Mother Tongue 11.5 the Student Will Read Essay by Amy Tan and Analyze a Variety of Nonfiction Texts

A Mosaic of American Voices Video link at Virginia Standards thinkcentral.com of Learning Mother Tongue 11.5 The student will read Essay by Amy Tan and analyze a variety of nonfiction texts. 11.5a Use information from texts to clarify understanding of concepts. Meet the Author

Amy Tan born 1952 In 1989, Amy Tan’s first book, The Joy put her expertise to work as a language Luck Club, spent 40 weeks on the New development consultant for programs York Times bestseller list. Praised for its serving children with disabilities. Five authentic dialogue and its rich portrayal years later, she adopted a new career as a of Chinese history, the book established freelance technical writer. Tan as an insightful chronicler of the Tan took up writing Chinese-American experience and of Confronting the Past fiction as a form of therapy, hoping to the fierce and conflicted love between did you know curb her workaholic tendencies. Her ? mothers and daughters. Amy Tan . . . first short story, “End Game,” appeared • plays in a band called Troubled Times Born in Oakland, in Seventeen magazine, bringing her the Rock Bottom California in 1952, Tan spent her early to the attention of prominent literary Remainders with childhood in the San Francisco Bay area. agent Sandra Dijkstra. With Dijkstra’s Stephen King and other She enjoyed her first literary success at encouragement, Tan began writing a series literary celebrities. the age of eight, winning first prize in an of stories that evolved into The Joy Luck • has visited the White elementary school contest for her essay Club. For this tightly woven collection of House five times. “What My Library Means to Me.” Six short stories, Tan drew upon her personal • has had her works years later, Tan’s life took a tragic turn when story, exploring the generational and translated into more both her father and her brother died from cultural gap between Chinese mothers and than 20 languages. brain tumors. Her grief-stricken mother their American-born daughters. moved teenaged Amy and her surviving Two years later, Tan published her brother to Europe, settling in Montreux, second book, The Kitchen God’s Wife, Switzerland, where Tan graduated from a novel inspired by her mother’s life in high school in 1969. China. Though she switched her focus Although her mother had pushed from mother-daughter love to sisterhood her to become a neurosurgeon, in her third novel, The Hundred Secret the rebellious Tan defied her Senses, she once again drew on her mother’s wishes and studied mother’s life story in her fourth, The literature and linguistics in Bonesetter’s Daughter. As Tan explains, college. In 1974, she enrolled “My books have amounted to taking her in a doctoral program stories—a gift to me—and giving them in linguistics, but she back to her. To me, it was the ultimate abandoned her studies thing I ever could have done for myself after a close friend was and my mother.” murdered. Tan then Author Online Go to thinkcentral.com. KEYWORD: HML11-1262

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VA_L11PE-u06s41-brTon.indd 1262 3/24/11 3:06:52 PM text analysis: personal essay Amy Tan could have written a research paper to get across her points about language and cultural identity. Instead, she chose to write a personal essay, in which she combines her insights What on the topic with details from her own life. languages Just last week, as I was walking down the street with [my mother], I again found myself conscious of the English I was do you speak? using, the English I do use with her. Unlike a scholarly paper or a newspaper article, a personal Think about how you change the way essay gives the reader a snapshot of the writer’s life or you speak based on where you are and personality as well as his or her thoughts on a specific topic. whom you’re with. You might use slang As evidenced by the excerpt above, personal essays are written when talking with friends but polite, as first-person narratives. The author appeals to the reader’s formal language with adults. You might emotions through the rhetorical or persuasive power of speak English at school and another personal experiences. Tan uses anecdotes, or autobiographical language at home. In “Mother Tongue,” incidents, to create meaning and to persuade the reader to you will read one writer’s thoughts on understand her point of view. As you read this essay, note how her own different languages. Tan connects her ideas about the power of language with her QUICKWRITE Make a list of places and own experiences. situations where you use a different language or way of speaking. Then, for reading skill: identify main ideas each situation, write a brief quotation Amy Tan’s essay is organized into a series of paragraphs, that captures the sound of the language most of which develop one main idea, or central point. Facts, you use in that context. descriptions, or examples that are related to the main idea are called supporting details. When a main idea is not directly stated, you can figure it out by asking yourself how these supporting details fit together. Amy Tan uses vivid supporting details, drawn from deeply felt personal experiences, to make her points. As you read, use a diagram like the one shown to record the main idea of each paragraph and list the details that support that main idea.

