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Complete List of Authors: Balasubramanian, Meena ; Sheffield Children's NHS Foundation Trust, ; Sheffield Children's NHS Foundation Trust Fratzl-Zelman, Nadja; Ludwig Boltzmann Institute of Osteology at Hanusch Hospital of WGKK and AUVA Trauma Centre, Meidling, 1st Med. Dept. Hanusch Hospital O'Sullivan, Rory; University of Sheffield Faculty of Medicine Dentistry and Health, Medical School Bull, Mary; Northern General Hospital, Metabolic Bone Centre Peel, Nicola; Northern General Hospital, Metabolic Bone Centre Pollitt, Rebecca; Sheffield Children's NHS Foundation Trust, Sheffield Diagnostic Genetics Department Jones, Rebecca; Sheffield Children's NHS Foundation Trust, Paediatric Psychology Milne, Elizabeth; University of Sheffield, Department of Psychology Smith, Kath; Sheffield Children's NHS Foundation Trust, Sheffield Diagnostic Genetics Service Roschger, Paul; Ludwig Boltzmann Institute of Osteology at Hanusch Hospital of WGKK and AUVA Trauma Centre, Meidling, 1st Med. Dept. Hanusch Hospital Klaushofer, Klaus; Hanusch Hospital Bishop, Nick; Sheffield Children‘s Hospital, Department of Paediatric Bone Disease

X-linked osteoporosis, Idiopathic Juvenile Osteporosis, Bone biopsy, Bone Keywords: material properties, PLS3, Fractures

Search Terms: Fractures, Bone Fragility, X-linked osteoporosis, PLS3

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Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 Novel PLS3 variants in X-linked osteoporosis: exploring bone material properties 4 5 PLS3 6 Running Title: Osteoporosis and 7 8 Meena Balasubramanian1,2, Nadja FratzlZelman3, Rory O’Sullivan4, Mary Bull5, Nicola FA 9 10 5 6 7 8 6 3 11 Peel , Rebecca C Pollitt , Rebecca Jones , Elizabeth Milne , Kath Smith , Paul Roschger , 12 3 9 13 Klaus Klaushofer , Nicholas J Bishop 14 15 1 16 Highly Specialised Severe, Complex & Atypical OI Service, Sheffield Children’s NHS

17 18 Foundation Trust, UK 19 For Peer Review 20 2Sheffield Clinical Genetics Service, Sheffield Children's NHS Foundation Trust, UK 21 22 23 3Ludwig Boltzmann Institute of Osteology at Hanusch Hospital of WGKK and AUVA 24 25 Trauma Centre, Meidling, 1st Med. Dept. Hanusch Hospital, 1140 Vienna, Austria 26 27 28 4Medical School, University of Sheffield, UK 29 30 31 5Metabolic Bone Centre, Northern General Hospital, Sheffield, UK 32 33 6 34 Sheffield Diagnostic Genetics Service, Sheffield Children’s NHS Foundation Trust, UK 35 36 7 37 Department of Psychology, Sheffield Children’s NHS Foundation Trust, UK 38 39 8Department of Psychology, University of Sheffield, UK 40 41 42 9Academic Unit of Child Health, University of Sheffield, UK 43 44 45 Correspondence to: 46 47 48 Dr Meena Balasubramanian, Sheffield Clinical Genetics Service, Sheffield Children’s NHS 49 50 Foundation Trust, Western Bank, Sheffield S10 2TH 51 52 53 Ph 0114 2717025, Fax 0114 2737467, Email [email protected] 54 55 Conflicts of Interest: The authors declare no competing financial interests. 56 57 58 1 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 2 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 Keywords: Xlinked osteoporosis, idiopathic juvenile osteoporosis, bone biopsy, bone 4 5 material properties, PLS3, fractures 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 For Peer Review 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 2 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 3 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 ABSTRACT 4 5 6 Background: Idiopathic Juvenile Osteoporosis (IJO) is a condition that refers to significantly 7 8 lower than expected bone mass manifesting in childhood, for which there is no identifiable 9 10 aetiology. IJO classically presents in early pubertal period with multiple fractures including 11 12 metaphyseal and vertebral crush fractures, and low bonemass. However, with advances in 13 14 genetic screening, several causes of IJO have been recently reported in literature. 15 16 17 Methods: Here we describe two patients and provide information on their clinical phenotype, 18 19 genotype and bone materialFor analysis Peer in one of Reviewthe patients. 20 21 22 Results: Patient 1: 40year old adult male diagnosed with IJO in childhood who represented 23 24 with a hip fracture as an adult. Genetic analysis identified a pathogenic PLS3 hemizygous 25 26 variant, c.1765del in exon 16. Patient 2: 15year old boy with multiple vertebral fractures and 27 28 29 bone biopsy findings suggestive of IJO who also has a diagnosis of autism spectrum disorder. 30 31 Genetic analysis identified a maternally inherited PLS3 pathogenic c.1295T>A variant in 32 33 exon 12. Analyses of the transiliac bone sample revealed severe reduction of trabecular 34 35 volume and bone turnover indices and elevated bone matrix mineralisation. 36 37 38 Discussion: We propose that genetic testing for PLS3 should be undertaken in patients 39 40 presenting with a current or previous history of IJO as this has implications for genetic 41 42 counselling and cascade screening of wider family members. The extensive evaluation of the 43 44 transiliac biopsy sample of Patient 2 revealed a novel bone phenotype. 45 46 47 Conclusion: This report includes a review of IJO and genetic causes of osteoporosis, and 48 49 suggests that existing cases of IJO should be screened for PLS3 in addition to other candidate 50 51 known to cause childhoodonset primary osteoporosis. Through analysis of bone 52 53 54 material properties in Patient 2, we can conclude that PLS3 does have a role in bone 55 56 mineralisation. 