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OVERVIEW OF COMPONENT 1: 6—8 VOICES IN SPEECH AND WRITING TEXT GLOSSARY 9—12

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1. Article 1.1 Charlie Brooker: ‘Too much talk for one planet: why I’m reducing 14-16 my word emissions’ 1.2 Ian Birrell: ‘As gay people celebrate, the treatment of the 18-19 disabled just gets worse’

*1.3 Caitlin Moran: ‘What we’re doing about the refugee crisis’ 20-21

1. Article: Language and Structural Features Grid 22

2. Autobiography / Biography 2.1 De Profundis by Oscar Wilde 24-25 2.2 Mom & Me & Mom by Maya Angelou 26-28 *2.3 A Journey by Tony Blair 29-30 *2.4 Discovering Dorothea: The Life of the Pioneering Fossil-Hunter 31 Dorothea Bate by Karolyn Shindler 2. Autobiography 32 2. Biography: Language and Structural Features Grid 33

3. Diary / Memoir

3.1 Diary: What I Did in 2013 by 34-36 3.2 Eye-witness account written by a young radio operator in the First 37-39 World War *3.3 Diary: The start of Maggie’s diary, 1877 40 3. Diary/Memoir: Language and Structural Features Grid 41

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4.1 Blog by George Scott:‘ A ride of two halves…’ 42-43

4.2 Past Masters Podcast: ‘The Truth is in Here: UFOs at The National 44-45 Archives’ *4.3 Blog by Lisa Eldridge: ‘Dear Lisa’ - An Inspirational Letter’ 46-47 *4.4 Board Gamers Anonymous Podcast: ‘Pownage’ 48-49 4. Blog: Language and Structural Features Grid 50 4. Podcast: Language and Structural Features Grid 51

5. Interview 5.1 BBC Panorama interview between Martin Bashir and Princess Diana. 52-54 5.2 Jay Leno’s interview with President Obama (transcript). 55-57

*5.3 ShortList online magazine interview with . 58-59 *5.4 Telegraph Newspaper interview with Adrian Lester. 60-62 5. Interview: Language and Structural Features Grid. 63

6. Radio Drama / Screenplay 6.1 The King’s Speech by David Seidler 65-67 6.2 When I Lived in Peru by Andrew Viner 68-70 *6.3 The Imitation Game by Graham Moore 71-73 *6.4 Shamed: A Radio Play by Furquan Akhtar 74-76 6. Screenplay: Language and Structural Features Grid 77 6. Radio Drama: Language and Structural Features Grid 78

7. Reportage 7.1 Chris Rainier: ‘Tsunami Eyewitness Account by Nat Geo photographer’ 79-81 7.2 Jessica Reid: ‘Experience: I survived an earthquake while scuba diving’ 82-84 *7.3 Joseph Charlton: ‘Refugee Crisis: What life is really like inside the 85-86 ‘Jungle’ in Calais’ 7. Reportage: Language and Structural Features Grid 87

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8. Review 8.1 Flemmich Webb on Boxer Handsome by Anna Whitwham 88-89

8.2 Martin Hoyle on television drama The Bridge 90-91

*8.3 The Economist Magazine: Film Review of Burnt starring Bradley Cooper. 92-93

8. Review: Language and Structural Features Grid 94

9. Speech

9.1 John F. Kennedy’s Inaugural Address in Washington on January 20, 1961 96-98

9.2 Colonel Tim Collins to 1st Battalion, Royal Irish Regiment, in Iraq in 2003. 99-101

*9.3 Donald Trump’s address to Republican party members at Trump Tower in 102-103 June 2015 on running for leadership of the Republican party.

9. Speech: Language and Structural Features Grid 104

10. Travelogue

10.1 Sea and Sardinia by D.H. Lawrence 106-107

10.2 Riding the Iron Rooster: By Train Through China by Paul Theroux 108-109

*10.3 A Walk in the Woods by Bill Bryson 110-112

10. Travelogue: Language and Structural Features Grid 113

PREPARING FOR THE EXAM: SAMPLE EXAM PAPER— 114-115 SECTION A: Voices in 20th and 21st Century Texts

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Text glossary 1. Article News stories and feature articles are the staple forms of journalism. An article is a particu- lar section or item in either a printed or broadcast text that forms an independent part of a publication or programme. News stories are immediate and focus on a subject of current interest. Their aim is to be informative and economical as they have limited space. Feature articles discuss an on-going issue and present the views of the writer. They are longer and more detailed than news stories and often include visuals. This category is broad and may include written articles drawn from newspapers, magazines, websites or other printed publications or articles taken from the broadcast media.

2. Autobiography/Biography An autobiography is a written account of the life of a person, written by that person. Autobiographies are subjective by nature – seeing and filtering events through the perspective of the writer. They tend to have a confessional tone and can include reminiscences and anecdotes. The writer is usually aware of the implied audience as he/ she is writing with the intention of publication. Celebrity autobiographies are often ‘ghost’ written, i.e. written by a professional writer who interviews the subject. An autobiographer tries to establish a rapport with the reader on a personal level. A biography is an account of a person’s life written by a professional writer. The subject is usually a famous historical or present-day public figure. Although the writer is more distanced from the subject there is an element of subjectivity as the subject is presented through one person’s perspective. The biographer selects and organises the material to present the subject in a particular way. This type of non-fiction employs many of the characteristics of fiction, e.g. a strong narrative line, descriptions of locations, events and people.

3. Diary/Memoir Diaries and memoirs are personal documents, usually adopting a confessional tone. Diaries are a record of events and may either be very personal to the writer and their life or reflect wider issues, such as diaries of World War I or diaries written by politicians. Diaries are chronological and an immediate record of daily events and observations whereas memoirs are written retrospectively and are often based on diary entries. It might be assumed that diaries are written for the writer only, with a narrow, intimate focus on the writer’s memories, feelings and emotions; however, many diarists do have an objective of eventual publication and some private diaries written by famous people eventually have a public audience and may be useful as historical documents. 9

10. Travelogue A travelogue can be defined as a text which documents the places visited by, or the experiences of, a traveller. Typical travelogues convey a strong sense of place and the detailed accounts help the reader to envisage the experiences of travel through the eyes of the traveller. This category covers a broad range of styles and genres and examples can be drawn from broadcast, multi-modal or printed sources. These Include journals/diaries (online or print-based), broadcast documentaries, guide books and autobiographies.

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Blog The term ‘blog’ is an abbreviation of ‘weblog’. A blog is a personal online journal in which an individual records opinions, activities and experiences on a regular basis. Some provide a personal commentary on a particular topic or issue; others function as personal online diaries. Blogs can include hyperlinks provided by the writer which may extend their purpose and often have the facility for readers to respond or comment. Although blogs are written texts they share many features with spoken language and they tend to be transitory, i.e. available for a relatively short space of time. The primary purpose is close interaction with the audience and the language features reflect this. Blogs may be planned and drafted or may be more spontaneous.

