Ann.Rep.Fac.Educ. , IwateUniv ‥ Vo l.38(1978)

W.H.AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS(Ⅴ):

NONES (1952) AND THESHIELDOFACHILLES(1955)

Y. S. YAMADA*

INTRODUCTORYNOTES ▲◆ ● ThepresentarticleliststhevariantreadingsbetweenthepoemsorlglnallyIncludedin (1952)and TheShieldofAchilles (1955)respectivelyandtheversionspreced ■ lngandsucceedingthem. i ThefirstlineglVenattheheadofeachlistisfromthetextofthefirsteditions. Inthesquarebrackets ,periodicalsorpamphletsthatcouldnotbeexaminedareasterisked. ■ ThetitleofaversionofapoemisnotglVen.ifidenticalwiththatofthepreceding version.Theabbreviationsusedareasfollows･: N -Nones (Faber , 1952) SA-TheShieldofAchilles (Faber , 1955) SP58- W･H･Auden/A Selection (PenguinBooks , 1958) SP 59-SelectedPoetryofW･H･Auden (ModernLibrar y, 1959) CSP 66-CollectedShorterPoems 1927-1957(Faber , 1966) SP 68-SelectedPoems (Faber , 1968;secondimpression , 1972) CSP 69-CollectedShorterPoems 1927-1957(Faber , 1969:firstpaperback impression) CP76 -CollectedPoems (Faber/RandomHouse , 1976) wherethechangeisaminorone , likethatinpunctuationorspelling , awholelin e isquotedfromeachvolume , andthevariantsarelistedinroundbracketsafterorunderJ theline.Anasteriskisattachedtoalineinvolvinganyverbalchange.Severalminor alterationsoccurbetweentlleSP58andSP59versionstho喝h thetwoselectionsare quiteidenticalincontents･Whenvariationsarefoundbetweentllem , theyarelisted･ ● Whennot , onlythe58readingsareg lVeninthelists･ ～ l ●■ ''and'Nones' , Orlglnallypublishedasseparatepoemsin Nones ,areexamined withintheSApoemsbecausetheybecomeinthelattervolumepartofthesequencetitled `HoraeCanonicae'･AudenwritesinhisNotetoSAthat`Theywereplannedtobepartof asequencewhichisnowcompl ste , anditisintheirpropercontextthatIwouldprefer themtoberead'. IwoadliketoexpressmythankstoProf･EdwardMendelson , LiteraryExecutorof the E stateofW.H.Auden , forhisreadypermi ssiontoquotefreelyfromAuden'swork

*FacultyofEducation , IwateUniversity 34 Y.S. YA… A I(34)

andforhisconstanthelpandencouragement･ IalsothankProf.ShozoTokunagawho ● mostkindlyprpvidedmewiththezeroxcopleSOfthethree Encounter poemswhichIhad beenunabletosee:'TheWillowWrenandtheStare' , 'Streams'and''. 30June1978 Y.S.Y.

ATONES

We , too , hadknowngoldenhours 〔N , `ToReinholdandUrsulaNiebuhr'(dedicatorypoem;illitalics); CSP66 , `WeToo HadKnownGoldenHours';CP76〕 4 Bythelightofafullmoon52-76･(moon , 66 , 76･) 9*Hadlefttlleintrusiveglory52:/Hadfelttlleintrusiveglory66 , 76. 10W山chtearsreserveapart52-76.(apart , 66 , 76.) 17*All示ordslikepeaceand･love , 52176.I(PeaceandLove , 66,.76.)

20Toahorridmechanicalscreech:52-76 , (sc r eech.66 , 76.)

Simultaneously , assoundlessly , (Seep.53)

Ifitformtheonelandscapethatweltheinconstantones

〔Horizon , July1948 , `InPraiseofLimestone!*;N;･SP58;esp66;S,P68;C P L76〕 1 52-76.(thatwe , theinconsbntones , 66-76･) 4 andbeneath52 , 58:and , beneath , 66-76. ◆ ● 5喪hearthesesprlngS52 , 58:hearthesprlngS66-76･ ､ 6 Thatspurtouteverywherewithachuckle52-76･(chuckle , 66-76.) 12-13 *Forherson , forthenudeyoungmalewholounges Againstarockdisplayinghisdildo , neverdoubting 52: Forherson , theflirtatiousmalewholounges Againstarockinthesunlight , neverdoubting 58-76. 14Thatforallhisfaultsheisloved , whoseworksarebut52-76･(loved;58-76.) 22123*sometimes/ A rminarm , 52 , 58:attimes/Arminarm , 66-76. 42Foreffectsthatbringdownthehousecouldhappentoall52-76･(house ,.66-76,) 51Slippedawaysighing･)'Come･('purredtheclaysandgravels･52-76･(gravels , 76.) 55-56*(IntendantCaesarsroseand/Left , slammingthedoor.)-52-76. ((IntendentCaesars58:) 58'Iamthesolitudetllatasksandpromisesnothing;52-76.(nothing , 68:) 60/61(stanzabreak)52 , 58:(nostanzabreak)66:(stanzabreak)68 , 76. 64-65*Abackward/Anddelapidatedprovince , connected152-76.(dilapidated66-76.) 73*Bythesesolidstatues52 , 58:Bythesemarblestatues66-76. 85Todeathasafact , nodoubtweareright:Butif52-76.(right;but58:) (35) W.H.AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS (Ⅴ) 35

92*Either , butwhenIt ry toimagineafaultlesslove52-76.(t ry toimage68:)

Sometimesweseeastonishinglyclearly lThirdHour , 1951*;N , 'OneCircumlocution';SP58;CSP66;CP76] ■ 2*Theout-there-whenwearealreadyln;52: Theout-therewhenwearealreadyln;58: ■ Theout･there-nowwearealreadyln;66 , 76. 140flight-bonedchildrenundergreatgreenoaks;52-76.(oaks:66 , 76.)

Asilistenedfromabeach-chairintheshade 〔N , `TheirLonelyBetters';SP58;CSP66;CP76〕 9*Nooneofthe血wascapableoflying , 52;66: Notoneofthemwascapableoflying , 58;76. 15We , too , makenoiseswhenwelaughorweep , 52176･(weep:66 , 76.)

Onandonandon lAtlantic , November1947 , 'Serenade'; PhoenixAQuarterly , 1948*;N , 'Serenade'; CSP66 , `TwelveSongs , Ⅹ';CP76 , `TenSongs , Ⅹ'〕 8*Salutethethreateningnight･47:/Salutetheincumbentnight･52-76. 12Andexclaimsitsmatteroflfact;47:/Andexclaimsitsmatter-of-fact;52-76. 13*Thecarefulchildwithcharm47:/Thechildwithcarefulcharm 52-76. 17Al l, al l, haverightstodeclare , 47-76.(jul , allhave47'.) 19Tobesimplypubliclythere47:/Tobe , simply , publicly , there52-76. 21-22*Somyembodiedlove,/Thatlikemostfeelingis47･. Somyembodiedlove/Which , likemostfeeling , is52-76. 24*Asksneighborhoodfromyou･47:/Asksneighbourhoodofy'ou.52176･

Deftly , admiral , castyourfly lHorizon , November1948 , 'Song'; Voices , Spring1949*; NewYorkHeraldTribune , 24April1949*;N , `Song';SP58;CSP66 , `FiveSわngs , ノⅠ';CP76〕 llThegreatwinesoftheChateaux･48L176･(chateaux48:Chateaux58:) I 13Donotttl rn, donotlift , yo u r■eyes ･ 48-58: Donotturn , donotliftyoureyes66 , 76. 15*Onthebridgeoutsideyourmemories , 48: Onthebridgebetweenyourproperties , 52-76･

17-18*Initsgloryanditslpower/Thisistheirho ur･ 48: Initsglor y, initspower,/Thisistheirhour･52-76･

Inal一upperroomatmidnight 〔N , `TheLoveFeast';GP66;CP76〕 36 Y.S.YAW A (36)

5*LouistellillgAnne52:LouistellingAnne66 , 76. 21122*WhoisJennylyhgto/Bylong-distancetelephone?52: WhoisJennylyingto/Inhercal l, Collect , toRome?66 , 76･

LetOutwheretwofearsintersect , apoilltSelected 〔N , `AirPort';CSP66 , `InTrallSit';CP76〕 10alldchildrel1011eCannottrust52:andchildrenonecalュnOttrust , 66 , 76. 33-34 *Butherewearenowhere , unrelatedtodayorourmothe r/LEarth52: Butherewearenowhere , unrelated也 dayortoMother/Eartl166 , 76･ 37*Asobjectforspeculation , aggressivecreatures52: Asobjectsforspeculation , aggressivecreatures66 , 76. 46-47*amaculatecityisspared/Throughtheprayersofilliterate･saints52: maculatecitiesarespared/Thro / ugh theprayersofilliteratesaints , 66 , 76･

