A Framework for Analysis of Authorial Identity: Heterogeneity Among the Undergraduate Dissertation Chapters
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A framework for analysis of authorial identity: Heterogeneity among the undergraduate dissertation chapters Bárbara-Pamela Olmos-López Thesis submitted for the degree of Doctor of Philosophy Department of Linguistics and English Language Lancaster University August 2015 Declaration I hereby declare that this thesis has been written by myself, and the work in here is entirely on my own. The research in here has not been previously submitted for a degree in this or any other form. 01.08.2015 Pamela Olmos-López Abstract Thesis writing is an enterprise which integrates knowledge of different domains, i.e. the subject’s content, rhetoric, academic discourse, the genre they are writing, and research skills (Bartholomae, 1985; Read, et al. 2001; Johns, et al. 2006). The integration of these elements makes thesis writing a challenging endeavour, especially when facing it for first time, as is the case for undergraduates. Thesis writing at undergraduate level becomes more challenging when the writing is in a foreign language. In Mexico, undergraduate students are often required to write a thesis in English. However, researching writing at undergraduate level has sometimes been undervalued as undergraduates are considered to lack an authorial voice (Helms-Park & Stapleton, 2003; Stapleton, 2002). Based on the premise that every piece of writing contains voice (Ivanič, 1998), an element of authorial identity, I focus my research on exploring authorial identity.In my study I analyse how undergraduates, novice writers, express authorial identity across their dissertation chapters. I propose a framework for the analysis of authorial identity (Ivanič, 1998, Hyland, 2010, 2012) and communicative functions, and apply it to a corpus of undergraduate dissertations. The corpus consists of 30 dissertations that are written in English as Foreign Language in the area of Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages and Applied Linguistics (TESOL/AL) and translation. The framework includes analysis of first person pronouns, passives, impersonal constructions, reporting verbs and evaluative adjectives, which were found to be keywords in these dissertations compared to a reference corpus (the British English 2006 or BE06 corpus). The framework I propose will facilitate the analysis of the writer’s identity and communicative functions as they occur in each chapter of their dissertations. I also include a case study focussing on one participant with the aim of integrating the suggested framework with awareness and understanding of the participant’s self-presentation as a writer. I include some pedagogical implications for L2 writing research, suggesting that students could be made aware of the full range of choices available in academic writing and how they project different authorial identities. I close my thesis by exemplifying the framework within my own case of authorial identity and with a reflection on the authorial identity of speakers of other languages in dissertation writing. Keywords: Authorial Identity, EFL Academic Writing, Rhetorical Function, Undergraduate Dissertation Acknowledgements The writing of a PhD thesis is a long journey, a journey of life, learning, and experiences in which many people are involved. I would like to acknowledge the team of people whose support made this thesis possible, and hence helped me to achieve my goal. Each of these people contributed in a way and at different moments during the journey; thus, I am taking a chronological approach to mentioning them, although I recognise that some of these people have walked with me the whole way. I will, however, at the end mention three very special people. I am particularly indebted to Paul Baker, who introduced me to studies in corpus linguistics; the first course I took in my PhD studies. I would like to thank him for taking the time to follow my research as my examiner, for so carefully reading my thesis and for his valuable comments that have enriched my project. I cannot fully express my gratitude for his understanding of the needs of my research and for the role he played in it. In the process of data collection I want to acknowledge my great friend Claudia Diaz. She was very helpful in the gathering of the dissertations as she was my agent in Mexico; in this aspect, thanks also go to Naty, the secretary of the department. Her work on providing information about the participants and their background was crucial. Many thanks go to the research participants. They shared their dissertations and gave consent for me to analyse their writer’s authorial identity. I also want to acknowledge CONACyT, my PhD sponsorship for the four years of full-time study. A very special person I am deeply grateful to is Richard Xiao. Richard was my supervisor for a year, a very short time, but enough time to learn not only about the methodological process of using corpus, but also about life. I was honoured to be one of his last supervisees. My memories of his patience, dedication and integrity will always accompany me in my professional life. I also want to acknowledge Vaclav Brezina, for his work in the later stages of the thesis. His comments and feedback improved the quality of my research. I am grateful to many colleagues and friends. To Karin Tusting, whose feedback on my MRes was helpful to evaluate and assess my PhD research. I am also thankful to Karin for the informal chats we share over coffee about some exciting aspects of writing and identity. Teaching the Postgraduate Academic Study Skills course with her was also a great opportunity to learn from her experience and to put into practice what I was actually researching. In the same vein, I thank Judit Kormos for her advice and for lending me her ear to talk about my research as well as other personal concerns. Our conversations during our morning jogging certainly provided me with many life lessons. I am also grateful to Roz Ivanič, whose study on writer’s discoursal identity brought me all the way to Lancaster. Although she was retired by the time I arrived in Lancaster, I was honoured to have the opportunity to meet with her for coffee every now and then while updating her on my research. Her ideas and advice to develop my thesis made my position stronger. She showed interest in it, and she still follows what I am doing. I thank each and all of the friends I met during the programme. I include my friends from both programmes, Research Only and Thesis and Coursework, two ways of pursuing a PhD, but a diversity and richness in experiences and friendship. I feel grateful to them for the way in which we shared the challenges of PhD life and the enriching experience of writing a thesis. I am also thanking my very good friend Daniel Van Olmen for the great fun, happiness, advice, dinners that made the work and challenges easier and much more enjoyable. I am very grateful for the joy and company of my friends from my walking groups, Lancashire Walking Group and Scottish Hill walking and Activities Group. Spending my weekends with them on top of a hill, scrambling, finding a new summit, swimming in a loch or tarn, camping or hostelling filled my days with joy and gave me the energy and inspiration to keep on with my writing. I am deeply thankful to Margaret and Brian Cowling, for they were the best landlady and landlord I could ever have had. They always made sure that everything was right with the house and my working space, which was crucial to the smooth development of my work. I also thank them as it is because of them that I ended up in Mull, which was the first of my many writing retreats as my preface reveals. I am grateful to them as they not only opened the doors of a place to live, but also their own house and home, making me feel part of their family. I also want to acknowledge Hilda Hidalgo for proofreading my chapters and Sarah Horrod for providing feedback on the final pieces of my thesis. As I narrate in my preface, writing and walking cannot be separated for me. In this journey, I have walked with many people, but three of them deserve very special mention for their support was crucial to me in achieving my goal of obtaining my PhD degree and in many personal achievements. Greg Myers, my supervisor, for his wisdom, patience, advice, and willingness in giving me feedback when questioning everything that I wrote. Greg has been with me since the early stages of my PhD. His knowledge and depth of thought made me a more critical person. I am thankful for his enormous patience when working with me and listening to my many tales of hikes, hills, travels, and adventures, which he graciously every now and then related to my study, making the supervision process much more interesting. I express my eternal gratitude to him as his approach to working with me evolved according to my own personal development. Our meetings started with academic topics but ended as fascinating discussions about life and there was always learning therein. I am also thankful to him for his help in the later stages, reading the many versions of my chapters and my final thesis. Straight from the heart, thank you, Greg. Jane Sunderland, my former first supervisor, my co-author, my dear good friend. Words cannot express my gratitude for all that she has meant to me. As my supervisor, I thank her for her steady support and for always providing constructive critiques, and supporting the expression of my ideas, my own voice. Her enthusiasm and passion for life always showed me the light at the end of the tunnel.