Podcast A podcast is an audio or video programme which is formatted to be played on a portable media player. The term is derived from ‘broadcast’ and ‘pod’ in reference to the iPod. It is very much a horizontal media form: producers are consumers and consumers can become producers and engage in conversations with each other.

5. Interview An interview is a conversation conducted by an interviewer such as a TV reporter, chat show host, prospective employer or police/court official in which facts or statements are elicited from another. The interview may be transcribed and reproduced or recorded/broadcast. Interviews provide opportunities to comment on the differing language structures and purposes employed by the interviewer to elicit information and by the interviewee.

6. Radio Drama/Screenplay Drama is a form of fiction that is typically represented in performance. Drama scripts or screenplays may be drawn from TV, radio, stage, film or documentary. Their language is shaped by their multiple audiences (technical/performer/viewer) and the varied functions served by this language. Drama presents opportunities to explore the language used to construct texts designed for broadcast/performance with a particular focus on the voices of characters or participants and the dynamic between them.

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7. Reportage Reportage is a first-hand account of, or commentary on, an event. Accounts can be drawn from a variety of sources – broadcast, online, recorded or print-based. Reportage is most commonly, but not exclusively, linked with the media and journalism – for example, outside broadcasts by reporters at the scene of an event. As such they can be linked to interviews and commentaries and are often supplemented by the impressions and experiences of the reporter.

8. Review Reviews offer critical, often personal, appraisal of a publication, product, service, event or performance. They may be drawn from online, broadcast or traditional print-based sources and may cover any art form, product or service. Reviews may be favourable or may adopt a more negatively critical approach. Many reviewers employ a humorous style in order to add entertainment value for the reader. Rhetorical and persuasive techniques are frequently features of review writing. Reviews assume shared knowledge of their particular subject and an interest in the genre on the part of their readers.

9. Speech Public speaking is the process of delivering a speech in a structured way intended to inform, influence, motivate or entertain a listening audience. Speeches may come from a range of sources and contexts: politics, courtroom address/summing up, eulogy and motivational address. Speeches are planned and carefully crafted and rely heavily on rhetorical devices and metaphorical language, although the speaker may shift the style by introducing colloquial phrases to engage more intimately with listeners. Rhythm is crucial in a speech and is achieved by the speaker’s use of lexis and structure. Speeches are intended to inspire and motivate the audience in some way therefore their main function is persuasive but they must also include features that will maintain the attention of the audience. You should be aware of the discourse structure, i.e. the shape and direction of the argument.

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This anthology includes the texts from the Component 1: Voices in Speech and Writing Anthol- ogy, as well as additional ‘unseen’ text examples. Each time you explore a text type: 1. Make detailed notes. Highlight key language and structural features. Annotate the texts with your ideas. 2. Complete the ‘Language and Structural Features Grid’ for each text type that you explore. This will provide you with the features you need to comment upon when one of these modes comes up as the unseen text type, or as the anthology selection. 3. Each time you look at a text type, you will be asked to go away and look at another ex- ample in your own time. Use your ‘Language and Structural Features Grid’ and your notes from the earlier style models to thoroughly annotate the text. 4. You will sometimes be set comparative writing tasks as classwork and homework. Make sure you use your notes to support your writing so that your commentary is as thorough as possible. This will better prepare you for the exam. 5. You will also use these notes to support you with your creative coursework, where you will be asked to produce a non-fiction text in a particular mode and based on a style mod- el. If you prepare your non-fiction anthology notes carefully, you will find it much easier to produce your own text because you will have a stronger understanding of the language and structural features of your chosen mode and what readers will expect to see. It will also give you more to reflect upon in your writing commentary. (Your teacher will talk to you about the coursework in more detail when it is time to move onto that unit.)

What else can I do? Whenever you look at a particular text type, it is a good idea to go away and see if you can find other examples of the mode. Find and read a selection of newspaper articles, blogs, diaries, memoirs, and so on… See if you can identify the language and structural features you would expect to see based on your notes in class. Wider reading like this will better prepare you to comment on the ‘unseen’ text when it comes up in the exam.

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1.1 Charlie Brooker: ‘Too much talk for one planet: why I’m reducing my word emissions’ This is an article from newspaper by Charlie Brooker, the English satirist and broadcaster. He has worked in television, radio, print and online media. Too much talk for one planet: why I’m reducing my word emissions

I’ve been overwhelmed by the amount of jabber in the world—it’s a vast cloud of blah agle-eyed readers may have spotted I haven’t been writing this column for a while. E Roughly two people noticed its absence, until the other day when a paragraph in Private Eye claimed I’d asked Alan Rusbridger, editor of the Guardian, to switch off the reader comments underneath my articles (not true), and that he’d refused to do so (also not true), so I’d quit (not entirely true). This led to an intense flurry of activity, by which I mean four people asked me about it. Although the Private Eye story wasn’t completely wrong – I have stopped doing this particular column for a while, for reasons I’ll explain in a moment – I was all set to write to their letters page to whine in the most pompous manner imaginable, something I’ve always secretly wanted to do, when I figured I might as well respond here instead, for money. Incidentally, I’m aware this is Olympic-level navel gazing, but you’re a human being with free will who can stop reading any time. Here, have a full stop. And another. And another. There are exits all over this building. Anyway, I haven’t quit the newspaper, but I have, for the meantime, stopped writing weekly, partly because my overall workload was making that kind of timetable impossible, and partly because I’ve recently been overwhelmed by the sheer amount of jabber in the world: a vast cloud of blah I felt I was contributing to every seven days. If a weatherman misreads the national mood and cheerfully siegheils on BBC Breakfast at 8.45am, there’ll be 86 outraged columns, 95 despairing blogs, half a million wry tweets and a rib-tickling pass-the-parcel Photoshop meme about it circulating by lunchtime. It happens every day. Every day, a billion instantly conjured words on any contemporaneous subject you can think of. Events and noise, events and noise; everything was starting to resemble nothing but events and noise. Firing more words into the middle of all that began to strike me as futile and unnecessary. I started to view 14