Thereisatimetoadmithowmuchthesworddecides ,

〔BoitegheOscure , 2(1948)*; Natio n ,22April1950 , `Ischia(forBrianHoward) I; N; CSP66;CP76 .] (Capitalizationsattheheadofthelineshavebeenchangedtosmallletters , exceptwhere selltenCeSbegin , from66･) ▲ G*Who , turnlngbackfromthecrusaders'harbour , broke 50176. (harbor , 5(): who , 66 , 76･) ′ 9*Tosee.allpelmilesscreaturesashissiblings･But 50: ToseeallpennilesscreaturesFashissiblings:Then52:

toseeallpennilesscreaturesasoursiblings･Then66 ,･ 76. 17-18*Iampresentlymoved/Bysun-drenchedParthenopeai , 50-76. (by66 , 76･*Parthenopeia , 50; Parthenopea , 66 , 76･) 21*Fromgrossproductivecities･Howwellyoucorrect 50: Fromsoiledproductivecities･Howwellyoucorrect52-76ニ(from66 , 76･)･ 24*Underyour/uniformlight. 5(): Underneathyouruniformlight･52-76･(underneath66 , 76･) 31Whichbetrayhersecretfever 50-76･ (which66 , 76.fever , 66 , 76.) 42A southernpoint , sheer-sidedCapriwhobyherself 50-76･ (Capri , 50:) 49*Fromthearagoniangrapedistil , youramberwine , 50-76. (from66 , 76.distil l, 50:) 50Yourcoffee-colouredhoney , webelievethatour ･50176. (your66 , 76･coffee･colored 50.') 580futterprotestatwhatisthecaseorhis 50-76･ (of66 , 76.case , 50:) 61-62*FarfromtallRestituta'salltoowatchfuleye , Whosepatronage , theysay , isannuallyboughtwithblood. 50: FarfromtallRestituta'sall･too-watchfuleye , Whoseannualpatronage , theysay , isboughtwithblood.52-76. (37) W.H. AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS(Ⅴ) 37､

(61far66 . 76･)(62whose66 , 76･) 63 164That , blessedandformidable/Lady , wehopeisnottrue; 50-76･ 66*Thatthesedaysofexoticsplendourmaystandout 50 -76. (splendor 50:)

Whatthereisasasurroundtoourfigures 〔Commentary , May1949 , `Pleasurelsland'*;.N;SP58;CSP66;CP76〕 10*Uponshadowlesssand･52 , 58:/Uponunshadowedsand･66 , 76･ 77-78AskasonemightthetimeoratrifleJExtrahermoneyandhislife･52 , 58: Ask , asonemightthetimeoratrifle/Extra , hermoneyandherlife･66 , 76･

■ HavlngfinishedtheBlue-plateSpecial 〔NewYorke J･, 12February1949 , `InSchraff t'S'*;N;CSP66;CP76〕 (Nochangebetweenthelastthreeversions･)

● TheplerSarepummelledbythewaves; 〔Horizon , Apri l 1947 , `TheFallofRome(toC .I. C .) '*; Nation , 14June1947*;N; SP58;CSP･66',SP68; IandThou , January-February1969*',CP76j 13 *C erebrotonicCatomay52176.(Catos58.I) ,

TheEmperor'sfavouriteconcubine lN , 'MusicHo'-,CSP66(p･271) , 'FiveSongs , Ilレ,CP76(p･438)] (1*favourite52 , 66:favorite76.)

Theirlearnedkingsbentdowntochatwithfrogs; 〔Mademoiselle , Oct dber1947 , `Nurser yLR hyme'*; N; CSP66;CP76〕 (Nochangebetweenthelastthreeversions.)

Inthebadolddaysitwasnotsobad: lHorizon , November1948 , 'TheManagers';N;SP58;CSP66;CP76] 6*Objects , books , girls , horses4876･(Objets , 48:) 14*ForthesortofPowers48:/ForthespeciesofPowers52-76･ 200nadolphin , naked , 48-76.(nakedL48:) 28-29*Reststodaywithquiet/Men , 48:Reststodaywith'suchquiet/Men , 52-76. 38-39Fromproblemsndsmiling/Candismiss;thetypewritersneverstop48-76. (dismiss･The66 , 76･) 43-44*Fromwoodsunalteredby わur warsandvows Driftthescentofflowers 48: Fromwoodsunalteredbyourwarsandourvows Theredriftthescentsofflowers 52-76. 4gCanbetrainedtoobserve;farintothenight 48-76･(observe･Far66 , 76.) Y.S. YA h4ADA (38)

Theirwindowsburnbrightly , Andbehind , theirbacksbentoversomereport Onevelyquarter 48: Theirwindowsburnbrightly And , behindtheirbacksbentoversomereport , Oneveryquarter , 52-76. 54Thereonthe､earththereason48-76.(earth , 48:) 56-58*seeking/Someorietoblame;･thenif , torecuperate,/TheygoouttoplAy , 48: seeking/Someohetoblame;if , torecuberate/Theygoa-playing , 52176. (blame.If , 66 , 76･) 62-63*Toruleisacalling,/Itseems , likesurgeryorsculpture , 48: Torulemustbea calling,/Itseems , likesurgeryor｣sculptuie , -5276. (sculpture;66 ,I76.) 63-65*thefun/Neitherlovenormoney/Buttakingnecessaryrisks ,14 8-76.(risk , 48:)

Theeyesofthecrowandtheeyeofthecameraopen lHorizon , Novembler1949 , 'MemorialfortheCity';N;.SP58 , 'BarbedWire'(the thirdpartonly);CSP66 , `MemorialfortheCity (LnMemoridmCharlesWilliams., d. 4 タril 1945)I;CP76〕 (Theepigraph `lTntheself-samePointthatoursoulismadesensual , intheself- samepointistheCityofGodordainediohimfromwithoutbeginm'ng･ Juliana ofNorwich'isattachedtoeachversionexceptthatofSP58.)A Ⅰ 2*OntoHomer'sworld , notours･Firstandlast49-76･(Onto49:) 617butShe/DoesnothinganddoesI)otcare , 49-76･(care･66 , 76･) 23/24(s tanzabreal()49:(no,stanza,･break)152:(stanzabreak)66 , 76･ 27AmongtheruinsofthePost-VergilianCity49-76･(Postv eT gilian49:) 28andthebarbed-wirestretchesahead49176.(barbedwire49:) 32*Thatourhurtisnotadesertion , thatwearetopity49;66 , 76. Thatourhurtisadesertion , thatwearetopity52: ⅠⅠ 3*Fromwhereverhehappenedtobe:theCityrose49: Fromwhereverhehappenedtobe;theNewCityrose52176･ ∫ 8*ThefactsandactsoftheCityboreadoublemeaning:49: Thefacts , theactsoftheCityboreadoublemeaning:52-76. 28*Herlovestobearwithfear;insecure , Sheendured.49: ■ Herlovesweretobearwithherfear;lnSeCure ･ Sheendured･52-76･ 30*Thegroundlingsweptasonasecularstage49-76･(groundling49:)

36Naturewasputtothequestio ,ninthePrince'S･name;49-76･(Question66 , 76･) 39*Theironicsmilebecametheironicanddevout , 49: Theironicsmilebecametheworldlyanddevout , 52-76. (39) W.H. AUDEN'SPEVISINGRROCESS(Ⅴ) 39