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I am not a scholar of English or literature. I cannot give you much more than Analyze Visuals personal opinions on the English language and its variations in this country In this painting, the or others. artist represents an I am a writer. And by that definition, I am someone who has always loved apple in three different ways. What point about language. I am fascinated by language in daily life. I spend a great deal of my time language might the artist thinking about the power of language—the way it can evoke an emotion, a visual be making? image, a complex idea, or a simple truth. Language is the tool of my trade. And I use them all—all the Englishes I grew up with. a a PERSONAL ESSAY Recently, I was made keenly aware of the different Englishes I do use. I was Reread lines 1–8. How 10 giving a talk to a large group of people, the same talk I had already given to half do you respond to the a dozen other groups. The talk was about my writing, my life, and my book, author’s use of first- person testimony? The Joy Luck Club, and it was going along well enough, until I remembered one Explain your response. major difference that made the whole talk sound wrong. My mother was in the room. And it was perhaps the first time she had heard me give a lengthy speech, using the kind of English I have never used with her. I was saying things like “the intersection of memory and imagination” and “There is an aspect of my fiction that relates to thus‑and‑thus”—a speech filled with carefully wrought grammatical phrases, burdened, it suddenly seemed to me, with nominalized1 forms, past perfect tenses, conditional phrases, forms of standard English that I had learned 20 in school and through books, the forms of English I did not use at home with my mother. Apple (1983), Andy Warhol. Synthetic polymer paint and silkscreen ink on canvas, 14˝ × 11˝. © The Andy Warhol Foundation 1. nominalized (nJmPE-nEl-FzQd) forms: nouns formed from other parts of speech. for the Visual Arts/Artists Rights Society (ARS), New York. © The Andy Warhol Foundation, Inc./Art 1264 unit 6: contemporary literature Resource, New York.

VA_L11PE-u06s41Tongu.indd 1264 3/24/11 3:07:29 PM VA_L11PE-u06s41Tongu.indd 1265 3/24/11 3:07:33 PM Just last week, as I was walking down the street with her, I again found myself conscious of the English I was using, the English I do use with her. We were talking about the price of new and used furniture, and I heard myself saying this: “Not waste money that way.” My husband was with us as well, and he didn’t notice any switch in my English. And then I realized why. It’s because over the twenty years we’ve been together I’ve often used that same kind of English with him, and sometimes he even uses it with me. It has become our language of intimacy, a different sort of English that relates to family talk, the language I grew 30 up with. So that you’ll have some idea of what this family talk sounds like, I’ll quote what my mother said during a conversation that I videotaped and then transcribed. During this conversation, she was talking about a political gangster in Shanghai who had the same last name as her family’s, Du, and how in his early years the gangster wanted to be adopted by her family, who were rich by comparison. Later, the gangster became more powerful, far richer than my mother’s family, and he showed up at my mother’s wedding to pay his respects. Here’s what she said in part: b b GRAMMAR AND STYLE “Du Yusong having business like fruit stand. Like off-the-street kind. He is Du Reread lines 31–33. Note 40 like Du Zong—but not Tsung-ming Island2 people. The local people call putong. how Tan addresses her The river east side, he belong to that side local people. That man want to ask Du readers as you, as though in conversation. This use Zong father take him in like become own family. Du Zong father wasn’t look of informal language down on him, but didn’t take seriously, until that man big like become a mafia. helps her create a warm, Now important person, very hard to inviting him. Chinese way, came only to personal voice. show respect, don’t stay for dinner. Respect for making big celebration, he shows up. Mean gives lots of respect. Chinese custom. Chinese social life that way. If too Language Coach important won’t have to stay too long. He come to my wedding. I didn’t see, I Pronunciation Belies (line heard it. I gone to boy’s side, they have YMCA dinner. Chinese age I was nineteen.” 49) is pronounced with You should know that my mother’s expressive command of English belies how the stress on the second 50 much she actually understands. She reads the Forbes3 report, listens to Wall Street syllable (bih LYZ). (A Week, converses daily with her stockbroker, reads Shirley MacLaine’s books4 with word with a similar pronunciation is ease—all kinds of things I can’t begin to understand. Yet some of my friends replies.) Belies means tell me they understand fifty percent of what my mother says. Some say they “misrepresents” or “gives understand eighty to ninety percent. Some say they understand none of it, as if an inaccurate idea of.” she were speaking pure Chinese. But to me, my mother’s English is perfectly clear, What does her mother’s perfectly natural. It’s my mother tongue. Her language, as I hear it, is vivid, direct, command of English belie? full of observation and imagery. That was the language that helped shape the way I saw things, expressed things, made sense of the world. c c MAIN IDEAS Lately I’ve been giving more thought to the kind of English my mother speaks. Reread lines 49–58. 60 Like others, I have described it to people as “broken” or “fractured” English. But What supporting details I wince when I say that. It has always bothered me that I can think of no way to does Tan include to describe the way her describe it other than “broken,” as if it were damaged and needed to be fixed, as if mother uses English?

