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Reply to Reviewer 2 Interactive Comments on “Perl: a Circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake Database” by Sina Muster Et Al
Reply to Reviewer 2 Interactive comments on “PeRL: A Circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake Database” by Sina Muster et al. We sincerely thank the reviewer for his/her positive and constructive comments on our manuscript. Our responses to the reviewer’s comments are highlighted in bold. Changes done in the manuscript are marked in italic. Page and line numbers refer to the marked-up manuscript version which is attached to this review as well as the new supplement. Anonymous Referee #2 Received and published: 20 February 2017 PeRL: A Circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake Database, Muster et al. The manuscript presents a new Permafrost Region pond and Lake (PeRL) database, a circum-Arctic effort to map ponds and lakes from high-resolution aerial and satellite imagery. The database includes 69 water body maps that are linked to regional permafrost maps, and describes water body classification and accuracy, and presents statistics of water body distribution for each site. The water body maps are also used together with permafrost maps to extrapolate water body statistics. The database is a very valuable contribution as it complement previous approaches, but there are some minor concerns that needs to be addressed. For example, there is much technical detail, but I am missing a discussion on some of the methods and materials described. The concerns are brought up in the order they appear in the manuscript. Discussion paper [Page 1, Lines 37-39] There are also study areas in the sporadic permafrost zone. Changed to “from tundra to boreal regions and located in continuous, discontinuous, and sporadic permafrost zones.” [Page 3, Lines 33-35] The selection process for the water body maps used in the database is not clear. -
A Circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake Database
Earth Syst. Sci. Data, 9, 317–348, 2017 https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-9-317-2017 © Author(s) 2017. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 License. PeRL: a circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake database Sina Muster1, Kurt Roth2, Moritz Langer3, Stephan Lange1, Fabio Cresto Aleina4, Annett Bartsch5, Anne Morgenstern1, Guido Grosse1, Benjamin Jones6, A. Britta K. Sannel7, Ylva Sjöberg7, Frank Günther1, Christian Andresen8, Alexandra Veremeeva9, Prajna R. Lindgren10, Frédéric Bouchard11,13, Mark J. Lara12, Daniel Fortier13, Simon Charbonneau13, Tarmo A. Virtanen14, Gustaf Hugelius7, Juri Palmtag7, Matthias B. Siewert7, William J. Riley15, Charles D. Koven15, and Julia Boike1 1Alfred Wegener Institute Helmholtz Centre for Polar and Marine Research, Telegrafenberg A43, 14473 Potsdam, Germany 2Institute for Environmental Physics, Heidelberg University, Heidelberg, Germany 3Humboldt University, Berlin, Germany 4Max Planck Institute for Meteorology, Hamburg, Germany 5Zentralanstalt für Meteorologie and Geodynamik, Vienna, Austria 6U.S. Geological Survey – Alaska Science Center, Anchorage, AK 99508, USA 7Stockholm University, Department of Physical Geography and the Bolin Centre for Climate Research, 10691 Stockholm, Sweden 8Los Alamos National Laboratory, Los Alamos, NM, USA 9Institute of Physicochemical and Biological Problems in Soil Science, Russian Academy of Sciences, Pushchino, Russia 10Geophysical Institute, University of Alaska Fairbanks, Fairbanks, AK, USA 11Institut national de la recherche scientifique -
Authors Response to Referee #1 Dear Referee, We Would Like to Thank