57 58 3 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 4 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 4 5 6 INTRODUCTION 7 8 Idiopathic juvenile osteoporosis (IJO) is the descriptive term used to define primary 9 10 11 osteoporosis of unknown aetiology presenting in childhood. It is usually associated with 12 13 vertebral and metaphyseal fractures in the years leading to puberty. It has been previously 14 15 reported to not be associated with heritable genetic variants and usually diagnosed by a 16 17 process of elimination through exclusion of other causes of decreased bone density [Rauch et 18 19 al., 2000]. The classicFor pathophysiology Peer of IJOReview involves a dysfunction in cancellous bone 20 21 formation in two ways: fewer remodelling cycles and reduction in quantity of bone formed in 22 23 24 each of these cycles. This leads to thin trabeculae by the time of maturity [Rauch et al., 2000]. 25 26 Hartikka et al., 2005 reported heterozygous variants in LRP5 in a small number of 27 28 29 children with IJO more than a decade ago [Hartikka et al., 2005]. Genetic causes of 30 31 osteoporosis have now been increasingly identified due to advances in genetic screening, 32 33 with variants in genes with dominant, recessive and Xlinked recessive inheritance patterns 34 35 [Biha et al., 2016; Fahiminiya et al., 2014; Kampe et al., 2015; RochBraz et al., 2016]. 36 37 38 PLS3 (OMIM 300131) has 16 exons and is located on Xq23, it encodes a highly 39 40 conserved plastin 3 that binds and shown to have an effect on bone mineral density. 41 42 Plastin 3 is ubiquitously expressed in solid tissues and involved in the binding and bundling 43 44 of actin filaments in the cytoskeleton. Variants in PLS3 lead to significantly reduced bone 45 46 mineral density [Laarschot et al., 2016; Laine et al., 2015; McGovern et al., 2015]. Although, 47 48 49 the exact function of PLS3 in bone is still unknown, suggested roles of Plastin 3 includes the 50 51 processes of mechanosensing, converting applied mechanical loading forces into molecular 52 53 signals that are interpreted by the cells. More recently, it has been suggested to have a role in 54 55 the mineralisation process. Being located on the X , PLS3induced osteoporosis 56 57 58 4 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 5 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 has a more severe effect on males than females, although heterozygous carrier females are 4 5 also known have earlyonset osteoporosis. 6 7 8 Here, we report two patients initially diagnosed clinically as IJO in whom PLS3 9 10 pathogenic variants were identified. Although, there have been several large pedigrees 11 12 reported with plastininduced osteoporosis in the literature, bone material properties have not 13 14 been extensively studied and results have been varied. In the current report, we demonstrate 15 16 this variability further and attempt genotypephenotype correlation in order to untangle the 17 18 19 results on detailed boneFor material Peeranalyses. Review 20 21 22 23 24 MATERIALS AND METHODS 25 26 27 Clinical Report 28 29 30 Patient 1: The first patient is a 40year old Caucasian male who initially presented to a 31 32 Paediatric Metabolic Bone service outside of our centre at the age of 12 years, with a history 33 34 of musculoskeletal aches and pains and morning stiffness. 35 36 37 On examination at that time, he was noted to be short in the trunk, and showed 38 39 difficulty moving from a position of forward flexion to an upright position. Xrays were 40 41 reported as showing generalised osteopenia with compression of almost all lower thoracic 42 43 and lumbar vertebrae, consistent with a clinical diagnosis of ‘Osteoporosis’ or ‘Osteogenesis 44 45 46 Imperfecta’. He had an elevated alkaline phosphatase but no other abnormality was noted on 47 48 investigation. He was given a diagnosis of IJO at age 13. He was instructed to wear a 49 50 supportive back brace but received no specific therapy. It is of note that his mother, then in 51 52 her 40s, had already been diagnosed with osteoporosis (Figure 1A). He was subsequently lost 53 54 to followup. 55 56 57 58 5 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 6 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 Aged 38, this patient was referred to the Adult Metabolic Bone service, following a 4 5 fracture of his hip, which occurred during an accident at work. Additionally, he gave a history 6 7 of a traumatic foot fracture. On examination, he had white sclerae, was not facially 8 9 dysmorphic with no other features suggestive of OI or other metabolic bone disease. During 10 11 diagnostic workup, he was noted to have multiple vertebral fractures and recalled the history 12 13 14 of IJO. Investigations did not identify any other contributory causes. His bone density was 15 16 below the expected range for age; lumbar spine Tscore was 4.8 (although the presence of 17 18 vertebral fractures affects the reliability of the result), Zscore was 4.8, total hip T score was 19 For Peer Review 20 3.5 with a Zscore of 3.6. Spinal imaging demonstrated fractures of all lumbar vertebrae and 21 22 most of the thoracic vertebrae (with the exception of T3) (Figure 1B and C). He was 23 24 prescribed Alendronate, supplementary calcium and vitamin D. 25 26 27 This patient was referred to Genetics, aged 39. A detailed family pedigree was taken 28 29 which confirmed that his mother, now in her 70’s, had been diagnosed with osteoporosis at 30 31 32 an early age. More recently, after long term bisphosphonate treatment, she had sustained 33 34 bilateral atypical femoral fractures (two years apart). He has two teenage sons who have had 35 36 no concerns regarding their bone health. He had targeted testing for LRP5 and PLS3. 