1.1 myself as yet another factory mindlessly pumping carbon dioxide into a toxic sky. This is perhaps not the ideal state of mind for someone writing a weekly column in a newspaper. Clearly it was time for a short break. Reader comments form part of the overall wordstorm described above, and it’s true I’m not a huge fan of them, but that’s chiefly because I’m an elderly man from the age of steam who clings irrationally to the outmoded belief that articles and letters pages should be kept separate, just like church and state. I guess conceptually I still think ’I m writing in a “newspaper”, even though the reality of what that means has changed beyond measure since I started doing it. So now I’m sitting grumpily in a spaceship with my arms folded, wearing a stovepipe hat. Ridiculous. These days most newspaper sites are geared towards encouraging interaction with the minuscule fraction of readers who bother to interact back, which is a pity because ’I m selfishly uninterested in conducting any kind of meaningful dialogue with humankind in general. I’d say Twitter’s better for back-and-forth discussion anyway, if you could be arsed with it. Yelling out the window at passersby is another option. When it comes to comments, despite not being as funny as I never was in the first place, I get an incredibly easy ride from passing wellwishers compared with any woman who dares write anything on the internet anywhere about anything at all, the ugly bitch, boo, go home bitch go home. Getting slagged off online is par for the course, and absorbing the odd bit of constructive criticism is character-building. The positive comments are more unsettling. Who needs to see typed applause accompanying an article? ’It s just weird. I don’t get it. But then right now I don’t “get” most forms of communication. There’s just so much of it. Everybody talking at once and all over each other; everyone on the planet typing words into their computers, for ever, like I’m doing now. I fail to see the point of roughly 98% of human communication at the moment, which indicates I need to stroll around some- where quiet for a bit. After my break, and a rethink, ’I ll quietly return later in the year, to write something slightly different, slightly less regularly (probably fortnightly). In other words, ’I m reducing my carbon emissions. And whatever the new thing I’m writing turns out to be, it’ll appear both online, still accompanied by the requisite string of comments, and in the newspaper, which is a foldable thing made of paper, containing words and pictures, which catches fire easily and is sometimes left on trains. Now get out.

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1.3 **1.3 Caitlin Moran: ‘What we’re doing about the refugee crisis’ This is an article from The Times newspaper by Caitlin Moran, a columnist and feminist writer.

Caitlin Moran Published at 4:48PM, September 19 2015

‘We’re a middle-aged couple with a broken tumble dryer and two kids. And then this happened...’

The thing about getting married is that you would never, ever guess the weird things you’ll end up doing together.

In the 22 years I’ve been with my husband, we’ve invented both the breakfast pie (sausage, beans and egg: good) and the sherry cappuccino (very bad); run a spectacularly unsuccessful folk club; broken out of a locked park at night; dealt with flea invasions, miscarriage, illness, strokes, comas, car crashes, burglary and a couple of awe-inspiringly bad Christmasses; cried a lot, laughed even more, but dwarfed both of those stats with the sheer quantity of time spent on the M6 visiting our families; finally worked out who the best Beatle is (Paul); made a lot of p***-poor Ikea bookshelves, and two children.

A pretty average run, really. It’s working out pretty well.

But we would never have guessed that, one day, without any warning or pre-discussion, we’d suddenly be running a global campaign about the refugee crisis. Maybe getting a dog – a dachshund, called Colin – that, we had talked about. And whether we should finally mend the blind in the bathroom – both agreed yes, but also acknowledged we may be another year away from actually doing so. But this – no.

And yet, that’s what happened this week: something so big and so fast, we haven’t yet had the chance to even talk about it.

As I type this, he’s writing another piece, ten feet away. Occasionally he’ll look up from his laptop and say, “Yoko Ono and Coldplay just tweeted about it. Shall we have sausages for tea?” I’ll reply, “NBC’s Today is playing the video tomorrow. And Nancy needs a new scientific calculator,” and then we go back to our laptops. We have had very little sleep.

On September 3, the pictures of three-year-old Aylan Kurdi went around the world. As readers of this column will know, I’ve been semi-obsessed with the refugee crisis – the language used;

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its terrifying escalation. When those images came out, the change in public mood was palpable.

Suddenly, people wanted to help: gathering food and tents; loading up vans; holding up “refugees welcome” signs at stations and in football stadiums.

“Now’s the time to do something,” I said to my husband. “There needs to be a focus. All the aid workers say those deliveries to refugee camps – although a beautiful idea – are often useless: high heels, food that can’t be used. This urge to help needs to be fun- nelled into something simple, and effective.”

“I think it should be this,” Pete said, playing Help is Coming by Crowded House. “We put this out, with a film, for Save the Children.”

I explained what happened next in Monday’s Times: Mat Whitecross (The Road to Guantánamo) making the film; David Bowie’s PR taking the campaign; coming on board; Stella Creasy getting the Treasury to waive VAT; Newsnight; News; placards on the refugee march quoting the Warsan Shire poem Benedict reads from – “No one leaves home unless/ Home is the mouth of a shark.” All done in eight days flat.

In the middle of all this, Pete and I were still just … a tired middle-aged couple with a broken tumble dryer and two kids. I was trying to razor chewing gum off Nancy’s school skirt when Bob Geldof emailed. Pete was at the doctor with Lizzie (ear infection) when ITN said it wanted to send over a crew in an hour.

When we heard that Help is Coming had, in the first three hours of sales – despite only being available as a download, and with no radio play – gone in at No 25, and #helpiscoming was trending worldwide on Twitter, it was on a hands-free call while we carried a mattress down the stairs, because we currently have builders in and they’d just punched a hole through the ceiling by accident.

When people say, “I love you,” it actually means a million different things. This week, I’ve counted up what we have meant every time we have said, “I love you.”

It means: “I am scared”; “Jesus Christ, what the f*** are we doing?”; “I’m so tired”; “This is insane”; “We have involved so many people that we will die of shame if we give up now”; “This is working!”; “We must never do something like this again”; “We must do something like this again – and bigger.”

The simple fact is, this is the gravest refugee crisis since the Second World War. There are 19 million people on the move worldwide, half of them children, more than 4 million Syrian. Whole countries are walking down motorways, and getting into boats. Winter is coming, the numbers are increasing, and there is still no plan. If Pete and I feel we don’t

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2.3 A Journey by Tony Blair This is an extract from former prime minister Tony Blair’s autobiography published in 2010.

IRAQ: COUNTDOWN TO WAR

As I thought on how to answer the question put to me at the end of my evidence to the Chilcot Inquiry into the Iraq War in January 2010, I felt sick, a mixture of anger and anguish. ‘Do you have any regrets?’ This wasn’t a question being asked or answered in the quiet reflections of the soul; not something that could be weighed, considered and explained with profundity and penetrating clarity or even an easy honesty. It was a headline question. It had to have a headline answer. Answer ‘yes’ and I knew the outcome: ‘BLAIR APOLOGISES FOR WAR’, ‘AT LAST HE SAYS SORRY’. Choose a variant. The impact would be the same. Those who had opposed the war would rejoice; those who had supported it would be dismayed, imagining their support and in some cases their sacrifice had been in vain. Answer‘ no’ and you seem like some callous brute, indifferent to the suffering or perhaps worse, stubbornly resistant, not because of strength but because you know nothing else to do. So I said I took responsibility, accepting the decision had been mine and avoiding the headline that would have betrayed. However, it was an answer that was incomplete. The anger was at being put in a position in an inquiry that was supposed to be about lessons learned, but had inevitably turned into a trial of judgement, and even good faith; and in front of some of the families of the fallen, to whom I wanted to reach out, but knew if I did so, the embrace would be immediately misused and misconstrued. But the anger was selfish, trivial—comparatively at any rate—and transient. The anguish remains. The principal part of that is not selfish. Some of it is, to be sure. Do they really suppose I don’t care, don’t feel, don’t regret with every fibre of my being the loss of those who died? And not just British soldiers but those of other na- tions, most of all of course the Americans, but also the Japanese and Dutch and Danes and Estonians and Spanish and Italians and all the others of our coalition. And the Iraqis themselves, and not just those who were the casualties of our forces in war, but

