofhismarriagetoawhitegirl”

19 (Keneally176).Then,almostapologetically,heexplainedthathewas“lackinganydefinite instructiononhowtoproceedinthemanagementofamissioncamp”(175).

ThequestionwhethersocietywasreadytoaccepttheambitiousAboriginereceiveda painfullynegativeanswer.HadthesocietyatthattimecomprisedofmenlikeRevNeville whohadunderstandingfortheblacksandencouragedtheirintegration,itishighlyprobable thatnosuchatrocitiesasthosecommittedbyJimmiewouldhaveoccurred.However,every if isnowjustaspeculationincapableofchangingthetragiccourseofevents.

Notwithstanding,itwouldbeprematuretoassumethatJimmie’slifewasshaped solelybytheeducationreceivedfromtheReverend,becausetheparticularcircumstancesand

Jimmie’scharacterplayedanequallyimportantrole.Thetruthisthatthehistoricaland politicalbackgroundoftheperioddidnotfavourthesituationoftheAboriginesinanyway.

ThewholecountrywassweptbydiscussionsabouttheFederationandthepossiblebirthofa unifiedAustralia,dividingtheinhabitantsintwocampsofFederationistsandConservatives.

SincetheAboriginesdidnothavetherighttovote,itistonosurprisethattheywereleftout fromsuchdebates.Theirclaimsforlandandnecessitiesoflifewouldnotbeconsidered

(Ward187230).AlthoughtheFederationhasakeyplaceinthenovel(Keane),itishardly everputindirectconnectionwiththehalfcaste.Jimmie’spreoccupationwasnotbeing nationalistorconservative,butbeingblackorwhite.Hisbiggestdilemmawasthathedecided topursuevaluesofasocietythatrejectedhimandnevereventookhimseriously.“Jimmie’s criteriawere:home,hearth,wife,land”(Keneally15).Nonetheless,ablackmanwithwhite aspirationscouldonlybecomeatargetofmockeryatthattime.

20 2.3 Crime as Punishment

Itseemsratherprobableandalmostinevitablethatamanforcedtotoleratetoomany insultsandabuseswillnotmissanopportunitytoengageinaviolentandfatalencounterwith hisoppressors.Jimmiefeltthathehadsufferedenoughwhiteilltreatmentandfinallythe timecameforhimtodeclarewaronthem(Keneally86).Theintentionhereisnottohintthat

Jimmie’scrimewasexcusablebuttomakeclearthemotivationsthatstoodbehindit.Jimmie wastornbetweenalienationandafalsesenseofbelonging–heinfactbelongednowhere.His kinsmendidnotunderstandhim.Theirnaturalinstinctandloyaltykeptthemtogether,but

“thethoughtofkinsmenlostamidststrangers”(27)(i.e.Jimmielivingawayonawhiteman’s farm),worriedthem.Jimmiefeltalienatedfromhisowntribeanddespisedthedrunkencrowd ofblackswastingtheirtimeinVerona,yethenevercutoffthetieswithhiskinsmen.He accepted–despitebeingupset–tohandinhismodestwagestothetribeknowingthemoney wouldbeexchangedforalcohol.Atthesametime,heprovedincapableofexpellingTabidgi, whenhe(Jackie)hadsettledclosetoJimmie’shut,andhadbecomeapretextforthe complicationsthatJimmiewastofacelater.

Jimmiedreamtthatonemorning“hewouldwakeup‘Mr.Blacksmith’”(Keneally32).

ItisasadparadoxthatitwasnotuntilJimmie’sfirstkillingattheNewbysthatthenarrator’s voicerecognizedhimas Mr .4HehadbeenreferredtoasJimmieorJimmieBlacksmithall throughoutthebookuntilheturnedfromasubmissiveblackintoarevengeful criminal/victim.Thissuddenchangeshouldnotgounnoticedtothereader’seyebecauseit impliesJimmie’slongdesiredsocialadvancementofstatusandahintofequalitywiththe whiterace.Isay‘ahint’becausephysicaldominance–besidesbeingcowardly–isonly temporaryandcanbebynomeansmistakenforequality.Evenafterallthecommitted

4 In the previous section, I have made a remark about this technique that Keneally uses as the omnipotent narrator to shape our understanding of Jimmie’s character according to his will. It is a play of words which conveysadeepermeaning.SeeStitson,“WhenCrimeisaPunishment”. 21 murders,itremainedclearthatJimmie’sfrustrationcouldnotbereconciled.Hecouldhurtthe whites,threaten,andpunishthembuthewouldneverwintheirrecognition.Before,they scornedhimwithoutrespect,butthentheyfearedhim;thustheirrespectwasoutofquestion forever.