2. Tsung-ming (tsMng-mGng) Island: an island near the mouth of the Yangtze River, near Shanghai, in eastern China. 3. Forbes: a financial magazine. 4. Shirley MacLaine’s books: works by the American actress Shirley MacLaine (born 1934), many of which deal with reincarnation.

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VA_L11PE-u06s41Tongu.indd 1266 3/24/11 3:07:34 PM it lacked a certain wholeness and soundness. I’ve heard other terms used, “limited English,” for example. But they seem just as bad, as if everything is limited, including people’s perceptions of the limited-English speaker. I know this for a fact, because when I was growing up, my mother’s “limited” English limited my perception of her. I was ashamed of her English. I believed that her English reflected the quality of what she had to say. That is, because she expressed them imperfectly, her thoughts were imperfect. And I had plenty of 70 empirical evidence5 to support me: the fact that people in department stores, at banks, and in restaurants did not take her seriously, did not give her good service, pretended not to understand her, or even acted as if they did not hear her. My mother has long realized the limitations of her English as well. When I was a teenager, she used to have me call people on the phone and pretend I was she. In this guise, I was forced to ask for information or even to complain and yell at people who had been rude to her. One time it was a call to her stockbroker in New York. She had cashed out her small portfolio, and it just so happened we were going to New York the next week, our first trip outside California. I had to get on the phone and say in an adolescent voice that was not very convincing, “This is Mrs. Tan.” 80 My mother was standing in the back whispering loudly, “Why he don’t send me check, already two weeks late. So mad he lie to me, losing me money.” And then I said in perfect English on the phone, “Yes, I’m getting rather concerned. You had agreed to send the check two weeks ago, but it hasn’t arrived.” d PERSONAL ESSAY Then she began to talk more loudly. “What he want, I come to New York tell Writing in the first- him front of his boss, you cheating me?” And I was trying to calm her down, person point of view is a rhetorical technique with make her be quiet, while telling the stockbroker, “I can’t tolerate any more excuses. considerable persuasive Language Coach If I don’t receive the check immediately, I am going to have to speak to your appeal. A gifted writer manager when I’m in New York next week.” And sure enough, the following such as Amy Tan can cite Pronunciation Belies (line the facts of her personal 49) is pronounced with week, there we were in front of this astonished stockbroker, and I was sitting there experiences and present the stress on the second 90 red-faced and quiet, and my mother, the real Mrs. Tan, was shouting at his boss in them so vividly that syllable (bih LYZ). (A her impeccable broken English. d readers feel as if they word with a similar We used a similar routine more recently, for a situation that was far less are sharing moments pronunciation is from her life. Reread replies.) Belies means humorous. My mother had gone to the hospital for an appointment to find out 6 lines 66–91. Notice that “misrepresents” or “gives about a CAT scan she had had a month earlier. She said she had spoken very the author makes her an inaccurate idea of.” good English, her best English, no mistakes. Still, she said, the hospital did not point here by relating a What does her mother’s apologize when they informed her they had lost the CAT scan and she had come personal anecdote—a command of English belie? for nothing. She said they did not seem to have any sympathy when she told them vivid experience drawn she was anxious to know the exact diagnosis, since her husband and her son had from her own life. How died of brain tumors. She said they would not give her any more information does the dialogue in this anecdote appeal to your 100 until the next time and she would have to make another appointment for that. emotions and create So she said she would not leave until the doctor called her daughter. She wouldn’t meaning for you? Cite budge. And when the doctor finally called her daughter, me, who spoke in perfect evidence from the essay English—lo and behold—we had assurances the CAT scan would be found, to support your response. promises that a conference call on Monday would be held, and apologies for any suffering my mother had gone through for a most regrettable mistake.

5. empirical evidence: evidence derived from observation. 6. CAT scan: a three-dimensional image of structures inside the human body.

