Thank You Jessica. Your Team Is Off to a Very Strong Start!

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Thank You Jessica. Your Team Is Off to a Very Strong Start!

Friday, April 1, 2011 10:09 AM

Thank you Jessica. Your team is off to a very strong start!

Friday, April 1, 2011 12:42 PM

This looks really good too Jessica. Let me do my due diligence and get feedback from everyone. I will get back in touch with you before April 8th.

Have a great weekend.

Wednesday, April 6, 2011 3:16 PM

Jessica,

We would like to have the board members added to the web site. Attached is a confidential roster for our Board of Directors. You can pull the names from the roster. Ed Seghers is the President. Bob Duckworth is the Treasurer.

Thanks.

Jenny

Wednesday, April 6, 2011 3:19 PM

Jessica – please see Ed Seghers comments below…..

Hi Jenny,

 I like our logo as well.  I would like to see the Board Members names somewhere on the website. No pictures.  I think the sponsors need to be highlighted a little more. I had trouble reading the names and we want anyone to click on the sponsors name and it will reveal their website.  I do like pictures of the staff. It makes it more personable. This includes Barbara Burton.

I know this is the first cut but this is my feedback. I would like to show it to the board on Monday. I have a light box if needed. Ed

Thursday, April 7, 2011 10:23 AM

Thank you, Kelly, for your input. I am sharing your comments with Jessica who is the Team Leader for the Richland College students. I look forward to additional comments.

Have a great day.

Jenny

I’ll offer a few thoughts. I also like your logo the way it is. I wouldn’t change it.

 -As for navigation, I’ve been told that people read a Web site in an “F” pattern. So top navigation or side navigation is good.  I like pictures, I think it humanizes your clinic. I’d suggest that someone take some professional shots of the Hope Clinic. The one of the building is a little dark.  I’d also offer a section in Spanish.  You guys will need to decide what color scheme to go with. One of the options doesn’t have enough color and the other has too much. I think there is a happy middle with just enough pop of color but still having white space. For instance, if you go to www.BaylorHealth.com you’ll see how color is used.  I attached the brochure we helped create in case that inspires anything (colors, etc.) (By the way, this wasn’t the final version but you get the point.)

I will look at it some more and let you know if I have any other thoughts.

Kelly

Thursday, April 7, 2011 5:48 PM

Jessica - Please note the comments from Cesar Moncada below. He is the VP for the Verizon foundation and recommended that we revise our web site. Looks like we are developing some trends in ideas here! I like the commentary best from Kelly. It’s pretty but just a little off for the mission. Kelly’s observations stage the site better.

CAM

Cesar Arthur Moncada Verizon Communications 600 Hidden Ridge, M/C E02E66 Irving, Texas 75038-3809 (972) 718-8003 Office (972) 650-1726 Fax [email protected]

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