43*InanationalcapitalMirabeauAndhisset49176･(capitol49:) 52*Sleepinglittle,theypushedon,raisedtheflagoftheWord49176･(word49:) 55 *Le dbyhatedparentalshade畠,49:/GuidedbyhAtedparentalshades , 52176. 58*Suicide･bickedthemoff;sunk-bffCapeConsumption , 49-76.(Suicides49:) ⅠⅠI 10Butwhereitlikesaplace,apath,arailroadends , 49-58: But , whereitlikes,aplace,apath,a-railroadends,66 , 76･ ll*Thehumour,thecuisine , therites , thetaste,49-76.(humor761.) 16*Itmakesoursorryfig-leaf.attheSneerers'Ball,49-76･(SneerersBal l, 49:) 20-21ourlmageisthesame/Awakeordreaming:Ithasnoimagetoadmire , 49-76･ (20image49.'21it49:) 25Isitourfriend?49176.(It761). ▲ 26-27No;tllatisourhope;tllatWeWeep■andltdoesnotgrleVe , ThatforItthewireandtheruinsarenottheend: 49176. (26No , 49:andit49:一27forit49:) 28*Thereisthefleshwearebutneverwouldbelieve , 49: Thisisthefleshwearebtltneverwouldbelieve , 52-76. 30*ThereisAda m, waitingforhisICity.49: This-is･Adamwaitingfor H isCity.52⊥76. ⅠⅤ *Lethisweaknessspeak49: /LetOuyWeaknessspeak 52;66 , 76･ (AnintroductorylinetoPartIV;omittedh 58.) 1 WithoutmeAdamwouldhavefallenwithLucifer;49: WithoutmeAdamwouldhavefallenirrevocablywithLucifer;I52-76･ *hewouldneverhavebeengiventhechancetocry 0 felixcul♪a.I49: hewouldneverhavebeenabletocry 0 felixcul♪a.52-76. 2*myindecisioncostAdollishislife.49:/myfrailtycostAdonishislife.52-76. 4*Iwasnottakeninbythesheeps･eyeso-iNarcissusnorby.whiningEcho;49: Iwasnottakeninbythesheep'S-eyesdfNarcissus;52176 6 HadhelistenedtomeOedipuswouldneverhaveleftCorinth;4976.(tome , 49:) 8 To･metheSaviourpermittedHisFifthWordfromthecross;49-76. (Hisfifthword49:) 9*IwastheunwelcomethirdatthemeetingsofTristanwithIsolda;49-76. (Withlsolde;49:) 10*IrodewitllGalahadonhisQuestfortheSamGraal;49-76. (onhisquestfortheSamGrail;49:) ll*ItwasthejustimpedimenttothemarriageofFaustusandHelen:49: ● ItwasthejustimpedimenttothemarriageOfFaustuswithHelen;52-76. 12*HamletIhadnopatiencewith;49:/WithHamletIhadnopatience;52-76. 13*IwasthemissingiteminDonJuan'slist;49: 40 Y.S.YAMADA (40) ● ● IwasthemisslngentrylnDonGiovanni'slist;52ニ76. 14*IassistedFig-arotheBarberineveryintrigue;49: lassistedFigarotheBarberinallhisintrigues;52-76. whenPrinceTaminoarrivedatwisdomItooobtainedmyreward.49-76. (wisdom , 49:) 16*AsforMetropolis , thatopQe-greatCity;49: AsforMetropolis , thattoo-great.City;52-76. 17 *toallwhodwellonthefashionablesideofhermirrors , 49: toallwhodwellonthepublicsideofJhermirrors52-76･(mirrors , 66 , 76.)

Yes , thesearethedog-days , Fortunatus: lHorizon , October1949 , 'UnderSirius';N;SP58;CSP66;CP76] 8*Drugasshemay , 49:Drugashemay52:Drugasshemay58: DrugthoughShemay , 66 , 76･ 8-9*thesibylutters/Agushoftable･chat･49-58:(table-chat:49:) thesybilutters/Agushoftable-C'hat･66 , 76･ 15Someearthquakewouldastonish49-76･(astonish , 66 , 76.) 21When , sereneintheirivoryvessels , 49-76･(Whenserene49-.) 33-34IftodaywerethatmomentofsilenceJBeforeitbreakanddrowr149-76･ (33silence , 66 , 76. 34drown , 66 , 76･) 42Theimmortalnymp.hsflyshrieking4 9.丁76･(shrieking ･, 66 , 76･)

44Thepantocraticriddlebreaks- 49-76･(breaks;-49:) ･

Therewerelead一minesherebeforetheRomans , 〔N , `NotinBaedeker';CSP66;CP76〕 1 52-76･(Romans66 , 76･) 15*Acertainday(whether,oftimeorofrock52 , 66: A certainday(whetheroftimeorr.ock76･ 29-30*Whereandwhomthemore 也 anonelargefortune/Madeherehasgottonow･ 52 1 ヲ6: Whereandtowhomthemorethanonelargefortune/Madeherehasgottonow･ 76. 51J52(stanzabreak)52:(nostanza･break)66 , 76･

Siroccobringstheminordevils: lHorizon , October1949 , 'C attivoTempo';N;CSP66;CP76]

4*Announcesthattheyareback , 49:/Announcestheyareback , .52⊥76･

8-9Nibbar , demon/Ofga-gaandbetise , 49 ,-76･(betise , 49:) 10-ll*Tubervillus , demon/Ofgossipandspite･49-76･(Tubevillus , 49:) 23*Tubervillustothedining-room49-76･(Tubevillus49:) (41) W.H.AUDEN'S,REVISINGPROCESS(Ⅴ) 41 30131Inmischiefblurt/Thehalf-home-truth , 49176.(Thehalfhometruth , 49:) 35Totearupthepoem , 49176･(poem66:) 52*Orthemonarchistfishermentotell49 , 52: Orthemonarchistfishermantotell66 , 76.

Absenceofheart-asinpublicbuildings , 〔N , `TheChimeras'; TimesLiterary Sup plement , 9March1951*;CSP66･,CP76〕 1 52-76(buildings 1- 66 , 76.) 2 Absenceofmind一一一4Sinpublic.speeches , 52-76･(speeches- 66 , 76.) 7 Indescribable-beingneitherthisnorthat , 52-76.(that- 66 , 76.) 8 Uncountable-beinganynumber , 52-76.(number- 66 , 76.) ( llItisourfaultentirelyifwedo;52-76.(do:66 , 76.) 13Curiousfromwantonness-toseewhattheyarelike , 52-76.(like- 66 , 76･) 14Cruelfromfear-toputastoptothem , 52-76.(them- 66 , 76.) 15Incredulousfromconceit-toprovetheycannotbe . 52-76･(be- 66 , 76･)

Thatwearealwaysglad 〔Ladies'HomeJournal , August1950 , `Secrets'*;N;CSP66;CP76〕 2-4*WhentheUglyPrincesspartingthe･bushes Tofindoutwhythewoodcutter'schildrenarehappy Disturbsahornet'snest , tllatWefeelnopity 52-76･ (2Princes s, 66 , 76. 3happy , 66 , 76.1 4hornets'nest , 66 , 76･) 9 A Runicriddlewhichhethentranslates , 52-76.(translates:66 , 76･)

TheKingdomofNumberisallboundaries 〔N , `NumbersandFaces';SP58;CSP66;CP76〕 ll*We llpurged , somatotyped , baptised ,t aughtbasebal l, 52-76. (baptized , 58:baptised , 59:baseball:66 , 76.)

WllatWeknowtobenotpossible(Seep.54･)

●▲ When , todisarmsuspICIOuSImindsatlunch 〔N,`AHousehold';SP58;･CSP66;CP76〕 2 Beforecom阜ngtothepointoratgolf , 52-76.(point , 66 , 76･) 6 0fhisbridesoworshippedandsoearlylost･52176･(lost , 66 , 76.) 24/25(nostanzabreak)52: (stanzabreak)58-76･ 3ト32Besides , (whichmightexplainwhyhehasneither 52-76. Alteredhiswilln?rcalledthedoctorin) (31Besides76. 32in) , 76.) 42 Y. S. YA MADA (42)

Allwinterlongthehugesadlady lKennyonReview , Autumn1947 , 'TheDuet'*; ChangingWorld , May-J uly1948*; I,istener , 24November1949*;N;CSP66;CP76] 4 *Thepurlieusareshakenbyhissha rp cry.52: Thepurlieusareshakenbyhiswildcry. 66 , 76. 6 Hiswildernessesfromherfloralside52-76.(side , 66 , 76.) 18*Shesangthedisappointmentandthefear52: ` ShesangthedisappointmentthatisMan66 , 76. 34-35aroyalwine/ZsPouredoutjoythesubtlepudding , 52-76. (Pudding, -66 , 76.)

37Andbluebirdsblessusfromthefences ,152-76. (fences / 66 ,･ 76.)

Beholdthemanlymesomorph

〔N , `FootnotestoDr.Sheldon';CSP66･(p.269) , the4thand5thofthe`Shorts '; CP76(p.436)] 1 2*Showinghissplendidbicepsoff , 52:/Showingllisbulgingbicepsoff ,. 66 , 76. 10*Fastidious , slightlygirling , inthenight52: Fastidious , almostgirlish , inthenight66 , 76. ll W hentheproud-arsedbroad-shoulderedbreakandrun52-76.(run , 66 , 76.) 2 1 Givemeadoctorpartridge-plump , 52176.(doctor , 66 , 76.) 3 Anendomorphwithgentlehands52⊥76,(hands , 66 , 76.) 5 Thatlabandonallmyvices52-76.(vices , 66 , 76.)

