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UNIQUE AND INCOMPARABLE During the spring 2016 semester, advanced writing student Amy Mei wrote an essay about her daughter’s friends, in which she said that every child is “unique and not able to be compared.” One of the student teachers, Louise Crawford, taught Amy the word “incomparable,” and when we discussed the essay in class, we decided that everyone in the class is incomparable, as is the class itself. THE CLASSES Michael Hunter, Director, Adult Literacy Program, University Settlement Society June Foley, Writing Program Director, NYU Gallatin Volunteer Teacher, University Settlement Society Advanced Writing Class Dianne Ramdeholl, Instructor, Literacy in Action Course, NYU Gallatin GALLATIN STUDENT TEACHERS Mihika Agarwal and Tali Zilberman, Fall 2014 Grace Chan and Shireen Khandelwal, Spring 2015 Zhao Y (Sundy) Chen and Hannah Treasure, Fall 2015 Louise Crawford and Hannah Johnstone, Spring 2016 ASSISTANT TEACHERS FROM ADVANCED WRITING CLASS Selina Chong, Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong, and Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang — 2 — THE BOOK Editor: June Foley Associate Editor: Allyson Paty Designer: Katherine O’Kelly Photographer: Anna Robertson THANKS TO University Settlement Society Michael H. Zisser, Chief Executive Officer Melissa Aase, Executive Director Lucian Leung, Assistant Program Director, Adult Literacy Program NYU Gallatin School Susanne Wofford, Dean of the Gallatin School Millery Polyné, Associate Dean for Faculty and Academic Affairs Linda Wheeler Reiss, Associate Dean for Finance and Administration Gallatin Faculty Writing Committee, 2014-2016 Greg Erickson, Chair Chinnie Ding, Anne DeWitt, Hannah Gurman, A.B. Huber, Sara Murphy, Amanda Petrusich, Stacy Pies, Myisha Priest, Greg Vargo, Eugene Vydrin — 3 — ADVANCED WRITING STUDENTS FALL 2014 — SPRING 2016 Khahn Quoc (Ken) Au Wai Ping Chan Kelly Chen Elia Cheng Hung Fei (Steve) Cheng Selina Chong Rosa Garcia Jesus Gomez Sandra Huang Lian Di Jiang Rebecca Kong Li Lee Nancy Li Xiu Lin Emily Lu Aileen Luo Jia (Chloe) Luo Amy Mei Lorena Mejia Angela Ng Christine Ng Galyna Nyzhnyk Bettina Ockoumou Ennio Polanco Duangjai Ponvisutrakol Ana Ramirez Vivien Shin Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong Lisa Szeto Fang (Vivian) Tang Phachara (Noom) Tangsee Yuki Umeda Sze Ying Wong Kaity Yong Sophia Yuan Jessica Yunga Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang Qiong (June) Zhou — 4 — CONTENTS 12. INTRODUCTION, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang WRITING, READING, LEARNING ENGLISH 16. Letter to My Teacher, Christine Ng 16. The First Lesson, Aileen Luo 16. How to Improve My English, Rebecca Kong 17. Learning English: Please Cheer Me On, Christine Ng 18. Keep Learning!, Elia Cheng 19. Learning English, Learning Spanish, Yuki Umeda 19. Learning English, Learning Mandarin, Angela Ng 20. Learning to Listen, Speak, Read, and Write, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 21. A Book Store Surprise, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 22. E-Books, Yuki Umeda 23. The Best Gift, Jesus Gomez 23. Reading Chinese Cinderella, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 25. Report on The Life-Changing Magic of Tidying Up, Angela Ng 25. Amazing Grace Review, Amy Mei 26. Only When I Dance, Yuki Umeda 27. Big, Fang (Vivian) Tang 27. Reading Xilali Zhuan (Hillary Clinton biography), Aileen Luo NEW YORK CITY 30. New York City, Ana Ramirez 30. The Special New York City Tour, Yuki Umeda 31. The New York City Subway, Yuki Umeda 32. The Most Powerful Weapon in the World, Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong 33. A Good Time on the Subway in Spring, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 35. A Day in Central Park, Aileen Luo 35. I Learned to Play Volleyball in Central Park, Jesus Gomez 36. Finding an Apartment in New York City, Yuki Umeda 37. Obeying Traffic Laws, Lian Di Jiang 37. Passing the Road Test, Li Lee — 5 — 38. Times Square Performers, Selina Chong 38. Cake Shops, Vivien Shin 39. My Daughter’s Important Test, Amy Mei 40. Education in New York and Japan, Yuki Umeda 41. Discrimination for Brunch, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 43. Manhattan, Qiong (June) Zhou FAMILY AND FRIENDS 46. Mother, Galyna Nyzhnyk 47. My Beautiful Family, Jessica Yunga 47. My Mother, Khahn Quoc (Ken) Au 47. I’m Afraid to Think About It, Lisa Szeto 48. A Letter I Never Sent, Lisa Szeto 48. My Angels, Kelly Chen 49. My Daughter, Aileen Luo 50. My Great and Valuable Treasures, Elia Cheng 52. Pomegranate Seed: Learning with My Kids, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 52. Mom and Food, Li Lee 53. Unique and Incomparable, Amy Mei 54. My Best Friend, Ting Li, Jia (Chloe) Luo 54. My Inspiration, Fang (Vivian) Tang 55. Mina San, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 56. My Birthday, Li Lee 56. My Dog, Duangjai Ponvisutrakol 57. A Special Smile, Qiong (June) Zhou HOLIDAYS, SEASONS, WEATHER 60. A Columbus Day Walk, Selina Chong 60. Halloween, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 61. Halloween Surprise!, Sze Ying Wong 62. Silent Blessing, Nancy Li 63. Black Friday, Li Lee 63. New Life, Christine Ng 64. My Favorite Holiday, Emily Lu 64. Chinese New Year, Angela Ng — 6 — 65. 