22 3. The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith : The Film

ThefilmversionofKeneally’snovel(whichbearsthesamename)wasreleasedin

1978 5,sixyearsafterthebook’spublication.Itearnedafavourableresponse,aboveall outsideAustralia,andmade The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith aparticularlycelebratedwork.

FredSchepisi,thedirector,startedhiscareerwithafilmcalled The Devil’s Playground

(1976),whichturnedouttobequitesuccessfulandSchepisiwasthenabletoraisemoneyfor hissecondproject, The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith .Thefilm’sproductionwasrelatively expensive,withabudgetofabout1.3milliondollars 6,whichwasanextraordinarysumfora filmatthattime.However,Schepisiwasdelightedtotransposethisparticularnovelintofilm, andsincehealreadyknewKeneallyfrombefore,theircooperationwentsmooth

(“Teaching”).AcuriouspeculiarityisthatSchepisicastKeneallyasacookinthefilm,so everyattentivespectatormayspotthewriterhimselfrightonscreen.

3.1 Structural Patterns

Thefirstthingthatstrikesthosewhohavebothreadthenovelandseenthefilmisthat thefilmisratherrigorouslyfaithfultotheoriginaltextasfarasthesuccessionofbasicevents isconcerned.Schepisi–asthedirector,producerandscriptwriterinoneperson–followed thelinearstructureofthenovelandretainedthemajorityofcharacters.Thedialogues,too, areeithertranscriptionsoftheexactwordingusedinthebook,ortheyarereconstructedfrom reportedspeech.Thedirectorintroducedonlyminorchangesintothedialoguesthathadno impactonthestoryline.Forexample,whenJackTabidgisetouttofindhisnephewafterhe hadmarriedthewhitegirl,hecarriedwithhimJimmie’sinitiationtooththatwassupposedto keepJimmiesafe.Inthefilm,hecarriesasacredstoneinstead.Thereasonforthischange

5ThefilmpremieredatCannesFilmFestivalin1978(“CAAMAProduction”). 6 For more information on Fred Schepisi, see: “Biography.” Official Website . 10 Nov. 2007 . 23 wasthatlittlespacewasreservedinthefilmfordepictingtribalritualsandJimmie’sinitiation wasonlyhintedat.Thespectatorwouldthusfindithardtounderstandwhattheinitiation toothwasabout.

Lookingathowthefilmisstructured,itisevidentthattheeventsare shown rather than told .BythisImeanthatthefilmisfullofaction,thatitisepicratherthanlyrical

(althoughthelyricalscenesplaytheirpartaswell).Byallmeans,itwouldbeaninteresting experimenttoconsiderthefilm’ssilentversion,oronethatisaccompaniedonlybya soundtrack.Althoughsomeamountofinformationwouldbelost,Ibelievethefilmwould stillconveyitscentralmeaningveryplausibly.Jimmie(TommyLewis) 7isclearlyhalfwhite andhalfAboriginal,whichisobviousasmuchtothefilmgoersasitistothewhiteswho mistrusthimfromthemomenthestepsontheirproperty.Thewholestorydrawsonthis racialprecondition,whichturnsoutfatalforJimmie’slife.Allofthis,asIhavestatedbefore, is visible inthefilminthetruesenseoftheword.Thewhitecharacters–theoppressors–not only are meanbuttheyalso look mean.“Therewasalwaysmockeryinthecornersofhis eyes”(52)ishowMrNewbyisdescribedinthenovel,andotherwhiteactorsachievedthe same“meaneffect”byusingparticularbodylanguageandfacialexpressions.Infact,evenif theywerenottalking,thespectatorcouldstillrecognizetheirdominanceandwicked behaviour.ItisworthmentioningthatRayBarrett,whowascastedasSeniorConstable

Farrell,wontheBestActorprizeinaSupportingRoleAwardforhisperformance. 8

3.2 The Symbolic Aspect of Nature

Natureisoneofthemostcontroversialmotifsinthefilmanditsdepictionisvery subjective.Thescenesalterrapidly,whilethecountrysidekeepsemphasizingtheindividual

7 For cast, see: “The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith (1978).” The Internet Movie Database . 11 Nov. 2007 . 8ibid. 24 eventsandmentalstagesthatJimmiegoestrough.Tryingtodescribethelandthatopensupin frontofthespectator’seyeswouldresultinanabundanceofcontradictoryadjectives.

Schepisihasachievedasituationwherehemakeshisaudiencedoubtwhetherthescenery theyseeisbeautiful,harsh,wildorpeaceful.