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VA_L11PE-u06s41Tongu.indd 1267 3/24/11 3:07:35 PM I think my mother’s English almost had an effect on limiting my possibilities in life as well. Sociologists and linguists probably will tell you that a person’s developing language skills are more influenced by peers than by family. But I do think that the language spoken in the family, especially in immigrant families 7 Language Coach 110 which are more insular, plays a large role in shaping the language of the child. And I believe that it affected my results on achievement tests, IQ tests, and the SAT. Hyphens In line 121, While my English skills were never judged poor, compared with math, English the phrase fill-in-the- blank modifies, or gives could not be considered my strong suit. In grade school I did moderately well, information about, the getting perhaps B’s, sometimes B-pluses, in English and scoring perhaps in the noun phrase sentence sixtieth or seventieth percentile on achievement tests. But those scores were not completion. Notice that good enough to override the opinion that my true abilities lay in math and science, hyphens are used to because in those areas I achieved A’s and scored in the ninetieth percentile or higher. connect all of the words in this phrase. Some This was understandable. Math is precise; there is only one correct answer. other examples of long Whereas, for me at least, the answers on English tests were always a judgment call, hyphenated phrases 120 a matter of opinion and personal experience. Those tests were constructed around are: hard-to-remember items like fill-in-the-blank sentence completion, such as, “Even though Tom was name, behind-the-back pass, and not-too- ______, Mary thought he was ______.” And the cor rect answer always friendly look. Work with seemed to be the most bland combinations, for example, “Even though Tom a partner to come up was shy, Mary thought he was charming,” with the grammatical structure “even with more examples of though” limiting the correct answer to some sort of semantic opposites,8 so you hyphenated phrases. wouldn’t get answers like, “Even though Tom was foolish, Mary thought he was ridiculous.” Well, according to my mother, there were very few limitations as to what Tom could have been and what Mary might have thought of him. So I never did well on tests like that. e e PERSONAL ESSAY 130 The same was true with word analogies, pairs of words for which you were Reread lines 107–129. supposed to find some sort of logical semantic relationship, for instance, “Sunset How does this anecdote is to nightfall as ______is to______.” And here you would be presented with appeal to you as a reader and contribute to your a list of four possible pairs, one of which showed the same kind of relationship: understanding of the red is to stoplight, bus is to arrival, chills is to fever, yawn is to boring. Well, I could author’s ideas? Explain. never think that way. I knew what the tests were asking, but I could not block out of my mind the images already created by the first pair, sunset is to nightfall—and I would see a burst of colors against a darkening sky, the moon rising, the lowering of a curtain of stars. And all the other pairs of words—red, bus, stoplight, boring— just threw up a mass of confusing images, making it impossible for me to see 140 that saying “A sunset precedes nightfall” was as logical as saying “A chill precedes a fever.” The only way I would have gotten that answer right was to imagine an associative situation,9 such as my being disobedient and staying out past sunset, catching a chill at night, which turned into feverish pneumonia as punishment— which indeed did happen to me. I have been thinking about all this lately, about my mother’s English, about achievement tests. Because lately I’ve been asked, as a writer, why there are not more Asian-Americans represented in American literature. Why are

7. insular: isolated. 8. semantic opposites: words opposite in meaning. 9. associative situation: a circumstance or story based on mental connections.

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VA_L11PE-u06s41Tongu.indd 1268 3/24/11 3:07:36 PM there few Asian-Americans enrolled in creative writing programs? Why do so many Chinese students go into engineering? Well, these are broad sociological 150 questions I can’t begin to answer. But I have noticed in surveys—in fact, just last week—that Asian-American students, as a whole, do significantly better on math Language Coach achievement tests than on English tests. And this makes me think that there are Hyphens In line 121, other Asian-American students whose English spoken in the home might also the phrase fill-in-the- be described as “broken” or “limited.” And perhaps they also have teachers who blank modifies, or gives information about, the are steering them away from writing and into math and science, which is what noun phrase sentence happened to me. completion. Notice that Fortunately, I happen to be rebellious and enjoy the challenge of disproving hyphens are used to assumptions made about me. I became an English major my first year in college, connect all of the words after being enrolled as pre-med. I started writing nonfiction as a freelancer the in this phrase. Some other examples of long 160 week after I was told by my boss at the time that writing was my worst skill and hyphenated phrases I should hone my talents toward account management. f f MAIN IDEAS are: hard-to-remember But it wasn’t until 1985 that I began to write fiction. At first I wrote using what Identify the main idea name, behind-the-back I thought to be wittily crafted sentences, sentences that would finally prove I had of lines 157–161. What pass, and not-too- mastery over the English language. Here’s an example from the first draft of a details support this friendly look. Work with main idea? a partner to come up story that later made its way into The Joy Luck Club, but without this line: “That with more examples of was my mental quandary in its nascent state.”10 A terrible line, which I can barely hyphenated phrases. pronounce. Fortunately, for reasons I won’t get into here, I later decided I should envision a reader for the stories I would write. And the reader I decided on was my mother, 170 because these were stories about mothers. So with this reader in mind—and in fact she did read my early drafts—I began to write stories using all the Englishes I grew up with: the English I spoke to my mother, which for lack of a better term might be described as “simple”; the English she used with me, which for lack of a better term might be described as “broken”; my translation of her Chinese, which could certainly be described as “watered down”; and what I imagined to be her translation of her Chinese if she could speak in perfect English, her internal language, and for that I sought to preserve the essence, but neither an English nor a Chinese structure. I wanted to capture what language ability tests can never reveal: her intent, her passion, her imagery, the rhythms of her speech and the 180 nature of her thoughts. Apart from what any critic had to say about my writing, I knew I had succeeded where it counted when my mother finished reading my book and gave me her verdict: “So easy to read.” 