37 38 39 His family history was then expanded from his mother’s osteoporosis to include the 40 41 osteoporosis of his maternal uncle. His sister had sustained no fractures. Although, family 42 43 studies have been requested, no samples have been forthcoming. 44 45 46 Patient 2: The second patient is a 15year old boy referred to the Metabolic Bone service 47 48 with a history of recurrent fractures. He is the first child of healthy, nonconsanguineous 49 50 Caucasian parents with no significant family history apart from osteoporosis in maternal aunt 51 52 and maternal grandmother. He has a younger sibling who is fit and well (Figure 2A). 53 54 55 56 57 58 6 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 7 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 His initial fracture aged 2 was of his left forearm following minor trauma, then aged 6 4 5 of his right forearm and wrist. Aged 12 years, when he was first seen in the Metabolic Bone 6 7 clinic, his back was noted to be straight but his spine imaging showed multiple vertebral 8 9 crush fractures both in the lumbar and thoracic spine affecting 7 vertebrae altogether (Figure 10 11 2B). Both his lumbar spine and total body less head BMD (Bone mineral density) were below 12 13 14 the normal range for age with aBMD (arealBMD) Zscores of 2.7 and 2.6 respectively. 15 16 Bone biopsy performed prior to starting treatment with bisphosphonates showed features 17 18 detailed below including reduced osteoblast and osteoclast surfaces, trabecular loss and 19 For Peer Review 20 reduced connectivity, and cortical thinning. He was also noted to have elevated bone specific 21 22 alkaline phosphatase for age, which subsequently normalised, possibly reflecting recent 23 24 fractures. He was commenced on treatment with threemonthly Pamidronate infusions at 25 26 27 1mg/kg on three successive days with good initial response. 28 29 Eight months after starting treatment, his lateral vertebral analysis showed 6 vertebrae 30 31 32 with reduced height; his agematched lumbar spine aBMD Zscore had risen from 2.7 prior 33 34 to treatment to 1.4 and his total body less head aBMD Zscore rose from 2.6 to 1.7. 35 36 Further treatment for 2.5 years with Pamidronate followed, with a switch to Zoledronic acid 37 38 thereafter. His lumbar spine aBMD continued to increase despite reducing the dose of 39 40 treatment to 60% of the regular dose. His aBMD rose to +1.3 and his current DXA image 41 42 shows significant vertebral endplate sclerosis with some improvement in the overall shape 43 44 45 and height of the previously crushfractured vertebrae (Figure 2C). 46 47 He was referred to the Genetics clinic in view of his bone fragility and a diagnosis of 48 49 50 autism spectrum disorder (ASD). A detailed family pedigree was taken which confirmed that 51 52 his mother had sustained a fracture of her forearm but there was a more significant fracture 53 54 history in a maternal aunt who had been diagnosed with osteoporosis in her 30’s. He was 55 56 57 58 7 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 8 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 enrolled to a research study looking at the association of bone fragility and autism with 4 5 appropriate consent and trio whole exome sequencing was undertaken. 6 7 8 Bone histomorphometry and quantitative Backscattered Electron Imaging (qBEI): 9 10 11 A transiliac bone biopsy was obtained from Patient 2 before the initiation of 12 13 bisphosphonate (BP) treatment, following double labeling with tetracycline to allow for 14 15 dynamic measurement of bone formation. Sample preparation and histomorphometric 16 17 analyses were performed using standard procedures10. Results were compared to reference 18 19 data of healthy agematchedFor controls Peer and children Review with OI type I [Glorieux et al., 2000; 20 21 Rauch et al., 2000]. Subsequently, the residual block was prepared to assess bone 22 23 24 mineralization density distribution (BMDD), reflecting the calcium content of cortical and 25 26 trabecular bone matrix, by qBEI as described elsewhere [Roschger et al., 2008]. The BMDD 27 28 parameters values were compared to healthy controls and children with OI type I [Fratzl 29 30 Zelman et al., 2009; FratzlZelman et al., 2016; Roschger et al., 2008]. 31 32 33 34 35 36 RESULTS 37 38 Patient 1: Targeted genomic sequencing of exons 216 of PLS3 detected a hemizygous 39 40 41 deletion, c.1765del in exon 16 of PLS3. This likely pathogenic variant was predicted to result 42 43 in a p.Ala589fs change. The predicted result for this variant was a frameshift, leading to the 44 45 creation of a premature termination codon 21 amino acids downstream. This particular 46 47 variant had not been reported on the LOVD database entry on PLS3 but other such frameshift 48 49 variants in PLS3 have been reported in association with osteoporosis. 