Aresatlasthasquitthefield ■ , 〔H arvardAlumniBulletin , 15June1946 , `UnderWhichLyre , A ReactionaryTract fortheTimes'*; Ha rPer'sMagazine , June1947; ModernBritishj'oetry (ed.L. Untermeyer , 1950)辛;N , `UnderWhichLyre:AReactionaryTractfortheTimes〔Phi BetaKappaPoem , Harvard , 1946]';CSP66;CP76] (Accordingtotile Bibliography (2nded ･, 1972 , p･197;itemC 308) , the Harvard AlumniBulletin texthastwoforms , an`uncorrectcd'oneinthefirstprintednumbers , ■ anda `Corrected'oneinthelastprintednumbers.iwishto′incorporateinthefollowlng listthethreevariantsmentioned , sincetwoofthemareinterestingasinstancegofthe ● ■ firstperiodicalversion･where･mlSprintstendtooccurowlngtOAuden'sdifficulthandwrit- ing, 46a standsfortheuncorrected , and 46b forthecorrect占d , text.) 516 *Theruinedtownsassociate/Withsummerflowers･46a: Thefructuredtown岳Ia-ssociate/Withsummerflowers･ 46クー76. 2-3Thebloodstainsonthebushesyield/Toseepingshowers , 47-76･(showers･47:) 16*Andnervesthatneverflinchedatslaughter/Areshottopieces47 , 52: (43) W. H.AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS(Ⅴ) 43

Andnervesthatsteeledthemselvestoslaughter/AresllOttOPieces66 , 76. 23Theymetsomebigwheels , anddonot/Letyouforgetit･47176.I(wheelsand47:) 26-27Permitsthewill-to-disagree/Tobepandemic , 47176.(thewilltodisagree47:) 280rdainsthatvaudevilleshallpreach47176.(preach , 47:) 47Allagesandsomatictypes , 47-76.(types:47:)

58-59*Apollo'schildrennevershrillk/Fromboringjobs47;66 , 76 .I Apollo'schildrennevershrunk/Fromboringjobs52: 62 1づ3*Acompromisebetweenthemis/Impossible;47: A compromisebetweenusis /I mpossible;52-76. 64Respectperhapsbutfriendshipnever:47-76.(perhaps , 47:)

66/67 *So , standinghere , su 汀 Oundedby TheeyesofMi･ltonsandthehigh Foreheads()fShaws , A Hermesman , Icallonyou , Phi-Beta･Kappabrethren , to Defendhiscause. 47: (the12thstanzaoftheH arPer )sversion , cut)52-76. 70Helovestorule , hasalwaysdoneit;47-76.(it:47:) 73-74Butjealousofourgodofdreams, /H iscommon-senseinsecretschemes47-76･ (But , 47.Acommonsense47:) 86187*Forhim , toworkinsolitude/Istheoffence , 47-76.(offense , 47:) 97 *HisradioHermesalldaylong 46a: /HisradioHomersalldaylong 46b-76. 103His , too , eachhomelylyricthing47-76.(Histoo47:) 104*Onsportorsponsalloveorspring 46a: Ion sportorspousalloveorspring 46b-76･ 106Inventedbysomecourt-housebard47-76.(courthouse47:) 110-111Andsetsoffugalvariations/Onsomefolk-ballad , 47-76.(folkballad , 47:)

113-114A glassofprune-juiceoranice/Marsh-mallowsalad.47-76. J (prunejuice47: Marshmallow47:) 119Raindownonourdefencelcssheads47-76.(defenseless47:) 127-128*Nomatter･Heshallbedefied./Wehavetheladiesonourside･47: Nomatter;Heshallbedefied;/WhiteAphroditeisonourside:52-76･ 131-132*Zeuswilling , we , theunpolitical,/Shallbeathimyet･47-76. (unpolitica147: besthim47:) 135*Ourfactsdefend , 47;66 , 76.JOur factdefend , 52: 136-1370urintellectualmarines,/LandinginlittlemagazinleS47-76. (LittleMagazines , 47: littlemagazines , 76.) 1491150KeepwelltheHermeticDecalogue,/Whichrunsasfollows:- 47-76. (follows:47:) 1580rquizzesuponWorld-Affairs ,A7-76.(WorldAffairs , 47:) 173Read TheNewYorker , trustinGod;47-76.(the N ew Porker; 47:) 171-172Ifthoumus.tchoose/Betweenthechances , choosetheodd;47-76(odd:76･) 44 Y.S.YAMADA (44)

Whenthingsbegantohappentoourfavouritespot ,

〔T.S.Eliot:A Symposiu m (compiledbyR･MarchandTambilmuttu , 1948) , `For T.S.Eliot'; N , `To/T.S.EliotJOn H isSixtiethBirthday〔1948〕';CSP66 , `Three OccasiollalPoems , Ⅰ. ToT.S.Eliot/OnHisSixtiethBirthday.(1948)I;CP76〕 (Initialcapitalizationsattheheadoflinesarechangedtosmal l.letters , exceptwhere sentencesbegin , in66land76.) 3 Thenonthetennis-courtonemorning , 48-76.(morning48:) 4 0utrageous , thebloodycorpseandalways , 48-76.(corpse , and66 , 76.) 5*Dayafterday , 48:Blankdayafterda 少, 52-76. 6*notspeechlesswithshock48:notspeechlessfromshock52-76. 7-8 *didmostto/Preventapanic･48:didmuchto/Preventapanic･52-76. 9 Weknow;butwouldgratefullyadd48:/Weknow , butwouldgratefullyadd , 52-76. 10-llTodayaswewaitfortheLawtotakeitscourse , (Andwhichofusshallescapewhipping?) 48-76. (10To･day48;66 , 76.law48:course66 , 76. 11 whipping?) , 66 , 76.)

Orchestrashavesolongbeenspeaking lTheAmericanSchola r, Autumn1947 , 'MusicIslnternational'; Horizon , October 1947*; N , `Musiclslnternational'(PhiBetaKappa-Poem , Columbia , 1947)I;CSP66; CP76〕 8-9germsbesiege/TheWalledtownsandamongthe･living47-76･(town 芦, 47.A) 12*Amongthestaringblemishesthatmark47: A mongthosestaringblemishesthatmark52-76. 13-14*itiseasy/Toguesswhatdreamssuchvaultingcriesrelease:47⊥76.(drearp47:,) 18Uppoliciedair･ButwhatisourhPpe47-761(hope , 47;66 ･ 76･) ● 26*Assomenaturalloveloydeignstowoo , 47: AssomeelegantloveJOydeignstowoo52--76. i 35-36*AsShawsays:"Musicisthebranqy/Ofthedamned･"47: AsShawsays-Musicisthebrandy/Ofthedamned･52: AsShawsaid-MtlSicisthebrandy/Ofthedamned･･66 , 76. 39-40WithavisceralA-ha;filla/Dwarf'sears47-76.(a-ha;47:) 42-44MetabllOrbamboozlesthemostoppressed; Asatrombonetheclerkwillbravely Gooompah-oo甲Pahtohisminorgrave: 47: Metaphorbamboozles■themostopt)ressed -Asatrombonetheclerkwillbravely Gooompah-oompahtohisminorgrave- 52-76.(44grave- , 66 , 76.) 45Sothattodayonerecognises47-76.(recognizes47:) 51152many/Promisingdaysendbadlyandagai･n47-76.(badly , 47;66 , 76.) 53Weshalloffend:butletuslisten47176.(offend.But47:) 61 -62Willrejoiceatthesuddenmansion/Ofanすjoy;besides , 47-76･(joy:47:) (45) W.H. AUDEN'■S`REVISINGPROCESS(Ⅴ) 45

64-65Rememberwhenwewerehappy-onesuch Futurewouldbetheexile'sending 47176. (64happy.One47:65ending , 47:) 67 -68 Ano也ertobeshortofbreathyet■ ● StaylngOntOOblige , postponingdeath- 47-76. (67Another , 47:68deqth.47:) 72-74*tothesick,/Sad , soiledprosoponofourageing/Present47-76.(aging47:)

Bepatient , solemnllOSe , 〔HarPer' S, October1950 , `PreciousFive '* ;N;SP58;CSP66;CP76〕 3 Thepresentmomentwell52-76.(wel l, 66 , 76.) 6 Withgrandscentsofthepast;52-76.(past.66 , 76.) llHasallbeenaltered , now 52176.(altereq,;66 , 76･) 21*Point , then , forhonour'ssake52-76.(honor'S76.) 28*Theparanoicmind52 , 58:Theparanoiacmind59-76. 32Itcannottakepurefiction52-76.(fiction , 66 , 76.) 34*Arerumourspartlytrue･,52-76.(rumors76.) 56Unknowntoyou wi llknow;52-76･(knQW･66 , 76.) 59*Whichpulverisedthetrolls52-76.(Pulverized58:) 89Theirhumourtoherpassion , 52-76■.･(humor76.) 101Havebothfoundfavour;praise5276.(favor;76.) 1081nhonourofAnother , 52-76.(honor76■.) . 111Thatanimaloftaste52-76.(taste,.66 , 76..) 118*TellingforHerdearsake52;66 , 76･JTellingOfHerdearsake58 , 59: 143-144WhatelseamImadefo r,/ Agreeingordisagreeing.52-76.(disagreeing? 66,. 76.)

