worked out by the students from form 3a between November – December 2010
Name of the students:
Aktekin Serafettin Aydemir Can Dogan Melisa Eraslan Tuba Hausmann Fabian Humer Larissa Karalliu Oliver Kaya Hüseyin Knezevic Denis Kocak Yaren Millaku Rinore Morawetz Nikol Steiner Raphael Tastekin Gülser Yeni Zeynep
Comments: All the students Mrs Anita Richter (Native Speaker) HOL Edith Exenberger Guest: HD Wolfgang Sonnleitner Guests from Australia: Ms Maria Schafler Chloe William
Editors of the summary: Mrs Anita Richter HOL Edith Exenberger
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Welcome
I am Aktekin Serafettin and I am 14 years old. I go to the Media middle school Neunkirchen in Austria.
• I am Can Aydemir. I am twelve years old. I attend form 3a in the Media middle school Augasse in Neunkirchen, Lower Austria. • I need this e-Porfolio for my English lesson. • You can visit my work on our homepage.
I'm Melisa Dogan. I am at the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. I am in class 3a, and we have made this portfolio in English. It is very funny and I hope you will read it and understand it!! Have fun!!!
I am Tuba Eraslan. I am at the Media middle school Augasse, in class 3a in Neunkirchen, Austria. We are making this portfolio in English. It is very funny. HAVE FUN!!
• I'm Larissa Humer. I am at the Media middle school in form 3a in Neunkirchen and we have made this portfolio in English. • It's very funny and I hope you'll read and understand it! Have fun!
3 • I am Oliver Karalliu. I am 13 years old. My school is the Media middle school Augasse in Neunkirchen and I am in class 3a. I'm doing this portofolio for the English lesson. • Dear readers if you don't understand a word, you can search on the Internet for what this word means.
• I am Hüseyin Kaya. I attend the Media middle school in Neunkirchen and I am in form 3a. We make this portfolio in IT and at home for our English lesson. • Dear readers if you don't understand a word you can look it up in the English-German Dictionary.
Hi, I'm Yaren Kocak. I'm at the Media middle school Augasse in Neunkirchen, Austria. I am in class 3a and we made this portfolio in our English lesson. It's really interesting. I hope you will read it and understand it, too.
• I'm Rinore Millaku. I am at the Media middle school, class 3a in Neunkirchen, Austria and we are making this portfolio in English.
• It's very funny and there are many interesting things about Australia and I hope you like it and you will read it! HAVE FUN!
Hello, my name is Nikol Morawetz and I am 12 years old. I made this portfolio as part of my English lesson.
Here is a lot of information about Australia.
I hope you'll like it.
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I am Raphael Steiner and I'm 13 years old. I go to the Media middle school Augasse in Neunkirchen, Austria. You can find the Internet addresses I used in the website credits.
My nam e is Gülser Tastekin. I'm fro m Turkey and I live in Neunkirchen. I attend th e third form of th e Media middle school in Neunkirchen. We have made th is p o rtfolio in our English lesson. It's very funny and I hope you'll enjoy it!
My name is Zeynep Yeni and I live in Austria. I attend the third form of the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. We make this portfolio as part of our English lesson.
4 Research questions
I liked this project because I have learned a lot about Australia. It's very important for me because I want to get a very good mark for my work in English. This project is about the history of Australia. I want to explore how Australian people lived in the past and what it is like living in Australia. I don’t have any ideas. (Can)
I find this project good because we are learning more English and we learn more about Australia. In Australia you can see a lot of attractions such as Uluru and Sydney. I would like to explore the Aussie language. I know where to find the answers to my questions (Tuba)
This theme is very important for me because I want to learn new things. I know a lot about Australia. I want to learn something more about Australia. I think I will find everything I want to know about Australia on the Internet. (Larissa)
• I like it because I can improve my English. I find this theme important because I want to get a good mark in English. • I know that in Australia there are many animals which I don't know about. • I want to explore the history of Australia. • I searched on the Internet to look for answers to my questions about Australia. (Oliver)
• I like this theme because the readers can get some information about Australia and I want to get a good mark. • I already know that there are very big cities in Australia. • I want to explore more about Australian cities. • I search for information in books and on the Internet. (Hüseyin)
5 • This theme is very important because I can learn many new things. • I know many things about Australia. • I would like to learn more about Australia. • I can find information about Australia on the Internet. (Yaren) •
*I like this portfolio about Australia because I think this country is great. *I know a lot about this topic. *I wrote this topic in English because I wanted to learn many new English words. *I have some ideas about where I can get information about Australia. (Rinore)
I like this project because it is very interesting and I think it is really important to find out more information about Australia. I have already heard much about Australia in my English lessons, but I hope I'll learn more. I want to find out more about the animals in Australia because I love animals. I think I can get a lot of information from books and from the Internet. (Nikol)
There are many people who are interested in Australia. I know much more now than I did before on the topic of Australia. I already know where I can find information about Australia.(Raphael)
This portfolio is important, very interesting and I can learn new things. I know a lot about Australia. I want to find out much more about Australia. I think I can find a lot of information about Australia on the Internet. (Gülser)
I want to learn new things about Australia. I know a lot about Australia. I want to explore more about Australia. I can look on the Internet. (Zeynep) 6 Information
• I have found cities and sights of Australia. • You can see my e-portfolio in the website credits. • Photos, drawings and explanations can be seen in my e-portfolio. • My thoughts are that I have done very well. Internet pages about my work can be found in the website credits. (Can)
Here Ihave collected everything, and listed what I discovered *In Australia there are big cities like Sydney, Melbourne and Canberra. *Internet pages about my work can be found in the website credits. *Further on you can see the pictures and statements in each of the segments. My thoughts are to find something out about Australia. The Internet pages can be found in the website credits. (Melisa)
*I have collected much information about Australia. * You can quickly check the website addresses I used in the website credits. It was very funny and I had a lot of fun. (Tuba)
Australia is the world's smallest continent and the largest island in the world. The people in Australia are called Aussies.