10. my mental quandary . . . state: my mental predicament in its earliest form.

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Comprehension Virginia Standards of Learning 1. Recall What words does Tan typically use to describe her mother’s English? 11.5 The student will read and analyze a variety of nonfiction 2. Summarize In general, how did people react to Mrs. Tan’s use of English? texts. 11.5a Use information from texts to clarify understanding 3. Recall According to Tan, what aspects of language do achievement tests fail of concepts. 11.5g Recognize and analyze use of ambiguity, to reveal? contradiction, paradox, irony, overstatement, and understatement in text. 11.5h Generate and respond Text Analysis logically to literal, inferential, evaluative, synthesizing, and critical 4. Identify the Main Idea Review the diagram you created as you read. Based thinking questions before, during, on your notes, what is the main idea of the entire essay? Explain your answer. and after reading texts. 5. Compare Roles Tan describes situations in which she was forced to act as a go-between for her mother. In what ways do these interactions differ from the typical mother-daughter relationship? Explain your response. 6. Make Judgments Tan describes her mother’s English as “vivid, direct, full of observation and imagery.” Reread the story Tan’s mother tells in lines 39–48. Do you agree with Tan’s opinion of her mother’s speech? Why or why not?

7. Analyze a Personal Essay Describe Tan’s changing perceptions of her mother’s use of English. In what way did her changing views toward her mother influence Tan’s observations about the power of language? How does Tan reconcile the contradiction between her love of language and her mother’s limited Engllish? Cite evidence from the essay to support your response. 8. Interpret Title Tan uses the expression “mother tongue” as the title of her essay. State the usual meaning of this expression. Then, use each of the following examples to develop a different or expanded meaning for this term: • the idea of family talk (lines 28–30) • Tan’s description of her mother’s speech (lines 55–58) • Tan’s thoughts on language development (lines 107–110) Text Criticism 9. Different Perspectives Look at the essay again through the eyes of the following individuals. What important lessons about life and the uses of language might each draw from this essay? • an immigrant • the child of an immigrant • a doctor • a teacher

What languages do you speak? Tan claims that the language spoken within the family does more to shape the way a child speaks than the language spoken by his or her peers. Do you agree with Tan’s opinion? Explain.

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VA_L11PE-u06s41-arTon.indd 1270 3/24/11 3:06:41 PM Virginia Standards Language of Learning grammar and style: Use Appropriate Language 11.6a Generate, gather, plan, and organize ideas for writing to Review the Grammar and Style note on page 1266. For this essay, Tan chooses address a specific audience and a casual, conversational style that lets her establish a strong connection with purpose. 11.6e Adapt content, vocabulary, voice, and tone to her readers. One strategy that helps Tan create this distinctive style is her use audience, purpose, and situation. of informal language that contains contractions and idiosyncratic terms like Englishes. She also addresses her readers in a personal voice, using the pronoun you, as in the following excerpt: You should know that my mother’s expressive command of English belies how much she actually understands. She reads the Forbes report, listens to Wall Street Week, converses daily with her stockbroker, reads Shirley MacLaine’s books with ease—all kinds of things I can’t begin to understand. (lines 49–52)

Whenever you write, consider the audience you are addressing and choose the appropriate level of formality.

PRACTICE Rewrite the following sentences using informal language.

example It is often difficult to make sense of the rules of effective language. Sometimes it’s hard to understand what makes language work well.

1. A lack of education caused my mother to speak a damaged, limited kind of English. 2. To demonstrate my use of these techniques, I have included some excerpts from my recent work. 3. A substantial portion of my fiction relates to my personal experiences. reading-writing connection YOUR Expand your understanding of “Mother Tongue” by responding to the prompt. Then, use the revising tips to improve your essay. TURN writing prompt revising tips

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