Fourth Grade Written Peer Response “Urgent Care” “Urgent Care”

One Saturday night, when I was 4, my sister and I were run- ning back and forth and we ran into each other. Then my cheek split open! My mom put a cloth on it and we rushed to Urgent Care. The wait was so long I almost fell asleep! Finally they took me into the doctor’s office. First I layed down on a chair. Second they started to pinch and sew my cheek together. I had to spend half the night there. After I had to go back severl times. That’s how the people at Urgent Care cared for me.

2 4th “Urgent Care”

1. If you were to provide a title for this story, which would you pick? A. “A Visit to the Doctor” B. “A Time When I Hit My Sister” C. “Caring for People”

2. In this story, the author uses language to keep the reader’s interest, an example is: A. “One Saturday night, when I was 4” B. “my mom put a cloth on it” C. “the wait was so long. I almost fell asleep”

3. One word that is not spelled correctly in this story is: A. several B. cheek C. people

4. In the space below, rewrite the introduction to make it more interesting for the reader.

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