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AFLOAT Episode 4: "Love Hurts" Written by Jeff Lee Byrem Registered with WGAw [email protected] 484-678-4663 jeffleenovels.com AFLOAT Episode 4: "Love Hurts" FADE IN: INT. PETERMANS’ HOME - MONDAY, SUPPER HOUR VIVIAN PETERMAN is in the utility room, folding the last of a pile of dried towels that sits on the drier. She wears a white blouse, chartreuse capris, bobby sox and black Keds; her hair is in a ponytail. Vivian stacks the folded towels on top of folded underwear in a wicker clothes basket. She grabs the basket, leaves the utility room, and climbs the short flight of stairs to the main level. SOUND of GARAGE DOOR opening. Vivian pauses and appears to be considering something. Visible through the doorway into the kitchen, the table has been set for dinner. SOUND of CAR ENGINE entering garage; the ENGINE STOPS. Vivian places the clothes basket on the floor at the foot of the steps leading upstairs SOUND of CAR DOOR SLAMMING. Vivian stands with her arms folded and looks down to the lower level. JERRY PETERMAN enters from the garage and places the car keys on a hook by the door. Jerry carries a sport coat and valise; his neck-tie is loose, and his shirt collar is unbuttoned. Jerry takes one step up but stops when he sees Vivian. JERRY PETERMAN What the hell do you want? VIVIAN PETERMAN Where did you go last night? Jerry sniffs disparagingly at Vivian and mounts the stairs. He pushes past her, but she grabs his arm and yanks him around. VIVIAN PETERMAN (CONTINUED) I asked you a question! 2. Jerry looks incredulously at her hand, then into her eyes, and then he laughs at her for a beat before turning serious; he yanks his arm free. JERRY PETERMAN (snarls) None of your goddamned business. Jerry walks up the stairs. Vivian looks angrily at her husband’s back. VIVIAN PETERMAN Just like it’s none of my business that you lied to the Chief about having that twenty-two. Jerry freezes at the top step for a beat and then slowly turns around. JERRY PETERMAN (sinister) That’s right, Vivian. Jerry descends the stairs. JERRY PETERMAN (CONTINUED) (threatening) It’s none of his business and it’s none of yours, so drop it. VIVIAN PETERMAN (defiant but wavering) Barry Moyer was shot with a twenty- two. You told Greg you knew he’d fired the gun, and now that gun is gone. Jerry stops close to Vivian and stares into her eyes for the two seconds it takes until she averts her eyes. A cynical smile plays on Jerry’s face for a beat. Jerry shakes his head and turns away from Vivian as if to go upstairs. She looks up. Jerry rounds so quickly on Vivian with a full-force, openhanded slap to the side of her face that she cannot avoid the blow. Vivian’s knees buckle, but she does not go down; shock is in her eyes but only for a beat. The shock is replaced by rage. She shoves Jerry; he falls backwards up the stairs. Vivian races downstairs. Jerry struggles to get up and does. 3. Vivian grabs the car keys from the hook on the wall as she heads into the garage. Jerry trips over the laundry basket and goes headlong down the stairs. SOUND of ENGINE STARTING and REVVING. Jerry struggles to his feet. The SOUND of the ENGINE DIMINISHES as Vivian backs the car from the garage. Jerry rushes into the garage. EXT. PETERMANS’ HOME - CONTINUOUS Vivian roars down the street in the Chrysler. Jerry sprints out of the garage in pursuit, but is quickly winded and stops. Standing in the middle of the street, his expression suddenly reveals embarrassment; he quickly scans the neighbors’ homes. JERRY PETERMAN (enraged but under his breath)) Son-of-a-BITCH! Wild-eyed, Jerry storms back into the garage. INT. PETERMANS’ HOME - CONTINUOUS Jerry runs up the stairs, and in a rage, whips every piece of folded laundry in the clothes basket around the living room and then throws the clothes basket down the stairs. He roars and pounds on the sliding doors of the coat closet until angry tears appear. Bawling, he leans his back against the front door and slowly slides to the floor where he sits and cries like a brat. GREGORY PETERMAN stands inside his bedroom with his back to the door. His eyes are wide with terror. DISSOLVE TO: 4. EXT. ATLANTIC OCEAN, TWENTY MILES EAST OF THE DELAWARE BAY - SPRING AFTERNOON, THE PRESENT Ultima Thule sails over long ocean swells under full sail in fifteen knots of a northwest wind beneath clear blue skies. ROLL CREDITS SERIES OF SHOTS: A) Susquehanna Water Gap north of Harrisburg, Pennsylvania B) Clearing along the Yellow Breeches near New Cumberland, PA C) The prairie west of Williston, North Dakota D) Port Townsend with the Puget Sound and snow-capped Cascades in the distance E) The Serenity (aka Ultima Thule) rounds