Class 2 First of the Month Books

Class 2 Extracts from our First of the Month Books We have been trying to write a description of a setting. We read a story where Sam was lost in the woods. Do you think our descriptions are effective?

Daisy King …….dark and spooky……spooky noises from over there. Sam felt scared.

Katie Fawden …Sam was scared. …….spooky sounds…..he was very very scared

Skye HA he remembered him in the wood. He got lost in it.

Louie Reimer huge trees

Daniel Weston Sam was scared. The woods were big with howling sounds. It was dark He had good dreams with his blanket.

David Barnett …Sam saw shadows in the dark. It was scary.

Natasha Smith he was cold and scared. Suddenly an owl hooted. Sam froze for a minute or two. He could hear footsteps coming towards him. Suddenly there was a bright light flash before his very eyes. The tree was just the right height for Sam to climb. Sam heard someone calling him. …..a hot water bottle and a nice cup of tea.

Daisy Staite …pitch black…he could see shadows…. he got colder and colder as he stepped further. The trees were really high for Sam. Sam was warm now. …..darker and darker and darker

Alice Reast It was getting dark and I could not see. I was getting cold. I can see the moon hiding. I went straight on, it was the wrong way!

Fred Barnard He was scared He heard voices. He heard the wind blowing in the trees, bats in the trees.

Kieran Trippick ….Sam could see the moon, the moon was hiding amongst the trees. It was getting darker and darker. Sam could see a thing! Hollie Tomlinson It looked dark but I still carried on. Suddenly I heard a howl I froze for a minute or two.

Louis Brown The trees were swaying and the trees were rustling. Sam was lost. Suddenly a tree started to shake. He was scared and he was shivering.

Rebecca Parsons Suddenly Sam was lost in the woods. He heard twigs snapping and footsteps getting closer and closer.

Alexia Doughty The snapping sound was a twig … Sam was scared and frightened.

Geoffrey Flambert Then a twig snapped and it scared Sam. … and B to snuggle up with in his cosy bed.