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FLORIDA STATE UNIVERSITY
COLLEGE OF ARTS AND SCIENCES
CONSUMPTION
By
ALLISON MCENTIRE
A Thesis submitted to the Department of English in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the degree of Master of Fine Arts
Degree Awarded: Spring Semester, 2008
Copyright © 2008 Allison McEntire All Rights Reserved
The members of the Committee approve the thesis of Allison McEntire defended on November 30, 2007.
______Sheila Ortiz-Taylor Professor Directing Thesis
______Erin Belieu Committee Member
______Robert Olen Butler Committee Member
______Meegan Kennedy Hanson Committee Member
The Office of Graduate Studies has verified and approved the above named committee members.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Abstract ...... v
1. CHAPTER ONE ……...... … 1
2. CHAPTER TWO …...... …...... 6
3. CHAPTER THREE ……...... 20
4. CHAPTER FOUR ……...... 25
5. CHAPTER FIVE ……...... 29
6. CHAPTER SIX ……...... 36
7. CHAPTER SEVEN …...... …. 34
8. CHAPTER EIGHT ……...... ………… 39
9. CHAPTER NINE ……...... …. 47
BIOGRAPHICAL SKETCH ...... 55
ABSTRACT
As artist John Aubrey approaches the end of his life at the Pineywoods Resort, a late- Victorian tuberculosis sanatorium, he makes one last grasp for an enduring legacy when he latches onto Salome, a young nurse who believes she is pregnant with the child of God.
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CHAPTER ONE
The nurse grunts and jerks my chair against the marble foot of the column and pulls the bell for the lift. A gust of cold air on my face and the iron cage creeps down the shaft on eight wheeled and spinning legs. “I don’t like these electric lights. They‘re unwholesome. All I hear in the night is the buzz and pop.” The mechanism flips and the wire accordion door wheezes open. I smell tea olive and copper on the operator‘s gloves as the silver handle glides past and the floor slides level with the soapy hallway boards. She hefts the back of my chair, turns into the jackknifed wheels, and shoves me. I watch her wipe her forehead in the back wall mirror. “No notices. Third floor, anyone can clear him.” I cough. I shove my fist against my lips. The nurse jumps behind me and covers my mouth and nose with a clean cotton handkerchief. She holds her hand clamped over my face until the fit subsides. Thin pockets of rustbrown red streak my exhaled mucous. I am a ghost ship. These lungs of threadbare burlap are my lacerated sails. *** My newspaper, folded on my bed. “Edison Claims Westinghouse Alternating Current More Deadly than Direct. ” Red headline, and far under the fold, a drawing of a slumped bladder, the massive rotten carcass of a creature of the sea. The nurse shakes the paper open and spreads me over on the bed. She pulls my pants down around my ankles. In the basin on the nightstand the sponge waits, half immersed in tepid water. The nurse paints long, rowing strokes of soapy water down the muscles of my legs. “We didn’t have the artesian well back then, either, or the piping. Had to drag the wash water up from the kitchen, if you can imagine that.” “I well remember a time before indoor plumbing.” I shake the newspaper awake. The carcass is believed to be a specimen of an undiscovered species of an ancient, ink- producing squid. Dark men stand around the slumping bladder with their shirtsleeves rolled up to their elbows, smoking cigarillos and kicking boot points in the sand. A man spreads a net of rope and kelp and painted sandstone anchors before the body and 1
gesticulates, a hand like a club, at the camera. He has no teeth or collar and his hands are blacked away with resin grime and pitch. Another holds the flat nosed leaf of a banana plant in his fist and tries to shield the carcass from the sun. “There’s no call to get nasty, Mr. Aubrey.” Loose hairs collect in the lukewarm water. “De Lome Challenges Congress to Champion Sovereign Nations. Spanish Ambassador Criticizes War Hawks.” De Lome is a distant relative; I have never met him. The cartoon head on the page reminds me of a galleon with a farthingale iron hull, bobbling nose listing always to the right. Spanish accent and the listing movement of his head. The nurse bends over my body with a stethoscope and performs the percussive tapping ritual on my naked chest. She smells of lavender soap and bitters, and there is peppermint oil in her hair. “Today you take your operation.” She makes a record in her book. “I’m not frightened.” She pulls my pants up from my ankles and straps my belt back into place. “Only a child would be frightened.” The nurse closes my door and locks it. I hear the grind and click as the metal hull scrapes against the plug and the key turns over in the latch. *** The squid weighed 500 kilograms when it washed ashore in Tanzania, before women from the village came to cut and cart scraps of meat and gristle away. The botanist Charles Cleary speculates, “this strange fish is either a figure of the native imagination entire, or the most fantastic discovery of this century.” After analyzing samples of the cartilagel remnants, including the sharp, bird-like beak, he expects to expose an elaborate hoax. I kick the newspaper across the bedclothes and fasten the buttons of my shirt. Outside the shouts of croquet and the blunt thwack of pinewood mallets. A rat runs along the edge of the room and darts through the door of my water closet. The cheapest room on the nursing floor, the door doesn’t fit in the door frame. My hand curls over the lip of the enamel chamber pot that the nurse left on the bed beside me, but I am going to stand up and piss in my own flushing toilet. I heave my legs over the side of the bed and sit, grasping the chamber pot and the 2