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2.3 Discovering Dorothea: The Life of the Pioneering Fossil-Hunter Dorothea Bate by Karolyn Shindler This is an extract from Discovering Dorothea, a biography of Dorothea Bate, an explorer, pioneer- ing fossil-hunter and scientist in the early 1900s, published in 2005. What happened next became the stuff of legend. From the great Central Hall of the Museum, Dorothea was escorted through the public galleries to a high panelled door. Behind it was the Bird Room, part of the department of Zoology. The surprise of the assembled ornithologists at her arrival can only be imagined. This was absolutely a male preserve, a place of black frock coats, silk hats and weighty degrees from distin- guished universities. Dorothea, still in her teens, was a self-taught natural historian and ornithologist. That she had aspirations to join them must have been one of the most astonishing ideas that any of the scientists had ever confronted. An early portrait of Dorothea by her sister shows a young woman of almost palpable authority, her gaze direct, her face resolutely tilted upwards, while her chin indicates utter determination. The pose is a conventional profile, her dress a soft afternoon gown, revealing white plump shoulders and a bosom of almost royal proportions, while her mass of dark hair is swept up, caught in a neat tartan ribbon. Round her throat lies a delicate necklace. That morning in the Bird Room, Dorothea’s hair, of which she was very proud, was neatly stowed under her hat, her figure concealed beneath a long tailored coat and skirt. Bowdler Sharpe himself, the curator of birds, was in his fifties, with the de rigueur neat pointed beard and substantial moustache of most of the Museum’s scientists. He was a man whose personality was as formidable as his reputation. Initially he told Dor- othea to go away; he had no time to be bothered with anyone. Her request was quite preposterous. Not only was she just nineteen but, more importantly, no women at all were employed in a scientific capacity by the Museum. Yet within a few minutes, Dor- othea was standing at a table, sorting bird skins into species with assurance and skill. Perhaps as he watched her, Bowdler Sharpe thought of his own children. He was the father of ten daughters, one of whom, with great enterprise, was running her own en- tomological agency, buying, selling, arranging and naming collections of butterflies, from premises she rented in the Fulham Road. In Dorothea he must have seen an equally determined girl with a character as formidable as his own, but who dominated by charm and humour rather than irascibility. Even allowing for that, Dorothea’s achievement in being accepted by Bowdler Sharpe was truly remarkable.

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3.3 Diary: The start of Maggie’s diary, 1877 These are extracts from the diary of a Victorian school-girl who lived in the north of England in the late 19th Century.

15th October, 1877 The start of Maggie’s diary This is the beginning of Maggie Johnson's diary. Today, in school, Miss Bates gave me this book and said I should start writing a diary, writing down the things that happen to me and what I think about things. I am not sure where to start so I shall begin with myself. I am 10 years old, and go to Stanton Ele- mentary School. I have long brown hair and I'm in Miss Bates' class. My fa- vourite subject at school is writing. I live with my mother in a cottage in a village in the North of England. I have no brothers or sisters. When I'm not at school I try to help Mam out as best I can. Father was took in an accident down the pit and died. I was four years old when this happened. I can remember a few things about him such as his big hands and strong arms and the way he used to carry me over his shoulders. Mam always speaks of him with great affection and misses him something terrible. Anyway, I cannot think of more to say and the candle has nearly burnt down, so I shall stop here.

18th December, 1877 The start of the bullying Susan Bailey picked a quarrel with me in the playground today. I was playing marbles when along she came with her friends and kicked the marbles away. She and her friends accused me of being the teacher's pet because Miss Bates said my handwriting was neater than Susan's. Later they took my hoop away and made fun of my shoes. I tried not to cry but it was very hard. And I fear this is just the start of it…

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Happy New Year dear readers. I want to wish you all a very happy, healthy and fulfilling 2015 and to thank you for all your support, encouragement and love this past year. I am always overwhelmed by the lovely photos and messages I receive daily via social media from viewers of this, my little piece of the interweb. Way back in the early days of my blog I had a competition to win a personal online consultation (a sort of 'ask me anything' type thing) and a bunch of products tailor-made to the winners skintype and style. The winner was a great girl called Janne-Marii. We began an email correspondence that lasted for a couple of months and I remem- ber being struck by her intelligence and enthusiasm. We talked about many aspects of the beauty industry and, based on photos and infor- mation she provided, I sent a box of make-up products I thought Janne would like and would suit her colouring. A couple of months ago I re- ceived a beautiful email which, admittedly, brought a lump of pride to my throat. In it, Janne explained how she had followed her heart and made a significant move into the cosmetic industry and the job of her dreams, thanking me whole heartedly for the inspiration and impetus I had provided. Her letter moved me so much that I asked if she would consider writing a short blog post for my readers so that you could take inpiration from her journey. I really like how this story highlights the variety of jobs open to women in the cosmtic industry

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4.4 4.4 Board Gamers Anonymous Podcast: ‘Pownage’ This is a transcript of a podcast discussing board games and language change.

Chris: You’re listening to a proud member of the Dice Tower Network, dedicated to bring- ing podcasters together for the greater good of gaming. It’s sort of like Voltron, but with better lip sync. Find out more at Dice Tower Network dot com. Welcome to Board Gam- ers Anonymous, the podcast about board gamers and the insane fun we have at the ta- ble. This is Chris. Daniel: This is Daniel. Drew: This is Drew. Chris: Welcome to the table everybody. We’re so glad to have you join us here this week. As you hear from our intro, Anthony is not with us yet. He is pursuing his board game ambitions to complete the longest route from New York to Pittsburgh. So somewhere in the state of Pennsylvania, Anthony’s out there and when he lands in Pittsburgh, he’ll be joining us back on the podcast. Drew: He’s out there laying track quickly as he can. He’ll be back next week I imagine. Chris: This week, we also wanted to talk about our final step in the cool stuff inc dice tower network board gamers anonymous contest. So for the last four weeks, you’ve been entering the contest. Thank you all for doing so. We got some boosts on Twitter. Some boosts on Facebook. And we have increased out guild on board gamers anonymous dot com and everyone has been visiting the website, so I’m so glad that we can continue and grow the board gaming industry. And everyone’s getting a chance to meet each other, and you know, we’re not as anonymous as we once were! Alright, so finally we get to an- nounce the winner. Our winner is… Daniel: Drum roll please. Chris: Jason Perez. Drew: Woh! Chris: Congratulations Jason. You’ll be receiving a fifty dollar gift certificate from Cool Stuff Inc. and you’ll be entered into the five hundred dollar Cool Stuff Inc. contest. We hope that you win the whole five hundred dollars. And be sure to let us know what you pick up from that gift certificate. Alright, so with that done, let’s head on to the news! Anthony (pre-recorded): Shout it from the tabletops!