The capital is Canberra. Only 1 % of the people of Australia live in the Northern Territory.
The Western Territory is the biggest part of Australia. South Australia is the driest state of Australia and the biggest city is Adelaide.
In Queensland there are a lot of national parks, rainforests, nice beaches and the Great Barrier Reef.
The majority of Australians (more than 6 million) live in New South Wales. The half of this six million people live in Sydney. Sydney is the oldest and biggest settlement in Australia.
Victoria is the smallest state of Australia. The biggest city is Melbourne. (Fabian)
I have much information about Australia. The websites and the pictures to this theme are in the website credits. It was interesting and I had fun. I interviewed William from Australia. He gave me the answers to my questions. (Larissa)
7 • In Australia there are lovely animals which we don't know about like: kangaroos, koalas, wombats and Tasmanian devils. • The Internet pages I used for my work can be found in the website credits. • Pictures, drawings and text can be found in the portfolio. My thoughts are to find out more about Australia. • The Internet pages I used can be found on the website credits. • (Oliver)
In Australia there are very big cities like Sydney, Melbourne, Perth and Alice Springs, etc. Details about the Internet pages I used for my work can be found in the website credits. Further on you can see the pictures, drawings and statements I made, by clicking on the buttons. My aim is to improve my English. Internet pages can be found in the website credits. (Hüseyin)
*In Australia Uluru is really beautiful and there are big cities like Sydney, Melbourne and Brisbane. *Internet pages about my work can be found in the website credits. *Further on you can see the pictures and statements when you click on the buttons. (Rinore)
I have collected much information about Australia. For example about the cities and the animals there. You can find the web pages I used in the website credits. You can also find the links from the pictures in the website credits. I think this project was really good. I did this portfolio because I wanted to be able to explore many new things. You can find the Internet links in the website credits. I have made an interview with an Australian girl named Chloe. She is really nice. You can read the interview in 'Interview with Chloe’. I think you will enjoy reading this interview. My friend Larissa and I are the first students who got the chance to do that. Thanks to my English teacher and Ms Schafler. (Nikol)
I have learned many things about Australia and gained a lot of information. In each page there is a detailed description of the subject and there are always pictures accompanying the text. (Raphael)
I have collected lots of inform ation about A u stra lia and its biggest city . You can find th e Intern et pages I used for my work in th e website credits. You can also find th e links for th e pictures in th e website credits. It was good and I had fun. (Gülser)
I liked the sights of Uluru and the Great Barrier Reef. You can find the Internet pages I used in the website credits. Photos, drawings and explanations can be seen in my e-portfolio. It was very interesting and I had fun. (Zeynep)
8 That´s me
I am Aktekin Serafettin and I am 14 years old. I live in Neunkirchen. My hobbies are playing basketball and playing football. I attend the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. I have one brother and one sister.
I am Can Aydemir. I’m 12 years old. I live in Neunkirchen and I go to the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. I sometimes play football with my friends and I often go to my friend’s house to play with him. My favourite food is Schnitzel with chips and I sometimes eat ice-cream at home. I usually go with my parents to Vienna because we go to the Shopping City South and go to restauraunts.Then we go to the Prater and we have a lot of fun there. I love playing football very much and I have been playing it for six years. My favourite football player is Gonzalo Gerardo Higuaín. He plays for Real Madrid in Spain. He is a forward player. I have two brothers, one of them is married and the other one lives with us and I have a very sweet nephew who is two years old. This is the story about me.
My brother and I Gonzalo Gerardo Higuain
9 Hi, my name is Melisa. I am 13 years old. My friends call me Melis. I have two sisters. I go to the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. I like pop music and going shopping. My favourite colour is green. My eyes and my hair are brown. Sometimes I play volleyball with my friends.
I am Fabian Hausmann and I am 12. I go to the Media middle school Augasse in Neunkirchen and I live in Würflach. My favourite hobbies are cycling and playing computer games. I like pizza but I don't like fish.
Hi, I'm Larissa. I'm 13 years old and I live in Neunkirchen. I like doing this work very much. My hobbies are sms-ing, listening to music, meeting my friends and playing computergames (fb).
My name is Oliver Karalliu. I am thirteen years old. I live in Neunkirchen. I attend the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. My hobby is playing football. I have a brother. His name is Lorenz. He is 11 years old. My mum's name is Manjola and my father’s name is Dritan. My favourite food is pizza. And my favourite drink is cola.
10 I am Hüseyin Kaya. I am 14 years old. I live in Neunkirchen. I am 1,52m tall and I weigh 45 kilogrammes. I go to the Media middle school Neunkirchen. I always play football and I often go to my friend's house to play football with him. My favourite food is spaghetti. I often go shopping with my parents. I love playing football very much and my favourite football player is Lionel Messi.
I am Denis and I am 13 years old. I live in Austria. My hobbies are swimming, playing football and playing basketball. I love eating pizza and spaghetti. I have a sister who is 4 years old.