50 51 52 Patient 2: Targeted sequencing for genes associated with OI including autosomal dominant 53 54 panel (COL1A1/A2 & IFITM5) and LRP5 testing were negative. Previous genetic testing also 55 56 included normal 60Kb arrayCGH in view of his diagnosis of ASD. 57 58 8 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 9 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 This patient was then enrolled to a research study studying the association of autism 4 5 and OI funded by Newlife Foundation. This study had been approved by the South Yorkshire 6 7 Research Ethics Committee and appropriate institutional boards and the research has been 8 9 performed in accordance with the 1964 Helsinki Declaration. Trio whole exome sequencing 10 11 showed he was hemizygous for the c.1295T>A pathogenic variant in exon 12 of PLS3. This 12 13 14 variant was predicted to result in a p.Leu432* change and although, not previously reported 15 16 in literature, similar variants in PLS3 have been reported in association with osteoporosis. 17 18 Further testing showed that his mother carried the same PLS3 variant. 19 For Peer Review 20 21 The qualitative assessment of the bone biopsy sample obtained from the patient prior 22 23 initiation of bisphosphonate therapy revealed very small and isolated trabecular features; one 24 25 very trabecularised cortex and one well delineated cortical plate (see Figure 3A). Under 26 27 polarized light, cortical and trabecular bone showed an ordered lamellar pattern. In particular, 28 29 the parallel lamellar organisation of the cortical plates suggested that they were formed by 30 31 32 primary bone apposition through processes of bone modeling and modeling drift (Figure 3B). 33 34 The bone histomorphometric analyses confirmed that the amount of trabecular (bone volume 35 36 per tissue volume) was severely reduced compared to agedmatched controls and rather in the 37 38 range of OI patients (See Table 1). However, in contrast to OI bone, all parameters of bone 39 40 formation and bone resorption were also found to be very low. Compared to healthy control 41 42 values, osteoid thickness, mineral apposition rate and the mineralising surface were 43 44 45 decreased. The percentage of trabecular surfaces covered either by osteoblasts or osteoclasts 46 47 was reduced by about 80 and 90 percent, respectively (Figure 3C). It should be noted that 48 49 more osteoclasts and osteoblasts were viewed in the cortical areas (not shown) mirroring an 50 51 active trabecularisation process. 52 53 54 The qBEI analyses revealed a hypermineralisation of the bone matrix similar as in OI 55 56 bone. In both, the trabecular and cortical compartment, the BMDD curve was shifted towards 57 58 9 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 10 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 higher mineral content compared to healthy controls (Figure 3D, E). Consistently, the 4 5 average calcium content of the matrix (CaMean), the most frequently occurring calcium 6 7 concentration (CaPeak) and the portion of highly mineralized bone (CaHigh) were elevated in 8 9 both bone compartments, while the percentage of lowly mineralised matrix (CaLow) was 10 11 markedly reduced (See Table 2). 12 13 14 15 16 17 DISCUSSION 18 19 For Peer Review 20 Osteoporosis is a complicated diagnosis to make, due to the range of factors that can 21 22 contribute to its pathogenesis. It is characterised by reduced bone mass and an increased 23 24 predisposition for bone fractures. Current definition of childhoodonset primary osteoporosis 25 26 requires a clinically significant fracture history and BMD Zscore at or below 2.0 [Kämpe et 27 28 29 al., 2015]. A clinically significant fracture history can be defined as two or more long bone 30 31 fractures aged 10 years or below and three or more long bone fractures aged 19 years or 32 33 below. However, vertebral compression fractures often are alone enough to make this 34 35 diagnosis even with a normal BMD. Diagnostic workup should include exclusion of other co 36 37 morbidities such as celiac disease, inflammatory bowel disease, eating disorders, Vitamin D 38 39 and calcium deficiency. 40 41 42 Current strategies for genetic testing for childhoodonset osteoporosis include targeted 43 44 gene panels including genes that cause OI, LRP5, WNT1 and PLS3. However, with costs of 45 46 genetic testing coming down and more genes being discovered, whole exome/ genome 47 48 49 sequencing is likely to replace targeted gene panels as firstline testing in the near future. 50 51 PLS3 (OMIM number: 300131) is located on chromosome Xq23. It contains 16 exons 52 53 54 and spans 90kb. It encodes plastin 3 , which is an actin binding protein found in 55 56 intestinal microvilli, hair cell stereocilia and fibroblast filopodia. Additionally, it seems to 57 58 10 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 11 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 have a role in development of bone, an influence on growth of axons, and expressed in 4 5 circulating cells in cases of colorectal cancer [Laarschot et al., 2016; Laine et al., 2015; 6 7 McGovern et al., 2015]. 