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Drew: Hey, power to the meeple dudes. Ya know, meeple is now an officially recognised word in the Oxford Dictionary. Don’t get excited. It’s just mostly a slang thing. They’ve also recognised pownage. And that’s been around as long as meeple. Maybe longer. Is that Latin or is that Germanic? Pownage? I never remember where that came from. Daniel: Er, I think it’s Latin for that thing I do to you guys. All the time. Oh burn! Chris: Oh! Daniel: Says the guy who wins the least games in the group. Oh! Cardboard burn. Drew: So there’s like unpownage or depownage or not pownage. Other words for example: bra, awesome sauce, manic pixie dream girl. I don’t know where Oxford keeps coming up with these, but it’s hard to imagine a conservative, old-fashioned dictionary like Oxford just accepting fans spreading into the language. Daniel: Well, you know, they’re not the ones making those decisions. They’re lexicographers. Their job is to record what is being used. They’re not the ones who determine what is used. They just… Drew: It’s the marketing people who determine it and tell the lexicographers, eh? Chris: It was probably due to some manic pixie dream girl that made them add that, so… Drew: She’s charming. You can’t resist her! Chris: It’s true. How could you possibly? Drew: Ha ha. Chris: Especially when she drops so much pownage on ya bra! Daniel: Ooh, man! Ha ha. Drew: Hey, something’s coming up real soon, an event—it’s coming up in November, but people need to know about it now. International Games Day. At your local library. It, it comes in November 21st. It’s a big event in a lot of towns. And around the world too. But the deadline for libraries to sign up is in order to get publisher games and promo packs for free is September 10th. So find out if your local library is doing it. International Games Day. Convince them to participate. ’It s easy to find on the internet. The website for it is just I G D dot A L A dot O R G. Real easy to find. Your library should look it up and participate.

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5.3 5.3 ShortList online magazine interview with Rory Kinnear

This is an extract from an online magazine’s interview with actor Rory Kinnear, first published in 2015. ShortList: Rory Kinnear

The man probably best known to you as Tanner cuts a quietly spo- ken, quintessentially British figure – easy to align with the suited roles he’s known for. But beneath the affable tone is a dry wit perfectly reconciled with his turns in political satires The Thick Of It and Black Mirror, and a diverse emotional range that has conquered some of Shakespeare’s most complex characters. Kinnear’s won him critical suc- cess, and he looks to reap the same gilded reviews from his immi- nent turn as in the National Theatre’s production of . We caught him during a break in rehearsals where, between mouthfuls of a tasty-looking omelette, he told us about his journey from wannabe sportsman to jet-setting actor to futuristic thespian.

What is it you like about Shakespeare? The fun of the language and rhetoric, and trying to make it comprehensible and accessible for the audience. Even for people who see a lot of Shakespeare, the first five minutes can be daunting before you tune in your ear.

What’s different about this version of Othello? It’s a contemporary setting. From acts two to five, we’re in a military camp. The play is set in Cyprus. We were thinking Cyprus was no longer a volatile country with any exterior forces coming into play, and then it turned into a hotbed of political intrigue. They’re just hanging around an army base, and we see Othello, Iago and Cassio turn on each other.

What was it like working on Quantum Of Solace and Skyfall? I had done Quantum Of Solace, and had the Bond experience of going to Panama, swanning around and being treated nicely. And then in Skyfall most of my stuff was around Waterloo and London Bridge. I live in London Bridge. I thought “Where’s my world-class jet travel?” I knew Sam [Mendes] before we started. He’s so me- ticulous, but affable as well. And I knew Judi [Dench], Daniel [Craig], Ben [Whishaw] and Ralph [Fiennes]. It was quite a little theatre gang of us.

Does Tanner have a place in M’s new office? He was there at the end of Skyfall, so hopefully he’s clinging on by his fingertips. But we’ll see. You never know until the scripts are out.

Your grandad was rugby player Roy Muir Kinnear. Did you consider the sport? I would have loved a sporting life, were I gifted any corresponding talents to it. My dad skipped the gene, too. I played for a while, but got injured quite badly.

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You played a prime minister forced to have sex with a pig in Charlie Brooker’s Black Mirror. How did you react to the porcine love scene? I just couldn’t stop laughing. It seemed genuinely polemical and satirical. It appeals to my sense of humour.

What were the logistics of the actual act? Madge [the pig] was skittish. We were supposed to cut as I reached for my belt, but the director very kindly kept the cameras rolling until I had my hands on her backside. And I had to say, “By the way, I am not doing any more.”

So you didn’t have a Lolita-style cushion as a barrier between you? I don’t think there was ever any danger of anything too improper. But she might have taken a shine.

You’ve been doing comedy recently – Graham Linehan’s TV series Count Arthur Strong and Cuban Fury starring Nick Frost– are you trying to lighten up? I also have a four-part drama Southcliffe; that’s not so jolly. I like doing as many different things as possible. Nick Frost is brilliant and very funny, so Cuban Fury was always something I wanted to do.

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What type of comedy do you like? Along with the rest of the UK and America: Girls. I mean, what an inspiration for anyone to get off their arse and write.

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Adrian Lester interview: Othello: 'It’s not just about his colour’ Ahead of his starring role in 'Othello’ at the National Theatre, Adrian Lester tells Jasper Rees why this production

is barely concerned with ethnicity. On Othello’s descent, Adrian Lester says: 'I have come into By Jasper Rees rehearsal and thought, I don’t know if I can do that again’ Photo: Rii Schroer

The long monotone of a bell from inside the National Theatre is blaring insistently out across the Thames when I arrive to interview Adrian Lester. Hundreds of employees – from artistic director knight to the humblest usher – muster on the riverbank, waiting for the nod from fire officers to go back to work.

Well might alarums sound. Earlier in the day, Sir Nicholas Hytner announced he would be leav- ing the building for good after a tenure consisting mostly of triumph.

Hytner is celebrating his tenth anniversary at the NT much as he marked his entry: by directing Lester as one of Shakespeare’s martial heroes. Back in 2003 it was , timed to perfection as Western armies piled into the Iraqi desert. Now it’s Othello.

The role has been a while in the brewing. Lester was first offered the part by Sam Mendes in 1997 after they had a hit together with Sondheim’s , only to pull out at the eleventh hour when he was offered a major Hollywood role by in Primary Colors. “Sam wasn’t happy,” says Lester. “He shouldn’t have been and wasn’t. It was a very tricky situa- tion. I was in a massive dilemma but it was just something you can’t say no to.”