My name is Yaren Kocak. I'm 13 years old. I'm from Turkey but I live in Austria. I've got two sisters and a brother. I attend the third form of the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. My favourite colours are pink and black. My favourite food is Kebap and chips. My favourite drinks are Fanta and cola. My hobbies are dancing and meeting friends.
Hi, my name is Rinore Millaku. I am from Kosovo and I live in Neunkirchen in Austria. I am 14 years old. I have got two sisters and one brother. I like music, playing volleyball, ice skating and going shopping. My favourite food is spaghetti. My favourite dessert is strawberry ice cream with chocolate sauce.
11 Hello my name is Nikol Morawetz. I am twelve years old. I go to the Media middle school in Neunkirchen. I am in form 3a. I have three half brothers, one half sister and one sister. My hobbies are playing volleyball, listening to music, meeting friends, reading books, going swimming and a lot of other things.
I am Raphael Steiner, I'm 13 years old and I'm 1,61m tall. I go to the Media middle school Augasse, class 3a in Neunkirchen, Austria. I live in Neunkirchen. My hobbies are skating, skiing and flying model aeroplanes.
Hi, my name is Gülser Tastekin. I am thirteen years old. I have a brother. I am from Turkey and I live in Neunkirchen in Austria.
I like music, going shopping and going swimming.
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My eyes and my hair are brown. I often play volleyball with my friends.
I attend the third form of the Media middle school in Neunkirchen.
My favourite colour is red.
My favourite dish is Schnitzel and chips.
My name is Zeynep Yeni. I am 13 years old. I have two brothers, whose names are Tugay and Tayfun. I am from Turkey and I live in Austria.
I attend the third form of the Media middle school in Neunkirchen.
My favourite colours are black and pink.
My favourite food is pizza and Kebap.
My favourite drinks are Coca Cola and Fanta.
13 Sights (written by Oliver)
Ayers Rock (Uluru) The English name for Uluru is Ayers Rock. The Aborigines call it Uluru. Uluru is a big island mountain, in the middle of the desert south-west of Alice Springs. Uluru is 3 km long and 2 km wide. Uluru is 863 m high and so the biggest island mountain in the world. The neighbouring mountain from Uluru is the Kata Tjuta. They are both 500 million years old.
The Great Barrier Reef The Great Barrier Reef is the biggest coral reef in the world. The Great Barrier Reef is one of the seven world wonders. On July 11th, 1770 the British sailor James Cook discovered the Great Barrier Reef. The Great Barrier Reef is 18 to 20 million years old. About 2 million tourists come to the Great Barrier Reef each year. In 2003 tourists spent four billion Australian dollars.
The Sydney Opera House The Sydney Opera House is a famous building from the 20th century and the landmark of Sydney. It is a draft from the architect John Utzon. The Opera House has 5532 seats. The Concert Hall has 2679 seats, the Opera Theatre has 1547 seats, the Drama Theatre has 544 seats, the Playhouse has 398 seats and the Studio Theatre has 364 seats. The Opera House is 183 m long and 118 m wide.
The Harbour Bridge The Harbour Bridge opened on March 19th, 1932. It unites the north and south coast of Sydney. The Harbour Bridge is the second landmark of Sydney. The Harbour Bridge is 1147 m long and so one of the longest bridges in the world. 14 Cities (written by Oliver)
Canberra The capital of Australia is Canberra and it is the eighth largest city in Australia. Canberra is the biggest city in central Australia and it is in the Australian Capital Territory. Canberra is 268 km south-east of Sydney and 669 km north of Melbourne. Canberra is a favourite place for tourists because there are many things to see, such as:- the old Parliament Building, the National Library, the National Zoo and Aquarium, the Black Mountain, the Australian National Botanic Gardens, Mount Ainslie, the National Dinosaur Museum, the National Museum, the Australian War Memorial and Australians favourite sport rugby.
Sydney Sydney is the largest city in Australia. Sydney is also the city with the largest population. There are 3,64million people living in Sydney. Sydney is the capital of New South Wales. Sydney was founded on 26thJanuary 1788. In the centre of Sydney there are 156,571 inhabitants. There are many universities and museums in Sydney. Port Jackson is the name of the harbour in Sydney and it is the biggest natural harbour in the world. One sight of Sydney is the Sydney Opera House from the architect John Utzon. It was built in 1959. It is the landmark of Sydney. In Sydney there are also many museums: the Art Gallery of New South Wales, the Australian Museum and Hyde Park Barracks. Other sights in Sydney are the Sydney Harbour Bridge, the Sydney Tower, the Queen Victoria Buliding, Fort Denison, the Cadman's and the Kirribilli House. The Royal Botanic Gardens is the biggest National Park in Sydney. On the east bank of Lavender Bay is the Launa Park. The Launa Park is a leisure centre, but the Launa Park is only open on holidays because people complain about the noise. The most famous sport in Sydney is rugby. Because of all these things Sydney is a popular place for tourists.
15 Melbourne Melbourne is the capital of Victoria in Australia. There are 3,37million people living in Melbourne. Melbourne is the second largest city in Australia. Melbourne was named after the Premier Minister Lord Melbourne in 1837. In the centre of Melbourne there are 71,380 inhabitants. In Melbourne there are many immigrants: Chinese, British, Greek, Italian, Irish and Croatian. Melbourne was voted in the years 2002, 2004 and 2005 the most popular city to live in, in the world. Melbourne has two big universities: the University of Melbourne and the Monash University. These universities were opened in 1958. In Melbourne there are also many museums: the Royal Exhibition Building, the Science Museum and the Immigration Museum. Another museum is the Museum of Victoria.