8 9 10 The bone regulatory actions of PLS3 are not fully known. It has been demonstrated 11 12 that overexpression protects against spinal muscular atrophy. It has also been observed in 13 14 zebrafish that knockout pls3 fish develop craniofacial bone structure malformations, which 15 16 was reversible using human PLS3 mRNA [McGovern et al., 2015]. Dijk et al., 2013 observed 17 18 19 that the chicken homologueFor for Peer PLS3 () Review is highly expressed in osteocyte dendrites 20 21 responsible for mechanosensation [Dijk et al., 2013]. The authors propose loss of 22 23 mechanosensation as a possible mechanism for the osteoporosis effects. 24 25 26 Whilst the particular variants exhibited by both these patients in this study have not 27 28 been published elsewhere, other frameshift variants in this gene have been found to cause X 29 30 linked osteoporosis. Maternal heterozygotes have been shown to be either unaffected or show 31 32 early osteoporosis symptoms, as was the case with these patients [Dagleish et al., 2017]. 33 34 35 Since its first description of PLS3osteoporosis in five families with apparent X 36 37 linked osteoporosis, there have been other case reports adding to the literature and expanding 38 39 the phenotype of this condition [Dijk et al., 2013; van de Laarschot et al., 2016; Kannu et al., 40 41 2017; Lv et al., 2017; Kämpe et al., 2017]. From the literature so far and corroborated by our 42 43 44 patients, the phenotype consists of vertebral compression fractures, peripheral including long 45 46 bone fractures and low BMD but without features such as blue sclerae, short stature, joint 47 48 hyperlaxity or facial features typical of ‘Classical OI’ which is helpful in terms of genotype 49 50 phenotype correlation. Therefore, in patients with predominant history of vertebral fractures 51 52 and/or low BMD without features of OI and family history suggestive of Xlinked 53 54 osteoporosis, PLS3osteoporosis remains the top differential diagnosis. It is also important to 55 56 57 58 11 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 12 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 make this diagnosis as carrier females albeit more mildly affected than males must be 4 5 screened and kept under appropriate followup. 6 7 8 Patient 2 had features of autism spectrum disorder in addition to bone fragility and 9 10 was recruited to a research study to explore this association further. Exome data has not 11 12 identified any other variants of interest apart from the PLS3 variant which is Xlinked. So far, 13 14 PLS3 patients have been reported to have normal intellectual development. Interestingly, 15 16 reports of PLS3osteoporosis patients include those paediatric patients labelled as having 17 18 19 ‘spastic cerebral palsy’,For ‘waddling Peer gait’ and there Review has been a suggestion that PLS3 is linked to 20 21 spinal muscular atrophy (SMA) [Hosseinbarkooie at al., 2017]. It is therefore, important to 22 23 assess neuromuscular function and CNS assessment in further detail in these patients. Plastin 24 25 3 is said to be a protective modifier in SMA and reported to have a role in neuromuscular 26 27 synapse maintenance which adds further weight to the suggestion that in addition to the role 28 29 in bone mineralisation, this plastin may also have a role in intellectual development. It 30 31 32 remains to be seen whether he has an alternate diagnosis to explain the ASD or the PLS3 33 34 variant is somehow contributing to his diagnosis of ASD. Further trio genome sequencing 35 36 studies are ongoing to search for an alternate aetiology. 37 38 39 The extensive evaluation of the transiliac biopsy sample of Patient 2 revealed a novel 40 41 bone phenotype associated with PLS3 variant. Fahiminiya et al., 2014 first reported pediatric 42 43 patients with normal bone formation and normal BMDD [Fahiminiya et al., 2014]. In a more 44 45 recent study from Kämpe et al., 2017, data from a PLS3 variant carrier was presented that 46 47 showed increased osteoid formation and concomitant hypomineralization of the bone matrix 48 49 50 [Kämpe et al., 2017]. In sharp contrast, Patient 2 of the present study had low bone turnover, 51 52 low osteoid formation compared to healthy controls and very low values compared to OI as 53 54 shown on Table 1. Indeed, children with OI tend to have elevated indices of bone formation 55 56 and resorption that was definitively not observed in the present case [Rauch et al., 2000]. 57 58 12 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 13 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 However, this PLS3 patient shares with OI patients, the characteristic decreased trabecular 4 5 bone volume and the abnormally high mineral content of the bone matrix as revealed by 6 7 qBEI (Table 2) [Rauch et al., 2000]. This suggests that the increased matrix mineralisation in 8 9 our PLS3 patient (Patient 2) results primarily from a long history of very low bone turnover. 