No wonder that he and Hytner, who have long since pledged that they would do Othello together, have bided their time until the planets were in alignment. That moment happens to be precisely 10 years to the month since Henry V opened.

When I interviewed Lester for the Telegraph as he was about to play Henry V, he seemed a coun- ter-intuitive choice, having made his name in softer roles consistent with the puppyish contours of his face – notably Bobby in Company, Rosalind in ’s all-male . But then the clenched ferocity of his boy warrior took the breath away, above all in his St Crispin’s Day speech, delivered from the bonnet of a jeep.

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“It wasn’t the power. There was a real adrenalin of knowing I’ve got it right. The words are big- ger than me. It’s your ability to get out of the way. If you climb all over it, people don’t get the meaning, they just get you, and when I got it right in Henry V it was amazing to see old faces with glassy eyes looking back at me.”

Lester at 44 barely looks a week older. He’s trim and tall and softly spoken. The change, if there is one, is to do with an aura of confidence, even entitlement. He was Hytner’s King Hal, also Pe- ter Brook’s Hamlet and has since become a major TV star thanks to the scam-dram Hustle.

To top it off, in the most recent New Year’s Honours List he was awarded an OBE. “That was a real shock. I got the letter and I thought, 'What! What are they giving me an OBE for? I ain’t gone to university.’ ”

That is of course precisely the point. Lester has had to drag himself to where he is now by force of will as well as talent. The son of Jamaican immigrants, he left his school in Edgbaston at 16 because they didn’t encourage interest in the arts and performance. He had to introduce himself to Shakespeare by reading. At 18 he got into Rada and there for the first time encountered Othel- lo. It didn’t reveal its secrets straight off the bat.

“I didn’t understand why Othello believed Iago, why he killed Desdemona. And at the time white actors were still blacking up. This is a mindset that a lot of actors of my generation got into be- fore the rules changed. I wouldn’t be here if the practice still continued.”

While waiting for his turn, he has watched others have a go, including his NT replacement David Harewood, , Lennie Henry, Nonso Anozie and (on screen) Laurence Fishburne. As for the other Laurence, Olivier’s stage performance captured on film, he’s “seen bits of it. That’s about all I could watch. He’s doing a very generalised parody. It’s colour as character, not just colour as colour. And there is this insulting idea – and it goes back years – that because the dots of why Othello believes the things that he does can’t be joined, people go, 'Well it’s about colour.’ ”

This Othello, set like all Hytner’s Shakespeares in the present day, barely concerns itself with ethnicity. “There was more fuss made about Colin Powell being made general in America,” Lester argues, “than there is about Othello being a general in the play. He doesn’t kill his wife because he’s black, he isn’t jealous because he’s black. So you take that off that preoccupation, the tragedies of Othello and Desdemona and Iago live a little more because they have their own colour, and not the one colour we’ve washed the play with for so many flipping years.”

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5.4 Lester knows whereof he speaks more than most. A few years ago at Brighton Festival he partici- pated in a reading about an African-American actor called Ira Aldridge, who in 1833 took over from Edmund Kean in Othello at the Theatre Royal in Covent Garden. “I thought, God, I’ve nev- er heard of this guy. And the story fascinated my wife as soon as I brought it home.”

Last year, what started out as a screenplay and became a play that many theatres politely turned down – the play Red Velvet by Lester’s wife – opened at the Tricycle Theatre with Lester in the lead role. At the Critic’s Circle awards, their partnership won her most promis- ing playwright and him best actor, and he reports that the play may well make a return. Was im- agining Aldridge’s Othello any kind of dry run?

“It was a real lesson in how to deliver the height of emotion, the height of poetry, and yet make it believable. It’s something that you absolutely cannot mumble and shrug and modernise your way through.”

Declamatory 19th-century acting is one thing. For the first time rehearsing Shakespeare, Lester hit a roadblock when looking for the truth in the orotund verse that is so seductive to Brabantio’s teenage daughter.

“I could feel the iambic. And it felt very odd. I found myself stuck. When you take on a character you try and lose yourself into it because you want to be less self-conscious. Othello somehow presents himself, and I thought, there’s a clue there. And I realised I’m playing someone who is self-conscious. And once I accepted that, it started to get easier.”

Easier. But not easy. Othello’s descent from general to murderous jealousy and eventual self- immolation “is one of the hardest things I’ve done. It feels like I pick at a wound that’s healing to make it fresh. I truly have come into rehearsal each day and thought, 'I don’t know if I can do that again’.” 'Othello’ is in previews now and opens at the National Theatre (020 7452 3000; nationalthea- tre.org.uk) on Apr 23

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6.3 6.3 The Imitation Game by Graham Moore.

This is an extract from a screenplay by Graham Moore about the life of Alan Turing, the computer pioneer who broke the Enigma code during WW2.

INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - COMMANDER DENNISTON’S OFFICE - LATER

COMMANDER DENNISTON For Christ’s sake — who are you?

ALAN TURING Alan Turing.

COMMANDER DENNISTON (looking at papers on his desk) Turing... Let me see... Oh, Turing. The mathematician.

ALAN TURING Correct.

COMMANDER DENNISTON How ever could I have guessed?

ALAN TURING You didn’t. It was written on your paper.

COMMANDER DENNISTON ... King’s College, Cambridge. Says here you were a bit of a prodigy in the maths department.

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COMMANDER DENNISTON How old are you, Mr. Turing?

ALAN TURING 27.

COMMANDER DENNISTON How old were you when you became a fellow at Cambridge?

ALAN TURING 24.

COMMANDER DENNISTON And how old were you when you published this paper here, that has a title I can barely understand, which apparently got you this fellowship?

ALAN TURING 23.

COMMANDER DENNISTON And you don’t think that qualifies you as a certified prodigy?

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COMMANDER DENNISTON And how old were they?

ALAN TURING Newton discovered the binomial theorem at 22. Einstein published four papers that changed the world at 26. As far as I can tell I’ve barely made par.

COMMANDER DENNISTON You’re serious, aren’t you?

ALAN TURING Would you prefer I make a joke?

COMMANDER DENNISTON Not sure you know what those are.

ALAN TURING It hardly seems fair that that would be a requirement for employment here, Mr...?

COMMANDER DENNISTON Commander Denniston, of the Royal Navy. All right, Mr. Turing, I’ll bite. Why do you want to work for His Majesty’s government?

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6.4 Shamed: A Radio Play by Furquan Akhtar This is an extract from a radio play by Furquan Akhtar about a mother trying to come to terms with her son’s arrest.

1 INT SHABANA'S HOUSE 1

THE DOOR BELL RINGS AGAIN - MORE INSISTENT. SHABANA RELENTS AND OPENS THE DOOR

MRS AMJAD Oh Mrs Malik Khan!

MRS AMJAD BREAKS DOWN IN TO FAKE SOBS IN SHABANA'S ARMS.

