Poetic Technique in Vikram Seth's the Golden Gate
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Poetic Technique in Vikram Seth's The Golden Gate by June Edvenson Thjømøe A Thesis presented to the Department of Humanities University of Oslo in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the Master of Arts degree in English Literature September, 2008 Oslo, Norway Table of Contents Acknowledgements i Dedication and Foreword ii 1. Introduction 1 2. Analytical Tools 4 3. Analysis and Comment to Date 11 4. Analysis 14 A. Beginnings: Sonnet 1.1 14 B. Dialogues 19 1. Voicemail and Phone Chat 20 2. Context and Conversation at a Chinese Restaurant 21 C. Party Contexts 31 1. Cocktail Party Culture 31 2. The Wedding Party 41 3. The Last Party 44 D. Nature 48 1. Characters in Nature 48 2. Seth Characterizing Nature 51 E. Activism and Acts 56 1. Speech and Social Activism: The Priest's Speech 56 2. Acts of Prayer & Salvation 63 a. Prayer to Saint Francis 63 b. Endings 65 5. Conclusion 69 APPENDIX A: Synopsis of The Golden Gate 80 BIBLIOGRAPHY 107 Primary Bibliography Secondary Bibliography Acknowledgements I would like to thank my advisor, Juan Christian Pellicer, for his insightful direction and support. I would also like to thank Professor Jakob Lothe for his guidance in the Thesis Writing seminar. i Dedication To my husband, Hans Mathias Thjømøe, for his steadfast belief in me and his support of my efforts in Norway Foreword Also born in '52, She grew up in Chicago, Hometown of gangsters, cronies, blues. To the Illinois forests and plains she moves. There, studied literature and law, Landscapes, philosophy, played in a band. Returned to Chi-town in '90 for law School, leading to hearings work, a job through friends, For the State, an esteemed but envied attorney. Determined to find true love and a friend, She advertised and met 'nice men.' Then Norway called; he is a Nordmann. She struggles for income there— does her best, Inspired by nature's beauty and rest. ii Introduction Limited analytical attention has been given to Vikram Seth's novel in verse, The Golden Gate, since its publication in 1986. In addition, comment has varied widely. Although most critical observers would agree that its moral points are worthy, some find the work panders to specific social and political issues and agendas, or is excessively didactic or trite. Seth's 'messages' in this modern morality novel include the value of friendship, the merit of nuclear disarmament, and the value of individual 'self-realization.' Little technical analysis has been done on precisely how Seth achieves his literary and poetic effects, analysis that elucidates the scope and variety of the work's meaning. The detailed analysis in this thesis ultimately suggests the greater significance of this work of poetic fiction. The means Seth uses to achieve effects are found in the poetic text. The analysis of that text in previous scholarship fails to sufficiently explore both the wealth of referential material and Seth's technical skill with language. My focus is on illustrating a variety of ways in which Seth uses specific poetic tools to achieve meaning and effect in The Golden Gate. This should result in broader agreement as to the work's importance as modern poetic literature, as well as invite further explication and annotation. I therefore see this thesis as a beginning, the beginning of a redress of a dearth of technical analysis of this important modern sonnet sequence. I provide an explication of a number of Seth's sonnets and sonnet sequences in the work by means of traditional 'close reading.' This involves holding a magnifying glass of analytical techniques to the work at the word, line, phrase, sonnet and sequence level. I include sonnets on a number of themes in order to illustrate the variety of effects Seth achieves in the work, and some of the ways in which they are intertwined in the work as a whole. I conclude by reviewing concerns of significance in evaluating the work from a literary perspective, and include the comments of some of those who have offered their critiques. Meaning in a poetic work such as this, a novel in sonnets, is, of course, direct in the sense that it is referential of 'actual' characters, events and things, as well as sharing a basic narrative plot, moving the story forward. However, it is also intentionally multi-referential; it is communicating at various indirect and oblique angles, and by multiple techniques. I attempt to give Seth's use of language and literary effects in this work their names, and a level of detailed recognition they have not had heretofore. Grounding Seth's work in the sonnet tradition is important, though historical analysis is not my focus. As Seth has stated, The Golden Gate grew out of his enthusiasm upon reading Eugene Onegin, written by Alexander Pushkin, as translated into English by