10 11 12 Indeed, the mineralisation of bone tissue increases with time and it takes years for a 13 14 newly formed bone packet to become fully mineralized. Thus, in a situation where little or no 15 16 bone is remodeled, one would expect a rising of the mineral content of the bone matrix and 17 18 19 high bone matrix mineralisationFor Peer making the Review bone tissue stiffer, harder and more brittle 20 21 [Roschger et al., 2008; Bishop et al., 2016]. It has to be underlined that during skeletal 22 23 growth, bone turnover is generally increased and the bone matrix tends to be rather lower 24 25 mineralised than hypermineralised [FratzlZelman et al., 2009]. Interestingly, the highly 26 27 trabecularised cortical envelopes observed in our patient suggest that bone modeling remains 28 29 active in the PLS3 patient. An ongoing cortical bone formation represents possibly a 30 31 32 compensatory mechanism to counteract the lack of an adequate amount of trabecular bone. It 33 34 seems very likely that bone fragility in Patient 2 results from a decrease in bone mass that can 35 36 only be inadequately compensated by increased primary bone formation and from alteration 37 38 of bone material properties similar to that seen in children with OI. 39 40 41 Genotypephenotype correlation in terms of bone material properties is difficult as 42 43 there is limitation in obtaining a transiliac bone biopsy from all patients due to its invasive 44 45 nature. Phenotypic variability even with the same family is a wellobserved genetics 46 47 phenomenon and often complex to explain. PLS3osteoporosis reports so far include large 48 49 50 pedigrees with a combination of whole gene deletions, intragenic deletions (likely resulting in 51 52 haploinsufficiency in females or complete absence of plastin 3 in males), frameshift, splice 53 54 site and missense variants (likely resulting in truncated or abnormal protein) which makes 55 56 direct correlation of bone material properties difficult. From the PLS3 patients in who bone 57 58 13 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 14 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 material analyses has been undertaken so far, we could cautiously conclude that PLS3 does 4 5 have a role in bone mineralisation, although the effect of it may be dependent on age and 6 7 timing of bone biopsy. However, further reports of this nature are required to reproduce the 8 9 effect of PLS3 on bone material and elucidate the exact function of PLS3 in bone. 10 11 12 Lindert et al., 2016 identified variants in MBTPS2 in two families with several 13 14 affected males identifying another Xlinked gene resulting in heritable bone fragility [Lindert 15 16 et al., 2016]. The phenotype of these patients was not in keeping with the diagnosis of IJO 17 18 19 and was suggestive ofFor a severe OIPeer phenotype. Review In addition to the implicit benefit of screening 20 21 for PLS3, the literature suggests that it would also be beneficial to screen LRP5/6 and WNT1 22 23 in patients with a presumed diagnosis of IJO. The encoded by these genes form part 24 25 of a major bone anabolic pathway; variants in genes for other factors interacting with the 26 27 pathway including WNT3a, DKK1 and LRP4 have all also been associated with low bone 28 29 mass and fracture. Variations in LRP5 can cause opposing effects on the bone density of the 30 31 32 patient; a lossoffunction variant causes osteoporosispseudoglioma (OPPG) [Hartikka et al., 33 34 2005; Biha et al., 2016; Palsgaard et al., 2016], whereas a gainoffunction variant can cause 35 36 dramatic increases in bone density [Niziolek et al., 2015]. Confirming the genetic aetiology in 37 38 IJO/ childhoodonset primary osteoporosis is important due to implications for patients’ 39 40 diagnosis and treatment; for the wider family in terms of cascade screening especially in a X 41 42 linked condition, providing accurate information on recurrence risk (as in Patient 1 where 43 44 45 there is no risk for his unaffected sons which is reassuring for the family). 46 47 In conclusion, IJO/ childhoodonset primary osteoporosis can be a complicated 48 49 50 diagnosis, resulting from early onset bone fragility. We recommend that all young male 51 52 patients with this prospective diagnosis undergo diagnostic analysis of PLS3, either as part of 53 54 targeted gene panel testing for bone fragility or a single gene testing where there is reduced 55 56 access to genomic sequencing technologies. Given the emerging phenotype of PLS3 57 58 14 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 15 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

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Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 Figure 1A, B and C: Family pedigree of Patient 1; Spinal imaging in Patient 1 at 38years of 4 5 age demonstrating vertebral fractures of all lumbar vertebrae and most of the thoracic 6 7 vertebrae (with the exception of T3) and residual deformities; low BMD on DXA imaging. 8 9 10 Figure 2A, B and C: Family pedigree of Patient 2; Pretreatment lateral DXA image of the 11 12 spine at 12years of age showing multiple vertebrae with reduced height and altered shape; 13 14 Lateral DXA image of the spine at 15years of age showing endplate sclerosis and minor 15 16 improvement in the overall size and shape of vertebrae following 3.5 years of bisphosphonate 17 18 19 treatment. For Peer Review 20 21 Figure 3A-E: Bone histology and BMDD in Patient 2 22 23 24 A: Backscattered electron image from the entire transiliac bone biopsy sample. Note the one 25 26 highly trabecularised abnormal cortical plate, (Trabecularised Ct) in contrast to the well 27 28 29 delineated normal cortex (Ct) on the other side and the isolated and small trabecular features 30 31 in the cancellous bone compartment. 32 33 B: Cortical plate, histological section, Goldner´s stained viewed under polarised light. Note 34 35 36 the parallel lamellar arrangement of the collagen fibrils. 37 38 C: Trabecular bone, histological section, Goldner´s stained (mineralised bone is green, non 39 40 41 mineralised is osteoid red). Trabeculae appear very thin, isolated and without an osteoid 42 43 seam. 44 45 46 D and E: BMDD curves obtained from cortical bone (D) and cancellous bone (E): both 47 48 curves are shifted towards higher values of the mineral content in comparison to the reference 49 50 cohort of healthy children. 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 19 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 20 of 33