Therearemomentsinthefilmwhereheletsfeastone’seyeonmagicalAustralian scenerywhenallofasuddentwoverysmallfiguresappearassilhouettescontrastedagainsta vasthorizon–itisJimmieandhisbrotherMort,fleeingfromthesceneofcrime.Our perceptionofthelandisimmediatelydeconstructed.Thesceneryisnotpleasantbuthostile, disturbedbyhumanpresence,“swallowing”thetwofiguresinitsvastnessandrestoringits priorsupremacy.

EuropeanperceptionofthelandisslightlydifferenttotheAustralianandthe

Aborigineforwhomitrepresents“anobjectiveunseenreality”:

WhereastheWesternviewseestheindividualasisolatedandapartfromthe

landscape,alivingselfagainstadeadobjectivebackground,theAboriginal

conceptionplacesthelandscapeinthecentreofeverything:atoncethesourceoflife,

theoriginoftribe,themetamorphosedbodyofbloodlineancestors,andtheintelligent

forcethatdrivestheindividualandcreatessociety.(Taceyqtd.inKnudsen236237)

TheAboriginalpeoplelivedinclosecontactwiththelandandNature;theywereinfact dependentontheirsurroundingsnotonlyforfoodandshelter,butalsobecauseoftheirtribal historyandtradition.In The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith ourperceptionofthelandis challengedthroughoutthehalfcaste’sevolution.ItreflectsJimmie’schangingattitudes towardshisorigin,andhisconsequentdecisiontoacquirenew(white)values.

Inthebeginningofthefilm,NatureisstillpresentedastheAborigines’“home”.

Jimmieistaughttohuntandsurviveinthewildernessduringhisinitiation,andtheaudiences gettofeelthatthereisalink,aninseparableconnectionbetweentheAboriginesandtheir(?)

25 land. 9Withoutit,nothingwillstaythesame(whichisawarningstatementwithrespecttothe

Aboriginalpositionevennowadays).WhenJimmiegetshisfirstjobandworksfortheIrish farmerMrHealy,histaskistodigpostholesandmakefencing.Thisjobisveryindicativeof

Jimmie’sgradualrejectionoftheblacktraditionandhisdesiretobeequalwithwhites.He leavesbehindhisinitiallyintimaterelationwiththelandandstrugglestomasterit.Thefence thathehasbuiltstandsasasymbolofagrowingdivisionbetweenJimmieandhiskinsmen

(Thomas).Inthefilm,thereisahorsestandingbehindthefencewhichIseeasacruel metaphorofthehalfcastedoingthesametotheanimalwhatthewhitemenhavedonetothe

Aborigines.

WhitepeoplecametoAustraliaasinvaders;theytookthelandfromthetribes,began tocultivateit,andbuiltcolonies.AsIhavesaidbefore,theirrelationshipwiththelandcannot becomparedtothatoftheAborigines.Forthewhitesthelandwasaservantoratool, whereasforthetribesitwasthecentreofall.WardcomparesittotheChristianHolyTrinity, sayingthat“thetribe,itspeopleanditsterritorybelongedtoeachothersocompletelythat

Aboriginalsawthethreeasoneentity”(14).Healsoexplainsthattheideaofa largepieceofcountrybelongingtoasingleman,letaloneachiefofsometribe,was inconceivabletotheAboriginalmind.Itwasnaturalandunquestionedthat“thelandbelonged tothewholetribebutnomorefirmlythanthewholetribebelongedtoitsland”(13).

Thedirectorofthefilmbroughtthisconceptevenfurtherbyintroducingimagesinthe filmthatwerecompletelyabsentinthenovel.TheyservedthepurposeofshowingJimmie’s alienationfromtheland,asifNaturewasturningherbackathimforthepathhehadchosen.

Thoseimagesweredetailedcloseupsofvariousinsects,twocloseupsofreptiles,andoneof achicken’sheadbeingcutoff.Theyappearedrandomly,regardlessofwhatactionwastaking place,andthusbreakingthelinearityofthemotionpictureframes.Allofthemoffered

9Formoreinformationaboutthedistributionoflandafterthearrivalofwhitediscoverers,seeWard,“Blackand whitediscoverers”:145. 26 unpleasantsightsaccompaniedbysoundsofintensebuzzandwhir.Theinsects(e.g.amoth,a dragonfly,oraworm)mightnothavebeenasscary,weretheynotsomagnifiedand disproportionedincomparisontootherscenes.

Schepisi’suseofthiscinematographictechniquewasbynomeansaccidental.Heused constantoppositionsofdimensionandspace,andfurthermorereversedtherealsizesof objectsonthescreen,makingthehumanssmallasantsandtheantsenormouslikemonsters.