iron headboard of the bed, my naked feet dangling just above the polished oak boards. I lunge forward, onto my feet, and the chain rattles as the pulley wheel turns and I am standing on my own legs, clutching the iron rail. I feel a rip in the paper sail, hear the guide-rope weight punch a hole through the lower shroud. An upward gust of phlegm knocks the rig against the lookout, where my withered heart hangs like a talisman against the creatures of the deep. A pool of urine collects on the floor between my feet. *** The newspaper lies flush on the floor, the squid floating on a wet circle of running ink. I sit slumped on the spine of the mattress in my shirtwaist, my trousers and cotton drawers folded and stacked on the head of the wardrobe. I hear the peg twist, and the iron key scrapes the peg against the hull. “Go away, this time is promised to me.” The nurse closes the door. I hear the click of the latch. “Very little is promised, Mr. Aubrey.” She brings the cotton underwear and turns her back, stooping to mop up my mess with the soiled newspaper. “ She winds the lamp, and the electric current hums and buzzes in its incandescent shell. “I miss the flickering gas lights. These manufactured lights are too bright.” She kicks open the door of my water closet and carries a silver mug and a sharp silver stylus to the burner that protrudes, like a copper-coiling king snake, above the flushing chamber on the head. I watch through the open door as she runs the sink to fill the mug, clamps a metal cup to the exposed coil under the gas nozzle, and drops a silver instrument in the water. When the water comes to boil, the metal instrument clangs and roils against the lip of the silver cup. The nurse unstraps my belt and pulls my pants down around my ankles. She draws the sponge along the inside of my soiled thighs, but she is a different woman. Her hair is red like the ink of poppies, and smells of shave lotion and something sharp and starchy, like curdling cheese. She says, “I need to change your linens.” I allow myself to be rolled out of the bed and into my wheelchair. She pushes me up against my desk and strips away the bed sheets, fan of falling fabric, veil of grimed and salt-stained cheesecloth. I open my register and review my monthly expenses. I shut the register and re-arrange my inks by viscosity and shade. On the second page of my sketchbook, a man with the lips and craggy jaw of a 3
goat. “Bring me pens,” I say, and the nurse opens my wardrobe and procures my nib box. I give the man a the shrunken, sloughing skin of an ancient, wizened man. His ribcage slumps over, broken, and the skin of his pectoral muscles sag under his chest hair the swollen teats of a wild dog, newly whelped. “The doctor will be here at any minute.” The nurse stirs the boiling water with the silver instrument. “I am not afraid.” She touches my shoulder. She has a prominent overbite and the kind face of a caged rabbit, but her skin is a eggshell clear as inquisition oil paintings of the Madonna. I draw horns curling from the man’s shaggy mane, the protruding legs spread like the legs of a woman. “Doctor has to take your adenoids, Mr. Aubrey. It‘s a common procedure.” The door opens, and the doctor kicks aside the pile of newspaper and soiled linens. He removes his hat and brandishes his bald spot like a horn. The nurse says “Aubrey, Doctor. Adenoid removal.” “Right.” The doctor consults his laboratory book. The nurse walks smart into my water closet and emerges with a small enamel bowl that I have never seen before. It curves in the middle around a u of steel plate. She fits this u against my lower lip, and holds it. She slaps the metal stylus in the doctor’s naked palm and stands next to him with the boiling water on the edge of the desk, on my sketchbook. There is a sharp blade on the end of the metal instrument, something like a palette knife, but far shaper. “Open your mouth.” The nurse strokes my hair. “Right, now be a man Aubrey, this will only hurt a minute.” I open my mouth. He plunges the razor-tipped instrument against the roof of my mouth and makes several quick twists that seem to grind away the root of my nasal cavity. “Right. Now, spit.” Mounds and lumps of red flesh tumble into the enamel bowl. My mouth fills with blood. Blood dribbles down my chin. “Go on and spit, man.” I spit. Bits of the roof of my mouth and a syrup of red blood floats in water shallows at the end of the enamel bowl. The nurse wipes my chin. “Go on and spit again, Aubrey. Good man. Once the bleeding stops, you should bring this man some brandy.” He claps his meaty hand on my back, like the sportsmen, the husbands and brothers of most of my fellow inmates, cuff each other in the dining room and after dinner over cigars. “Good work, old boy. Right.” He 4