Balasubramanian M et al 1 2 3 ACKNOLWEDGEMENTS: We would like to thank the families for consenting to 4 5 publication of their details; Newlife Foundation for Disabled Children (for Patient 2) Grant 6 7 Reference: SG/1415/05 for their generous funding to this study. 8 9 10 11 12 13 AUTHOR ROLES: All authors contributed to preparation and critical review of manuscript; 14 15 MB: Study design; writing up manuscript, recruitment of patients; phenotyping; NFZ, PR, 16 17 KK: bone biopsy analyses; ROS, MB, NP, NJB, RJ, EM: clinical data; RP, KS: genotyping. 18 19 For Peer Review 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 20 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 21 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

1 2 Balasubramanian M et al 3 4 5 Table 1: 6 7 Histomorphometric results in the Patient with PLS3 variant compared to agematched control values 8 9 References Difference vs. References 10 Histomorphometric variables Healthy P2 healthy OI type I** 11 children* controls (%) 12 Age (years) 1113.9 12 7.6 ± 3.8 13 Structural parameters: 14 Bone volume per Tissue volumeFor (%) Peer24.4 Review± 4.3 7.4 69.7 11.0 ± 5.2 15 Trabecular thickness (m) 148 ± 23 75.7 48.9 105.0 ± 25 16 Trabecular number (1/mm) 1.66 ± 0.22 0.9 45.8 1.3 ± 0.39 17 # 18 Cortical Width (mm) 0.90 ± 0.33 0.8 11.2 0.52 ± 0.2 19 Static parameters of bone formation 20 Osteoid thickness (µm) 6.7 ± 1.7 2.7 59.7 5.5 ± 1.7 21 Osteoid surface per bone surface (%) 22.1 ± 7.8 19.2 13.1 48 ± 14 22 Osteoid volume per bone volume (%) 2.12 ± 1.0 1.4 34.0 5.2 ± 2.6 23 Osteoblast surface per bone surface (%) 6.7 ± 4.5 1.1 83.6 19.4 ± 9.5 24 Dynamic parameters of bone formation 25 Mineralizing surface per bone surface (%) 11.07 ± 5.0 6.8 38.6 48 ± 16 26 Mineral apposition rate (µm/d) 0.87 ±0.09 0.72 17.2 0.73 ± 0.18 27 28 Adjusted apposition rate (µm/d) 0.46 ± 0.10 0.25 45.7 0.35 ± 0.14 29 Bone formation rate per bone surface (µm/y) 37.3 ± 16.7 17.7 52.6 77 ± 34 30 Bone formation rate per bone volume (%/y) 49.9 ± 21.4 50.4 +1.0% 116 ± 62 31 Mineralization lag time (d) 14.5 ± 3.00 10.8 25.52 16.5 (12.5 19.8) 32 Static parameters of bone resorption 33 Eroded surface per bone surface (%) 14.9 ± 5.6 0.9 94.0 15.6 (13.7 21.8) 34 Osteoclast surface per bone surface (%) 1.14 ± 0.74 0.1 91.2 1.37 (1.05 1.70) 35 Number of osteoclasts per bone surface (1/mm) 0.29 ± 0.14 0.05 82.8 0.047 ± 0.29 36 37 38 Reference data are given as mean ±SD or median with interquartile range (25%; 75%); * Published values from Glorieux et al., 200010 ; ** Published values from Rauch et al., 200011 ; # Thickness was only evaluated 39 in the one welldelineated cortical plate 40 41 21 42 43 44 45 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. 46 47 48 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 22 of 33

1 2 Balasubramanian M et al 3 4 5 Table 2: 6 7 BMDD in the patient with PLS3 variant (Patient 2) compared to control values 8 9 References values Difference from healthy Patient vs. healthy References 10 BMDD variables 11 children and 2 controls OI type I **, *** 12 adolescents * (%) 13 Cancellous bone 14 CaMean (weightFor % Ca) Peer 20.95 (0.57) Review 22.91 + 9.4 22.43 (0.63) 15 16 CaPeak (weight % Ca) 21.66 (0.52) 23.92 +10.4 23.39 (0.57) 17 CaWidth ( weight % Ca) 3.47 (3.12; 3.64) 3.81 +9.8 3.08 (0.28) 18 CaLow (%) 6.14 (4.90; 7.99) 5.72 6.8 5.94 (2.05) 19 21fold CaHigh (%) 0.89 (0.43; 1.47) 19.00 7.54 (5.00; 11.82) 20 increased 21 22 Cortical bone 23 20.45 (19.69; CaMean (weight % Ca) 22.52 +10.1 22.51 (0.46) 24 21.04) 25 21.14 (20.62; CaPeak (weight % Ca) 23.31 +10.3 23.29 (0.48) 26 21.75) 27 CaWidth ( weight % Ca) 3.81 (3.38; 4.38) 3.73 2.1 3.28 (0.25) 28 29 CaLow (%) 9.06 (6.22; 15.00) 4.33 52.2 4.40 (0.80) 18fold 30 CaHigh (%) 0.46 (0.28; 1.22) 8.49 8.60 (4.00) 31 increased 32 Reference data are given as mean ±SD or median with interquartile range (25%; 75%); 33 Definition of BMDD variables from Roschger et al., 200812 CaMean: the mean calcium concentration (weighted mean); CaPeak: the most frequently occurring calcium concentration (the peak position of the BMDD) 34 in the sample; CaWidth: the width of the BMDD distribution (full width at half maximum) reflecting the heterogeneity in matrix mineralization; CaLow: the percentage of low mineralized bone area, which is 35 mineralized below 17.68 weight% calcium, normally reflecting bone areas undergoing primary mineralization; CaHigh: the percentage of highly mineralized bone matrix, having the calcium content above 25.30 weight% calcium. 36 37 * Published values from FratzlZelman et al., 200913; ** Published values from Roschger et al., 200814 (for cancellous OI bone); FratzlZelman et al., 201615 (for cortical OI bone). 38 39 40 41 22 42 43 44 45 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. 46 47 48 Page 23 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