Thevisualeffectthatsuchdeconstructionofmeasureshadontheaudienceswasviewingthe humans–inthiscasethefleeingbrothers–assomethingsubordinatetoNature,something completelylostinthewilderness,andthreatenedbyhostileanimals/monsters(Thomas).

Jimmie,tragicashisfatehadalreadybeen,wasnotonlyanoutcastfromthewhitesocietybut alsofromthelandwhichusedtobehishomeandhisprotection.Hethensoughtcoverinthe woodsandthefieldsbutthelandwasnomorehisintimateally.Thelandscapewasportrayed ashostile,harshandendlessinthesensethatitdidnotofferanycomfortorsecurity.It emphasizedtheinhumanhorrorofitandasenseofalienation.Thescenesweresetupwith thelandscapeindirectoppositiontothehumans(Thomas),asiftheyweretwocontrastive forcesfightingagainsteachotherandincapableofharmony.

27 4. Novel and Film: The Media Compared

IwillopenthischapterwithastatementbyVictorShklovskywhoproclaimed:“One

[attitudetowardart]istoviewtheworkofartasawindowontheworld.Throughwordsand images,theseartistswanttoexpresswhatliesbeyondwordsandimages”(qtd.inHawkes

80).WhenKeneallywassearchingforathemeforhisnovelhelookedintothepasttofinda modelofthepresent,orsomeallegorythatwouldcontinuetoappealtothereadersofhis time.HefeltthattheAborigineswerestillincrisisattheturnofthetwentiethcentury,asthey aretoday.KeneallybelievedthatthestoryofJimmieBlacksmithwouldspeaktothereaders andthefilmgoersregardlessofthetimethathaspassedmeanwhile(Hughes,tape9).The sixtiesmonitoredaboominterestintheAboriginalproblem(Healy245),andthatwasthe rightmomenttoopenthedoorthathasbeenlockedunderakeyforaconsiderablylong period.ShklovskywouldprobablysaythatKeneallyusedhisworkofartasawindowonthe world.Andtheviewhehadwasnotapleasantone.Schepisiasafilmdirectorintendedto presenttheimageintruecoloursandbringJimmie’scharacterbacktolife,atleastonthe screen.Keneally’sstrengthlaidinwords,whileSchepisicountedonthepowerofimages.

Theaudiencesmighthavebeenshockedbytheirreversiblecourseofevents,brutalscenes andanendingwithoutanykindofconsolation.However,suchwasthereality,andevenifthe authorswerenotutterlysuccessfulintheirartisticattempts,theyatleasthadthecourageto showtheworldwhatitpreferrednottosee.

InthebeginningofthisthesisIintroducedasetoftermsthatwillcomeinusefulnow thatIwillcomparethetwomediaontheparticularexampleof The Chant of Jimmie

Blacksmith .Itisadifficulttasktodetachoneselffromthesubjectivepointofviewbutno seriouscomparativestudycanbeaccomplishedwithoutsuchattempt.Myaimisthereforenot totellwhichofthetwoworksisbetter.Infact,ifIdidso,Iwouldonlydrawonmy subjectiveinterpretation,whichiscertainlyatreacheroussource.Besides,our“reading”of

28 literatureandfilmsisconditionedbymanyotherindependentfactorssuchascultural background,thequalityoflanguagetranslation,theactors’performance,thephotographyof thefilmetc.Hence,Iwillattempttomakeamoresystematicstudyandconcentrateonthe strategiesofcinematographicadaptations,i.e.transfer,enunciationandnarrativefunctions.I willcommentuponthedifferencesbetweenthetwoversionsof The Chant of Jimmie

Blacksmith andtrytoclassifythemwithinrelevantcategories.

4.1 Transfer and Adaptation Proper in The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith

Firstofall,Iwillexaminehowthenarrativeelementsof The Chant of Jimmie

Blacksmith weretransferredandtheaspectsofenunciationadapted.Oneofthestrategiesthat permitanobjectiveappraisalofthetranspositionfromonemediatoanotherisShklovky’s distinctionbetweenthestoryandtheplotthathasbeencommenteduponinthebeginningof thisthesis.Thefactthatthenoveliscommitted“tonarrative,tomovementinandthrough time,makesitanessentiallydynamicandactiveentity”(Hawkes65). The Chant of Jimmie

Blacksmith inthenovelandthefilmsharethesamestorybuttheplotstrategiesaredifferent.

