<p> July 2 email 2 from Kate James 9.2.2.3 Examples:</p><p>Summary of Revisions: I am suggesting deleting all these examples because I don’t think they are needed for this instruction, and many of them may actually be confusing here because choice among different forms of the same name is covered in 9.2.2.5, which explains why “D.W. Griffith” is the preferred form instead of “David Wark Griffith.” There are several good examples at the appropriate instructions within 9.2.2.5 so I don’t think any additional examples are needed there. I also think the example box is in a bad place because it’s underneath a reference to 9.2.2.6-9.2.2.8. If these examples were to be retained, they would need to be revised because many of them are incorrect (e.g. Sister Mary Hilay is preferred name plus title of religious vocation).</p><p>Proposed Revision:</p><p>EXAMPLE</p><p>Caedmon</p><p>William Shakespeare</p><p>D.W. Griffith not David Wark Griffith</p><p>Tony Blair not Anthony Charles Lynton Blair</p><p>Fats Domino not Antoine Domino</p><p>Capability Brown not Lancelot Brown</p><p>Anatole France not Jacques-Anatole Thibault</p><p>Ouida not Marie Louise de la Ramée</p><p>Ionicus not Joshua Charles Armitage</p><p>H.D. not Hilda Doolittle</p><p>Giorgione not Giorgio Barbarelli</p><p>Fra Angelico not Giovanni da Fiesole not Guido da Siena</p><p>Maria Helena not Maria Helena Vaquinhas de Carvalho Duke of Wellington not Arthur Wellesley</p><p>John Julius Norwich not Viscount Norwich</p><p>Sister Mary Hilary Sister Mary Joseph Cahill 9.2.2.7, 2nd Example Box:</p><p>Summary of Revisions: add name to form rejected as preferred name</p><p>Proposed Revision:</p><p>EXAMPLE</p><p>Benjamin Disraeli not Benjamin Disraeli, Earl of Beaconsfield Title acquired late in life; better known by earlier name </p><p>Caroline Kennedy not Caroline Kennedy Schlossberg Better known by name before marriage</p><p>Clean Copy:</p><p>EXAMPLE</p><p>Benjamin Disraeli not Benjamin Disraeli, Earl of Beaconsfield Title acquired late in life; better known by earlier name </p><p>Caroline Kennedy not Caroline Kennedy Schlossberg Better known by name before marriage</p><p>9.2.3.5 Examples:</p><p>Summary of Revisions: delete title of religious vocation from preferred name form</p><p>Proposed Revision:</p><p>EXAMPLE Bojaxhiu, Agnes Gonxha Name used in religion recorded as preferred name: Teresa, Mother </p><p>Samson, Annie Adèle Name used in religion recorded as preferred name: Cécile-Marie, Sister, F.J. </p><p>Ratzinger, Joseph Name used in religion recorded as preferred name: Benedict XVI </p><p>Clean Copy: EXAMPLE Bojaxhiu, Agnes Gonxha Name used in religion recorded as preferred name: Teresa</p><p>Samson, Annie Adèle Name used in religion recorded as preferred name: Cécile-Marie</p><p>Ratzinger, Joseph Name used in religion recorded as preferred name </p>