Alice Springs Alice Springs is in the centre of Australia in the Northern Territory. Alice Springs has 22.000 inhabitants. For about a hundred years Alice Springs was just a small group of houses. Then Alice Springs grew larger because it became a centre for tourism due to the outback. In Alice Springs there are many museums about fossils: meteorites, minerals and aboriginal remains. The Stuart Town Jail is the oldest building in Alice Springs. Alice Springs also has a desert park, which is a country park with desert animals. Alice Springs also has a School of the Air. The Stuart Town Jail
16 Animals (written by Oliver)
Kangaroo The kangaroo is the most famous Australian animal in Australia. People love them because they like to watch the kangaroos when they are boxing. There are about 65 different kinds, and three kinds are already extinct. Kangaroos are herbivores. Kangaroos are nocturnal. Kangaroos also live in New Guinea, which is north of Australia. Kangaroos have a pouch for their babies. Here is a picture where you can see the kangaroos fighting.
Koala Everyone knows the lovely sleepy koala. Like the kangaroos they have also a pouch for their babies. They live in eucalyptus trees. Koalas like to eat leaves, tree bark and fruit. They are also nocturnal. They only eat 200 to 400 grams of food in one day and they sleep for 16 hours in one day. They are good climbers and really muscular. Here you can see a picture of a koala with its baby.
Wombat Like the koalas and the kangaroos, wombats also have a pouch for their babies. They look like a cross between a pig and a bear but they live in burrows. Wombats weigh between 20 to 40 grams. The name wombat comes from the Aborigines in New South Wales. The English name for it is Native Badger. Wombats live in the south and east of Australia. The dingo is the main enemy of the wombat. Dingos are dogs. Here you can see wombats asleep.
Tasmanian devils
You can find the Tasmanian devil only in Tasmania. Tasmania is an island south of the mainland of Australia. The Tasmanian devil is a carnivore. The Tasmanian devil is nocturnal.
17 Music (written by Oliver)
Didgeridoo The didgeridoo is a wind instrument. The didgeridoo is a traditional instrument from the Aborigines in Australia. The didgeridoo is a wood instrument, usually made from bamboo. The didgeridoo is between 1 m to 2,50m long.
An Aborigine playing the didgeridoo
The Bullroarer
The bullroarer is the oldest musical instrument of the Aborigines. The bullroarer is a shallow, usually oval musical instrument. It is made of wood or bone. It is between 15 to 25cm long with rounded edges. It is between 1,25cm to 5cm metres wide and attached to a long rope which is swung in a large circle and this makes a tone, which can be heard over a long distance.
The Gumleaf The gumleaf is a simple music instrument of the Aborigines. In Australia the gumleaf is played in traditonal music of the Aborigines, but non-Aboriginal people can also play the gumleaf. Non-Aboriginal people have been playing the gumleaf since 1977. The exact age of the gumleaf is not known, but it is likely to be very old. The first report about gumleaf music came from the 18th century. Guboo Ted Thomas was an Aboriginal tribal chief. He was a known Gumleaf musician. He was born in 1909 and he died in 2002. He played the gumleaf at the opening of the Sydney Harbour Bridge. Euchalyptus leaves are used as the instrument. This instrument can be played by everyone. To make the sound you have to put the euchalyptus leaves between your lips and then you must blow and then the leaves vibrate and create a tone. Here you can see a picture of Guboo Ted Thomas.
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Waltzing Matilda: (found out by Melisa)
Waltzing Matilda is Australia's best-known folk song and has often been proposed as the official national anthem. The text was written in 1895 by the Australian poet Banjo Paterson, who enjoys widespread support in Australia for his numerous other popular poems. It was set to music by Christina Macpherson to the music of the Scottish song Thou Bonnie Wood of Craigielea, written in 1818 by James Barr.
19 Captain Cook (written by Hüseyin)
James Cook was born on November7th, 1728, in Middlesborough in England. James Cook was born under the sign of Scorpio. At the age of eighteen, he went to sea, and he worked for ten years on a coal ship on the east coast of England. In 1755 he joined the Royal Navy. He was appointed captain of the 'Pembroke' and got the job to measure the St. Lawrence River in Canada. He acquired knowledge of mathematics and astronomy. He was a highly skilled navigator, cartographer, explorer, and sailor. Cook's first voyage to the Pacific took three years from 1768 to 1771. James Cook was a prominent British sailor and explorer and was the first European to discover the east coast of Australia and Hawaii.
He died at the age of 50 on February14th, 1779 in Kealakekua, Hawaii in the United States.
20 Aborigines (written by Hüseyin)
The Aborigines are the indigenous people of Australia. They settled about 40,000 to 50,000 years ago on the continent. Aborigines are not a unified people, but consist of tribes. The word aborigine means in English, an original inhabitant of a land. With the arrival of white settlers in 1788, the number of Aboriginal people fell from an estimated 300,000 to 60,000 in 1920. About three-quarters of today's Aborigines live in cities.