Charles Johnson.1 Pushkin's 'comedy of manners,' published in 1833 in Russian, is considered one of the world's most well-loved long poems, a reflection of and embodiment of the early Romantic period in Russian literature. With its disjunctive relationship between a hero and a heroine, both seeking love, Pushkin explored "human archetypes" caught in the "attitudes" that governed "the towering fictional creations of nineteenth century Russia."2 Seth's work follows in the sonnet tradition of English poets of the 19th century.3 Nineteenth century Victorian sonnet writers used the sonnet sequence for, among other purposes, "clothing autobiographical material in fictional dress."4 The tradition of telling a narrative in a sonnet sequence continued into the 20th century in England and America where, as one scholar notes, we see the blurring of the role of the sonnet stanza, yet an increased appreciation for the sonnet's ability to provide "dynamic images" for a poet's development.5 Today, we note that Seth's sonnet novel has paved the way for other sonnet writers, with renewed interest in the sonnet form and sonnet sequence as a vehicle for narrative poetry and literary development.6 Seth's work in The Golden Gate exhibits a traditional literary approach to storytelling, and traditional nods to the humanitarian values honored by earlier sonnet writers. From, for example, his use of a 'hero' seeking love in the world, having a series of related adventures, to the use of jokes and puns, high and low humor, quick shifts in action, and the use of gravity, surprise and social comment, Seth follows closely in the traditions of his literary forbears. At the same time, Seth modernizes his story's parts and themes appropriately. 1 Pushkin, Alexander. Pushkin: Eugene Onegin and Other Poems. Translated by Charles Johnson. Edited by Charles Johnson, Everyman's Library Pocket Poets. New York, London, Toronto: Alfred A. Knopf, 1999. 2 Id. at Intro. 3 Lord Byron's Don Juan, first published in sequels between 1819 and 1824, is the first full reflection of English Romantic ideals in a sonnet-related narrative sequence. Byron, Lord George Gordon, Don Juan. Edited by Christopher Ricks, T.G. Steffan, E. Steffan and W.W. Pratt, Penguin English Poets. Middlesex, England: Penguin Books, 1973. 4 Fuller, John. The Sonnet. London: Methuen & Co., Ltd., 1972, 45. Fuller mentions several examples of semi- autobiographical sonnet sequences published in the 19th century, beginning with Venetia by Benjamin Disraeli. The form increased in popularity later in the century, with Elisabeth Barrett Browning's Sonnets from the Portuguese (1850), George Meredith's Modern Love (1862), Thomas Hardy's She, to Him (1866) and George Eliot's Brother and Sister (1869). 5 Id at 46. Wilfrid Blunt's Esther (1892) is noted by Fuller as a more modern sonnet sequence. Others he mentions include William Ellery Leonard's Two Lives (1926), and John Crowe Ransom's "Two Gentlemen in Bonds," from Selected Poems (1970). 6 Here, I note Anthony Burgess's posthumous Byrne (1998), finished in 1993, and Brad Leithauser's Darlington's Fall (2003). Burgess, Anthony. Byrne. New York: Carroll & Graf Publishers, 1998. Leithauser, Brad. Darlington's Fall: A Novel in Verse. New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 2003. 2 Seth uses his platform as an author to share secrets with the reader about the characters and their history, to jab at cultural prejudices, and to explore the popular culture of 1980s California. The Golden Gate is set in the San Francisco Bay area. Topics of Seth's comment include, among others, the role played by the Roman Catholic church in social activism, the struggles of homosexuals and bisexuals, the struggle of unknown artists against the fecklessness and fickleness of art critics' reviews, the roles of workers in Silicon Valley, the defense industry's endangerment of local and global life, and the beauty of the Bay Area, the ocean and life's natural wonders. Various portions of Seth's 'novel in verse' both bless and question those who struggle in their lives to create a worthy contribution to the world as we know it, with their balance of work and play, intimacy, chastity, love and friendship. Further, the sadness of disconnection from others, both intentional and unintentional, is explored, as well as the personal and private alarm one can suffer over estrangements from those one has loved deeply, either as friend, family or wife. I have selected sonnets from several different passages in The Golden Gate to more readily see the variety of specific poetic techniques and choices made by Seth. Through close reading, I examine aspects of theme and narrative purpose, as well as figurative and metaphorical techniques Seth uses to achieve effects.7 I also note some of the broader strokes Seth uses to unite the ideologies with which his characters struggle.