makes a mark in his book. The nurse stands beside me with the enamel bowl pressed against my chin until the doctor closes the door. Then she wipes my mouth with a wet cloth. “How about that brandy?” “The doctor must be joking,” the nurse says. “Sit here and watch the hunters coming in, I‘ll ask if you can have some analgesic.” She turns my chair to face the window, and gives me a warm, wet cloth to hold underneath my mouth. “I’m not a child, I can handle a brandy,” I protest, but I’m weak, and the nursing staff is devoted to temperance as a national ideal, so sit and do as I‘m told. The nurse disappears behind the water closet door with the enamel bowl hugged against her body, a sliver of her black dress still visible through the stubborn doorway. If I twist in my chair I can see her body reflected in the mirror on the back wall over the bathing salon. I watch her. She sets the bowl on the cover of the toilet reservoir and reaches underneath her skirt, hiking layers of crinoline and silk up to her waist. She is wears the loose, non- constructive bloomers of a cartoon-page New Woman, and the determined expression of a suffragist in Punch. She yanks the bloomers to her knees, and she is standing over my toilet naked between the waist and knee. She dips her fingers in the enamel bowl, and rubs my blood there between her legs. A gentleman would speak up, but I am an invalid. I hold my tongue and watch the sky.
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CHAPTER TWO
The matron orders all patients to dance attendance at the Twelfth Night Ball, mobile or no. She sends the lavender nurse with the grim, loveless mouth to swaddle me in my satin cravat. I have not seen the surgery nurse for many days, but I think of her. The patients sit with their backs to the wallpaper and their dance cards chained to their waists. The few who still dance lay languid on fainting couches, on display for the sporting, social gentleman. I am forced into a corner. I sit, my hat on my knee, underneath an oil painting of the feet and sandals of the broken statue of Ozymandias. A man tells a joke and ripple of braying laughter crashes in a wave and floods the tennis conversation. The women that line the walls look up each time the men shift towards them, each one with the look of a hungry child in her eyes. Their cheeks and lips are blood red. They twist their hair in knots and lanyards that coil around the crowns of their heads like serpents. The women of this place have horns and hooves, and waists the size of swollen throats. There’s a flask of brandy in the doctor’s office, on the shelf beside his formaldehyde-soaked heart. “Mr. Aubrey, do you think there will be war with Spain?” Someone dying girl’s mother wants to include me in the manly conversation. She leans towards me and touches my knee, half-haunch of her enormous rump lifted off the velvet circle of the ballroom chair. Her daughter slumps against the wall, fanning herself, searching the room, desperate and hot. “Your daughter should be in bed. She looks fevered. We all should be in bed.” The woman . “This might be her last Twelfth Night.” She prods her daughter, and the pair limp away. I can see their corset cages through the fabric of their gowns as they walk, whalebone and ironstrap cages struck between one floor and the next. I sit alone for sometime after, waiting for the nurse to come and push me to my room. The ceilings break in vaults and meet at the center in semi-circles like heaving 6
breasts. Each vault tapers out to the edge with a sharp point, like a corset. I am near the ballroom’s grand entrance, and on the panel above my head, a painting of an angel. I lean my head against the wall. There is a crack in the angel’s face. I jerk the chair break, and shove my weight against the pushrims. My wheels bite and claw the carpet. I clatter and I heave. I stumble over the edge of the rug and almost fall forward on the marble floor, but I escape the shadow of the death that surrounds the ballroom and hems the celebrants in like a corset suffocates the waist. The door to the doctor’s office stands wide open, and no one behind the front desk. *** The doctor keeps his tools in the red leather bag he carries with him, but he keeps his heart in a jar on the shelf. I push aside the door and force my way towards the display case. The purple thing presses its face, flesh tender and raw like the liver, skinned of its periodontal sack, against the side of the glass jar. A dog’s heart. Dead worms crowd the pulmonary artery, frozen in fluid and straining in the posture of escape, semaphore ends