Wordsworth's Guide to the Lakes / a Romantic Circles Electronic Edition
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PARALLEL-TEXT TABLE OF WORDSWORTH’S REVISIONS TO THE GUIDE TO THE LAKES COMPILED BY NICHOLAS MASON (ORIGINAL 2015; UPDATED 2020) About This Table Using the Parallel-Text Tool The following table tracks sequential changes to the Guide to the Lakes ➢ Cells contain individual paragraphs from the printed versions across the five distinct editions Wordsworth published between 1810 and 1835. Even a cursory scroll through its pages will provide a general sense of ➢ A separate column is dedicated to each edition of the Guide the nature, frequency, and extent of the obsessive revisions Wordsworth ➢ Words/phrases added since previous edition appear in bold made over a quarter century. Those wishing to study the Guide in more depth will find this a valuable tool for discerning which of its core ideas were ➢ Words/sentences deleted since previous edition are crossed out concerns of a moment and which remained fundamental to the aging poet’s ➢ Simple rewordings appear in standard script worldview. ➢ Explanations for major revisions are in blue italics Over the course of the 1810s, Wordsworth pared the roughly 27,000-word Select Views letterpress (1e) into the 20,000-word “Topographical ➢ Wordsworth’s original footnotes appear in red Description” (2e) he appended to his River Duddon collection of 1820. ➢ Deleted paragraphs are shown as grey blocked-out cells Upon deciding to repackage his essay as a stand-alone guidebook, he subsequently drafted a series of new sections which brought its length to ➢ Down-arrows (↓) are used to preserve line-level parallelism in 30,000 words in 1822 (3e), 35,000 in 1823 (4e), and 38,000 in 1835 (5e). As paragraphs Wordsworth expanded over time this chart illustrates, the largest structural changes came in 2e and 5e. In the ➢ Paragraph numbers for ¶ 1-75 correspond with those in this edition’s former, Wordsworth rearranged key sections of the 1810 original, cut its transcription of the Select Views letterpress final eighteen paragraphs (¶ 58-75), and penned several new passages. Then, for the tourist-oriented 1835 edition, he drafted ten new paragraphs (¶ 121- ➢ Minor changes in punctuation, capitalization, or spelling are not noted 30) for his “Directions and Information for Tourists” and moved this entire in this table section to the head of the volume. For further details on the Guide’s origins, composition, revision, and influences, see the Introduction to this Romantic Circles edition. Wordsworth’s Guide to the Lakes, eds. Mason, Westover, and Stimpson (2nd ed., 2020) / A Romantic Circles Electronic Edition W ORDSWORTH ’ S G UIDE TO THE L A K E S / A R O M A NT I C CI R CL E S E LECTRONIC EDITION 2 ¶ Line 1810 (Wilkinson) (1st) 1820 (Duddon) (2nd) 1822 (3rd) 1823 (4th) 1835 (5th) SECTION FIRST. VIEW OF THE [Reordered for 5e, beginning with TOPOGRAPHICAL DESCRIPTION COUNTRY AS FORMED BY “Directions and Information for OF THE COUNTRY OF THE LAKES NATURE. Tourists” (¶ 121-151)] 1 1 At Lucerne in Switzerland there existed Switzerland, is 2 some years ago, and perhaps does still shewn a model of the Alpine 3 exist, a model of a large portion of the a model of a large portion of the 4 Alpine country encompassing the lake Alpine country which encompasses the 5 of the four Cantons. The spectator lake The spectator ascends 6 ascended a little platform and saw a little platform and sees mountains 7 Mountains, Lakes, Glaciers, Rivers, 8 Woods, Waterfalls, and Vallies, with 9 their Cottages and every other object object contained 10 which they contained, lying at his feet; in them, lying 11 all things being represented in their represented in their 12 exact proportions and appropriate exact proportions and appropriate 13 colours. It may be easily conceived that colours. 14 this exhibition afforded an exquisite exhibition affords an exquisite 15 delight to the imagination, which was which was thus imagination, which was thus tempted 16 tempted to wander from valley to tempted to wander from valley to valley tempting it to wander 17 valley, from mountain to mountain, at at will from mountain 18 will through the deepest recesses of the 19 Alps. But it supplied also a more solid a more solid and substantial But it supplies a more substantial 20 and substantial pleasure; for the sublime pleasure; 21 and beautiful region, with all its hidden 22 treasures and their relations and their bearings and relations 23 bearings to each other, was thereby is thereby 24 comprehended and understood at once. 2 1 Something of this kind (as far as can be far as it can be kind, without touching 2 performed by words, which must needs upon minute details and 3 be most inadequately) will be attempted be most