<p> Typescript Form for Miscue Analysis</p><p>Book Title: Looking Like Me Author: Walter Dean Myers</p><p>1. I looked in the mirror and what did I see? 1.______</p><p>2. A real handsome dude looking just like me. 2.______</p><p>3. He put out his fist. 3.______</p><p>4. I gave it a bam! 4.______</p><p>5. He said, “Jeremy!” 5.______</p><p>6. I said, “That’s who I am.” 6.______</p><p>7. Along came my sister, fine as she can be. 7.______</p><p>8. “Hey, Jeremy,” she said, “You’re little brother to me.” 8.______</p><p>9. She put out her fist. 9.______10. I gave it a bam! 10.______</p><p>11. Jeremy and brother, that’s who I am. 11.______</p><p>12. Along came my father. 12.______</p><p>13. He said, “Having fun? 13.______</p><p>14. Because if you are, you need to add son.” 14.______</p><p>15. He put out his fist. 15.______</p><p>16. I gave it a bam! 16.______</p><p>17. I’m Jeremy, brother, and my father’s son. 17.______</p><p>18. I got a strange feeling I wasn’t half done! 18.______</p><p>19.______19. “Aren’t you a writer?” asked my teacher, Miss Kay. 20. “I saw you writing in your book today.” 20.______</p><p>21. “I’m a writer, spinning dramas that dance across the stage, a poet weaving mysteries that live upon the page.” 21.______</p><p>22. Miss Kay put out her fist. 22.______</p><p>23. I gave it a bam! 23.______</p><p>24. Say Jeremy, say brother, say son, say writer, that’s who I am. 24.______</p><p>25. I’m walking tall and I’m walking proud. 25.______</p><p>26. Looked in the mirror – I look like a crowd. 26.______</p><p>27. “You’re a city child.” 27.______</p><p>28. My skinny mailman grinned. 28.______</p><p>29. “And I see you’re really loving the city that you’re in.” 29.______30. “I’m a city child. 30.______</p><p>31. I love the dizzy heights, the concrete, the steel, the bright neon 31.______lights.”</p><p>32. The mailman lifted his fist. 32.______</p><p>33. I gave it a bam! 33.______</p><p>34. It is kind of amazing all the people I am. 34.______</p><p>35. “You’re an artist,” said my grandma. 35.______</p><p>36. “Your pictures make me smile. 36.______</p><p>37. I love your funny portraits, and your scenes have so much style!” 37.______</p><p>38. Grandma’s rings and bangles gave such a noisy bam! 38.______</p><p>39. They were really celebrating the kind of guy I am. 39.______40. “I know that you’re a dancer,” said a sweet girl whirling by. 40.______</p><p>41. “You move your feet to a salsa beat with a twinkle in your eye.” 41.______</p><p>42. She put out her fist. 42.______</p><p>43. I gave it a bam! 43.______</p><p>44. I added dancer to the answer of just who I am! 44.______</p><p>45. I know that I’m a talker with many tales to tell. 45.______</p><p>46. Jokes and news and secrets – I hope I tell them well. 46.______</p><p>47. My words are sometimes hurried; at times they come out slow. 47.______</p><p>48. At times they fly like snowflakes with everywhere to go. 48.______</p><p>49. Sometimes I let my words go free, like marbles off a shelf. 49.______</p><p>50. Sometimes I give myself a bam and keep them to myself. 50.______51. I saw Karen running, so I ran, too. 51.______</p><p>52. She said, “Hey, Jeremy. 52.______</p><p>53. What’s up with you?” 53.______</p><p>54. I said, “I’m a runner. 54.______</p><p>55. I just love to race with the spinning Earth beneath me, the wind blowing in my face.” 55.______</p><p>56. I gave it a bam! 56.______</p><p>57. When she put out her fist. 57.______</p><p>58. Then I added runner to my “I am” list. 58.______</p><p>59. My mom calls me a dreamer. 59.______</p><p>60. A silver-rayed moonbeamer, spreading fantasies across the Harlem sky. 60.______61. I dream of secret places, plaid clouds and hidden faces, black 61.______knights and maids who swoon and sigh.</p><p>62. My mom put out her fist. 62.______</p><p>63. I gave it a gentle bam, because that’s the kind of dreamer that I am. 63.______</p><p>64. Why don’t you find a mirror and some friends along the way? 64.______</p><p>65. Think of all the things you do and all the things you say. 65.______</p><p>66. Make a long list if you want to – have yourself an “I am” jam. 66.______</p><p>67. Then give yourself a great big smile and your fist a great big bam! 67.______</p>