where the dissection knife sliced. Beside the jar, a long wooden box the length of a pen knife. I open it. Inside, an ivory woman lies on a velvet coffin pillow. A section of her abdomen lies at her feet, leaving her heart and lungs and womb exposed. A curled fetus underneath her liver, the size and shape of a quarter piece of eight. “Mr. Aubrey?” Her voice shakes. She stands next me, over me, her long plain braid hanging over her shoulder like a ladder to her cheek. “I escaped.” She smiles. Her upper jaw bites forward like a beak. “My adenoids have improved.” I inhale once, broad and deep, to demonstrate. She smiles again, then covers her mouth with her hand. “What is your name?.” “You shouldn’t be here, Mr. Aubrey.” She takes the box from my hands. Before she puts it on the shelf, she slides the woman’s stomach over the torso of the model and snaps the missing piece into place. “I saw you in the closet with my blood.” 7
“I don’t know what you mean.” “I saw you painting your underwear.” Her hand snaps back, a limp night flower shriveling in the early morning light. “You’re pregnant. You’re trying to keep it from the matron.” She doesn’t wear a corset. Her waist is like the trunk of a tree, and nearly level with my head. I put my arms around her hips and try to hold her. She crashes back against the examination table. “Please don’t touch me.” “I can help you.” Her eyes avoid my useless legs. “I’m still a man, aren’t I?” She shakes her head. “I can‘t be.” Strands of hair and beads of perspiration fall loose on her forehead and catch the gas light, framing her face with a flickering halo. “I’m just late. Maybe ill.” “Salome, what in God’s name?” The matron, arms straining the sleeves of her black habit like two swollen blood puddings dangling from the butcher’s hook, barges through the door. Her piggish, tiny eyes swelter in their drooping red lids. Even her eyelids are fat, and angry. “The rules are quite clear, the management will have my hat, and you, Mr. Aubrey, how dare you leave the ball without permission!” Salome stammers. She says my name and looks at me, then looks at the matron and stuffs the pelt of her red braid in her mouth. But I am not entirely useless. “I came in looking for the doctor‘s flask, I know he had some brandy somewhere. This nurse caught me trying to climb the shelving.” “Mr. Aubrey…” Salome forgets to cover her mouth with her hand. The matron folds her arms over her massive chest and looks down her nose, over the rubberized perch of her temple-less spectacles, at my shrinking, rebellious body. “You caught me. I won’t lie about it. I’d rather not cover one sin with another.” I hold my hands open and shake out my sleeves at the wrist. “This nurse got here before I could filch a thing.” “Is that so,” the fat woman says, stroking her chin. A crop of black hairs protrude from a mole on her jaw, and she strokes the hairs, without consciousness, tweezing the occasional long bristle between thumb and forefinger and holding it near her nose for 8
examination. The brandy flask, and the formaldehyde heart, rest on a shelf four or five feet above my head. “Salome, run to the dormitory and undress for bed.” She waits for the girl to slip through the swinging door. Then she retrieves me from the display case and heaves her massive breasts against the wicker backing on my chair. “This is the price of your decadent, filthy life.” She pushes me into the lobby and onto the lift. “You’re a broken man, Mr. Aubrey. And for what, a few pictures published in a handful of degenerate publications?” “I don‘t need alcohol to paint.” “Why then, pray tell, were you attempting to steal it?” She stops my chair in the middle of the hallway and waits for my answer. A portrait of Mark Hanna with a pack of hotel pointers waits for my answer. There is a smudge of blue around his chin where the artist shaved a layer of fat from his jaw line. “I need it to stomach the company of invalids.” The matron rams my knees against the doorframe of my room. “I’m going to speak to the doctor about you. You’re not fit to share the air with our patients. Not fit.” She gathers up a sheaf of drawings, satyrs, mostly female, hairy tendrils sprouting from their monstrous nipples, and shakes them in my face. “This,” she says, “is rubbish. Plain trash.” She bangs out of the room and leaves me sitting in my chair, in my dancing jacket, my nibs scattered at my feet like discharged shotgun cartridges. An hour later, she sends the lavender nurse to help me into bed. *** I inherited three things from my goitered Spanish godmother: a crucifix blessed by Pope Pius VIII, the lace christening gown both she and I were baptized in, and a small gold box barnacled by rubies and emeralds, the mother of pearl inlaid fresco on the lid depicting the nativity of Christ. The christening gown and crucifix I sent to my cousin, who will have children and increase. The box I kept against unforeseeable disasters. When I open my eyes the next morning, the first thing I think of is how to get a hold of it. “The bursar is off duty on Sundays,” the nurse says. “Someone has the key to the bank vault. The hotel might catch fire. Bring me to 9
