Third Grade Paper #2 Form A

Third Grade – Student Sample #2, Form A Prompt: What is your best plan for using your responses? Give your reasons why? Have you ever shared with the world or with your family? If you haven’t Andrew Carnagie shared his money. He gave $300,000,000 to the world! He talks about sharing money with the world. People like sharing money. According to Document A, Benjamin S. Carson likes giving money. Though his family was poor, his mom encouraged him to study hard. On Document E. there are six people , they all want popcorn, the kids want candy and they have $20 budjet, $5, $3, $2 and $1 = $20 dollars. People share money when they have a budjet. People share money with States, Countres, Continents even the world! If you share money you can help people. If you help the world you help every one. There is other people out there needing money. Prompt: What is your best plan for using your responses? Give your reasons why?

Third Grade: Anchor Paper #2

Have you ever shared with the world or with your family? If you haven’t Andrew Carnagie shared his money. He gave $300,000,000 to the world! He talks about sharing money with the world.

People like sharing money. According to Document A, Benjamin S. Carson likes giving money. Though his family was poor, his mom encouraged him to study hard. On Document E. there are six people , they all want popcorn , the kids want candy and they have $20 budjet, $5, $3, $2 and $1 = $20 dollars. People share money when they have a budjet.

People share money with States, Countres, Continents even the world! If you share money you can help people. If you help the world you help every one. There is other people out there needing money.

Reflection: Good first attempt -

Although there is an unstated thesis, (Resources should be shared) this paper would be so much stronger with a clear, concise thesis statement. (Resources should be shared because…..)

Writer provides some reasons related to the budget.

Vocabulary is stronger and not too general and does give one example from the movie budget. Writer could work on giving other examples to show meaning.

Flow and organization to paper is evident. Documentation is given but could be improved.