Anexampleofthisappearsalreadyinthefirstchapter.ThenovelopensupwithJackie

Smolders(Tabidgi)whosetouttoWallahdisturbedbythenewsofJimmie’smarriagetoa whitewoman.ItoccurredinJune1900.Oneofthenovel’shingepointsisthusrevealedtothe readerattheverybeginning,andthenthestoryturnsbackintimetoJimmie’sinitiation.The narratorexplainsthat“itisnecessarytotakecognizanceofJimmieBlacksmith’sexperience fromthedayofthisinitiationtothetimein1900thatJackieSmolderswenttoWallah”

(Keneally2).Inthefilm,however,allthescenesarepresentedlinearly;thereisno advancementintime,noflashbacks,andnomemories.Hencetheaudiencesknownothingin advanceaboutJimmiemarryingawhitegirloraboutTabidgisettingouttofindhim.Schepisi placesalltheepisodesandscenesinaclear,causeandeffectsequencebecausefilmasa

29 visualmediumfacesconsiderabledifficultieswithmovingbackandforthintime.Ingeneral, thestorylineismuchhardertofollowforthespectator,iftheeventsdonotoccurinadirect temporalorder.Unlessitwasthedirector’sintentiontomaketheplotmorecomplicated,he wouldpreferablychoosetoeliminateanykindoftemporaldiversion.

Asfarasadaptationproper,orenunciation,isconcerned,therearetwomainissues thatrequireattentionin The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith .Enunciationisconcernedwiththose areasofthetextthatarenoteligibleforadirecttransfer.Ihavealreadymentionedthat readingpresumes“thegradualaccretionofinformationaboutaction,characters,atmosphere

[and]ideas”(McFarlane27),whereasframesprovidevisuallycomplexinformation immediately.However,adaptationproperalsoreferstovariouscodesandtothedistinction madebetweentellingandpresenting(McFarlane28).Thecodesrepresentedin The Chant of

Jimmie Blacksmith areabovealllanguageandculturalcodes.Sincethestoryislocatedin

Australia,thedirectspeechconstantlyswitchesbetweenstandard(British)English,Australian

Englishontheformalandinformallevel,andtheAboriginallanguage.Besides,notonly grammarbutalsopronunciationiscapableofconveyingacertainmeaning.Inchapter2ofthe novel,therewasapoliticalquarrelbetweentwowhiteclerksintheDepartmentof

Agriculture,andwhileKeneallyneededtopointoutthatoneofthemspokeupperclass

English(15),inthefilmitwasclearfromthemomenttheclerkbegantospeak.Since languagecodesareveryoftenstereotyped,theclerk’slanguageandpronunciationrevealto theaudiencesmuchmoreabouthimthanthemerecontentofhiswords.Withtheassumption, ofcourse,thattheaudiencesarefamiliarwiththeparticularcodeinquestion.Thesame appliestoculturalcodes,i.e.ifthespectatorfailstorecognizethem,theymaymisinterpretthe sceneormissacrucialpointintheplot(McFarlane29).Thus,whenadirectorconstructsa scenewhichhastodowiththewaypeoplespeak,liveorlook,heorshecountsonthe audiences’priorknowledgeofthesecodes.

30 ThelastissuethatIwanttomentionrelativetoenunciationisthedistinctionbetween tellingastoryandpresentingit.AsMcFarlanecommentsinhisanalysis:“Thefilm’sstory doesnothavetobetoldbecauseitispresented.Thelossofthenarrationalvoicemay, however,befeltasthechiefcasualtyofthenovel’senunciation”(29).Thisisparticularlythe caseof The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith wherethenarratorclarifiesmuchofJimmie’sactions bylettingthereaderseewhatgoesoninJimmie’shead,whathisthoughts,ambitions,fears andmotivationsare.Thefilm,deprivedofthenarrator’sinsight,isbynomeanscapableof suchpsychologicalanalysis.Everythingthatisnottolddirectlyinthedialoguesorunderstood fromthemiseenscèneneedstobetransmittedthroughtheactors’performanceandthe technicaluseofthecameraincludingangle,distance,andlengthofshot.Therefore,ifthe filmmakerchoosestoadaptanovelthatisprimarilyconceivedasapsychologicaldrama, theyalwaysruntheriskoflosingtheabstractpartofthestory,thereflectionsandmeditations ofthecharactersusuallyrevealedthroughthevoiceofthenarrator.Apropos,itwasexactly thisproblemofthefilm’sepisodicnaturethatKeneallysawasthemajorshortcomingof

Schepisi’sadaptation 10 .

