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First Year Reader Student Essays | Spring 2020 Department of English College of Arts and Sciences 2 Table of Contents Page Editor’s Note 4 Writing 101 I. Comparisons 1. Angarebs and Assumptions, Ibtihal Kama 5 2. OOEHS Meets AUS, Mahira Pathan 8 3. Nablus or Ramallah? Tala Al Abweh 11 4. Sunday Mornings vs. Thursday Nights, Hind Al Habtour 14 5. Double Standards in India, Nadia Altaf 17 II. Cause/Effect 1. Causes of this Killer Virus, Hamad Al Hammadi 20 2. Haitian Earthquake’s Causes, Saud Al Mutawa 23 3. AUS Student Stress, Khalid Ali 26 4. Silence, Violence, and Money: Key Factors Behind Marital Disruption, Nadia Altaf 29 5. The Curious Case of Hannah: A Causal Analysis Essay on Factitious Disorder, Danyah Khan 33 III. Advertising Analysis 1. Smoking Kills the Ocean, Ramzi Al Sharawi 36 2. Feel Right at Home, Tala Abweh 39 3. Adopt Today, Furat Abdeljaber 42 4. Saving Sonja, Mahira Pathan 46 IV. Genre Analysis 1. Packaging Personal Care, Janainah Anam 49 2. Nike: Buying a Lifestyle? Youmna Enein 52 3. Sci-Fi Book Covers, Chris Spyropoulos 56 V. Introduction to Argument 1. Blackfish: Dark Side of Sea World, Syeda Maria Raza 60 2. Conspiracy Theories, Yusra Hassan 63 3. Animal Testing May not Be ‘Bad’ After All! Saud Al Mutawa 66 4. The School Uniform: A Stifling Unity, Nadia Altaf 70 VI. Reflection 1. Hidden Lessons in the Midst of Chaos, Shireen Ahmad 74 Writing 102 I. Reader Response 1. Love Will Always Win! Tala Al Abweh 77 2. Becoming Human, Mahira Pathan 80 II. Critique and Evaluation 1. Ethical Analysis of Cannibalism Aboard the Mignonette, Farah Watsy 83 2. Borderline Rock: 5 Seconds of Summer, Furat Abdeljaber 88 3. The Best Persian Food in Dubai, Khalifa Hamad Al Nuaimi 91 4. With Love, Mom. Mahira Pathan 94 3 5. How War Birthed the World’s Happiest Competition, Omar Abu Farha 98 6. Critical Evaluation of Technological Unemployment and Human Disenhancement, Khalid Al Hashemi 101 7. The Triple Talaq Bill in India, Fathima Moyikkal 104 III. Argumentation 1. The Dangers of Hate Speech: An Argumentative Essay, Amna AbulJalil 110 2. The Veggie Venture, Roha Arfan 113 3. Special Needs Children Need Special Attention! Shania Cardoz 116 4. The Effect of Trade War on China, Mohammed Al Dawood 120 5. The Culture of Fame, Mahira Pathan 123 6. A Message to Celebrities: Be A Whole Person; Not Just Half, Jana Bastouni 128 7. Can We Be Civil About Physician Participation in Executions? Marianne Breidy 131 8. Problems Resulting from the COVID-19 Pandemic and Their Solutions, Wanes Garabet Kalayejian 136 IV. Introduction to Research 1. Architecture: Science or Art? Deema Al Refai 144 2. Effective Self-Motivation, Eyad Mohammed Ali 151 3. Geothermal Power Should Be Adopted Globally, Mohammed Mahmoud Rais Ali 159 4. Valley Speak, Janainah Anam 163 5. Self-Objectification of “Picture Perfect” Images on Instagram, Jana Bastouni 167 6. Ethical Conflicts with Physicians and Lethal Injection, Marianne Breidy 172 7. Color Psychology and its Impact, Influence and Interpretations, Nikita Dileep 178 8. Does Money Bring Happiness? Khondoker Labi Rhaman 187 V. Reflection 1. Academic Writing: A Form of Expression, Rashid Al Suwaidi 191 2. How Important is Academic Writing? Batoul Ihab 194 3. Diary Entry: Reflections on My Writing Journey, Gouthami Pillai 196 4. My Journey with WRI102, Virgin Attala 198 5. Reflecting on a Living Nightmare, Lamya Al Suwaidi 201 4 Editor’s Note To say that the 2019-2020 academic year at AUS has been unusual would be an understatement. Witnessing traditional education being turned upside down and familiar physical spaces like classrooms and computer labs being replaced by virtual classrooms has been nothing short of extraordinary. For now at least, we no longer enter a classroom on campus and expect to be greeted by the familiar smiles of peers, or sit at desks that have been ours since the semester started. It saddens us to think of the many high school and university students who had their moments of glory stolen from them: student athletes who worked for years to arrive in their senior year, only to see the tournament season shut down. And all the other students who worked hard and struggled for years in anticipation of going up on stage in their school auditoriums to receive due honors and recognition--they too had to settle for joining online commencements, missing last opportunities for heartfelt goodbyes, handshakes, and hugs. But in spite of the challenges we have all encountered, it’s comforting to see how students at AUS have managed. And what is most remarkable is the level of resilience that so many students exhibited in adapting to these changes. Not only did students manage to get by, many excelled, as this collection of essays demonstrates. To all the