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Verbal Equinox A WSU Writing Center Publication, Spring 2005 2004 Writing Contest Winners Each fall, the Writing Center sponsors a contest to reward students who have written original pieces. Submissions are accepted in the categories of Poetry, Fiction, and Non-Fiction. Winners receive cash prizes. It is Verbal Equinox s privilege to publish the winning pieces each spring. Enjoy. Non-Fiction Winners: Poetry Winners: 1st Place: McCall Erickson 1st Place: Nicholas Shellabarger "For a Modern Soul" "The Finger Crossers" 2nd Place: Todd V. Call 2nd Place: Michael Coiner "Chili and Bryn" "Salubrious Sammy" 3rd Place: Misty Hearnesberger 3rd Place: Hannah New "How To Use a Motorized Wheelchair" "Three Days Later" Fiction Winners: Honorable Mention: 1st Place: Jennifer Ryujin Non-Fiction: Jennifer Ryujin "You Must Remember" "Not a Whiff of Magnolia" 2nd Place: Matthew Lewis "How Samson Met Delilah" Congratulations to the Writers! Coordinator's Comments In this Issue: by Claire Hughes The Writing Process: Writing Center Coordinator Writing in the SPA ....................................... 2 Gnunmar Keys ............................................ 3 "Oh, what good it does the heart to know it isn't magic!" Mary Oliver 2004-2005 Contest Winners Poetry ....................................................... 4 As the new Writing Center Coordinator, I am in a unique position to be awed by how insightfully and beautifully Fiction ............................................................ 5 Non-Fiction ............._ ...................................... 7 Sylvia Newman has created and run this program over the past seven years. Through Sylvia's work, the Writing Center has grown to serving over 20% of Weber State University's student population and has established a strong reputation with local schools and organizations as This issue is your guide to well as among national and international writing communities. I am delighted to join this vigorous program tools and services available with the continued vision of our director, Carl Porter, from the Writing Center. ----------- Continued on Page 11 Verbal Equinox Page 2 The Writing Process Writing in the SPA by Anne Thompson Stop right where you are! Put credibility and, most likely, your many reasons. For our intent and down the thesaurus and slowly step grade. purpose, unless your audience is away from the computer. Having a solid, clear vision of comprised solely of people who share Before you dive into this paper, your subject will also allow you to this belief (which is rarely the case, which hopefully isn't due tomorrow form a good outline and thus a strong, and if it ever were, your essay would morning at 8:00, how about a visit to cogent paper. If you know you're be futile), the argument is ineffective the SPA? Take a minute to answer writing about capital punishment, you and unpersuasive. No data can prove just three questions (SPA) that will can then ask your elf exactly what such a claim, and involving so much tum a C paper into ...a better one. you want to say about it. This leads emotion may make the reader feel us to our next SPA question. attacked and defensive. Always SPA - Subject, Purpose, remember, the idea is to invite your Purpose audience to reason with you. Audience Additionally, use jargon with much caution. In general, jargon "Why am I writing this paper?" Many students believe that the should only be used when the paper Many students find themselves key to a quality paper is using as many is directed toward an audience that answering this with, "Because I have five syJJable words as possible; please belongs to the community that to," or, "My professor is making rid your minds of this catastrophic understands such jargon. Medical me." But we want to wipe the tears myth. While they may be a nice and scientific papers are good away and look past that. Hopefully, addition to your paper (if used examples of this. Do you know who in every paper you write, you have correctly), fancy words are not what your audience is? some interest in your topic or at least gets an A; it's what is behind the That's it! Subject, Purpose, desire to author a quality paper. With words that makes the grade, at least Audience. Know your What, Why, this in mind , ask again, "Why am I a large part of it. So let's go to the and Who, and you'll be proud to put writing this paper?" Is your intent to SPA to understand what constitutes your name on the cover page. Thanks a good paper. persuade, inform; narrate? Once you establish the Why in your mind, you for visiting the SPA, and please ... come often! Subject can present your information in the appropriate mode that will effectively achieve your purpose. Ask yourself, "What is my Simple so far, right? One more Need to cite sources'? subject?" You may think you have to go. a vague idea of your topic in your mind, but asking yourself directly The Writing Center may improve your paper in several Audience has current manuals ways. Knowing your topic keeps for the following docu• you from going off on irrelevant So now you know what you're tangents. If you're writing about going to talk about and how you're mentation styles: going to talk about it; all that's left to the dangers of heroin and have a personal u se experience to illustrate figure out is Who you're going to talk the horrific nature of the drug or to. "Who is my audience?" -MLA the unsanitary injection of it, Understanding and targeting your including the example in your paper audience is one of the most important -APA may drive home your point. parts of writing, especially in However, simp ly telling about the argumentative essays. When arguing -Chicago time you fainted when getting a flu that gay marriage should not be -Turabian shot, and bow you've hated needles legalized , supporting the thesis with ever since, will only confuse your something like, "Being gay is evil and reader and decrease your wrong," would be a weak claim for Verbal Equinox The Writing Process Page 3 Grammar Keys by Kristie Kerkman So, you have now become a college student. Congratulations. You are now It has taken me until my senior year in college to entering a place that has a completely different game plan than you are familiar realize that my professors' red scratch marks were there with. It takes time to get used to all the to teach me what I needed to improve on rather than to changes that will occur around you, but make me feel as if I didn't know how to write. there are two aspects that will never change: you still have to write papers, and grammar becomes an essential part Clarity Speaks Out is the best way to conquer the grammar of your grade. "monster." With each step you take, Therefore, here are four keys Once you have something down you will understand more how about grammar to assist you throughout on paper, it is time to clarify what complex grammar has become. your years in college. I hope they will you have written. If you don't know Remember, take it slow, and work on be a guide when you begin your first where you stand on a certain topic what you know for certain; then official college paper. throughout your paper, then there move at your own pace. is a high chance your professor The Basic Rule: Write won't know either. A general tip for Practice, Practice, Practice, First; Edit Later clarity is to read your paper out loud Practice... as you go through the writing process. Whether you are in front This is the most important rule to This is the final key I can give of a mirror or in the bathroom remember as you begin your first you about grammar because (trust me, your roommates won't college paper. Writing is a process, and grammar is not so much about the mind), your ears will pick up on if you are frustrated about where to rules; it is about the writing process. areas that ne d to be revised faster put a semicolon or a comma, you will It has taken me until my senior year than if you read your paper silently. in college to realize that my lose the thrill of writing. There will be Clarity is a major part of grammar, professors' red scratch marks were times when you will feel that you don't for without it you won't be able to there to teach me what I needed to understand a concept, but don't worry make sense of what your position improve on rather than to make me about that at this stage. is within your paper. Your whole goal is to get feel as if I didn't know how to write. So make mistakes, but learn something down on paper so that you You Can't Learn All the will know where to lead your thoughts from them, too. on a certain topic. So write out your Rules At Once Overall, remember it takes time thoughts on paper without any and practice to get down the nitty• thought of punctuation or grammar, I haven't yet met anyone who gritty rules of grammar, but you know and just have at it. Once you have an knew all the grammar rules of the more than you think you do. Take a idea as to what your paper will be English language. I certainly don't deep breath, pick up a pen or pencil, about, go back and edit. This rule may know them all and have to refer to exhale (it is important to remember not seem important for grammar, but grammar books constantly.