COLLEGE ESSAY GUY’S complete guide to the “why us” essay C O N T E N T S 1 How NOT to write your “Why us” essay 2 What you SHOULD write in your “Why us” essay 3 All the resources you need to learn about a particular school 4 Six Great “Why us” Examples (And Why Each One Is Great) 5 How to Write a "Why Us" for a Safety School 6 How to Re-Use Your Why Us Essay (And How Not to) 7 The Top Secret Three-Word Trick to Writing a Next-Level “Why us” essay 8 My Favorite “Why us” Essay Ever: Advanced Techniques & Breaking the Rules Let’s do this... www.collegeessayguy.com 2
[email protected] 1 How NOT to write your essay Here’s a quick list of Dos and Don’ts that I compiled based on years spent reading (many) bad “Why us” statements and (a few) good ones: DON'T: Write about the school's size, location, reputation or the weather Why? Because that's what half of America is writing about. Take a hint from Emory University, whose “Why Us?” prompt used to read: Many students decide to apply to Emory University based on our size, location, reputation, and yes, the weather. Besides these valid reasons as a possible college choice, why is Emory University a particularly good match for you? Why do you think the school says not to write about those things? Because their admissions readers are tired of reading about those things. In fact, here's what to do after you've written your first draft: go back through your essay and underline anything that sounds like it could have appeared in another student's essay.