Aboriginal flag Aboriginal Art
Aborigines
21 The Outback (written by Hüseyin)
The flat, hot centre of Australia is called the outback. The outback is more than two-thirds of Australia, but its population is less than 100,000. Many people live on sheep or cattle stations, which are enormous farms. There are a few cattle stations in Australia which are each as large as the country of England. The nearest neighbour is perhaps a hundred kilometres away, the nearest city 1,500 kilometres away. People travel by road or by air. On the roads you can often see road trains carrying cattle from the cattle stations. Small aeroplanes are used to take people, food, post and machines to places that are far away from the towns.
22 School of the Air (written by Oliver)
The School of the Air is a special school for the sparsely inhabited areas of Australia. The teachers send the work to the students by post. Today students learn with the help of the Internet. The material and homework are sent by e- mail. The first School of the Air was a school near Alice Springs. The School of the Air in Alice Springs had 120 students. The school has an area of 1.000.000 km². 15% of students at this school were Aborigines. At the moment about 220 children visit the School of the Air. They learn from the Primary School to the 10th grade. The subjects which are taught are languages, maths, information technology, biology, geography and art. German is the second language. The students spend one week every year in Alice Springs and during this time they can physically meet with their classmates and their teachers. In the first picture you can see the symbol of the School of the Air. In the second picture you can see a student doing his homework using the Internet.
Symbol of the School of the Air
Student doing his homework using the Internet
23 Aussie slanguage (written by Oliver)
It is not known, how many languages the Aborigines spoke before the settlers came. It is said that between 200 to 300 languages were spoken, but Ethnologists believe that there were about 250 languages. Half of the languages are now extinct and about 20 different languages are learnt by Aboriginal children, but these languages are in danger of extinction. The remaining 100 languages can only be spoken by elderly Aborigines in Australia. Today the Australian language which is generally spoken is the so called Aussie-English. The Australians speak English just like you and me, but there are some words we do not understand. Here are some words in English and in Australian English.
The English names The Australian English biscuit bickie car paint duco chicken chook chocolate chokkie Christmas Chrissie farm station food tucker game brave Go away Shove off How are you? How are you going? it she kangaroo Roo sandwich cut lunch
24 Interview with William (made by Larissa)
I: Hi William. W: Hi Larissa. I: I want to get some more information about Australia. Would you like to answer my questions? W: Of course, I would. I: Which animals live in Australia? W: The animals that live in Australia are kangaroos, koalas, wombats, emus, kookaburras, cockattos, cockatiels, etc. I: How many children in your school use the School of the Air? W: None of the kids use the School of the Air. I: What's the weather like? W: The weather is pretty hot right now and in the morning the air is wet. I: What does your school look like? W: My school is mainly made of metal walls that are white. It's also very big with an oval. I: Tell me something about the outback? W: In the outback we travel in cars, helicoptors, planes, walk, and ride a bike. I: Which kinds of sports are popular in Australia? W: The popular sports are rugby, AFL (Australian football league) and my favourite soccer. I: Have you any siblings or a pet? W: I have three brothers, one sister, a dog and a pet cockatiel. I: How many classes do you have in the school? W: There are only nine classes in my school. I: Where do you live? W: I live in Borroloola in Nothern Territory at Savanah way motel. There is a website about it. I: Have you got many friends? W: I've got lots of friends in Borroloola. I: What do you do in your free time? W: I play soccer in my free time or play the ps3. I: How many kids are in your class and school? W: There're about 23 kids and 4 teachers in my class. I: What are your hobbies? W: My hobbies are soccer and video games. I: Have you ever seen Uluru? W: I've been there once. It's huge and there is Aboriginal art on the walls and rocks. I: Thank you very much for your interview. Bye. W: You're welcome, bye.
25 Interview with Chloe
I: Hi Chloe Chloe: Hi Nikol
I: First many thanks to our teachers who have managed that this interview can take place. I've informed you that I'm collecting information about Australia. And so I'm going to ask you some questions which I need for my portfolio.
I: In which city do you live? Chloe: In a small city called Borroloola.
I: How far away does your nearest neighbour live? Chloe: My nearest neighbour lives next door to me.
I: How many children use the School of the Air programme? Chloe: There are only two kids who use this programme.
I: How many children are in your class? Chloe: There are about 22 kids in my class.
I: Have you ever seen Uluru? Chloe: I have never seen Uluru before.
I: Do you see many animals? Chloe: I see lots of different animals like crocodiles, kangaroos, dogs, cats, parrots, and many more.
I: What's your favorite animal? Chloe: My favourite animal is a kitten.
I: What's the weather like? Chloe: Here in Borroloola it is very warm in the morning then it gets hot between 11a.m. to 3p.m., when it is usually 40 degrees
I: Thank you for the interview bye. Chloe: You're welcome, bye.
26 Final Thoughts
My major discoveries were the cities, I found them very interesting. This project is very important to me and I hope you like it. This project is very important to me and I would be very happy if others found it was good.
I liked the project very much. I'm very happy because my e-portfolio is finished. (Written by Can)
My important discovery was: I learned new words in English. I hope that you can understand my portfolio. I think it is important that other people can read my portfolio.
I liked searching for information about animals because I was able to find out many things about them. I liked getting information about the cities because there are many interesting things about Australian cities. Next time I do a portfolio I will try to do it better. (Written by Melisa)
• My important discoveries are the Outback und Great Barrier Reef. • You can write comments about my work. • I liked making this portfolio because it was very interesting and I learned many things about Australia. (Written by Larissa)
My important discoveries were: I learnt new words in English and many new things about Australia.
I hope that you can read it and you will learn some new words in English. In my portoflio are no mistakes (hopefully!). I think it is important for me that other people can see my pages about Australia.