4.2 Narrative Functions in The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith

Forthepurposeofacloserexaminationofthenarrativefunctionsemployedin The

Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith ,Iwillputdownthemajorcardinalfunctionswhichrepresentthe keypointsofthenovelandserveassensiblelinksbetweentheindividualchapters(orscenes).

Theymaybelistedasfollows:

1.Jimmie’stribalinitiation→

2.RevNevillecaneshimasapunishmentforhisabsenceatschool→

10 Seesection“4.3LimitationsoftheFilmasaVisualMedium”.

31 3.JimmieleaveswiththeNevillestoMuswellbrookandtheyinstructhimtofindajoband marryawhitegirl→

4.HegetsdrunkonaSaturdaynightandendsupinjail→

5.MrNevillecomestopickhimupbecausehebelievesinhim→

6.Jimmieisgratefulandpromiseshewillneverdoitagainandthathewillstartworking

7.Mr.Nevillegiveshimareferencetogetajob→

8.JimmieleavesandstartsworkingforMrHealymakingaforestfence→

9.MrHealycheatshim,hitshim,andJimmielooksforanotherjob→

10.Jimmie’sbrotherMortarrives,soontheyreturntogethertoBrentwood→

11.Jimmieonlystaystwodays,thengetsajobasatrackerforConstableFarrell→

12.Jimmiefindstheblackmurderer(HarryEdwards)ofawhiteguyinVerona→

13.Farrellgetsdrunk,andthenheabusesandkillsEdwardswhileheisinprison→

14.JimmiehastocoverthetracesofFarrell’scrime,soonafterheleavesdisillusioned→

15.JimmiefindsajobasasweeperandmakeslovetoGilda,awhitegirlandHayeses’ kitchenmaid→

16.ShebecomespregnantandJimmiedecidestomarryher→

17.HestartsworkingforMrNewbyandgetsmarriedtoGilda→

18.ShegivesbirthtoawhitechildthatisobviouslynothisandJimmieisdisillusioned again→

19.Tabidgi,MortandPeterarriveatJimmie’shomebringinghimhisinitiationtoothto protecthim,sincehehasmarriedawhitewoman→

20.MrNewbyrefusestogoonsupplyingJimmie’sfamilywithgrocerieswiththeexcuse thattheplacehasturnedintoablacks’camp→

32 21.JimmiegetsangryathearingthenewsandtakeshisuncleTabidgitonegotiatewiththe

Newbys→

22.MrNewbydoesnotbackoff,heiswillingtostarvethem→

23.JimmieturnsintoaviolentrageandslaughtersalltheNewby’swomenexceptthe smallbabyinacot→

23.Jimmie,Mort,Tabidgi,Peter,Gildaandherbabyallfleefromthesceneofcrime→

24.Tabidgi,Peter,Gildaandthebabyareleftbehind;thetwobrothersstaytogetherand continuetheflight→

25.DowieStad,MissGraf’sfiancé,goesaftertheBlacksmithbrothers;MrHyberry,the publichangman,getsthenewsaboutthemurders;meanwhileJimmieandMortreach

Healy’shouseandkillallthefamily,Mortstaysshocked→

26.JimmiepromisesMortthathewillnotkillanymorewomen→

27.JimmieandMortvisitablackwomancalledNancy,seekinghercomfort→

28.Policearrivesatthecampandthetwobrothersrunaway,killingTobban,whostepsin theirway→

29.JimmieconfessestoMortthathekilledwomenattheNewbysandnomen;Mortgets veryupsetwithJimmie→

30.Theystealsomeblanketsfromanoldcouplebutdonotkillanyone→

31.TheytakeMcCreadie,aschoolteacher,asahostageandfleewithhim→

32.McCreadiehasrespiratoryproblemsandholdsthemup;theylosefivemileseveryday

33.McCreadieservesasamediatorforthetwobrothers;hetakesthemtoasacredcentre ofanothertribe,whereheurgesJimmietoleaveMortwhohassufferedenoughforwhat

Jimmiehasdone→

33 34.NextmorningJimmieisgone,MorttakesMrCreadietosomefarm,andhehimself

preparesfordeath→

35.Mortisshotbywhitefarmers,Jimmieishurtfromashot,too–theyhithisupper

cheekwhilehecrossesariverswimming→

36.Heescapesbutstaysbadlyhurtandfallsintoadeephallucinatorysleepinacountry

convent→

37.Heisfoundafterfourdaysbyanun,andbroughttojail→

38.MrNevillesendsaletterconfessingthatitwashimwhohadencouragedwhite

ambitionsinthehalfcaste→

39.JimmieishangedbyMrHyberrytwodaysafterhisuncleTabidgiwhowasfound

guiltyaswell.