A cloudlessnightlikethis 〔Commonweal , llMarch1949 , `AWalkAfterDaTk'*;N;CSP66;一SP68;LCP76〕1 2 Cansetthespiritsoaring;52-76.(soaring:66176.) 10*Beasshockingastheysaid～.盟: /Be soshockingastheysaid66-76･ 15*Whenonestartstodislikethe-young , 52 , 66: WhenonestartstorQSellttheyoung , 68 , 76.

THESHIELDOFACHILLES

Frombadlandswhereeggsaresmall･anddear 〔SA , `ForLincoln& ･FidelmaKirstein'(DedicatoⅣpoem , initalics);SP58(Epigraph tothevolume , initalics);CSP･66,･p.270 , thelastofthe`Shorts';CP76 , p･437〕 1 55-76.(dear , 58-76･) l 46 Y.S.YAMADA一 (46)

2-3byastonier/Track , whenallarespentwehearit-therightsong55176. (spent , 58:it:-66 , 76.)

FairisMiddle-Earthnorchanges , thoughto A ge , 〔SA , EpigraphtoSectioll Ⅰ, `';CSP66 , p･270 , 'the6thofthe`Shorts'; CP76 , p･436〕 (Nochallgebetweellthethreeversions.)

1.BUCOLICS

Deepbelowourviolencesi 〔LondonMagazine , November1954 , 1`Wind畠';SA , `1. Winds(ForAlexisLeger); SP58;CSP66;SP68;CP76〕■ 1*Deepbelowourviolences , 54-.58: /Deep , deepbelowourviolences , 66-76･ (violences.59:) 100ranarthropodtoinspire , 54-76･(inspire68:.) 120nebubble･brainedcrea_turesaid;-54-76.(said;58:said-68 , 76.) 13`lamloved , thereforeIam'丁: 54i76･(am':58:) 22ForourAuthenticCit y, 54-76.I(city76.) 26Beforewemaycry10 look!?)54-76.(look .I?), 76.) 290ralawnoverwhich54-76.(vihich , 54'.)

Sylvanmeantsavageinthoseprimalwoods 〔Listener , llDecember1952*; NewPodmsbyAmericanPoets (ed.byR二Humphries , 1953)*;SA , '2･Woods'(ForNicholasNabakov)';SP58;CSP66;SP68;CP76 , '2. woods (forN2'colasNabokov)'〕 3 Wherenudes , bears , lions , sowswithwomen'sheads55-76.(heads , 66176.) 5*Northoughtthelightning-kindledbushtobme55-76.(lighting-kindled68:) 1 7 Reduc:edtopatchesownedbyhuntingsquires55 , 58: I Reducedtopatches , ownedbyhuntingsquires , 66-76. 38*Afruitinvigouioradyingleaf , 55-76.(vigor76.) 53Howmuchtheycosteachotherandthegods!55176.(gods.66-76.)

Iknowaretireddentistwhoonlypaintsmountains , 〔Mountains (apamphlet , FaberandFaber ,､ 1954).;SA , `3･Mountains'(ForHcdwig petzold)';SP58;CSP66;SP68;CP76] 2*ButtheMastersseldomcare54158: /Butt heMastersrarelycare66-76. 4 0rahighlydangerouschair;54-76.(chair , 54:) 6 Betweenworseandbetter , .likeachild , Scoldedin-France , 54176.(better54:) 14 A typeyoucatchbeheadingdaisieswitha.stick:54176.(stick;54:) 15Smallcrooksflourishinbigtowns , 54-76.(towns54:) (47) W.班.AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS (Ⅴ) 47

17*Aregrownon,cragsincastles:thoseunsmilingparties , 54: Arebredoncragsincastles;thoseunsmilingparties , 55176･(castles･Those66-76.) 20-21Theyhavebalance , nerve ,/ AndhabitoftheSpiritual , 54-76. (nerve54:Spiritual54:)

26-27*HowcanI , when/IwishistoodnowonaplatformatPenrith , 54176. I (Iwllen54:*ontheplatform54:) 30*Tunnelsbeillg , redfarmsdisappear , 54.I ● Tunnelsbegin , redfarmsdisappear , 55-76. 36Andastyleofgossip.Tomallagethe.Flesh , 54-76.(Flesh54:) 38 i.*Standoverherdayandnightwhomakeitsoclear54: Standoverherdayandnightwhomakeitsoplain55-76. 39 Theydetestanykindofgrowth , doesnotencourage54176.(growth54:) 40Euphemismsfortheeffort:herewaysidecrucifixes54-76;(effort･Here54:) 42-43Andserenadestoo/Sticktobarefact,･ 'O mygirlhasagoitre , 54-76. (serenades , too , 54:fact- "0 54:fact: `0 58;76･) 45*Theboybehindhisgoats54'./Thatboybehindhis宮OatS55176. 47Thatfledwithbronzebeforeatoughermeta l･ 54-76･(me tal, 54;66176.) 48*Andthequietoldgentleman54'./Andthatquietoldgentleman55-76. 49WithacheaproomattheBlackEagleusedtoown54-76･(TheBlackEagle54:) 51Thesefarmscanalwaysseeapantinggovernmentcoming;54-76.(thefarms54･.) 52I'mnordicmyself , butevenso54-76.(myself54.A) 58*Wherethehighspiritedsonofagloomytarn54: Wherethehigh-spiritedsonofsomegloomy.tarn55-76. 59Comessprintingdownthroughagreencroft , 54176.(croft54:) 61-62LikeaChinesepoemwhile , nearenough , arealdarling lscookingadeliciouslunchwouldkeepmehappyfor 54:

LikeaChinesepoem , while , nearenough , areald ,a rlillg Iscookingadeliciouslunch , wouldkeepmehappyfor 55-76. 63 1 34Foranuncatlike/Creaturewhohasgonewrong , 54-76. (un-catlike54:wrong54:) 65-66*Fiveminutesoneventhenicestmountain/Isawfullylong.54-58: Fiveminutesoneventhenicestmountain/ A reawfullylong･66-76.

A lakeallowsanaveragefather , walkingslowly , lNewPoems by AmericanlPoets (ed･byR･Humphries , 1953)*;SA , '4･Lakes.(For IsaiahBerlin)I;SP58 , `Lakes';CSP66 , `4･Lakes(ForIsaiahBerlin);CP76〕 39*Wherebeaksaredumblikeboughsandfacessafelikehouses;55-59: Wherebeaksaredumblikeboughsandfacescalmlikehouses;66--76. 43-44benign/Goeswithawishforsavagedogsandman-traps:∬一76･ (benign , 58:benign59:) 48 Y.S.YAMADA (48)

450neFal l, onedispossession , isenough P m sorry;55-76.(enough , 66-76.)

Oldsaintsonmillstonesfloatwithcats 〔SA , `5.Islands(ForGiocondoSacchetti)';SP58;CSP66 , `5.Islands(ForGiovanni Maresca)I;SP68;CP76〕 3-4*Whereonnofemalepelviscan/Threatelltheiragape･55｣76.(thereagape･59:)

● 1canimaglnequiteeasilyendingup 〔LondonMagazine , April1954*; Atlantic , November1954*;SA , `6･Plains(For WendellJohnson)I;SP58 , `Plains(ForWendellJohnson)I;CSP66 , `6.Plains(For

WendellJohnson) I; SP68;CP76〕 1*55-76.(*Icanimage68:) 7 ButIcannotseeaplainwithoutashudder;55-76･(shudder:58;76.) 34Thananyclimate , CaesarwithallhisThey･55-76･(his･They.68:) 38Howswifttothepointo f proteststridestheCrown･55-76.(crown.76.) 40Therearewivestobeat･ButZeus iswiththestrong･55-76.(Among , 66-76.) 43*Whencecannonwouldputtheharbourathismercy) , 55-76.(harbor76.) 55*Butbloodshotimagesofriversscreamlng , 55 , 58:･ Butbloodshotimagesofrivershowling , 66-76. 67-Whowouldn'.t?-toshootbeautifullyandbeobeyed , 55-76.(obeyed76.)