MRS AMJAD (CONT'D) I'm so sorry to hear about Rizwan.

SHE PASSES HER A BAG OF FOOD

MRS AMJAD (CONT'D) Some samosas to see you through-

SHABANA (V.O.) That’s what that smell was...

AISHA I can’t handle this.

SHABANA Aisha!

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SHABANA She's finding it hard to accept.

MRS AMJAD I can only imagine.

SHABANA Everywhere we turn there are reminders of him.

BEAT.

SHABANA (CONT’D) He's my son. He was...(everything to me).

MRS AMJAD (CHANGING THE SUBJECT) I brought you samosas...

SHABANA (DISTRACTED) Yes sorry. Funny isn't it? People always think food is the solution. We could live for weeks on these handouts...

MRS AMJAD I think people don't know how to react during hard times. (QUICKLY) I didn't mean that. It's just a way to...give you my good wishes.

SHABANA (V.O.) Why won’t she just be quiet?

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MRS AMJAD (CLUTCHING AT STRAWS) Who knows what to say in these situations?

SHABANA No you're right. You're right. I'm reliving what happened every second.

MRS AMJAD Put faith in Allah. He tests us and we can pray but ultimately time is the only thing that will heal these wounds Shabana. (ON A ROLL NOW) You will learn to move on and adjust-

SHABANA But I don't want to adjust.

MRS AMJAD (FALTERING NOW) No of course what I was trying to say was-

SHABANA You’re talking as if I should be mourning for my son.

MRS AMJAD Yes well, no but-

Note: A blog by Furquan Akhtar about writing this play can be found here: http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/writersroom/entries/6e786ae4-b42f- 409a-8b38-3bf4dac20a4c

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7.3 Joseph Charlton: ‘Refugee Crisis: What life is really like inside the ‘Jungle’ in Calais’

This is a first person account, published in The Independent newspaper, of the journal- ist Joseph Charlton’s experiences of a refugee camp in 2015.

Refugee crisis: What life is really like inside the 'Jungle’ in Calais

The Independent's correspondent Joseph Charlton spent three days in the notorious refugee camp

Tuesday 1st October 2015

The first thing we see is a heap of high heels and baby shoes. Then, next to that, a pile of rain-soaked duvets and a few abandoned teddy bears. It's reminiscent of the sepia photos of clothes and glasses from the concentration camps, but the piles here are kept in even less order. Amelia Iraheta, an American volunteer picks up an ankle-high red leather boot. “I mean, who the hell thought this would be a good idea?” she says, before chucking it back on the heap.

Mismanaged efforts at altruism are piling up around the porous border of the “Jungle”, the name given to the camp outside Calais which has become a temporary home to around 3,000-4,000 men, and about 350 women and children. The piles are good to no one: the result of spontaneous drop-offs from British and French nationals who drive to the camp at weekends with cars and vans full of donations.

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“It's a disaster,” says Amelia. “They come with a car full of unsorted stuff, they don't tell any of the volunteer organisations here, they open the boot and then the stuff just gets raided and chucked around in the chaos – it's not the way to donate.”

The breadth of waste is astounding. A few hundred metres from the Jungle's entrance, in the district of camp named “Sudan” (it contains mainly Sudanese refugees), there is a swamp of T-shirts, jeans, socks and underwear. There was a torrential downpour the night before and the contents of an unplanned truck drop-off float sadly on the water's surface. “If they'd checked in with one of the organisations before they arrived, we could have sorted this in the warehouse and then distributed it,” says Olivia Long, a UK volunteer who's been here for two weeks. A refugee pokes around in the debris looking for anything salvageable. Tarpaulin and shoes are the most useful finds: tarpaulin because it reinforces the homemade shelters being erected, shoes because many travelled here in flip-flops.

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8.3 8.3 The Economist Magazine: Film Review of Burnt starring Bradley Cooper

This is a film review of ‘Burnt’ starring Bradley Cooper, published on The Economist Magazine’s website.

New film: "Burnt" Bradley Cooper is just too funny Nov 6th 2015, 10:25 BY N.B.

EVER since “The Hangover” turned Bradley Cooper into a Hollywood A-lister, he has been steering away from comedy and towards drama, but he has never been more hilarious than he is in his sidesplitting new film, “Burnt”. The only problem is that it isn’t supposed to be funny. Built on the shaky proposition that restaurant chefs are both divinely inspired artists and dangerously sexy rock-stars, Mr Cooper’s absurd vanity project is meant to be a searing portrait of genius, redemption and turbot-frying. But, actually, it is such a lip-smacking feast of pomposity and stupidity that its script, by Steven Knight, could easily be recycled for a Will Ferrell vehicle called "Anchorman 3: Ron Burgundy Goes Cordon Bleu".

It is, after all, a film in which the maitre’d of a high-end restaurant has to explain to his staff what the Michelin Guide is; in which newspapers run reviews of restaurants which haven’t yet served a single dish; and in which Uma Thurman, cameoing as a haughty English critic, has the priceless line, “I say to myself, ‘Simone, you’re a lesbian. Why did you sleep with Adam Jones?’”

The answer to that question is simple: everyone wants to sleep with Adam Jones. As legendary in the world of fine dining as Ron Burgundy is in the world of newsreading, Mr Cooper’s character is a perfectly stubbled, leather-jacketed, motorbike-racing Adonis. He also used to be the head chef of Paris’s best restaurant, before drugs and alcohol and all-round bad-assery got the better of him. But now, after years of self-imposed exile in a New Orleans diner, he is clean and sober and ready to make his comeback. All he has to do is to take over the restaurant in London’s Langham Hotel and snag his third Michelin star.

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Everyone, it seems, is willing to obey his every order—which is very nice for him, but very boring for the viewer. Partly, the other characters submit to him because, as mentioned, they all want to sleep with him, and partly it is because he is such a sensational chef. Not that “Burnt” reveals what is so special about his cooking. Like all cinematic foodies, Adam does lots of fruit-fondling and herb-sniffing, but no one ever says what sets him apart from the competition, or even what kind of cuisine he favours. Never before has a film set in a restaurant been so vague about what’s on the menu.

With no obstacles in Adam’s way, “Burnt” is padded out with go-nowhere scenes in which he lords it over a therapist (Emma Thompson) and a rival restaurateur (Matthew Rhys), but there is nothing standing between him and his third Michelin star except his own obnoxiousness—and, boy, is he obnoxious. “Burnt” buys into the Gordon Ramsay-fostered fallacy that to be a great chef is to be a monster of childish, short-tempered egomania, and so, for much of the running time, Adam is ranting and swearing and throwing crockery around, like J.K. Simmons’s music teacher in “Whiplash”, but without the wit or charisma.