Inthefaceofthislisting,Ishallrepeatthatintermsofmajorcardinalfunctions,

Schepisitransferredalmosteverythingfromthenovelexceptsomeminorfunctionswhich wereomitted,whileotheroneswereadded.Theonlymajorcardinalfunctionthatwas skippedinthefilmwasnumber30,i.e.Jimmie’sencounterwiththeoldmanwhosefortitude savedhimandhiswifefromdeath.Theman’sstrongspiritandthewayhedealtwiththe

Blacksmithbrotherswereastonishing,andthescenewouldhavecertainlydeservedthefilm maker’sattention.Jimmiestartedtolookbackatwhathehaddoneandwasevencloseto feelingremorse:“Jimmiefeltweakwiththethoughtofthisnewerinjustice:thatanoldman shouldoccurnowandsucktheirfibre,whenhemighthaveoccurredearlier,barringtheway toNewby’s,savingamanfrommadness”(Keneally123).

Theorderinwhichthecardinalfunctionsarelistedhereisthesameforboththenovel andthefilm,exceptnumber29.Inthefilm,Jimmie’sconfessioncameearlier–soonafterthe slaughteratHealy’shouse.Nonetheless,itdoesnotdisrupttheoverallmeaning.

34 ThefactthatSchepisimodifiedneitherthecontentnorthesuccessionofthecardinal functionsdoesnotsuggestthathisadaptationwasanuninventiveworkoracreativityfailure.

Thereareotherstrategies,forexamplethesocalledcatalysers,whichcantransformany rigorousadaptationintoanoriginalpieceofart.DrawingonBarthes’scategorization, catalysersareimplementedinareasbetweentheindividualcardinalfunctionswhere constructiveplotismissing,andwhereenoughunexploitedspaceforthefilmmaker’s creativepotentialisfound(McFarlane14).Inthefilmversionof The Chant of Jimmie

Blacksmith ,twosuchmomentsarepresent(bothabsentinthenovel):Thefirstoneoccurs whenJimmiegetshiredbyMrHealyforhisfirstjob.Assoonastheagreementismade,the twomenshakehands.However,assoonasJimmieturnshisbackonthefarmerandleaves,

Healywasheshishandsinasink,asifahandshakewithahalfcastewassomethingfilthy.It isasadyetpainfullyrealdemonstrationofthewhitemen’sattitudetowardstheAboriginesat thattime.

ThesecondexampleofacatalyseremployedinthefilmiswhenGildagivesbirthto theirchild.Jimmieisoutside,stillunawarethatthebabywasbornwhite,andhestartsto danceatribaldanceproudofbeingafather.Yetnosuchbehaviourwasdescribedin

Keneally’snovel.JimmiewasconstantlyrepressinghisAboriginalorigininhimuptoapoint wherehewishedtocutanyconnectionwithhiskinsmenandforgetallaboutthetraditional tribalpractices.

4.3 Limitations of the Film as a Visual Medium

AsIsaidbefore,thefilmversionof The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith adheresclosely totheoriginaltext,i.e.itisstructuredaroundthesamemajorcardinalfunctions.Doesitmean onecansubstitutereadingthebookbywatchingthefilm,andenjoythesameexperience?

Certainlynot.Althoughthenovelandthefilmsharethenarrativeasacommonbase,theyare

35 quitedifferentinnature.Keneallyhimselfcommentsuponthisissue:

InthebookI’mabletotraceJimmieBlacksmith’sangerandthentheonsetofself

questioningandthementaltricksheplaystoprotecthimselfagainstselfquestioning

becauseifhebeginstoquestionwhathe’sdone,he’sfinished.Hehasnowheretogo.

Hehastosurrenderhimself.Andinthefilmyoucan’tshowthatpsychological

transition.Andthefilmthusprobablyhadaslightlymoreepisodicqualitythanthe

book.(Hughes,tape9)

Thisproblemofthefilm’sepisodicnatureisacommonobstacleformostfilmsbased onnovels.However,itdoesnotnecessarilyimplythatthedirectorhasfailedtomakea plausibleinterpretation.Filmssimplydonothavethesamecapacityforpresentinginner thoughtsandmotivationsoftheircharacters,sometimesuptothepointwherethespectators merelyobservethecharacters’actionswithoutgettingtoknowwhatliesbehindthem.In

Australia,Schepisi’sfilmwascriticizedonthismatter;somecriticsfounditdeprivedofa deeperpsychologicalbackgroundthatwouldhavemadeJimmie’scharactermoreintelligible totheaudiences(“Teaching”).Thespokendialogueinthefilmisrathersymbolicandscarce, andthenarrator’svoiceisnaturallylost.Inthenovel,KeneallywasabletoportrayJimmieas amorecomplexcharacter,whereasinthefilmthiscomplexityislostduetothenatureof visualmediaandtheeliminationofcontextinformation.Somesignificantcharactershave eitherbeencompletelyomitted(theoldmanwhofacedtheBlacksmithbrotherswithoutfear), ornotgivenenoughspaceinthefilmsothattheimportancetheyenjoyedinthenovelwas greatlyreduced(MissGraf).