2016 Chinese New Year, Amy Mei 65. The Beauty of Each Season, Lorena Mejia 66. Four Seasons, Phachara (Noom) Tangsee 67. Beautiful Seasons, Li Lee 67. Daffodils, Amy Mei 68. How Was My Summer?, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 69. Welcome, Fall, Vivien Shin 69. The Coldest Morning in New York, Amy Mei 70. Weather and Mood, Elia Cheng MEMORIES 74. A Craving for Guavas, Rosa Garcia 74. I Teacher, Sandra Huang 75. My First Landlord, Sze Ying Wong 76. Ka-Nom-Jeen: Thai Spaghetti, Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong 77. Health Sports Day in Japan, Yuki Umeda 77. Fairs in Cali, Colombia, Lorena Mejia 78. Christmas in Ukraine, Galyna Nyzhnyk 79. Christmas in Colombia, Lorena Mejia 80. Hong Kong, Angela Ng 80. Home, Sweet Home, Ennio Polanco 82. Return to China, Wai Ping Chan 82. The History of My Country, Galyna Nyzhnyk 84. Domestic Violence in the Dominican Republic, Rosa Garcia 85. Japan’s Great Earthquakes, Yuki Umeda 86. Left Behind, Nancy Li 87. A Boy Named Manuel, Rosa Garcia 88. An Unfortunate Mother, Selina Chong 89. A Nightmare of War, Nancy Li TOWARDS A NEW LIFE 92. Towards a New Life, Bettina Ockoumou 93. Changing, Kelly Chen 94. My First Time in the U.S.A., Lorena Mejia — 7 — 94. Then and Now, Jessica Yunga 95. My Fridays, Jesus Gomez 95. My New Experiences, Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong 96. Volunteer, Lisa Szeto 97. My Ideal Life, Jia (Chloe) Luo 97. My Dream House, Phachara (Noom) Tangsee 98. No Boundaries, Phachara (Noom) Tangsee 99. If I Could Wish for Anything, Bettina Ockoumou FAVORITE THINGS 102. The Best Night Ever, Jesus Gomez 103. My Daughter’s Eraser, Yuki Umeda 104. White Canvas Shoes, Angela Ng 105. Winter Melon, Wai Ping Chan 106. Homemade Mosquito Repellent, Elia Cheng 107. My Special Place, Lisa Szeto 107. Music Passion, Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong 108. Soul of Music, Nancy Li 108. Exercise Is My Life, Jesus Gomez 109. Camping, Angela Ng 110. The Funniest Person I Ever Met, Sze Ying Wong 111. My Idol, Maradona, Jesus Gomez 112. Traveling and Visiting, Hung Fei (Steve) Cheng 113. Hot Yoga, Sophia Yuan REFLECTIONS 116. Almost Déjà Vu, Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong 116. What Is Money?, Rebecca Kong 118. A Good Lesson For Me, Kelly Chen 119. Thanks to Technology, Phachara (Noom) Tangsee 120. Technology, Lorena Mejia 120. The Social Network, Jesus Gomez 121. I Believe, Fang (Vivian) Tang 121. To My Dear Earth, Lorena Mejia 122. Life Needs Support, Sze Ying Wong 122. To Believe or Not to Believe, Jesus Gomez — 8 — 123. I Choose to Believe in God, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 124. God is With Us, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang 125. The One-Child Policy in China, Angela Ng 125. The Teachers, Lorena Mejia 126. Seeing, Sze Ying Wong 127. Seeing, Part 2, Sze Ying Wong 128. Failure is the Mother of Success, Lian Di Jiang 128. What Is Happiness?, Galyna Nyzhnyk 130. Happiness Is Always Around You, Selina Chong 131. We Are Siblings, Qiong (June) Zhou THE LITERACY REVIEW 134. A Rainy, Chilly, Beautiful Day, Jesus Gomez 134. My Mom, Xiu Lin 136. “No Spanish, No Food,” Elia Cheng 137. The Taste of Childhood, Galyna Nyzhnyk 138. My Secret New York, Watson (P’Man) Sriboonwong 139. God Bless You, Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang — 9 — INTRODUCTION UNIQUE AND INCOMPARABLE Qiao Zhuang (Grace) Zhang I really grew up in my writing in the three and a half years I have spent in the University Settlement Advanced Writing Class. In the beginning, I didn’t know if I could write. I didn’t recall if I was a good writer in my school in China. But gradually, I tried to write every week. I thought: Since I come to this class, why waste time in not bringing homework? I listened to some news in Chinese every day. It gave me thoughts to compose my essays. I remember I wrote my first essay, “Linsanity,” when Jeremy Lin had just become a superstar in the NBA. My classmates enjoyed my writing, which encouraged me to move on. My muse also came from my kids, my classmates, and my everyday life. The writing class gave me new eyes to explore everything around me. Each time I finished my essays, I fell in love with them in reading them again and again. Our class is unique and incomparable. One reason is the teacher, June Foley, who is the spirit of the writing class. I have to compliment her hard work, her personality, her expertise in English skills, and her acceptance towards her students of different cultures, ages, and English capabilities. June is willing to adapt and change so that more students can fit in. She feels proud when she sees progress for each of her students. Because of her, every diligent student has an opportunity to harvest their works and expand their horizon in life.