I liked it because I was able to learn many things by myself. I didn't like it because it cost me much time but it is normal to do this when you want to get a good mark in English.
I would like to do more work like this in the future.
I am glad now because I have finished all my work. (Written by Oliver)
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My important discoveries are: I learned very much about Australia. Dear readers if you don't understand a word you can look it up in a dictionary. I hope that my classmates and my teacher will make positive comments about my work. The topics are very interesting.
I liked: Sights, Cities and Animals. I did not really like the themes: School of the Air, Music and Aborigines. Next time I'll try to make it better. (Written by Hüseyin)
*I have learned a lot about Australia *Everyone should make a trip to Australia. The cities are beautiful and very big. There are many interesting animals and you have to visit Uluru. It looks great. *There are no consequences to be drawn. *I found the topic to be very interesting. (Written by Rinore)
My important discovery was animals and I really liked the interview with Chloe I think the portfolio is very interesting. I liked to explore new things about Australia. (Written by Nikol)
I learned a lot about Australia. I hope you like my work. In this portofolio I learned many things about Australia. (Written by Raphael)
My important discoveries were animals and Captain Cook. You can write comments on my presentation. I liked making this portfolio because I learned many things about Australia. (Written by Gülser)
My important discoveries were Sydney and Melbourne.
• If you notice something wrong then you can send me an e-mail and I will correct it. • You can send me your comments and I hope you like my e-portfolio. • I loved researching the sights. (Written by Zeynep)
28 Comments
Oliver: Aktekin Serafettin your work is not so good I think. You should do more, if you want to get a good mark in English.
Fabian: You don't really have much hope of getting a good mark.
Raphii: Serafettin your work is not good. You have not worked much. If you want to get a good grade you have to do much more. Can: Serafettin your work is not good. You started with animals and stopped. If you want to have a good mark then you have to do everything!
Mrs Richter: You have failed to answer any of the questions. You have not provided any information about the subject. In Captain Cook you only wrote that he was a British sailor, you could have found out much more information about him had you tried. In the animals section you only named the kangaroo, there are lots of different animals you could have written about such as koalas, emus and wombats for example. There is insufficient information in all of the sections. You should have done much more.
Mrs Exenberger: You did not write any text about your portfolio in 'Question' and 'Information'. Your ‘Final Thoughts’ are not okay. The layout in 'Sights' is terrible. The texts you have wrtten in each topic are very short. You did not put the addresses from the texts and pictures under 'Website Credits'. You did not try to make a nice portfolio. Your portfolio is really the worst of all. I think a pupil from Primary School can find out more about Australia than you did.
Oliver: Can Aydemir I think your work is okay for a 3rd level group. But I don't understand many of the words, for example: I don't understand what you did in Cities or in the Outback and so on. But other things are okay. I hope you'll get a good mark for your work.
Fabian: You did not do very much but for a third group it is good.
Raphii: Should I think your work is really good? It is good for a third level group.
Dodi: I think your work is okay for a third level group. I think you will get a good mark.
Mrs Richter: It would have been better if you had not taken so much text direct from your internet sources. You should have read the text and put it into your own words. I am not convinced that you fully understand all that you have put into your portfolio.
Mrs Exenberger: Your layout in 'Cities' looks terrible. It's a pity, you didn't work more carefully. Searching for information is okay but you did not write the texts in your own words.
29 Rinore: Melisa, I really like your portfolio, your animal section is really good. Tuba: It’s finished but I think you could have done better.
LaLa: Your's is good. Zeynep: Your work is good. :) Yaren: I like your portfolio. Good work!
Mrs Richter: Your portfolio would have been better if you had not copied text direct from the Internet, you should have read it first and then put it into your own words. In addition, using an on-line translater does not mean that the text is correctly translated. You often lose the true meaning. You obviously did not read translated texts or you would have found out the mistakes. I don't believe you fully understand what you have presented.
Mrs Exenberger: It' a shame, you copied all your texts instead of putting them into your own words. It was a good idea to put the manuscript paper of Waltzing Matilda in your segment 'Music'. Why didn’t you write all the topics in English?
Rinroe: Tuba your portfolio is really great, it is perfect. Nikol: Your portfolio is good. You have many pictures. It's great. =)
Melisa: Tuba your portfolio is perfect. I love the music, because it is very interesting and I love the didgeridoo.
LaLa: I like it very much and your pictures are beautiful.
Mrs Richter: In the section on sights you have the word Canberra but no picture. In the section on music you have basically lifted text from the Internet without reading it and then putting it into your own words. You could also have said much more about Captain Cook and his importance to Australia. The text about the School of the Air was a direct lift from the Internet. Again you should have put it in your own words. I don't believe that you understand everything that is in the text. It would have been good to read your final comments about your RPI portfolio, it's a shame you didn't include them.
Mrs Exenberger: The layout in 'Animals' is not very nice. Some texts are too long and all of them are copied. You did not write your final thoughts. Your work is really not well done.
Dodi: Fabian I think your work is not okay, because I don't understand your words. I think you have taken these words direct from the Internet.
Seroo: That was really good but I don’t understand the words. I hope you will get a good mark. Oliver: Fabian your work is from the Internet I know that because I found the same text on the Internet. Can: Your work is not good for a 2nd level group. You haven't written very much.
Mrs Richter: It would have been interesting to know your thoughts at the beginning of the project and at the end. You too have made the mistake of sometimes copying text direct from your Internet source and not putting it into your own words.
