DEPARTMENT OF GEOPHYSICS May 24, 2019 Dr. Paolo Tarolli Viale dell’Universita, 16 35020 Legnaro PD, Italy Dear Dr. Tarolli, This letter accompanies the submission of the REVISED manuscript NHESS-2018-347 entitled, “What’s streamflow got to do with it? A probabilistic simulation of the competing oceanographic and fluvial processes driving extreme along-river water levels.” We have thoroughly considered and addressed the comments of the reviewers, and feel that this enabled us to better explain and clarify the overall framework and the importance of our results, strengthening the overall manuscript. Please find reviewer comments given in verbatim and our replies in italics. References to locations in the article are made by section (e.g., S3.5) or line number corresponding to the updated manuscript. The re-revised manuscript, which includes 14 figures, a supplemental information section, and this letter, has been uploaded. Thank you for your consideration. Please contact me at
[email protected] with any questions. Sincerely, Katherine A. Serafin (lead and corresponding author) Postdoctoral Research Fellow Stanford University Department of Geophysics 397 Panama Mall, Mitchell Building, Stanford, CA 94305 T 650.497.6509 Anonymous Referee #1 Received and published: 4 March 2019 General comments Serafin et al present a new framework for examining the joint influence of several coastal and riverine processes on water levels in estuarine environments, and show very clearly that the 100-yr ocean or 100-yr streamflow event does not always produce the 100-yr along-river water level. It is a novel piece of work using a clever methodological framework, resulting in an analysis that can assesses non-stationary water levels from a multivariate joint distribution and truly decompose coastal water levels.