first-year students entering AUS in the Fall of 2020, we certainly anticipate some of your anxieties. As the father of a student entering his junior year of university in the States, I know some of these anxieties. Some are questioning if they should even continue a university experience that takes place exclusively at the computer on the desk in the bedroom. Many students, my son included, are considering taking a gap year to wait out the whole pandemic/quarantine. For those of you who feel daunted by the prospect of succeeding in a writing course which will take place in a virtual classroom, we offer these essays to you. They are written by students who have been where you are now. Many of them also endured distance from classmates and teachers, and spent a good portion of their Spring semester in quarantine. Our goal with the DWS Reader is to offer students an opportunity to read outstanding essays which are current and culturally relevant. This time-honored project continues to represent the heart of what we are trying to achieve in the first-year writing classes in the Department of English: student empowerment and critical engagement. We hope you enjoy it! Editor-in-Chief: Chris Horger Editorial Board: Rachel Buck, Huda Bakhour, Susan Munday, and Chris Horger Cover Photograph: “Queen of Sheba’s Christmas Cactus,” Chris Horger Cover Layout and Design: Huda Bakhour and Adam Horger Text Layout: Huda Bakhour Essay Photo selections: Rachel Buck, Susan Munday, Huda Bakhour, & Chris Horger Contributors: Roger Nunn, Susan Munday, Maria Eleftheriou, Greg Vanderpyl, Huda Bakhour, Rachel Buck, Chris Horger, Neena Gandhi, Chris Weagle 5 101 Essays Comparisons Angarebs and Assumptions Ibtihal Kamal The heartbeat of the home in my blood, over 6000 miles away from where I was born and raised, beats like no other. Riding a rickshaw with the sound of the engine roaring in my ears and the sand blowing in my face, along with admiring the grandeur yet elegant simplicity of the date tree in my grandparents’ home was all an unexpected, pleasant surprise. Initially, poverty and crime were only some of the derogatory terms that floated through my mind. Despite my initial expectation of Khartoum, Sudan being the embodiment of a third world country, once I laid eyes on the land, the home that runs in my veins, I realized my preconceived notions of Khartoum were flawed. The modernness of the facilities, degree of conservativeness, and overall safety and atmosphere were quite unlike what I had presumed. Growing up as a Sudanese American, I constantly felt like my cultural identity was not concrete. I didn’t have a strong cultural connection to Sudan, despite my parents’ efforts to speak the Sudanese dialect at home. My parents also made it important that my brother and I attended events hosted by our Sudanese community. However, I still wasn’t quite in touch with my roots, so my parents decided to take me to visit my extended family in Sudan. Considering that I was born and raised in New York City, I was used to being in an open- minded society with a variety of food, technology, art, and people surrounding me. 6 Therefore, when I would overhear my parents talking to relatives in Sudan about the corrupt government and constant electricity cuts, I was horrified and assumed the worst about Sudan. Initially, I had expected Khartoum to be lacking in modern facilities, and rather have more traditional, worn-down commodities. As soon as we would land, a swirl of dust and wind, which I eventually came to know as a “kataha”, would greet me. Houses made of makeshift objects would be scattered everywhere. In these houses, I thought we would be forced to sleep on wooden beds with a thick string-like material as a base, just like I had seen in my sixth-grade history textbook. I still recall feeling quite embarrassed when we discussed ancient Nubia and attempted to discreetly drive any peering eyes away from me. A myriad of Google searches led me to believe that I would have to use a squat toilet, which is when the toilet is on the ground. Fear and shock coursed through my veins. The searches continued to bombard me with images of what is typically associated with “third-world”. Little to no electricity with candles mainly illuminating houses, lack of sanitary water with wells being the primary source of relatively decent water, and disconnectedness from the rest of the world due to a lack of internet connection would all be major issues. Although Sudan is not as advanced as some of its neighboring countries, such as Egypt, Khartoum combines tradition and customs with relatively modern facilities. Although “angarebs”, the aforementioned wooden beds, were present in the majority of households, many households, including ours, had modern beds, similar to the Western-style.