Mrs Exenberger: Your document 'Start' is very short. You have forgotten to write some texts in 'Question' and 'Final Thoughts'. You also have not found English titles for each topic. I like your page in 'Informaton' although you should write there what you have already known about Australia and where you will get the information from. It's a pity your music examples cannot be heard.
30 Miss Maria, Borroloola: Hallo Larissa! It is great to see your work. Big effort! I know, lots of information is missing - but - what is enough?! I really like it that your interview with William turned out well. Good on you! Keep in touch with William, he is a nice boy and enjoys school. Keep up your good learning. Maria Schafler, Borroloola.
Rinore: I think your portfolio is good.
Nikol: Your portfolio is really interesting. I think you did this really well. =D
Dodi: I think your portfolio is not good, because you are not clear about Aboriginal History and the Outback.
Raphii: Larissa I find your work is not good because although you have worked a lot, I do not understand anything.
Melisa: I think your portfoliio is perfect.
Tuba: Your work is very good.
Oliver: Lala your work is not OK for me because you don't have much text and I don't understand the most words. In the outback you copied the text you had got from Ms. Schafler’s worksheet.
Mrs Richter: You have kept most of your texts simple and I especially liked the interview with William in Australia.
Mrs Exenberger: The text in 'Outback' is a very short version from the worksheet written by Ms Schafler. Most of your texts are very short and simple, except Captain Cook. Why didn't you write some text about him in your own words? I really like the interview with William.
William: I really like it. It tells everything you need to know if you visit Australia. It =c++
Dear LaLa, You did a great job. Your portfolio was very interesting for me to read. I liked your story about Captain Cook. Please work as hard as now in future! With my best wishes and congratulation to your excellent work! Wolfgang Sonnleitner, headmaster
Miss Maria, Borroloola: Hallo Oliver! I had a look through your work about Australia. Well done, mate. Good job and I am sure you did improve your English. Keep up your good learning. All the best! Maria Schafler, Borroloola.
Raphii: Oli I find your work is very good. You have done a great deal and worked well for a first level group member, it is very good.
Can: Your work is very good.
Dodi: Oliver I think your work is very good for a first level group pupil. But I don't understand some words. I hope you'll get a good mark.
31 Mrs Richter: You have made a good portfolio. There is the right amount of text and pictures. Not too short and not too long. For some of it you have taken direct quotes from the Internet and some of it is in own words. It would have been better to have written it all in your own words.
Mrs Exenberger: Your portfolio is very nice. But you should write all your texts on your own. I know you have finished your work on time although there were some problems. Good work!
Wolfgang Sonnleitner: Dear Oliver! You did a lot of work in your portfolio! I´m sure you learned a lot about Australia! I hope creating portfolios is interesting for you! Well done!!!
Miss Maria, Borroloola: Hallo Hüseyin! Great work done and I am sure you learnt a lot about Australia. It is a fascinating country. Keep up your good work, mate. All the best for you! Regards, Maria Schafler, Borroloola.
Oliver: Hüseyin Kaya your work is really good. I like your work very much but I think there are many things that are not really okay. I don't understand many words but thank you for the tip that I can look them up in the dictionary. I hope you'll get a good mark for your work.
Raphii: Your work is very good and I find you worked very well for a first level group.
Nikol: Some words I don't understand but it is good.
Can: I find your work really good especially the sights.
Zeynep: Your work is really good.
Mrs Richter: You did very well. The language used is more simplified and easier to understand. You have not simply lifted and inserted text from the Internet. Well done.
Mrs Exenberger: Your portfolo is really very well done. You also finished your work on time. Perhaps you can change the colours of your headlines in the topics. Then the layout of your portfolio would be very nice.
Dear Hüseyin, Congratulations on your well known work. It was very interesting for me to read your portfolio. I liked the page about the animals, I learned a lot from you! You have some excellent photos of the sights, the cities and the outback. Congratulations on your excellent portfolio!!!! Wolfgang Sonnleitner, headmaster
Oliver: Denis Knesevic your work is not really okay I think. Where is the School of the Air and Aussie slanguage and so on? And I don't understand many words. I think you have copied this from the Internet but I am not sure. And why do you not have any text in the Animals section? You only have pictures. You only have time today to correct your work.
32 Fabain: Denis you have done very well and you have put a lot of work into it. !!!!!
Dodi: Denis I think your work is not good. I don't understand many words. I think you have copied the words from the Internet. Why don't you do it better? I think you will get a bad mark.
Raphii: Denis you have not worked much and I think your work is not good. But I wish you good luck with your mark.
Mrs Richter: Denis it would have been better if you had completed all the topics. In the animal section you found some good pictures but it would have had more impact if there had been some written information about each of the animals.
Mrs Exenberger: You totally ignored my messages. Your own texts in 'Information' and 'Final Thoughts' are missing. You didn't really work well in your portfolio.
Mr. Sonnleitner: I have read your portfolio and was disappointed, because you did not finish your work! What a pity! Please try to make it better for the next time!
Rinore: Yaren I think your portfolio is very interesting.
Melisa: Yaren your portfolio is good. Zeynep: Your portfolio is very interesting, it is a good work
Mrs Richter: Unfortunately you have mostly copied your texts into your portfolio direct from your Internet sources, without first reading them and then putting them into your words. Therefore some of your themes such as music, Captain Cook, School of the Air are too long. If you were asked to explain the meaning of some of the words I don't think you would be able to.
