Distinguished Student

Distinguished Student Cultural extinction: Distinguished

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Brazil facts Provides 3 or Provides three Provides 1 fact Student provides more accurate facts about the about the 0 facts facts about the Yanomami tribe Yanomami tribe Or Yanomami Facts are not Tribe. All accurate sentences are expository. Structure of a Includes topic Includes topic One part of the Two parts are not paragraph sentence, at least sentence, at least paragraph is not included 3 details, and a 3 details, and a included. Or concluding concluding Details do not sentence. sentence. relate to topic Details relate to Details relate to sentence topic sentence. topic sentence. Spelling and No spelling or 1-2 spelling or 3-4 spelling or 5 or more grammar grammar grammar grammar spelling or mistakes mistakes mistakes grammar (including mistakes capitals) Comments: Great job, Grant! You did a great job using complete sentences. Remember to indent your first sentence!

Score: 4/4 Proficient Student Cultural Extinction: Proficient

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Brazil facts Provides 3 or Provides three Provides 1 fact Student provides more accurate facts about the about the 0 facts facts about the Yanomami tribe Yanomami tribe Or Yanomami Facts are not Tribe. All accurate sentences are expository. Structure of a Includes topic Includes topic One part of the Two parts are not paragraph sentence, at least sentence, at least paragraph is not included 3 details, and a 3 details, and a included. Or concluding concluding Details do not sentence. sentence. relate to topic Details relate to Details relate to sentence topic sentence. topic sentence. Spelling and No spelling or 1-2 spelling or 3-4 spelling or 5 or more grammar grammar grammar grammar spelling or mistakes mistakes mistakes grammar (including mistakes capitals) Comments: Leah, this is a great start, but you need to add more details. Make sure you are using correct capital letters.

Score: 2/4 Developing Student Cultural Extinction: Developing

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Brazil facts Provides 3 or Provides three Provides 1 fact Student provides more accurate facts about the about the 0 facts facts about the Yanomami tribe Yanomami tribe Or Yanomami Facts are not Tribe. All accurate sentences are expository. Structure of a Includes topic Includes topic One part of the Two parts are not paragraph sentence, at least sentence, at least paragraph is not included 3 details, and a 3 details, and a included. Or concluding concluding Details do not sentence. sentence. relate to topic Details relate to Details relate to sentence topic sentence. topic sentence. Spelling and No spelling or 1-2 spelling or 3-4 spelling or 5 or more grammar grammar grammar grammar spelling or mistakes mistakes mistakes grammar (including mistakes capitals) Comments: Nick, you need to work on making complete sentences. Watch for spelling and capital letters!

Score: 1/4