It is impossible to care about this despotic psychopath’s ambitions, and although his tantrums can be unintentionally funny, in their Ferrellian excess, they can also be revolting. In one scene, the hulking Adam subjects Helene to a humiliating public tirade, and then grabs her by her shirt front and shoves her. Most viewers will be willing her to clonk him on the head with the nearest sauté pan, but instead she kisses him lustily in the alley behind the hotel. Maybe there’s nothing a girl likes more than a bit of verbal and physical abuse from her boss, or maybe she was bowled over by what, in “Burnt”, is considered the ultimate compliment: “I just think you and I are exactly the same,” he tells her. For her sake, you would hope that isn’t true

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9.3 9.3 Donald Trump’s address to Republican party members at Trump Tower in June 2015 on running for leadership of the Republican party.

Donald Trump is a business leader and reality TV show personality (The Apprentice) Here is the speech he made in 2015 announcing that he would be running for the leadership of the Republican party as a presidential candidate.

Wow. Whoa. That is some group of people. Thousands.

So nice, thank you very much. That’s really nice. Thank you. It’s great to be at Trump Tower. It’s great to be in a wonderful city, New York. And it’s an honor to have every- body here. This is beyond anybody’s expectations. There’s been no crowd like this.

And, I can tell, some of the candidates, they went in. They didn’t know the air- conditioner didn’t work. They sweated like dogs.

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They didn’t know the room was too big, because they didn’t have anybody there. How are they going to beat ISIS? I don’t think it’s gonna happen.

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Our country is in serious trouble. We don’t have victories anymore. We used to have victories, but we don’t have them. When was the last time anybody saw us beating, let’s say, China in a trade deal? They kill us. I beat China all the time. All the time.

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When did we beat Japan at anything? They send their cars over by the millions, and what do we do? When was the last time you saw a Chevrolet in Tokyo? It doesn’t exist, folks. They beat us all the time.

When do we beat Mexico at the border? They’re laughing at us, at our stupidity. And now they are beating us economically. They are not our friend, believe me. But they’re killing us economically.

The U.S. has become a dumping ground for everybody else’s problems.

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Thank you. It’s true, and these are the best and the finest. When Mexico sends its people, they’re not sending their best. They’re not sending you. They’re not sending you.

They’re sending people that have lots of problems, and they’re bringing those problems with us. They’re bringing drugs. They’re bringing crime. They’re rapists. And some, I assume, are good people.

But I speak to border guards and they tell us what we’re getting. And it only makes common sense. It only makes common sense. They’re sending us not the right people.

It’s coming from more than Mexico. It’s coming from all over South and Latin America, and it’s coming probably — probably — from the Middle East. But we don’t know. Because we have no protection and we have no competence, we don’t know what’s happening. And it’s got to stop and it’s got to stop fast.

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Those other politicians. They will not bring us — believe me — to the promised land. They will not.

As an example, I’ve been on the circuit making speeches, and I hear my fellow Republicans. And they’re wonderful people. I like them. They all want me to support them. They don’t know how to bring it about. They come up to my office. I’m meeting with three of them in the next week. And they don’t know — “Are you running? Are you not running? Could we have your support? What do we do? How do we do it?”

I like them. And I hear their speeches. And they don’t talk jobs and they don’t talk China. When was the last time you heard China is killing us? They’re devaluing their currency to a level that you wouldn’t believe. It makes it impossible for our companies to compete, impossible. They’re killing us.

But you don’t hear that from anybody else. You don’t hear it from anybody else. And I watch the speeches.

I watch the speeches of these people, and they say the sun will rise, the moon will set, all sorts of wonderful things will happen. And people are saying, “What’s going on? I just want a job. Just get me a job. I don’t need the rhetoric.

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10.3 10.3 A Walk in the Woods by Bill Bryson

In A Walk in the Woods Bill Bryson recounts his experiences of walking the Appalachian Trail. Accompanied only by his old college friend Stephen Katz, Bryson starts out one March morning in north Georgia, intending to walk the entire 2,100 miles to the trail's end atop Maine's Mount Katahdin.

We hiked till five and camped beside a tranquil spring in a small, grassy clearing in the trees just off the trail. Because it was our first day back on the trail, we were flush for food, including perishables like cheese and bread that had to be eaten before they went off or were shaken to bits in our packs, so we rather gorged ourselves, then sat around smoking and chatting idly until persistent and numerous midgelike creatures (no-see-ums, as they are universally known along the trail) drove us into our tents. It was perfect sleeping weather, cool enough to need a bag but warm enough that you could sleep in your underwear, and I was looking forward to a long night's snooze-- indeed was enjoying a long night's snooze--when, at some indeterminate dark hour, there was a sound nearby that made my eyes fly open. Normally, I slept through everything--through thunderstorms, through Katz's snoring and noisy midnight pees--so something big enough or distinctive enough to wake me was unusual. There was a sound of undergrowth being disturbed--a click of breaking branches, a weighty pushing through low foliage--and then a kind of large, vaguely irritable snuffling noise.

Bear!

I sat bolt upright. Instantly every neuron in my brain was awake and dashing around frantically, like ants when you disturb their nest. I reached instinctively for my knife, then realized I had left it in my pack, just outside the tent. Nocturnal defense had ceased to be a concern after many successive nights of tranquil woodland repose. There was another noise, quite near.

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"Yup," he replied in a weary but normal voice.

"What was that?"

"How the hell should I know."

"It sounded big."

"Everything sounds big in the woods."

This was true. Once a skunk had come plodding through our camp and it had sounded like a stegosaurus. There was another heavy rustle and then the sound of lapping at the spring. It was having a drink, whatever it was.

I shuffled on my knees to the foot of the tent, cautiously unzipped the mesh and peered out, but it was pitch black. As quietly as I could, I brought in my backpack and with the light of a small flashlight searched through it for my knife. When I found it and opened the blade I was appalled at how wimpy it looked. It was a perfectly respectable appliance for, say, buttering pancakes, but patently inadequate for defending oneself against 400 pounds of ravenous fur.

Carefully, very carefully, I climbed from the tent and put on the flashlight, which cast a distressingly feeble beam. Something about fifteen or twenty feet away looked up at me. I couldn't see anything at all of its shape or size--only two shining eyes. It went silent, whatever it was, and stared back at me.

"Stephen," I whispered at his tent, "did you pack a knife?"

"No."

"Have you get anything sharp at all?"

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I made a despairing face. "Anything a little more vicious than that?

Because, you see, there is definitely something out here."

"It's probably just a skunk."

"Then it's one big skunk. Its eyes are three feet off the ground."

"A deer then."

I nervously threw a stick at the animal, and it didn't move, whatever it was. A deer would have bolted. This thing just blinked once and kept staring.

I reported this to Katz.

"Probably a buck. They're not so timid. Try shouting at it."

I cautiously shouted at it: "Hey! You there! Scat!" The creature blinked again, sin- gularly unmoved. "You shout," I said.

"Oh, you brute, go away, do!" Katz shouted in merciless imitation. "Please with- draw at once, you horrid creature."

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