Point Wilson seen from the gun emplacements at Fort Worden F) The snow-covered Elwha Valley in Olympic National Park G) The Serenity (aka Ultima Thule) plows through high seas near Cape Flattery, Washington H) Aerial shot of Tahitian mountains and coastline I) Ultima Thule (aka Serenity) sails across the Rangiroa Lagoon J) Inner Harbor, Baltimore, Maryland, 1970 K) 1985 Midtown Manhattan from an Upper West Side penthouse L) Homes on Pilottown Road and canal, the present, Lewes, Delaware END CREDITS M) Ultima Thule (aka Serenity) in the present with Billy Benton at the helm, diminishes in view as she sails under full sail toward the Atlantic’s eastern horizon in fifteen knots of a northwest wind beneath clear blue skies. DISSOLVE TO: INT. LEMOYNE DINER - CONTINUOUS A variety of CUSTOMERS are sprinkled about the diner. Waitress SOPHIE MACDONALD attends to them. Waitress GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER slides the meat loaf special in front of KARL MYERS, who is seated alone in a booth. 5. The special is a slab of meatloaf swimming in the same mahogany- colored gravy that fills a pool in the center of a large mound of mashed potatoes positioned next to a pile of corn. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER There you go, Chief. KARL MYERS Thanks Gertie. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER Guess your day ain’t been full of good times. KARL MYERS You got that right. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER You let that guy go, right? You think he may of done in the Preston kid? KARL MYERS Last night I called him long-distance in Ashtabula, Ohio, so no, I don’t think he did it. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER Scary to think we got a lunatic out there. We’re rooting for you, Chief. KARL MYERS Appreciate it, Gertie. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER I’ll let you get to it. Myers nods; Gertie departs. He watches Gertie’s swaying hips as she walks away, as do other MALE CUSTOMERS at that end of the diner. When Gertie heads behind the counter toward the kitchen, Myers pushes a fork full of corn into the potatoes and gravy and deposits the combination in his mouth. CORPORAL MAX TRAVALIO enters the diner, scans the customers, and spies Myers; they make eye contact. Myers nods; Max walks to Myers’ booth and sits. MAX TRAVALIO The Prestons crucified me. KARL MYERS Not surprised. Did you tell them I confirmed Brode was in Ohio? 6. MAX TRAVALIO It didn’t seem to register, and get this, they tell me Peterman goes to their church. KARL MYERS Our Peterman? MAX TRAVALIO They claim he’s a wonderful Christian man. Myers shakes his head and shovels food into his mouth. MAX TRAVALIO (CONTINUED) And at church, Peterman announces that we won’t believe his boy until another kid gets killed. Myers stops in mid chew and stares at Max for a beat. Myers swallows. KARL MYERS (dead serious) He said that. MAX TRAVALIO That’s what Preston said right before he started accusing you of being responsible for his son’s death. Myers continues to eat but there is a frown on his face. KARL MYERS Your forensic guys finish up at the Prestons this morning? Gertie approaches and interrupts. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER Can I get you something, Corporal? Max appears to concentrate on the question for a beat. Myers finishes his platter. MAX TRAVALIO How about a cup of coffee, black, and a big piece of pie al a mode? GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER Apple? MAX TRAVALIO Cherry. 7. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER Done. KARL MYERS Gertie? GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER Chief? KARL MYERS Same for me. Gertie gives the men two thumbs up. GERTRUDE MASONHEIMER Done and done. Gertie leaves to prepare the order. KARL MYERS So, forensics? MAX TRAVALIO They got a bloody, partial shoe print on the window sill that matches two prints in the flower bed. KARL MYERS And? MAX TRAVALIO Size eleven, Converse All-stars. KARL MYERS Good start. MAX TRAVALIO Agreed, but what you don’t know is that I’ve just come from seeing Wilkerson. He did the post-mortem already. Myers leans back with a “wow” expression on his face. MAX TRAVALIO I know, but he’s concerned about there being a lunatic out there and wanted to give us as much to go on as he could as quickly as he could. KARL MYERS Good man, him. 8. MAX TRAVALIO He is. KARL MYERS And he found? Gertie arrives with a cup for Max, which she fills from a coffee pot. Myers and Max watch as she tops off the cup already positioned in front of Myers. Gertie leaves. Myers looks expectantly at Max, who leans forward.

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