Authors response to Referee #1 Dear referee, we would like to thank you for the time and effort put into reviewing the manuscript. This response carefully addresses all the comments (our response is marked with an R: and written in italics). We further attach a change tracked version of the manuscript from which the changes proposed can be seen, see below this response. Best regards Heidi Kreibich on behalf of all co‐authors Referee #1 The objective of the paper is to present the flood damage database HOWAS21, and to demonstrate its use to support forensic flood investigation and for the derivation of flood damage models. Accordingly, first the database is introduced, with respect to both conceptual and technical contents, and data sources. Then, exemplary analyses of the two application areas are supplied and commented. The paper is generally well written and organised, methods and results are quite well explained; in this regard, I would suggest only minor revisions. Still, my doubt is about the suitability of the paper for publication in NHESS. In detail, two main aspects must be considered: 1) Most of the contents (at least from pg. 1 to pg. 7, out of 13 pages) replicate the book chapter of Kreibich et al. (2017) quoted in the paper; 2) the “new” part of the manuscript is simply limited to application of well‐known analysis tools on HOWAS21 data, without supplying any additional knowledge to the state of the art, e.g. on flood damage explicative variables and their weight, on data interpretation tool (N.B., exceptions are represented by section 4.1 and 4.2.3 that however supply data of interests only for Germany). -
Science Published: 22 November 2016 C Author(S) 2016
Discussions Earth Syst. Sci. Data Discuss., doi:10.5194/essd-2016-56, 2016 Earth System Manuscript under review for journal Earth Syst. Sci. Data Science Published: 22 November 2016 c Author(s) 2016. CC-BY 3.0 License. Open Access Open Data PeRL: A Circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake Database Sina Muster¹, Kurt Roth², Moritz Langer³, Stephan Lange¹, Fabio Cresto Aleina4, Annett Bartsch5, Anne Morgenstern¹, Guido Grosse¹, Benjamin Jones6, A. Britta K. Sannel7, Ylva 5 Sjöberg7, Frank Günther¹, Christian Andresen8, Alexandra Veremeeva9, Prajna R. Lindgren10, Frédéric Bouchard¹¹,¹³, Mark J. Lara¹², Daniel Fortier13, Simon Charbonneau13, Tarmo A. Virtanen14, Gustaf Hugelius7, Juri Palmtag7, Matthias B. Siewert7, William J. Riley15, Charles D. Koven15, and Julia Boike¹ 10 ¹ Alfred Wegener Institute Helmholtz Centre for Polar and Marine Research, Telegrafenberg A43, 14473 Potsdam, Germany ² Institute for Environmental Physics, Heidelberg University , Germany ³ Humboldt University, Berlin, Germany 4 Max Planck Institute for Meteorology, Hamburg, Germany 15 5 Zentralanstalt für Meteorologie and Geodynamik, Vienna , Austria 6 U.S. Geological Survey - Alaska Science Center, Anchorage, AK 99508, USA 7 Stockholm University, Department of Physical Geography and the Bolin Centre for Climate Research, 10691 Stockholm, Sweden 8 Los Alamos National Laboratory, Los Alamos, NM, USA 20 9 Institute of Physicochemical and Biological Problems in Soil Science, Russian Academy of Sciences, Pushchino, Russia 10 Geophysical Institute, University of Alaska -
Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory Recent Work
Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory Recent Work Title PeRL: A circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake database Permalink https://escholarship.org/uc/item/0sd5x3hc Journal Earth System Science Data, 9(1) ISSN 1866-3508 Authors Muster, S Roth, K Langer, M et al. Publication Date 2017-06-06 DOI 10.5194/essd-9-317-2017 Peer reviewed eScholarship.org Powered by the California Digital Library University of California Earth Syst. Sci. Data, 9, 317–348, 2017 https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-9-317-2017 © Author(s) 2017. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 License. PeRL: a circum-Arctic Permafrost Region Pond and Lake database Sina Muster1, Kurt Roth2, Moritz Langer3, Stephan Lange1, Fabio Cresto Aleina4, Annett Bartsch5, Anne Morgenstern1, Guido Grosse1, Benjamin Jones6, A. Britta K. Sannel7, Ylva Sjöberg7, Frank Günther1, Christian Andresen8, Alexandra Veremeeva9, Prajna R. Lindgren10, Frédéric Bouchard11,13, Mark J. Lara12, Daniel Fortier13, Simon Charbonneau13, Tarmo A. Virtanen14, Gustaf Hugelius7, Juri Palmtag7, Matthias B. Siewert7, William J. Riley15, Charles D. Koven15, and Julia Boike1 1Alfred Wegener Institute Helmholtz Centre for Polar and Marine Research, Telegrafenberg A43, 14473 Potsdam, Germany 2Institute for Environmental Physics, Heidelberg University, Heidelberg, Germany 3Humboldt University, Berlin, Germany 4Max Planck Institute for Meteorology, Hamburg, Germany 5Zentralanstalt für Meteorologie and Geodynamik, Vienna, Austria 6U.S. Geological Survey – Alaska Science Center, Anchorage, AK 99508,