Rewrite the Paragraph, Correcting the Errors

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MONDAY AND TUESDAY REWRITE THE PARAGRAPH, CORRECTING THE ERRORS. In February 1893, Thomas Edison opened the first movie set. Edisons studio, witch was only 50 feet long, could be turned easily so the son were always shining on it, one of Edison's earlyist films was called Fred Ott's Sneeze." Others' featured Annie Oakley and stars from Buffalo Bills Wild West Show. Movies sure have changed a lot since the days of Thomas Edison!

THURSDAY AND FRIDAY REWRITE THE PARAGRAPH, CORRECTING THE ERRORS. "Government is not the solution to are problem, government is the problem, explaned president Ronald Reagan. Reagan tried to make government better by cuting taxes and spending less. Reagan was born on February 6 1911 in Tampico, Illinois. A former movie actor, Reagan was known for being a excellent speeker. When he was shot just 69 days into his term, he joked with his wife, Honey, I forgot to duck!"

MONDAY AND TUESDAY REWRITE THE PARAGRAPH, CORRECTING THE ERRORS. Born on February 15, 1820, Susan B. Anthony learnt early in life about the value of justice. A teacher four many years, she become active in a movement that encouraged people not to drink liquor. Since Susan was a women, however, she was'nt allowed to speak at that movements rallys. So she found other causes. She traveled the country as a speaker against slavery and for womens rights Did you no that she was once arrested for voting. THURSDAY AND FRIDAY REWRITE THE PARAGRAPH, CORRECTING THE ERRORS. Has you seen the painting that shows a father and his unmarried daughter. The father in the painting is holding a pitch fork. That classic painting called American gothic was created by Grant Wood. Wood was born near Anamosa, Iowa, in February 1892. He left Anamosa on the nite of his high school graduation to enroll in art school. Later, he studyed in Europe. "A true art expression," he said "must grow up from the soil itself.