Ontheotherhand,thefilmiscapableofshowinginasingleshotwhatawriterhasto explaininmanyparagraphs.Thereisaselfexplanatoryphrasewhichillustratesthepoetic relationshipbetweenthetwomedia:“Anovelusesastorytocreateimages,whereasafilm

36 usesimagestocreateastory”(Flippin).Generally,ifadirectorissensitivetodetailsand makesagoodchoiceofactors,hisfilmmaybecomearespectablecounterpartofthenovel.

37 Conclusion

TheaimofmythesiswasthecomparisonofThomasKeneally’swork The Chant of

Jimmie Blacksmith inanovelandafilm.SinceIwasnotlookingforasubjectiveevaluation ofthenovelanditsfilmcounterpart,Ioptedforamoreacademicapproachdrawingmostly onthemodernstudyguideonnoveltofilmadaptationsbyBrianMcFarlane.First,Iincluded sometheoreticalbackground,andthendrewontherelevantterminologyinthesucceeding chapters.Nevertheless,thescopeofthisthesishasonlyallowedmetofocusonalimited numberofissuesconcerningtheprocessoftransposinganovelintofilmsuchastransfer, adaptationproperandnarrativefunctions.Myselectionofthesecategorieswasinfluencedby thecharacterofthenovelandthefilminquestion.

Astothestoryitself, The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith isneithereasytoreadnor pleasanttowatch.Nevertheless,thishasmoretodowiththetopicthanwiththetwomedia.

TheAboriginalproblempresentedinashockingway,associatedwithhumiliation,abuseand brutalviolence,wasatoughpiecetoswallowforthegeneralaudiences.Inthenovel, however,Keneallyhadtheadvantageofanomnipresentnarrativevoice.Itallowedhimto portrayJimmie’scontradictorycharacterwithhisinnermostthoughts,feelings,experiences, andbeliefs–somethingmuchhardertoachieveinafilm.

Thelackofadeeperpsychologicalanalysisofthecharactersisprobablythemost strikingweaknessofSchepisi’sadaptation.Jimmiehadacomplicatedpersonality,andonce theaudienceslostinsightintohismotivations,thedirectorrantheriskofturninga psychologicaldramaintoepisodicstorytellingandscenesofviolence.Nonetheless,Schepisi didnot show anythingthatwasnot told .11 Hedecidedtoretainthemajorityofcharactersand dialogues,andfollowedthelinearstructureofthenovelveryclosely.Henceifweregarded

11 withtwominorexceptions,seesection“4.2NarrativeFunctionsin The Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith ”

38 theissueoffidelityasfundamental,hisworkwouldbeappraisedforbeingremarkably faithfultotheoriginal.Yetnowadaysthetendencyinthetheoryofadaptationistomove awayfromtheserigidprinciplesandtomakespacefornewartisticandcreativepotentials.

Thedirectorshouldnolongerbeseenasonewhomerelytransformswordsintoimages, becausefilmmakers,too,areartistswhoseexpressionshallnotbelimited.

IconcludedthattheissueoffidelityisnotabsoluteandthatinthecaseofThe Chant of Jimmie Blacksmith itdidmoreharmthangood.Schepisitransferredalmostallthecardinal functionsintothefilmbuthedidsoattheexpenseofacrediblepsychologicalportrayalofthe characters.Theabstractideaofthestorywasthusoverrunbyitsepisodicnature.Byall means,itshouldberememberedthatthefilmwasmadeinlateseventieswhentheissueof fidelitywasmuchmoreappreciated(ifnotpreferred).

Thefilm’smajorartisticcontribution,Ibelieve,wasthecameraworkandthe photography.Theconsciousinsertionofshotswithmonsterlikeinsectsandtheuseof dimensionaloppositionswereintendedtoshowthatJimmiewaslosinghisconnectionto

MotherNature(somethingthatKeneallywasimplyingthroughoutthenovel).Schepisi introducedthesesuggestiveimagestomakeupfortheotherwiseplainepisodicscenes.His strengthlaidinvisualmetaphorswhileKeneallycountedonthepowerofwords.

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