Think and Write!

Think and Write! Day 1 Name Date Title of story “Marven of the Great North Woods”

Throughout the story, Marven faced many difficult situations and overcame many obstacles. What special characteristic or characteristics helped Marven to solve the problems he encountered? Use examples from the text to support your answer.

1. What will you be writing about? Underline the Focusing Question in the assignment above.

2. What information will you need to be able to answer the Focusing Question and to explain your answer? Turn to a partner. Look carefully at the graphic organizer as you discuss the answers to the questions below. Color in the circle next to each question after you have talked about it.

o What information will you put in the first two columns? o Where will you get this information?

o What information will go in the third column? o Where will this information come from?

o Why are you gathering all this information? What are you trying to figure out?

What special characteristic or characteristics helped Marven to solve the problems he encountered? Evidence Page Elaboration / explanation Used The problem Marven faced What this shows about Marven in your and how he solved it piece? Problem 430 smart - figured out how to have a good breakfast was not Kosher- couldn't eat meat meal without breaking the rules of his and dairy together religion ------Solution ate flapjacks and oatmeal with milk one day ate steak and oatmeal without milk the next day

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3. When the class is ready, your teacher will reread the story aloud. Your job is to listen carefully for information that will help you to complete the graphic organizer. During the read aloud, every time you hear some evidence from the text that you think belongs on the chart, about the problems Marven faced, how he solved them, and what this shows about him, raise your hand. The class will stop to discuss what you have noticed and decide whether to add that evidence to the chart.

You may have noticed that there is not much room to write in each box! Don't worry, your teacher will show you how to "take notes" in that small space using just key words and phrases.

Sometimes, you will use the author’s exact words, which is called “quoting the text.” Other times, you will use your own words, which is called “paraphrasing.”

4. Once you have taken notes, look back at your assignment, copy the Focusing Question onto your Writing Draft Sheet. Think about the evidence you found. How could you answer the Focusing Question in a single sentence? Turn and tell your partner how you might answer. 5. The answer to a Focusing Question is called a Focus Statement. With your teacher, develop a class Focus Statement. Then, copy that focus statement on the Writing Draft Sheet right underneath the Focusing Question.

Think and Write! Day 2

Name Date Title of story “Marven of the Great North Woods” 1. Look at your Writing Draft Sheet from yesterday. With a partner, take turns. Have one person read the Focusing Question and the other person read the Focus Statement. Then switch, so that you each have read both.

2. Look at your graphic organizer. Listen carefully as your teacher gives an example of how to write the first evidence paragraph of your response. Where are these sentences coming from? On your graphic organizer, check the box next to the evidence your teacher used to write this part.

3. Now comes the fun part! Talk your piece! Use your graphic organizer. Point to each row of the chart and tell your partner what you will write. Then listen as your partner explains what he/she will write.

On your own...

4. Look at your Writing Draft Sheet. Re-read what you have written so far. Then, write about each piece of evidence. Check off each piece of evidence on the graphic organizer as you write.

5. A Concluding Statement restates the focus of the piece. Look at your Focus Statement. How could you restate it? Use the same idea, but different words. Write your Concluding Statement at the end of your piece.

6. Now, think about this question: “Why was this characteristic so important? How was Marven's experience at the camp different because he was able to overcome these obstacles?” Your teacher will lead you in a discussion to help you think about this question, which will help you improve and expand your conclusion. When you are ready, add a few sentences to your conclusion to show your thinking about this question.

7. With a pencil in your hand, read your piece aloud to a partner. Revise and edit as you read.

Name Date Title of story: “Marven of the Great North Woods”

Writing Draft ______Teacher Pages Sample Graphic Organizer (Students may add additional evidence.)

FOCUSING QUESTION: What special characteristic or characteristics helped Marven to solve the problems he encountered?

Evidence Page Elaboration / explanation Used The problem Marven faced and how he What this shows about Marven, in your solved it and why you think so piece? Problem 430 smart - figured out how to have a breakfast was not Kosher- couldn't eat meat and good meal without breaking the dairy together rules of his religion ------Solution ate flapjacks and oatmeal with milk one day e ate steak and oatmeal without milk the next day

Problem 431 Smart- system worked so well that No system for paying the jacks - hard to tell who in a short time he was finishing needed to be payed or when they worked work early ------Solution Created a system- alphabetized, made a chart

Problem 434 Smart- he had someone to have He felt lonely and afraid breakfast with, sing and dance with ------This kept him from missing his Solution 436 family so much He made a friend, Jean Louis

POSSIBLE FOCUS STATEMENT: Marven was able to overcome the obstacles he faced because he was smart.

Additional notes to the teacher about this piece:

 There are many possible characteristics that can be supported by the text (adaptable, courageous, resourceful, etc.). Students may choose a single characteristic and provide several examples, or choose several characteristics with an example for each. What is most important is that each characteristic is supported with evidence from the text and that the connection between the evidence and the characteristic is explained (i.e., How does this show Marven is courageous?).

 To help students develop a deeper understanding of the obstacles Marven overcame in this story, you may want to substitute the "Can You See My Point?" graphic organizer for the one above. "Can You See My Point?" includes a space for drawing, as well as writing, each piece of evidence found.

Writing Sample

NOTE: This is for the teacher’s use only, not for students. The purpose is to show the teacher what the final piece might look like when students have completed their work. Marven was able to overcome the obstacles he faced because he was smart. For example, when Marven first arrived at camp he realized that breakfast was not Kosher. Marven couldn't eat meat and dairy at the same time, so he figured out how to eat flapjacks and oatmeal with milk one day and steak and oatmeal without milk the next day (pg. 430). Marven was very clever to figure out how to have a good meal without breaking the rules of his religion. Marven also used his brain to solve problems at work. When Marven came, there was no system for recording the lumberjacks work and pay. Marven created one, organizing everything by alphabetizing and making charts. Marven's idea worked so well that he was soon finishing his work early! (pg. 431) Marven even figured out a way to solve his biggest problem- being lonely. Marven decided to make friends with one of the lumberjacks, Jean Pierre, and then he had someone to eat, dance and sing with (pg. 436). This took his mind off his family. Making friends with Jean Pierre was probably the smartest thing Marven did! Marven was able to overcome many obstacles at the Lumberjack Camp because he used his brain. Living at the camp could have been uncomfortable, lonely and scary, but instead Marven figured out how to learn new things and have fun!

Name Date Title of story: Can You See My Point?

Focusing Question:

Evidence Page Elaboration / explanation Used in your piece? Evidence

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