Dearwater , clearwater , playfulin■Lal1yourstreams , 〔Enc0才mter , June1954 , `Streams(ForElizabethDrew); Atlaldic , May1955 , `Streams';

SA , `7.Streams(ForElizabethD r ew)'; PerspectiveUSA , 14(Winter1956)栄;SP58 , `Streams';CSP66 , `7･Streams(ForElizabethDrew)';SP68;CSP69;CP76〕 (Strangelyenough , the Atlantic versionseemstoshowtheearlierformthanthe Encoun- ter text.Initialcapitalizationshavebeenchangedtosnial1lettersfrom660nexceptwhelle sentencesbegin･ A standsforthe Atlantic version･) 4 Purebeing , perfectinmusicandmovement?54-76. (PureBeing , A: purebeing , 66-76.) 8 Servantsinthehous占holdofMrs._Nature.54-76.(Mrs58:Mrs.59:) 13Andstilltalktoyourself:nowhereareyoudisliked',54-76.(disliked. A:) 25And H omoLudens , surely , isyourcllild , 54-76.(HomoLudens , 54 , A:) 25-26whomake/Funofourfeudsbyopposingidenticalbanks , 54-76.(banks A:) 27-28*Tr年nSferringtheloamfromHuppim/ToMuppimandback54;55-76･ (tiansferring66-76.to66-76.) Andtransferring血eloamfromHuppim/ToMuppimandback A: 30Alreadyyouwhispertoantswhat , asBrahma'sson , 54-76･ (already66-76.whatasBrahma'sSon , A:) 33134hiscompany/Coarsensrosesanddogsbut , shouldheherdyou54-76. (49) W.班.AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS(Ⅴ) 49 (coarsens66-76.dogs , but , A:)･ 35136Totoilataturbine , Orkeepyou/Leapingingardens54-76. (to66 i76.turbineor A: leaping66-76.) 37-38andthere/Even , tohi占soiledheartragingatwhatitis , 54-76. (there ,/Even , A: there/even , 66-76.) 39*Tellsofasortofworld , quiteother , 54-76.(tells66176.) Speaksofasortofworld , quiteother , A: 46-47Where , offits-fell-sidehelter-skelter , KisdonBeck/JumpsintoSwale･54-76. (Where A: where , 66-76.helter-shelter A: jumps66-76.) 48Sprawledoutongras s, Idozedforasecond ,A5 4-76.(sprawled66-76.second A:) 501nacalmenclosure , withthrushespopula'r:54-76.(in66-76.enclosure A:) 52The.bestwiththemalletwasmydarling.54-76.(darlihg , A:)■ 56*Andbird-watchersstalkedthemossybeech-woods.54-59: andbird-watcherscreptthroughmossybeech-woods.66-76. 57Suddenly , overthelawnwestartedtorun54-76.(lawn , A:) 58For , lo, throughthetreesinacreamandgoldencoach54-76. (Forlo.T A: fo r, 10 , 66-76.throughthetrees , 66176.) 63-64Hethankedusforourcheetsofhomage ,JAndpromised54-76L. (homage A: and66-76.) 65Withawaveofhistorchhecommandedadance;54-76.(dance: A:) ■ 66*SoroundinarlngWeflew , mydearonmyright , 54-76. (so66-76.soundinaring66.Iroundinaring69lpaper-boundedition]:) 67168Butfortunateseemedthat/Daybecausebfmydreamandenlightened , 54-76. (day66-76.dream , A:) 69-70Anddearer , water , thaneveryourvoice , asif/Glad-54-76. (and66-76. voice A: glad166-76.) 71-72*their/Figuresofsplendou r, theirholyplaces.54-76･ (figures66-76.splendor , A; 76.)

Ⅱ.INSUNSHINEANDINSHADE

Guard , Civili ty, withguns 〔sA , p.33 , epigraph(initalics)toSectionII;CSP66 , p.270 , the9thofthe･Sムorts･; CP76 , p.437〕 2 Yourmodesandyourdeclensions;55-76.(declensions:66 , 76.)

Shelookedoverhisshoulder 〔poet ry , october1952*;SA , `TheShieldofAchillts';SP5町CSP66;SP68;CPケ6〕 10*Nobladeofgrass , nosignofneighbourhood , 55-76.(neighbc-rhood , 76.) 12-13stood/Anunintelligiblemultitude.55-76･(multitude , 66-76･) 50 Y.S.YAMADA (50)

54Loiteredaboutthatvacancy , abird/Flewuptosafety55176.(vacancy;76.) 58-590fanyworldwherepromiseswerekept./Oronecouldweep5576. (kept , 66-76.) 60-61*Thin-lippedarmourer,/Hephaestoshobbledaway , 55-76. (armorer,/HepllaeStO S, 76.)

Thesailorscomeashore lListener , 3January1952*;SA , 'FleetVisit';SP58;CSP66;SP68;CP76] 3 Mild-lookingmiddleclassboys55｢76.(middle-class76.) 19120*Buttheshipsonthedazzlingblue/Oftheharbouractuallygain55: Buttheirshipsonthedazzlingblue/Ofthisharbour:actuallygain58: Buttheirshipsollthevehementblue/Ofthisharbouractuallygain 66 -76. (harbor76.) 29-30*CertainlywortheverycentJOfthemillionstheymusthavecost.55 , 58: Certainlywortheverycent/Ofthebillionstlleymusthavecost.66-76.

A shot:fromcragtocrag lThirdHour , Vl(1954) , 'HuntingSeason'*;SA:CSP66;CP76] (Nochangebetweenthethreeversions.)

A starlingandawillow-wren 〔Encounier , November1953 , `TheWillowWrenandtheStare';LSA , `TheWillow･wren andtheStare';SP58;SP59;CSP66 , p.272 , `FiveSongs , ⅠIl';CP76 , p.438〕 1 53176.(awillowwren53:) 2-3*Inamay-treebyaweirJSawthemmeet , andheardhimsay;53: Onamay-treebyaweir/Sawthemmeetandheard-himsay;55176. 9-10Withasmileshelistenedtohlm/Talkingtoherthere. 53: Withasmileshelistenedtohim,JTalkingtoherthere:55-76. ll-12 "Whatdoeshewant?"saidthewillowwren , "Muchtoomuch ," saidthestare. 53: Whatdoeshewant? saidthewillow-wren; Muchtoomuch , saidthestare. 55-76. (ll wantP 58-76.) ■ 13*"ForglVetheseloveswholiveinme , 53: ● 'ForglVetheseloveswhodwellinme , 55-76. 19120Foralltheyfallsoshortof , may,/DearHeart , bestillasign."53: Foralltheyfallsoshortofmay,/Dearheart , bestillasign.'55-76. 22Silentshelaythere:5376.(there.53:) 23-24"Doeshemeanwhathesays?"saidthewi llowwren , "Someofit ," saidthestare. 53: Doeshemeanwhathesays? saidthewillowIWren; Someofit , saidthestare. 55-76. (saysP 59-76.) (51) W. H. AUDEN'S'RノEVISING.PROCESS(Ⅴ) 51 28-29*Mustinaweretire/Tolettheirkinderpartners , 53: Mustinaweretire/Andlettheirkinderpartners , 55-76. 31Gointheirholyselfishnes s,153-76.(selfishness53:) 33-34*silentlyshethrew/Herarmsaroundhimthere..53: silentlyshethrew/JHerarms･abouthim Lthere:55-76.

35-36"Isitonlythat?" s aidthewillowwren , "It'sthataswel l," saidthestare.53: Is itonlythat? saidthewillow-wren; Zt' s thataswell , saidthestare.55-76.(35 .ihatP 59-76.) 42-43*OftheJoy1thankJFor.you , pydog ･ andevery甲Ody･"53: OfthatJoyIthank/Foryou , mydogandeverygoody.'55-76. 44145*Thereonthatgrassbank,/Shelaughed , helaughed , 53:

Thereonthegr.assbank/ShelaugheもLhe l･aughed ～ , 55-79･ 46Thentheyateanddrank:53-76.(dra nk. 53:) 47-48"Didheknowwhathemeant?"saidthewillowwr甲 , "Godonlyknows ," saidthestare. 53: Didheknowwhathemeant? Saidthewillow-wrer)一二 Godbnlyknわws , saidthestare. 55-76. (47 meant? 59-76.)

