1 Type of Comment: Ge = General Te = Technical Ed = Editorial

Template for comments Country: UK Date: 2016-04-14 Document: TG for WCS-based download services v1.0rc1 Project: MIWP-7b / MIG-T Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Comments Proposed change Resolution

Ed Change “23-03-2016” to “2016-03-23”, although of course it will be a different date Paragraph Ed Change link text & target to http://eur-lex.europa.eu/legal- below bullet content/EN/ALL/?uri=CELEX:32007L0002

Paragraph Ed Change “The Directive identifies what needs to be achieved, below bullet and Member States have two years … that define … will be met” to “The Directive identified what needed to be achieved, and Member States had two years … that defined … would be met” Ge Add sentence saying that the scope of this TG is the download of coverage data 3 ge To help service providers decide whether to implement download services via WCS, it would be helpful to add more information in this section on the benefits and constraints vis-a-vis WFS/ATOM particularly in relation to quality of service criteria. We are concerned about possible performance and capacity issues. Ed Replace ‘systems’ with ‘system’ in both the bold term & the first word of the definition Ed Replace “services” with “service” in term Ed Insert “network service” before the word “enabling” (make the words “network service” bold, as they will refer to (16)) Ed Replace “features” with “feature” in term Ed Replace “systems” with “system” in term (OK in the note) Ed Replace “services” with “service” in term Ed Replace “database” with “set of files” (20) NOTE Ed Replace “-spatial” with “’spatial’” Replace “-geographic-“ with “’geographic’” Consider replacing “which … scope – and includes” with “, which … scope, to include” Replace “term -spatial data” with “term ‘spatial data’” Replace “term –geographic data” with “term ‘geographic data’” Replace “as –data …Earth” with “as ‘data … Earth’“

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Ed Replace “services” with “service” in term (23) NOTE Ed Replace “term –(geographic) as feature” with “term ‘(geographic) feature’ as” Ed Change “Other Technical Guidance exist” to “Other Technical Guidance exists” Just above Ed Change “provided the” to “provided, the” second bullet

Third below Ed Change “datasets .” to “datasets.” the diagram Table 5 Get Te Turn into an atomic requirement Download Services Metadata

Table 5 Get Te Turn into an atomic requirement, which may then have two Download scenarios for conforming to that requirement – or are there two Services conformance class for this? Metadata Response Table 6: Get Te Change “can be requested” to “shall be requested” Spatial Data Set Request Te Change “can be described” to “shall be described” Describe Spatial Data Set request Te Replace last sentence with something like: This operation can be implemented in either of two ways: - By a Discover Metadata request to the Discovery Service - By searching the Get Download Services Metadata response. The first case depends on the service metadata record containing a list of spatial object types, which may be in (or referenced from) the Content Information section. The second case depends on the response including Layers metadata (?) Ge Assuming they are not disallowed, extend the note to say “although an IETF URI may be used as INSPIRE unique resource identifier, in which case it is placed in the ‘code’ field”

1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 2 of 3 Template for comments Country: UK Date: 2016-04-14 Document: TG for WCS-based download services v1.0rc1 Project: MIWP-7b / MIG-T Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Comments Proposed change Resolution

Ge Ed Replace “Support for the this” with “Support for this” (twice) Ed

Te Resolve with DS EL – will they allow e.g. ASCII GRID? Add whatever EL will allow to this table. Ed Reduce the spacing between “names” and “to” to single. paragraph Paragraph Ed Reduce the spacing between “versions)” and “that”

Example 5 Paragraph Ed Replace “servers” with “server’s”

Example 7 Paragraph Te Replace “acceptLanguages” with “AcceptLanguages” (as perTG Requirement 4) Example 7 Ed Find or create an INSPIRE Register of allowable languages and their 2 & 3 letter codes, and reference it, rather than list them in the document. Ed Find or create an INSPIRE Register of allowable languages and their 2 & 3 letter codes, and reference it, rather than list them in the document. Bilingual Ge Transfer this explanation to e.g. TG Discovery. It is specified examples there, but not so well described! Third para Ed Change “response to a such a” to “response to such a” Te

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