1 2 3 Subject: AJMG: MS 18-0025 Revision Required 4 5 Dear Dr Bhoj (Elizabeth), 6 7 Thank you for considering our manuscript "Novel PLS3 variants causing a phenotype 8 9 of childhood-onset osteoporosis: exploring bone material properties in this X-linked 10 11 form of osteoporosis" which has been reviewed by the American Journal of Medical 12 13 14 Genetics. 15 16 We have addressed the comments raised by the reviewers and hope the revised 17 18 manuscript meets your approval. We hope you are able to consider our work 19 For Peer Review 20 favourably. 21 22 Sincerely, 23 24

25 26 27 Meena Balasubramanian 28 29 30 31 Response to Editor's Comments: 32 33 Response to Associate Editor 34 35 Thank you very much for submitting your manuscript "Novel PLS3 variants causing a 36 37 phenotype of childhood-onset osteoporosis: exploring bone material properties in this 38 39 40 X-linked form of osteoporosis", we are pleased to report that the reviewers found the 41 42 information presented to be compelling and of high interest to the readership of 43 44 AJMG. They have provided some minor suggestions for revision, which we would 45 46 ask you to carefully consider. We look forward to your resubmission of this very 47 48 interesting article. 49 50 Response: Thank you, I hope the modifications meet your approval. 51 52 53 Response to Reviewer's Comments: 54 55 Response to Reviewer: 1 56 57 58 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 24 of 33

1 2 3 4 5 Comments to the Author 6 7 This paper is very well presented and provides further evidence that PLS3 accounts 8 9 for some cases of X-linked osteoporosis. The authors build a compelling argument for 10 11 seeking a molecular genetic aetiology for Idiopathic Juvenile Osteoporosis (IJO), not 12 13 14 only to determine the pathology/treatment for individual patients, but also to advise 15 16 their families on who else is at risk. The imaging clearly demonstrates the radiological 17 18 findings in this condition. The histological studies are helpful to describe the impact 19 For Peer Review 20 of PLS3 variants on bone structure. The authors acknowledge that the cellular 21 22 mechanisms of this are not fully understood at present. 23 24 Response: Thank you for the kind feedback. 25 26 27 Suggestions for the manuscript: 28 29 Title: This could be made simpler, for example, Novel PLS3 variants in X-linked 30 31 osteoporosis: exploring bone material properties. 32 33 P4L46: Sentence does not flow, suggest minor change to-the suggested role of Plastin 34 35 3 includes the process of… 36 37 P5L46: Include level of alkaline phosphatase if known. 38 39 40 P6L38-42: The sentence about the results could be deleted as they are included in the 41 42 next section. 43 44 P7L19: Define aBMD. 45 46 P8L10-11: Delete results as above. 47 48 P8L47: Use term pathogenic variant rather than mutation, to be consistent with title 49 50 and other sections of the manuscript. 51 52 53 P8L49: Check notation of variant, if frameshift is downstream. 54 55 P12L56: In patients with pathogenic PLS3 variants. 56 57 58 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. Page 25 of 33 American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A

1 2 3 P13L16: Shares. 4 5 P14L36: X-linked gene rather than pattern of inheritance. 6 7 Figure 1C: Data only just visible, but legibility depends on the size of the image in the 8 9 final version. 10 11 Figure 3A: Clarify which are normal and abnormal findings in the legend. 12 13 14 Response: Thank you for these suggestions which we have fully incorporated; 15 16 apologies, we are unable to obtain the precise ALP values for Patient 1 as this is 17 18 going back several years now and at a different healthcare provider. We will also 19 For Peer Review 20 submit high resolution images for publication as unable to upload as JPEG. 21 22 23 24 Response to Reviewer: 2 25 26 27 Comments to the Author 28 29 Balasubramanian and co-authors report on two patients with novel PLS3 variants 30 31 associated with juvenile osteoporosis and describe bone biopsy findings in one of the 32 33 patients. The manuscript adds to previously reported PLS3 mutations and gives new 34 35 insights to the underlying bone pathology. The manuscript is very well written but 36 37 there are some possibilities to further improve the presentation: 38 39 40 Response: Thank you for the kind feedback. 41 42 Abstract: Conclusions and the title do not match very well, the biopsy findings are not 43 44 mentioned in the Abstract Discussion and Conclusions at all. 45 46 47 48 The Discussion is very long and should be significantly shortened. I would suggest to 49 50 leave out the paragraphs discussing genotype-phenotype correlations on bone tissue 51 52 53 level (page 14, 1st paragraph) and the following paragraph on MBTPS2 and on other 54 55 genetic forms (until page 15 line 5) which seem unnecessary here. 56 57 58 59 60 John Wiley & Sons, Inc. American Journal of Medical Genetics: Part A Page 26 of 33

1 2 3 Response: Thank you for these suggestions which we have fully incorporated; we 4 5 have also shortened the discussion section but kept the salient points. 6 7 I hope you are able to consider our work favourably. 8 9 Yours sincerely, 10 11

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