● `Whenritesandmelodiesbeglli 〔TimesLiterary Sup plement , 17September1954 , `TheTrial'*; Harper' s Bazaar , December1954*;SA , `TheProof';SP58;SP59;CSP66 , p.273 , `FiveSongs , ⅠⅤ'; CP76 , p.439J 21*AndFormandColourpart , 55■一一76.(Color76■.)

22-23What-sOarminghatredsthenwillhatch/OutofLove'-srivenhe a rt '. 55-76. (heart.'58:heart?'66 , 76.)

● Byallmeansslng'Oflovebut , ifyoudo , 〔NewYorkeL ,, 1台No青さniber1954 , `TheTruestPoetryi畠theMostFeigning , or , A rs poeticaforHardTimes'*;SA ," 互 heJlruestLPoetryisthemostFeigning,(ForEdgat Wind)";CSP66;CP76〕

4 TheChristianansweris .cos呈-cos を, 55-76. (cos圭一cos主; 66 , 76.) 5 Butpoetsarenotcelibatedivines;55-76.(divines:66 , 76.) 22FromsuchingeniousfibsarePOemSborn:55-76.(bom.66 , 76.) 63 -64 *(whichHewillnot:/Thatsillysausagewillbehangedorshot).55: (whichHewillnot:/Thatpublic-nuisaTcewillbehangedorshot)･66-76･ 65 -月6 will write/Shame., inyourrhargins , Today.,-Hypocrite., 55⊥i6. (H ypocrite ･I, 76.) 79-80Thatlove , ortruthinanyserioussense , Likeormodoxy , isareticence. 55176.(reticence?66 , 76.) 52 Y.S.YAMADA (52) 0 wherewo血dthosecholericboys , 〔SA , `ASanguineThought';CSP66 , p･269 , tlle3rdofthe`Shorts';CP76 , p.436〕 2 0urpoliticalorators , be , 55176.(Oratorsbe , 66 , 76.) 4 Theirigneousfiguresofspeech;55-76.(speech , 66 , 76.) 7*Theycouldonlyshutoutthedraught55176･(adraught66 , 76.)

Self-driversmaycursetlleirluck , 〔SA , `APermanentWay';SP58;CSP66.;CP76〕 4 Tothedogmaofitsrails55-76.(rails , 66 , 76.) 240fachoiceol-emightllaVemade.55-76■･(made?66 , 76■.)

Gently , littleboat , lSA , 'Barcarolle(Ariafrom TheRake'sProgress)'] (Notcollected.)

● Appearlngunannounced , themoon 〔BoitegheOscure , ⅤⅠⅠⅠ(1951) , `AFaceintileMoon'*; ThirdHour , ⅤⅠ(1954) , `The MoonLikeX'*; NewYorkTimes , 6March1955 *;SA , `Noctqrne .I'; CSP66 , `Nocturn'; CP76〕 1 17Grantedwhatbothofthembelieve55-76.(believe , 66 , 76.) 29*Myneighbour'sface , afaceassuch , 55-76.(neighbor'S76.)

Makethisnightloveable , lNewYorkTimes , 6March1955*;SA , 'NocturneIl';SP58 , 'Nocturne';esp66 , p.274 , `FiveSongs , Ⅴ';CP76 , p.440〕 415Blessme , Oneespecial/Andfriendseverywhere.55176.(especial , 66:)

Atpeaceunderthismandarinsleep , Lucina , lSemi-colon (1955)*;SA , 'InMemoriamL ･K･ A･1950-1952';SP58 , 'InMemoriam L.K.A1950-1952';CSP66 , p.268 , `ⅠnMemoriamL K-A.1950-1952'(thefirstof the'Shorts';CP76 , 'InMemoriamL.K.-A.195 0-1952'] 1 5■5-76･(mandarin , sleep , 66 , 76.) 2 Blue-eyedQueenofwhitecats:foryouthelschianwaveshallweep , 54-76. (weep66 , 76.)

Tosaveyourworldyouaskedtlhsmantodie: lSA , 'EpitaphfortheUnknownSoldier';CSP66 , p.268 , 'Epitaphforthe･Unknown Soldier'(thesecondofthe`Shorts');CP76 , p.435〕 1 55-76.(world , 66 , 76.)

Fr(一mtllisnewcdtureoftileairwefinallysee , (53) W.H. AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS(V) 53 lLisiener , 15DeceZhber1954*;SA , 'OdetoGaea';CSP66;CP76L.] (CapぬlizationsattheheadJoモlines.havebeenchangedtosmalllettersfrom66JeXCep t､ wheresentencesbegin.) 40-41below//Straightasitsrailroads , 55-76.(below , 66 , 76.straight66 , 76.) 43-44*wheretheDevil'sCauseway /Drew pilgrimssevengodsago , 55J:. wheretheDevil'sCauseway Jdrew pilgrimsthirteengodsag o., 66,.76. 49150*Temptingtomortalsinthefancyofhalf-concerned/Godsi.nthe･sky , 55-7 6. (isthefancy66 , 76.) 60*Most_venemousiAmbicscomposed55-7 6. (mostvenomous66 , 76.) 64Hecametosigh-soweweretaught 55 _:. Hecametosigh.Soweweretaught 66 , 76. 70Downthere , thanakantianconscience;fromoverhead55: downthere ,Lthanakantianconscience.Fromove'rhead66 r, 76. 72*Farmsunroofedandharbわur-workswrecked55i-76.(far血S66 , 76.harbor-works76.) 82-83thesternladvise/Tributeandthelarge-hearted:55-76. (tribute , 66 , 76.) 87-880rariasbyRossini/BetweentwoentrとesbyCare^m e. 55176. (or66 , 76.between66 , 76.entrees66 , 76.) 90-92yet/Justiceduringhis TeDeum./Slipped away55-76.(slipped66 , 76.) 93AndEarth , tilltheend , willbe.herself;shehasneverbeenmoved55: andEarth , tilltheend , willbeH･erself.SheJhasneverbeenmoved66 , 76. 97Toher , therealone , canourgoodlandscapesbebutrlies , 55-76.(toHer , 66 , 76.) 99-100Thattidelessbaywherechildren/PlaybisllOPOnagoldenshore･55: thattidelessbaywherechildren/playBishopdnagoldensllOre?66 , 76.

ⅠⅠⅠ.HORAECANONICAE/`Immlatusvicerit'

Simultaneously , assbundlessly , lPublishedfirstontherecording PleasureDome (1949)*;N , 'Prime';SA , '1.Prime'; SP58 , `Ptime';CSP66 , `1.Primle';SP68;CP76〕 9*Ofitsrebelliousfronde , ill-favored , 52-76. ■■(ill-favoured , 52;58 168:ill-favored , 55;59;■76.) 15 *WithoutanameLdf■historyiwake55 , 58 , 59: WithoutanameorhistoryIwake52;66-76. 23-25notalone/Butwithaworldandrejoice/Unvexed , 52-76･(world ,' 52:) 25-26toclaim/Thisadjacentarmasmyown , 52176.(own.52:) - 27-29resume/Itsrloutineofprai占eandblame/And52-76.(blame , 52;.66176.) 30-31Stillthedayisintact , andI/TheAdam52-76.(intactand52:) 34⊥35Norhatterwhattobe wise/To bedifferenttodie･52: Nomatterwhat , tobewise,/Tobedifferent , todie55-76. 35-37andthecost/NomatterhowisParadise/Lostofcouise52:I 54 Y.S.YAMADA (54)

andthecost ,/No matterhow , isParadise/Lostofcourse55-76･ 42-44thisreadyflesh/Nohonestequal ,butmyaccomplicenow/Myassassintobe , 52-76･ (equalbut52:now , 66-76.tobe52:)

Aftershakingpawswithhisdog ,･ lCatholicWorker ,IJanuary1954*;SA , '2.';SP58 , 'Terce';CSP66 , `2.Ten:e';SP68;CP･76〕 1 55-76.(dog66-76.) 2 (Whosebarkwodd･telltheworldthatheisalwayskind ,) 55⊥76.(kind) , 66-76.) 6-7Gentlyclosingthedoorofhiswife'sbedroom , (Todayshehasoneofherheadaches) 55-76. (bedroom6■6-76.headaches) , 66-76.). 15-17theBigones/Whocanannihilateacit y,/Cannotbebothered55-76･(city66-76･)

17-18weareleft,/E早chtohissecret ▲ cult , 55-76･(cult･66-76･) 18-19noweachofus/Praysto等nimageofI止simagepfhimself;55⊥76. (Now66-76.himself:58;7 6.) 31Thenwhyarewehere , whyistbe Teevendust?)声5-76･(.dust?) , 66-76･)

