Writing, Plot, and Desire
DIAMELA ELTIT Translated by Ramsey McGlazer
In this talk, I want to go very freely back over some cultural aspects of my literary experience. This might seem like a juvenile thing to say. But I don’t know how else to express it. I have dedicated a fundamental part of my life to literature. First as a precocious reader, then later as a literary reader attached, I remem ber, to the act of reading in a complex adolescence, when it ofered liberation and flight from the everyday. And then, in what was clearly a path laid out, a route already written for me, university studies in literature, why not, undertaken at two Chilean universi ties: The Pontificia Universidad Católica de Chile for undergraduate study and the Universidad de Chile for graduate school. Writing was on my horizon. It was there as a desire and discomfort. Because my excessive readings, my fascinating university studies and their approach to Latin American literary history, had of course wrought havoc and imposed limits on the task of writing that were too rigorous. A space had opened up where knowl edge had become inimical. It is possible, or it is certain, that I made the literary into a space that was perhaps totally transcendent. But, in the end, it was what I had. Or, as the Chilean writer Marta Brunet would say, literature was “mine, mine.” A desire had stuck to me, emanating from within a practice of reading that was, as I have said, incessant. I remember that I thought, when I was ten or eleven years old, afer reading Hemingway’s For Whom the Bell Tolls, the first novel in my history, that I wanted to be a writer. At that same time, I read the books Heart and Uncle Tom’s Cabin. These were dramatic, heartrending readings. I read these books submerged in too much sentimentalism, which today seems unnecessary to me. By contrast, Hemingway’s novel entered me in another way, as a source of astonishment, as a discov ery in the most literal sense of the word. From that point forward, I committed to a path that was perhaps too rigid. Possibly.
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Downloaded from http://read.dukeupress.edu/critical-times/article-pdf/3/1/148/806462/148eltit.pdf by guest on 01 October 2021 But this was the context, the territory, the everyday life, the displacement, the powerlessness, the set of primor dial connections with my friends from that time, the loneliness, that I felt. And the territorial enclosure. I know that I could have lef, and I also know that I could not have lef Chile. I know that those of us who stayed, stayed, and I know how we stayed. It was precisely in this atmosphere that I began to write my first novel.1 Its setting: a plaza. In a previous year, I had begun a story that took place in a plaza. A man went to die there. I returned to my place in the plaza. This time, in this new attempt at writing, there was a woman there. At night. I envisioned the night. I saw it, in fact, because the imposition of the curfew forced us to return home, to shut ourselves into our houses, at first starting at 6:00 p.m., then at 8:00, then later at 9:00, then at 11:00. Later, at 2:00 in the morning. The curfew lasted from 1973 to 1987. Fourteen years in all. During the hours of the curfew, family gatherings with more than ten people in a home were forbidden. I pause over this aspect of the period because I remem ber how an image ofered me an image. It provided a support, certainty. It put a text in my eye. This image gave me the precise setting for the novel and gave it part of its meaning. I was returning home and passed by a plaza. It seemed strange, extreme, almost extravagant. The plaza was empty because the curfew was approaching (being out side was extremely dangerous, it meant really running the risk of death), and pass ing by this space I noticed, perhaps for the first time, the power of its illumination in a semideserted city that would soon cease to exist for its citizens, because it was nighttime in the city under dictatorship. This was their city; it belonged to them, to the military. That illuminated, perfect, empty plaza seemed to me to be a stage, a site for representation. I imagined that later actors would appear in the plaza to begin per forming in a singular play. This was the powerful image that made me return to my place in the plaza. And write about that nocturnal space. It took me around seven years. Insecure writing some sections, exultant writing others, I advanced little by little, because it turned out to be so difficult for me. I was writing a novel under dictatorship. I knew perfectly well that in those years there was an of ce of censorship. Every book had to pass through this of ce and obtain permission to be published. We didn’t know who the censor was, or who the censors were, but the of ce was in the Ministry of the Interior, one of the most dangerous institutions because of the spies who worked for the security agency— because in Chile, as Pinochet said, not even a leaf moved without his knowing it. It was possible not to present books to the of ce of censorship, but if these books did not have the documentation proving that they were published and circu lated with permission, they could not be in the few bookstores there were at that time. I was going to be published by the press associated with a magazine that