inadequately) will here be individualities which would only 4 in the following introductory pages, attempted in the following introductory confuse and embarrass, will here be 5 with reference to the country which has pages, with reference to the country attempted 6 furnished the subjects of the Drawings which has furnished the subjects of the 7 now offered to the public, adding to a Drawings now offered to the public, 8 verbal representation of its permanent adding to a verbal representation of its 9 features such appearances as are permanent features such appearances as 10 transitory from their dependence upon are transitory from their dependence 11 accidents of season and weather. upon accidents of season and weather 12 ↓ respect to the Lakes in the North of 13 England, and the values and 14 mountains enclosing and surrounding 15 This, if tolerably executed, will in some them. The delineation if tolerably 16 instances communicate to the traveller, 17 who has already seen the objects, new 18 information; and will assist him to give will assist him in giving to 19 to his recollections a more orderly 20 arrangement than his own opportunities 21 of observing may have permitted him to him to make 22 do; while it will be still more useful to do 23 the future traveller by directing his 24 attention at once to distinctions in 25 things which, without such previous aid, 26 a length of time only could enable him 27 to discover. And, as must be obvious, And, as must be obvious, 28 this general introduction will combine this general introduction will combine 29 with the Etchings certain notices of with the Etchings certain notices of 30 things which, though they may not lie things which, though they may not lie W ORDSWORTH ’ S G UIDE TO THE L A K E S / A R O M A NT I C CI R CL E S E LECTRONIC EDITION 3 ¶ Line 1810 (Wilkinson) (1st) 1820 (Duddon) (2nd) 1822 (3rd) 1823 (4th) 1835 (5th) 31 within the province of the pencil, cannot within the province of the pencil, 32 but tend to render its productions more cannot but tend to render its productions 33 interesting; especially in a case like the more interesting; especially in a case 34 present, where a work wishes to like the present, where a work wishes to 35 recommend itself by a twofold claim, recommend itself by a twofold claim, 36 viz. by furnishing pleasing Sketches, viz. by furnishing pleasing Sketches, 37 and at the same time accurate Portraits and at the same time accurate Portraits 38 of those scenes from which they are of those scenes from which they are 39 taken. taken. It is hoped, also, that this Essay 40 may become generally serviceable by 41 leading to habits of more exact and 42 considerate observation than, as far 43 as the writer knows, have hither to 44 been applied to local scenery. 3 1 To begin then with the main the main outlines 2 demarkation of the Country, I know not demarkation of the country. I know not 3 how I can give the reader a more how to I can give 4 distinct image of this than by requesting image of these more readily than by 5 him to place himself in imagination himself with me in imagination 6 upon some given point; let it be the top 7 of either of the mountains of Great mountains of, Great 8 Gavel or Scawfell; or rather let him let us him 9 suppose his station to be a cloud suppose our his station 10 hanging midway between the two midway between these the two 11 mountains, at not more than half a 12 mile’s distance from the summit of 13 each, and but a few yards above their and not many but a few yards 14 highest elevation, he will then see we shall he will then see 15 stretched at his feet a number of Vallies, stretched at our his feet 16 not fewer than nine, diverging from the not fewer than eight nine, diverging 17 point, on which he is supposed to stand, on which we are he is supposed 18 like spokes from the nave of a wheel. 19 First he will note, lying to the south First, we he will note 20 east, the Vale of Langdale which will Langdale* [Note added] 21 conduct his eye to the long Lake of conduct the his eye 22 Winandermere stretching, as appears, Winandermere stretched, as appears, 23 nearly to the sea, or rather to the sands nearly 24 of the vast Bay of Morecamb, which Morcamb, serving here for 25 here serves for the rim of this imaginary the rim of this imaginary wheel;—let us 26 wheel, trace it in a direction from the trace 27 south east towards the south, and he and we shall he 28 will next fix his eyes upon the Vale of will next fix our his eyes 29 Coniston running up likewise from the 30 sea, but not (as all the other vallies do) 31 to the station which I have considered to the station which I have considered 32 as the nave of the wheel; and therefore as the nave 33 it may not be inaptly represented as a 34 broken spoke sticking in the rim.