the man.” “You’ll have to wait until banking hours, Mr. Aubrey.” “Damn it, I am not a child.” She bathes me and puts me in the chair by the window. Through the trees as thick as cell bars I watch natural light reflected in phosphorescent puddles of green algae on the lake. A large white bird perches on a rotting limb near the waterline. It stood with its chest forced forward and its wings spread wide and made two long, loud cries like the tongue of a heavy brass bell striking the against its own swing. The nurse clatters over the threshold with the breakfast tray. “Can you see that bird?’ I tap the glass and twist in my chair. “What type of bird is that?” “Whooping crane, Mr. Aubrey.” She ties a napkin under my chin. “Whooping crane. Sounds like whooping cough. I’ll shoot one and have a hat made for you if you find me the man with the safe room key.” “Really, Mr. Aubrey, you are too queer to be borne.” She hands me the knife and the fork, and pours a tall glass of fresh orange juice. “Your will can wait a whole day‘s cycle, you‘re not out of the woods yet.” *** Monday morning, when the door opens, I am waiting on the firm edge of my prescription rubber mattress, and mostly dressed save the dress socks and garters and the tiny cufflinks in the shelf at the top of my wardrobe. The linens nurse fetches my fasteners and helps me into my chair. I refuse to eat until she agrees to help me over the threshold and into the elevator. In the bowels of the hotel, a strong room crouches behind a wire cage, a rough beast of a metal doorway, hard spinning captain‘s wheel to operate the lock. The bursar heaves against the spokes and the mouth of the great steel trap opens. Inside, box after box of valuable belongings. Tags labeled “no next of kin” dangle from key slots and twist against the inrush of air like late the moths of Indian summer. I tell the man my name, hand my passport up spread open on the wooden desk, and he brings a small locked box to the counter, opens it, and spreads the contents out over his newspaper, checking each item aloud against the catalogue. “Weatherall Fountain Pen,” he says, and lays the pen flat and firm on the boards with a clap. 10
“It was my first pen,” I say. I shift my weight from my right to left buttock. The man looks amused. “Shall I ring for the nurse to take you to the facilities?” “That gold box is all I want.” The man holds his hand up. “We have to check the manifest with every opening, it’s hotel policy.” He thumbs through an old sketchbook and makes the record, “Book of pressed flowers.” I sit in my chair while he presents, item by item, a catalogue of the worthless acquisitions that characterize my life. When he comes to the gold box, he tilts it forward as if to display its charms to a prospective buyer. “That aught to fetch a pretty penny,” he says. He traces the outline of the Virgin Mary’s mother-of-pearl halo with the nib-less hind-end of my first fountain pen. “The double layering here? Look Spanish. I can telegraph a man in Chicago who is interested in Inquisition artifacts, have the money for you in a matter of days. A week at the most.” “I stand amazed by the speed of commerce.” “What’s that?” He leans over the desk to have a better look at me. The hairs of his moustache claw at the links in the cage. “Fancy chair, Mr. Aubrey. I wouldn’t recommend a private sale. Those antiquities dealers will eat you alive, confined as you are. Best to just let me handle this for you.” He puts his hand over the baby Jesus. I bang mine on the counter with all the strength that I can muster, and shout like a drunk man swaggering at the end of a crowded bar, my voice crowing in clumps like the mating cough of the whooping crane. “Just give me the God damn box!” “Alright, alright. It’s your funeral.” The man passes the box through a rectangular window in the wire cage just at my eye level. “And the rest of your items?” “Lock them back up.” I wedge the box between my legs and heave against the pushrims. The man says, “You have to wait here for a nurse to come and fetch you. Hotel policy.” I push back again and he springs open a door beneath the desk and ducks through it, grabbing at my front wheel. “I’m sorry, buddy.” He stands behind my wheelchair with his foot wedged under the rudder wheel. “My hands are tied.” My fountain pen rolls down the desk and falls on the other side and shatters. Three hours pass before I am alone in my room with the door locked. 11
The box is Castilian, the work of Franciscan monks. On the underside, in the center, three cut emeralds shoot through the IXOYΣ. If you press the two outer emeralds at the same time and then depress the emerald at the center of the theta, a mechanism springs a wire trap, and the lid opens. A fragment of leather parchment, maybe two thousand years old or older, waits inside, inscribed with the words of the prophet:
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