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Downloaded from http://read.dukeupress.edu/critical-times/article-pdf/3/1/148/806462/148eltit.pdf by guest on 01 October 2021 I know that my view might sug est a mania, a constant settling of scores with writing. I also understand with a certain, relative clarity that this is a matter of sub tle vigilance and that it could go unnoticed in a text that is already complete. But it is here that, in what is by now my now long practice of writing, much of my literary energy has been concentrated. It is also here, in this zone, that a breach is opened between the desire to write and the writing itself: a hiatus, a void in which we see a failure founded in impossibility. But it is this posim sibility that sustains the desire that impels us to try again. This gap seems to generate an eternal present that is always unpredictable, another time that is introduced by the materialization of the letter and that allows for attention to detail, to the centrality of the miniscule, its status as an articula tion of the whole. A hole held open or held up in an expanse of time become space. It would be easy to think here of a kind of metalwork, but I’m not sure, because entering the letter implies entering the history of the letter and its meanings; it is an encounter that seeks to remove the letter from its stupor and bring it into con tact with, or rub it up against, realms that are overlooked by dominant logics. It is an impulse that wants to lead the letter to a moment of full perfection. Without this perfection’s having borders or definitions. It is an abstraction, a sort of inde terminate, transnutritional hunger. A form of persecution that is blank, circular. Perhaps dramatic. Because in this gap between the desire for the letter and the letter in its materiality, time passes and slips away in a surprising and necessary way. Perfection, I know, will not arrive. It is a horizon, an open sign in the distance. The limit. I have never stopped thinking about writing, its rhythms, its pause, its fatigue. I am sure I never will. Just as I have thought of the body as an ambiguous, elusive, intangible zone, I think of writing as a body that, in the madness of its dispersion, falls to pieces and is made of pieces. Of traces, inundations, irregular and imper fect edges. In a phrase. I have spent so many years writing that I know how elusive writing is. Meanwhile, I think of what I imagine could or could not be a book. This is a matter of impulse, of something probable and improbable that comes over me. Or rather, a desire for a book that circulates in me without yet being writing. I think of a book about encounters. That way of wandering in or arriving some place and encountering precisely what you were looking for. A precision that is perhaps acti vated by that unconscious that Freud thought about so much. Lately I have dwelt on this, on encounters that turn out to be crucial. I mean that there are surely encounters that went unnoticed and that could have changed the course of your life or of your writing, which is almost the same thing. It is possible that these unnoticed encounters did not become part of anything but implanted a certain nostalgia, lef in their wake. And I have also thought about encounters that became
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DIAMELA ELTIT is one of Latin America’s most daring writers. She began her engage ment with literature in her native Chile during the years of the Pinochet dictatorship, when she participated in the collective CADA, staging art actions against the dictator ship, and published her first novels, including Lumpérica (1983), translated into English as E. Luminata (1997). Eltit is the author of many other books; those translated into English include The Fourth World (1995), Sacred Cow (1995), Custody of the Eyes (2005), and (with Paz Errázuriz) Soul’s Infarct (2009). She has received fellowships from the Ford Foundation, the Fondo Nacional de Investigaciones, the Social Science Research Council, CONICYT, and the Gugenheim Foundation, and held positions as writer-in- residence at Brown University, Washington University in St. Louis, lumCo bia University, the University of California, Berkeley, the University of Virginia, Stanford University, and Johns Hopkins University. She is currently the Distinguished Global Professor of Creative Writing in Spanish at New York University.
Acknowledgments This is the text of a talk given by Eltit at the University of California, Berkeley, on October 11, 2018. I would like to thank Professor Natalia Brizuela for the invitation to participate in an important series of events organized by the Arts Research Center at the University of California, Berkeley. I would like to acknowledge as well my dear friend, the critic and professor Francine Masiello, and all of the people who attended the event.
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