35Withouta .hitch ,I thattoday , foronce , 55-76.(to-day , 58:today59:)

Youneednotseewhatsomeoneisdoing 〔SA , `3.';SP58 , `Sext';CSP66 , `3.Sext';SP68;CP76〕 I 14-15toprayinsteadtoSt.Phocas ,//St.Barbara , 55-76. (StPhocas ,/ノStBarbara , 58:) 29-31slavesofDameKind , lacking/allnotionofa city //and , 55-76.(ci ty, 66-76.) ⅠⅠ 8 realizesinaflashwhatwaswrong/withhishypothesiswhen , 55-76. (hypothesis , 66-76.) 9-10fromaglanceatthe jur y, theprosecutor,/knowsthedefendantwillhang55176. (prosecutor/knows58;68 , 76.) 17-18Youmaynotlikethemmuch/(Whodoes?)butweowethem 55-76.((who76.) 32poison-pens , thinkoftheinbreeding)55-76.(inbreeding) , 66-76.) ⅠⅠⅠ . 19-20thecrowdseesonlyonething/(whichonlythe ?rowdcansee)55-76･ (see) , 66-76.) 24-25inwllateVerWayhebelieves ･//(notwoareexactlyalikLe)55176･ (believes66-76.alike) , 66176.) 41-42atthisnoon , Onthishill,/intheoccasionofthisdying.55-76.(dying?66-76.)

Whatweknowtobenotpossible , (55) W.H.AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS(V) 55 lNones , 'Nones';SA , '4.Nones7;SP58 , 'Nones';CSP66 , '4.Nones';SP68; CP76.〕 1 52-76.(possible52:) 7*Beforewerealizeit:wearesurprised52-76.(realise52:it.We66-76.) 9-10Anduneasy:Itisbarelythree,/Mid-afternoon , 52 7 6. (uneasy:it52:Midafternoon , 52:) 22-23Haveallmeltedaway:notone/Of.these52-76.(away.Notone66176.) ◆ ● 27*Soloudlylnthesunlightthismomlng;52: ■ Soloudlyinthesunshinethismomlng;55-76. 28Allifchallengedwouldreply52176. (A ll , 52:Challenged , 52:) 29-30- 'Itwasamonsterwithoneredeye ,/ A crowdthatsawhimdie , not I.'1 52-76.(not ,I-.' 52:) 31Thehangmallhasgonetowash , thesoldierstoeat:52-76.(eat;58:)

34TheMadonnaofthe.fig-tree , 52176.(fig tree52:) 39Fixtheirgazeonourcompletedwこ)rk:52-76.I(WOrk.52:) 41Craneandpick-axewaittobeusedagain , 52-76.(pickaxe52:) 430utlivingouract , westandwhereweare , 52-76.(act52:are52:) 47-48Abandonedbranch-lines , wornlop-sidedノGrindstones52-76.(branchlines , 52:) 52Theaimofourchalk-pitgame;stamps , 52-76.(game:52:) 53*Birds'eggsarenotthesame , behindthewonder52-76.(Bird'S521:Same:52:) 62 163Tofollowafter:wherever/Thesunshines , 52-76.(after.Wherever52:) 67-68*TheemptybluebusintileemptyPinksquare/Fillupandd ri veoff:52: TheemptybluebusintheemptypinksquareノFi lll upanddepart:55-76. 72173itsmeaning/Waitsforourlives;soonerthanwewouldchoose52-76･ (lives.Sooner52;66-76.) 74-76waterwi11･burn ,/ Andthegreatquellbegin , Abaddon/Setup.52-76.(begin;52:) 77-78fatBelialmakeJOurwiveswaltznaked;meanwhile52-76.(naked:52:) 81-82*Thatourdreamingwillsmayseemtoescape/Thisdeadcalm , 52;58-76. Whatourdreamingwillsmayse.emtoescape/Thisdeadcalm , 55: 89Anddoorsmarked Private , pursuedbyMoors52-76.(Private , 52:) 93-94andtelephonesring,/Invitingtrouble , 52-76.(ring52:) 94-95toaroom,JLitbyone･weakbulb , whereour D oublesits52-76. (room52:bulb52:double52:) 97That , whilewearethusaway , ourownwrongedflesh52-76.(That52:away52:) 1051106Notknowingquitewhathashappened , butawed/Bydeath52176. (happened52:) 110*Thebugwhoseviewisbalkedbygrass , 52-76.(baulked52:) lfthehilloverlookingourcityhasalwaysbeenknownasAdam'sGrave , lEncounte r, February1955 , 'Vespers';SA , {5.Vespers';SP58 , 'Vespers';SP59,I 56 Y.S.YAMADA (56)

CSP66 , L'5･Vespers';SP68;CP76] (Numeralsontheleftofthelinesdenotethenumberofverse-paragraphs. E standsfor the Encounter version.h the58and59textsallparagraphbreaksareremoved.) 112hisrightarmrestinglforeveronEve'shaunch ,/Jはn youlearn , E-76. (haunch ,/Can 5■β:haunchノcan59:) 2-3whatacitizenreallythinksofhiscitizenship ,//just asnowyoucanhear E-76. (citizensI亘p. /Just 58:citizenship ,/just 59:) 3-4*perceiveadisconsolateso ul ,//scanningin.desperation E: perceiveadisconsolatesoul ,//scann ingwithdesperation155-76.

(so t山 ノScanning58:so d , scan･ning59:〔twoparagraphsjoined〕) 7*BothsimultaneouslyrecognisehisAnti-type･. E-76. (recognize58'.) 13Hehopestheywillbehavelike bayiionicattivi , and , whenlightsburn E-76.L (baritonicattivi and E:) 13114whenlightsburnlateintheCitadel ,/I I(whohaveneverseen E-76. (Citade l./Ⅰ58:Citadel , Ⅰ59:〔twoparagraphs-joinedコ) 14andthink:'Werethecityasfreeastheysay , E-76. (think , 66-76. L'Were E:) aftersundownallherbureauswouldbehugeblackstones.': E-76. (stones": E: stones':58 , 59:) 15isnotshockedatallbutthinks:`Onefinenightourboyswillbe E-76. (thinks , 66-76. "One E:) 20butwehavenomorals:InhisNewJerusalemthetempleswillbelemPty E-76. (morals:in E: moiTals:In58176.) 21-22throughtheshortbricktunneland//thereIstandinEdenagain , E-76･ (andthere58 , 59:[twoparagraphsjoined]) 22welcomedbackbythekrum-horns , doppions , sordumes E-76. (krumhorns , 58 , 59:) andabobmajorfromtheCathedral(romanesque)ofSt.ISophie (DieKalte):E-76. (StSophie58 , 59:) 23-24andfish-wivesinterveneintheChamberor//someautumnnight E-76. (Chamber , E.A or/Some58:or/some59:) 240fdelationsandnoyadesIWhentheunrepentantlthieves E176. (noyades , 66176･) ▲ 25Sowithapasslngglancewetaketheother'sposture:already El76. (So , E: posture:Already E: ･posture;already58 , 59:posture.Already66-76.) 26-27loyaltodifferentfibs ,//orE-76. (fibs./Or15&:fibs/Or59:fibs? //Or 66-76.) 27*alsoarendezvous:betweenaccomplices E-59: alsoarendezvousb･etweentwoaccomplices66-76. 27128who , inspiteofthemselves , cannotresist meeting//to remindtheother E-76. (meeting. /To 5g:meeting/to59:) 28-29whichhewouldmostliketoforget ,/JJforcing usboth , E-76:･ (forget , forcing581[twoparagraphsjoined):forget/forci一也59:) (57) lV.H. AUDEN'SREVISINGPROCESS(Ⅴ) 57

29-30butformehecouldforgettheinnocence) //on whoseimmolation E-76･ (innocence)./On58:innocence)/on59:innocence),//on66-76.) 30arcadias , utopias , ourdearoldbagofademocracy , arealikefounded: E-76. (democracy66-76.)

Now , asdesireandthethingsdesired 〔SA , `6.';SP58 , `Compline';CSP66 , `6.Compline';SP68;SP76〕 4ト42bribesnorthreats/Willgetthemtoblab-andthen5■5-76. (blab , andthen , 66 , 68:blab-andthen , 76.)

● Amongtheleavesthesmallbirdsslng; lThefinalpartof'Delia'publishedin BottegheOscure , XII(1953)*;SA , '7.'; SP58 , `Lauds';CSP66 , `7.Lauds';SP68;CP76〕 5*Menoftheirneighboursbecomesensible:55-76.(neighbors76.) 10 *Menof theirneighboursbecomesensible;55-76.(neighbors76.)