Mrs Exenberger: You ignored reading my messages. You did not tell anything in 'Informaton'. Your texts are not written by yourself, they are copied and they are too long. Your portfolio would be fine, if you had written the texts so that you could understand them. It's a pity that you are so lazy. I know you could work better if you liked to.
Nikol: Rinore your portfolio is perfect. I really like it. The page I like most is animals. Great work. =D
Melisa: Rina I love your portfolio it is very interesting. It is a great work!!!!
Tuba: Your snake picture is so beautiful and your work is very good.
LaLa: I think your portfolio is the best! (Y)
Gülser: Your portfolio is very good and interesting :)
Zeynep: Rinore your work is very good. I hope you get a good mark ♥.
33 Yaren: Your portfolio is very interesting. I like it and I had fun reading it.
Mrs Richter: Your portfolio would have been better if you had not taken text direct from the Internet. It would have been better to read it and then put it into your own words that you can understand. You also included text in German, which you could have translated into English using a German English dictionary.
Mrs Exenberger: It's a pity, you copied all your texts from the Internet without reading them before. The texts are too long and some headlines are written in a wrong colour. Some headlines are not written in English.
Miss Maria, Borroloola: Hello Nikol! It is great to see your work. Big effort. I know, lots of information is missing - but - what is enough?! I really like your interview with Chloe. It turned out well. Good on you! Keep in touch with Chloe, she is a nice girl and enjoys school. Keep up your good learning. Maria Schafler, Borroloola.
Oliver: grilyxD I think your work is not so good. You only have a little bit of text and many pictures. For example in cities, in music, in sights and in Captain Cook. In the Aborigines there is no text except two pictures. I know that you can do more.
Dodi: Nikol your work is very little for a first level group. Nikol you are also very lazy because you have in The Outback and other topics very little text and I don't understand many of the words. I mean your work could be better!
Seroo: This was really good for me. Nice work!
Tuba: You worked well.
LaLa: It´s very good. (Y)
Melisa: Nikol your portfolio is very good.
Mrs Richter: I would like to have seen more text, however at least you have for the most part used your own words. I especially liked the interview with Chloe.
Mrs Exenberger: Your texts are very short. You did not finish your final thoughts. The titles are not in English. The interview with Chloe is very nice. I know you could work better if you were not so lazy!
Hey Nikol, it's me Chloe. I think that is some fantastic work you have made and I hope you love it too. Bye Chloe.
Dear Nikol, It was very interesting for me to read your portfolio. I liked your interview with your "girlfriend" in Australia. You did it well!!! I hope creating portfolios is interesting! Thanks for your interesting work! Wolfgang Sonnleitner, headmaster
Oliver: Raphael Steiner I think your work is not so good because I think this is not from you. I think you have copied this from the Internet because I don't understand many words.
34 Fabian: Your work is very good I really like it.
LaLa: It's good but I don't understand many words.
Dodi: Raphi I think this work is not from you, because you have copied the words from the Internet. I don't understand your words. I think your work is not good. You should do this work better.
Can: Your work as a level 3 pupil is good in my opinion.
Denis: Raphael your work is good. I like it.
Mrs Richter: Your portfolio would have been better if you had not taken text direct from the Internet and then put it through an on-line translator. You obviously did not read through your text as you would have discovered that the translation quite often doesn't make sense and the word order is incorrect.
Mrs Exenberger: If you search texts from the Internet you should change the important facts into your own words. Then your portfolio would be quite good.
Rinore: Gülser I think your portfolio is very interesting and good and I love what you wrote about Captain Cook. It's good. Seroo: Gülser, good work, I think you will get a very good mark, NICE!!!!!!!:) Tuba: Your work is really good but you should have included more pictures. Melisa: Your porfolio is very good, but you should have added more pictures.
Zeynep: Your portfolio is very good.
Anita Richter: Your portfolio would have been better if you had not copied your texts direct from your Internet sources. You should have read them first and then put the text in your own words. I do not believe that you understand everything you have written.
Mrs Exenberger: In 'Cities' the picture of Canberra is missing. In some parts of your portfolio the texts you copied are too long. You should find information about Australia and then write everything in your own words.
Gülser: Zeynep your portfolio is good, but what about animals and music? Rinore: Zeynep I like your portfolio, it’s good work.
Melisa: Zeynep your portfolio is perfect. I like your portfolio.
Yaren: Zeynep, your portfolio is very good but I think you could have worked harder on this portfolio.
Mrs Richter: Unfortunately you have made the same mistake as your fellow pupils. You have copied your texts direct from your Internet sources and put them into your portfolio without putting the text into your own words. There is no information about animal life in Australia or anything about Australia's rich musical heritage. It's a shame! I know you are capable of much more. You could also have written more about your final thoughts on the portfolio.
Mrs Exenberger: It's a shame you copied everything from the Internet without reading the texts before. Some of your texts are too long. I'm quite sure you don't understand most of your texts in your portfolio.
35 Website credits Text sources: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Canberra http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sydney http://de.wikipedia.arg/wiki/Melbourne http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uluru http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Barrier_Reef http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sydney_Opera_House http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sydney_Harbour_Bridge http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Känguru http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Koala http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beutelteufel http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gumleaf http://de.wikipedi.org/wiki/Schwirrgerät http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/School_of_the_Air http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/words/british_australian_english.htm http://www.australien-australien.de/australischer-dialekt-aussie-slang/ http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Australische Sprache http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_Cook http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aborigines
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